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Though it is one of the faded memories of my life today, there are times when I remember his face clearly, especially his eyes. As he had yellow spots on his eyes we called him Spotty. He would have been a stray (流浪) dog, until he came to me.    I was seven years old. My dad had just got a new job in Nasik. We had moved into a rented house. It was raining very heavily on the day we moved.    It was a cold dark night. We had our meal and went to sleep. Somehow in the midnight I heard some strange sounds outside the main door. I gathered courage and looked out through the window and I was really amused with what I saw outside.    There was a small puppy lying on an old doormat which my mother had put outside the door. It was wet and trembling. At first it was difficult to see the little one. It was the yellow spots on its eyes that made me realize its presence.    It was trying to get under the doormat to avoid the cold air outside and it had managed to get in as I could see only its head outside the doormat. Was it sick or injured?    I felt pity for the poor soul. I went in and came out with an old towel. I went near the innocent one and held it in my hand and wiped the puppy till he had become dry. I took him into my room and made a bed for him with a woolen blanket and a small pillow. He seemed very healthy and comfortable in his new bed as he went to sleep immediately.    The next morning, everyone in the family came to know about the unusual guest. "Shall we keep him with us?" I questioned my mom.    Like any other parents would, my parents first totally refused my idea but my sister and I convinced them to keep Spotty.    Slowly Spotty got on with everyone and became one of the family members.Para.1:Oneday,Spottyreturnedfromhisdailywalkwithabrokenleg.Para.2:Almostayearlater,onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly.评分标准1与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度2内容的丰富性和对创新性3应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性4上下文的连贯性Narration（记叙文）Argumentation（议论文）C.Exposition（说明文）Writingstyleastory(when,where,who,what,how)审体裁：记叙文审时态：一般过去时审前文大意以及要点Summarywho:I,Spotty,mymomwhen:adarknight,nextmorning,where:outsidethedoor,homewhat:saveadog,raiseitwhy:feelpityforitTheme:mournandmissSpottyastory(when,where,who,what,how)Combinethe6elementsThoughmymymemoriesofSpottybegintofadeaway,Istillmisshimsometimes.Onedarknight,findingthislittlepoorcreatureseekingwarmthfromthedoormat,Itookherhomeandcareforhim.Withtheeffortofmysister,hebecameamemberofmyfamily.Step1.readforinformationWho:I,Spotty,mymomwhat:saveadog,raiseitwhen:adarknight,nextmorning,where:outsidethedoor,homeStep2.readforplotsandfeelingsNowaged7feelnostalgicforitrememberclearlymovedintoarentedhousepoor/impoverishedonecold dark night,atmiddlenightfoundthepuppy,tookithome,caredforitsympatheticaboutit.loveitThe next morning, questionedmymom,adoptedithappyStep3.readforlanguageenvironmentaldescription:Actiondescription:appearacedesrciption： It was raining very heavily on the day we moved.    It was a cold dark night. 1.Somehow in the midnight I heard some strange sounds outside the main door. I gathered courage and looked out through the window and I was really amused with what I saw outside. 2.I went in and came out with an old towel. I went near the innocent one and held it in my hand and wiped the puppy till he had become dry. I took him into my room and made a bed for him with a woolen blanket and a small pillow. 1.As he had yellow spots on his eyes we called him Spotty.2.There was a small puppy lying on an old doormat which my mother had put outside the door. 3.It was wet and trembling.  4.It was the yellow spots on its eyes that made me realize its presence.5.He seemed very healthy and comfortable in his new bed as he went to sleep immediately.语言特点：1）注重动作描写与人物描写2）注重环境描写writing(providedwordsandsentencesWho:I.Spotty,MyfamilyWhat: brokehisleg,barkedbreathlessly,died,disappearedWhere:... Theme:Though it is one of the faded memories of my life today, there are times when I remember his face clearly, especially his eyes.lastlastsentence:Slowly Spotty got on with everyone and became one of the family members.Para. 1: One day, Spotty returned from his daily walk with a broken legPara. 2: Almost a year later, one midnight we heard Spotty barking breathlessly.ending?...先定结局Slowly Spotty got on with everyone and became one of the family members.(lastsentence)Para1：Para.1:Oneday,Spottyreturnedfromhisdailywalkwithabrokenleg.. Wheredidhereturnfrom?Whywashislegbroken?howdidit/Ifeel?WhatwouldIdo? Para2：Para.2:Almostayearlater,onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlesslyWhydiditbarkatmiddlenight?whydiditbarkbreathlessly?whathappenedtohimafterthat?1.重点写dog还是I？2.动作描写词汇3.心理描写词汇1111Oneday,Spottyreturnedfromhisdailywalkwithabrokenleg.NotuntilhecametomedidInoticehislamelegstillbleeding.WithtearsfullofmyeyesIcarriedhiminmyarmsimmediately,walkingtowardsmymother.Ihadthoughtthatmymotherwouldbekindenoughtobandagehiswound,buttomysurprise,sheturnedadeafeartowhatIwantedhertodoandwentoffinahuff.Itwasthenthatmysisterhappenedtocomeintime,whohelpedmetoapplysomehouseholdmedicinetohiswound.Spottylickedourhandsasifhewantedtothankusbecauseofourhelp.Soon,Spottyrecoveredcompletely.para2Almostayearlater,onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly.Wecameoutandsawthathewasbarkingcontinuouslyheadingsomewhere.AftersometimeSpottybecamequiet.Ipattedhimonhisbackandcameinside.Thenextdaymorning,myheartskippedabeatwhenIdidn'tseeSpotty.Isearchedforhimineachandeverycornerbuthewasnowhere.Andthistimehehadgoneandwouldnevercomeback.Icriedandwaitedforhim.Wewaitedforonelongweek.Buttherewerenosignsofhim.ThenonedaymyDadgottransferredtoMumbai.WeshiftedbacktoMumbai.WhatwouldhavehappenedtoSpotty?Wouldhehavedied?Theseweretheonlyquestionsinmymind,buttheyallremainedunansweredforever.（图片）Para.1:Oneday,Spottyreturnedfromhisdailywalkwithabrokenleg.Para.2:Almostayearlater,onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly.11Jameswasbadlyinjuredandhecouldn’tmoveabit.Hecouldonlylietherestill,hopingsomekindmancouldaidhim.Coldandinjured,Jamesgraduallylosthisconsciousness.About10minuteslater,anothercardrawnear.Whenthedriver,Steven,sawsomeonelyingintheditchbytheroadside,heimmediatelystoppedandwentoutofthecar.HeputonefingerinfrontofJames’snoseandfeltthebreath,knowinghewasstillliving.Heshoulderedhimupandcarriedhimintohiscar.HavingwrappedawarmblanketaroundJames,hetookoffhisowncoatandcoveredJames.Afterthatheheadedforthenearbyhospital.BecauseofthewarmthoftheblanketandSteven’scoat,Jamesslowlycametolife.Knowingitwastheyoungmanwhohadsavedhim,heeruptedintotears,saying“Thankyou,kindboy!WithoutyouIwouldhavedied!”WhileforStevenitisasmallcase,weshouldalwaysrememberthesewhohavehelpeduswhenweareingreatneed.Johnwasstudyinginhisroomwhenheheardscreaming.Whenheandhisfatherrushedoutside,amanranfromthescene.TheydiscoveredthatAnneSlade,motherofthree,hadbeenstabbedrepeatedlywithaknife.Shewaslyinginherfrontgardenbleedingveryheavily.Herhandshadalmostbeencutoff.ItwasJohn'squickactionandknowledgeoffirstaidthatsavedMsSlade'slife.Heimmediatelyaskedanumberofnearbypeopleforbandages,butwhennobodycouldputtheirhandsonany,hisfathergotsometeatowelsandtapefromtheirhouse.JohnusedthesetotreatthemostsevereinjuriestoMsSlade'shands.Heslowedthebleedingbyapplyingpressuretothewoundsuntilthepoliceandambulancearrived.（人教选修5unit5usinglanguage）第一段第一句：Spotty回家，断了一条腿。作者当时的反应是什么?看到了什么?Spotty状态描写。为什么会断了一条腿?（最难处理）作者一定是误解了，对Spotty有过激的反应。到处寻找，但找不到。一段时间以后得知真相。第二段第一句：一年以后，我们听到Spotty在气喘吁吁地叫。看到了什么（骨瘦如柴)?为什么spotty叫起来气喘吁吁?看到spotty的情感反应?做了什么?为什么spotty回来?（最难处理）心理的感受是什么?为此做了什么?但几天以后，spotty还是死了。作者的感情与感悟，如何与第一段呼应卷面；段落，字数；衔接（与首句；两段之间；句子之间）故事发展准确性（用词；句子结构；语法；符合情景否？）改卷经验出现的问 题 快递公司问题件快递公司问题件货款处理关于圆的周长面积重点题型关于解方程组的题及答案关于南海问题 衔接（与首句；两段之间；句子之间）故事发展准确性（用词；句子结构；语法；符合情景否？）出现的问题衔接（与首句；两段之间；句子之间）故事发展童话式的寓言式的无厘头式的戏剧式的出现的问题准确性（用词；句子结构；语法；符合情景否？）1afraid;nervous;frightened2catch,catchup,catchupwith3“Getintothecarquickly,man!”saidPaul.4发动汽车5狼追我们6汽油不够7自行车上跳下8call?/callfor?thepolice出现的问题准确性（用词；句子结构；语法；符合情景否？）Hesawthewolf’sfacenearhim.Heusedhisfisthitthefaceofthewolfstrongly.Seeingthewolf’sfacesoclosetohim,hehititwithallhisstrength/heavilyusinghisfist.出现的问题准确性（用词；句子结构；语法；符合情景否？）基本语法错误不规则动词（P106）though/butdangerous/indangerthanksto/thanks出现的问题准确性（用词；句子结构；语法；符合情景否？）1“Hey,friend!Calmdown!Jumpoutofyourbicycleandgetintoourcar!”shoutedPaul.2Afewminuteslater,thepolicearrived.3妻子带着孩子过来了。4送医院去了。5骑自行车一会儿就到家了。描写恐惧Thoughhewassafe,hestillfeltthedreadstoppingthepassageofairtohislung,withhislegstrembling.Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Ifeltsoscaredthatmythroattightenedandmykneesfeltweak.Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorrorandmypalmsweresweating. Itwasreallyamomentoflifeanddeath.Sittinginthecar,hestillfelthisheartbeatingwildly.Hesatthere,toofrightenedtoutteraword.Dialoguedescription/languagedescriptionappearancedescription/descriptionoflooks(相貌）Thedescriptionoflook/thedecriptionofexpressions