SummaryWriting——2019年6月
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概要写作QianMingxiafromZhujiHighSchoolTopicword:Structure:Task1:GetageneralideaPart1:Part2:Parents'__________aboutpraisingchildrenWriter's__________aboutpraisingchildrenproblemssuggestionspraiseUnderlinethekeysentenceineachparagraphifany.(Para1-2)(Para3-4)①Parentseverywherepraisetheirkids.②JennBerman,authorofTheAtoZguidetoRaisingHappyandConfidentKids,says,“We’vegonetotheoppositeextremeofafewdecadesagowhenparentstendedtobemorestrict.”③Bygivingkidsalotofpraise,parentsthinkthey’rebuildingtheirchildren’sconfidence,when,infact,itmaybejusttheopposite.④Toomuchpraisecanbackfireand,whengiveninawaythat’sinsincere,makekidsafraidtotrynewthingsortakeariskforfearofnotbeingabletostayontopwheretheirparents’praisehasputthem.Para1problemKeypointsTask2:SelectandComprehendkeypointsToomuchpraisecanbackfire.effectsopposite①Still,don’tgotoofarintheotherdirection.②Notgivingenoughpraisecanbejustasdamagingasgivingtoomuch.③Kidswillfeellikethey’renotgoodenoughorthatyoudon’tcareand,asaresult,mayseenopointintryinghardfortheiraccomplishments.Para2anotherproblemeffectsKeypointsSelectandComprehendkeypointsNotgivingenoughpraisecanbeasdamagingasgivingtoomuch.①Sowhatistherightamountofpraise?②Expertssaythatthequalityofpraiseismoreimportantthanthequantity.③Ifpraiseissincereandfocusedontheeffortnottheoutcome,youcangiveitasoftenasyourchilddoessomethingthatdeservesaverbalreward.④“Weshouldespeciallyrecognizeourchildren’seffortstopushthemselvesandworkhardtoachieveagoal,”saysDonahue,authorofParentingwithoutFear:LettingGoofWorryandFocusingonWhatReallyMatters.“Onethingtorememberisthatit’stheprocessnottheendproductthatmatters.”Para3experts'suggestionKeypointsSelectandComprehendkeypoints③Ifpraiseissincereandfocusedontheeffortnottheoutcome,youcangiveitasoftenasyourchilddoessomethingthatdeservesaverbalreward.QualityofpraiseismoreimportantPraiseshouldbesincereandfocusedontheeffortnottheoutcomeFurtherexplanation①Yoursonmaynotbethebestbasketballplayeronhisteam.②Butifhe’soutthereeverydayandplayinghard,youshouldpraisehiseffortregardlessofwhetherhisteamwinsorloses.③Praisingtheeffortsandnottheoutcomecanalsomeanrecognizingyourchildwhenshehasworkedhardtocleantheyard,cookdinner,orfinishabookreport.④Butwhateveritis,praiseshouldbegivenonacase-by-casebasisandbeproportionate(相称的)totheamountofeffortyourchildhasputintoit.Para4writer'suggestionKeypoints①Yoursonmaynotbethebestbasketballplayeronhisteam.②Butifhe’soutthereeverydayandplayinghard,youshouldpraisehiseffortregardlessofwhetherhisteamwinsorloses.③Praisingtheeffortsandnottheoutcomecanalsomeanrecognizingyourchildwhenshehasworkedhardtocleantheyard,cookdinner,orfinishabookreport.SelectandComprehendkeypointsPraiseshouldbegivenonacase-by-casebasisandbeproportionatetotheamountofchildren'seffort.Para1:Para2:Para3:Para4:Toomuchpraisecanbackfire.Notgivingenoughpraisecanbeasdamagingasgivingtoomuch.Expertssayqualityofpraiseismoreimportant.Itshouldbesincereandfocusedontheeffortnottheoutcome.Praiseshouldbegivenonacase-by-casebasisandbeproportionatetotheamountofchildren'seffort.Task3:ParaphrasingPara1:Toomuchpraisecanbackfire.TipsaboutParaphrasing1)Parentsgivetoomuchpraiseanditcanbackfire.Praisingchildrentoomuchcanbackfire.Tip1:Makeslightchangestotheoriginalsentence.2)Parents'overpraisecanbringbadeffects.Parents'excessivepraisecannegativelyaffectchildren.Tip2:Usesynonymsbasedonyouraccurateunderstanding.Para2:Notgivingenoughpraisecanbejustasdamagingasgivingtoomuch.Tip1:Makeslightchanges1)_______________________________anditcanalsobedamaging.Tip2:Usesynonymsaccurately.2)____________________praisecanbe_____________________.Parentsdon'tgiveenoughpraiseInadequateequallyharmfulPara3:Expertssaythatthequalityofpraiseismoreimportantthanthequantity.Itshouldbesincereandfocusedontheeffortnottheoutcome.Tip1:Makeslightchanges1)_____________________________________________________.Tip2:Usesynonymsaccurately.2)_______________________________________________________.Para3:Expertssaythatthequalityofpraiseismoreimportantthanthequantity.Itshouldbesincereandfocusedontheeffortnottheoutcome.1)Expertsclaimthequalityofpraiseismoresignificant,__________shouldbesincereandfocusedonchildren’seffort.2)Parentsareadvisedtovaluethequalityofpraise,sincerely___________children’seffortratherthantheresult.3)Whatreallymattersisthequalityofpraise,________thefocusonchildren’seffort.whichpraisingwithTip3:Employdiversegrammartofurtherexplainoradvancelanguageexpressions.Para4:Praiseshouldbegivenonacase-by-casebasisandbeproportionatetotheamountofchildren'seffort.1)Praiseshouldbegivenbasedondifferentcasesandbeproportionatetohowmuchchildren'seffortis.2)Praiseshouldbetask-specificandmatchtheamountofchildren'seffort.3)Specificpraiseshouldbegiven,dependingonvariouscasesandchildren'srelevanteffort.Problem:Tip4:Accumulateexpressionsandsentencepatternsaccordingtospecifictopic.Suggestion:1)Overpraisingcanbeharmful/damaging/detrimental.2)Overpraisingmaybringabout/leadto/resultin/cause/havemanybadeffects.3)Overpraisingharms/weakens/impairschildren'scouragetochallengesomethingnew.1)Expertsthink/affirm/state/claim...2)Parentsshould/areadvised/expectedto...3)It'simportant/vital/significant/sensibleto...Nowadaysparentstendtooverpraisetheirchildren,whichmayhavebadeffects.(要点1)However,inadequatepraisecanbeequallyharmful.(要点2)Expertssuggestthatparentspayattentiontothequalityoftheirpraiseandpraisetheeffortratherthantheresult.(要点3)Parentsshouldalsobeawarethatpraiseneedstobetask-specificandmatchtheamountofeffortstheirchildrenhavemade.(要点4)——aversionfromGaokaoTask4:DraftandPolishthesummarySummaryWritingkeypointsSelectComprehendParaphrase>topicword>mainidea>structureofpassage>structureofparagraph(sentencefunction)Tip1:makeslightchangesTip2:usesynonymsaccuratelyTip3:employdiversegrammarsTip4:accumulatespecificexpressions...accuracycontextDraft&PolishLinkingdevicesAdvancelanguageAvoidmistakes1.Reviewthetipsaboutsummarywritingbasedonyourlearningsheet.2.Writeandpolishyourownversionofsummary.Homework