高考应用文之申请信(杨婷)

写作指导襄阳36中杨婷ALetterofApplicationStep1Warminguprecruitmentposter:招聘海报curriculumvitae(CV)/resume:个人简历position:职位exchangestudent交换生multinationalfirm:跨国公司theHopeProject:希望 工程 路基工程安全技术交底工程项目施工成本控制工程量增项单年度零星工程技术标正投影法基本原理 Howtowritealetterofapplicationwell假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。你校拟选一些优秀学生，利用暑期到晨曦希望 小学 小学生如何制作手抄报课件柳垭小学关于三违自查自纠报告小学英语获奖优质说课课件小学足球课教案全集小学语文新课程标准测试题 为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。根据以下提示，用英语给校评选组写一封申请信：●对此活动的认识(如对本人、学生及社会的益处)●个人优势（如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等）●你的 计划 项目进度计划表范例计划下载计划下载计划下载课程教学计划下载 （如怎样进行辅导等）注意：1.词数不少于100词；2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；3.信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数。参考词汇：晨曦希望小学:ChenxiHopeSchool真题回顾2010年天津卷Pairwork:Readtheletterbelowandfindouttheproblemsinit.请阅读以下学生作文，根据申请信的文体特点，仔细阅读,找出这封信存在的问题。DearSirorMadam,IamLiHuafromClassone,SeniorTwo.IamveryhappytowritetoyoubecauseIwanttobeateachingvolunteertohelpthestudentsstudyEnglish.Firstofall,Iamfriendlyandhardworking.IamgoodatEnglishandeasytogetonwellwithchildern.IbelieveIamindependentenoughtotakecareofmyselfandpeoplearoundme.IfIgotchance,Iwouldtrymybesttogivethembestinstructionsandlearningmethods.Ihopeyoucanconsiderme.ThankyouforreadingandIhopeyoucancallmesoon.Sincerelyyours,LiHuaPara1:语言不够正式没有清晰的 表 关于同志近三年现实表现材料材料类招标技术评分表图表与交易pdf视力表打印pdf用图表说话 pdf 明写信目的Para2:细节不够丰富，没有未来打算，没有连接词使文章连贯.Para3:没有表达对对方的感激，语气不够礼貌。申请信的3C原则1.Clear2.Correct3.Concise正确清楚精炼DearSirorMadam，________________________________________________________________________________Withallmybestwishes!YoursSincerely,LiHuaAimReason/Personality/QualificationGratitudeandExpectationStructureReadtheletter---Applicationthetopicofeachparagraph介绍自己身份，信息来源，表明写信目的表示感谢和期待对方优先考虑自己的申请。期待面试或回信，注意语气礼貌BodyEnding介绍学历，经历，个性，成就等，说明为何感兴趣和未来打算Linking:①Givingreasons：dueto;because;since;as…②Addition：Inaddition,also…HeadingBodyEndingHeading1.Iamwriting(thisletter)toapplyfor/to…2.Notonlycanvolunteerworkhelpmeenrichmyknowledge,butalsoIcanhelpmorepeople.Aimtoshowyourpurposeandreasonapply申请v.apply(tosb.)forsth.applytodoapplicationn.interest兴趣v./n.beinterestedin...expressone'sinterestin...bekeenon...对...感兴趣enrichmyknowledgeandexperiencebroaden/widenhorizonsReviewPara1reasons翻译：1.我写信是为了申请......2.1.志愿者工作不仅丰富了我的知识而且我能帮助更多的人Qualificationtoshowyouradvantages2.experience经验[U];经历[C]experienced经验丰富的adj.1.ability能力n.4.qualification(s)资格qualified具备资格的adj.havetheabilitytodo...gain(rich/valuable)experiencehaverichworkingexperiencebeexperiencedinsth/doing...bequalifiedfor/todo/tobe...3.personality性格品质n.outgoing,easy-going,reliable,open-minded,helpful,confident,teamworkspirit,responsible,independent...begood/skilledathaveagoodcommand/knowledgeof1.我在交流和团队合作上的兴趣和技能有助于......2.我会获得宝贵的经验并学会和他人合作。1.Myinterestandskillincommunicationandteamworkcontributeto/help......2.I'llgainsomevaluablejobexperienceaswellaslearntocoopetatewithothersbetter.Expectation1.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.2.I'dappreciateitifyougivemeaninterview.3.IwillbegratefulifIcouldgetthisopportunity.4.Thankyouforconsideringmyapplication.Iamlookingforwardtomeetingyouinthenearfuture.toshowyourhopeundertakeresponsibilitymeetchallengesaccomplishtaskscooperatewith...谢谢您考虑我的申请，期待着你的早日回复。Step5.Improveyourwriting在考试中得高分的制胜法宝使什么？Howtogethigherscoresinexams?四个战略：1.提分先进武器-？2.提分必备武器-？3.提分高级武器-？4.提分关键武器-？EasywordsBetterwordsEasywordsBetterwordsbeinterestedinhelpsbdosthlovebegoodatbefluentinEnglisheasily1.tousebetterwordsandexpressions提分先进武器------高级词汇替换策略befascinatedbytakegreatinterestinassistsbwithsthhavetheenthusiasmfor/bekeenonhaveagoodcommand/knowledgeofachievehighfluencyinEnglish/myproficiencyallowmetodo...witheaseTrytomakethesentencebetter,usingadvancedwordsofphrases.使用高级词汇改写句子1.IwanttobeateachingvolunteertohelpthestudentsstudyEnglish.（使用高级词汇fascinate,assist..with）I（为之心驰神往）bytheideaofbeingateachingvolunteertoassiststudentsinChenxiHopeSchoolwiththeirEnglish.2.IamgoodatEnglish.(使用高级词汇haveagoodcommandof/proficiency,with+n扩写)1）IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish.2）My（proficient）inEnglishallowsmetocommunicatewithstudents(easily).witheaseamprofoundlyfascinatedproficiency精通使用高级词汇改写句子3.Ihopeyoucanconsiderme.(使用高级词汇appreciate,favourable,consideration改写)Igreatly_appreciate_anyofyourfavourableconsideration.4.ThankyouforreadingandIhopeyoucancallmesoon.(使用consider,lookforwardto改写)ThankyouforconsideringmyapplicationandIamlookingforwardingtoyourreply.感激优先的考虑考虑我的申请期盼2.提分必备武器----适当扩充细节，使文章内容丰富。例如表达对申请职位的兴趣时，增加原因更丰富Iaminterestedinit.（为什么？）扩写练习Throughtheactivity,wecanhelpthosestudentslearnEnglishbetteranddeveloptheirinterestsinEnglish.Asforourselves,wecanexperiencethelifeandgetliferulesthatweareexpectedtofollowtherestofourlives.对自己/对社会有好处体验生活将英语学的更好培养他们在..方面的兴趣提分必备武器----适当扩充细节，使文章内容丰富。表明自己的优势时，表明益处更有说服力Iamhardworking.(你的优势对申请带来哪些益处？)Icanassureyouofmydiligenceduringtheworkingtime,whichwillbeofgreatvaluetostudents’future.对...有巨大的价值2.提分必备武器----适当扩充细节，使文章内容丰富。Iwillteachinaflexibleway.(用哪些方法？)改写：Iwillteachinaflexibleway，suchastellingEnglishstories,helpingthemlearnEnglishsongs,watchingEnglishmovies.讲英语故事看英语电影帮他们学英语歌讲述自己的计划时，增加列举使文章更充实3.tousebettersentences提分高级武器------高级语法句型彰显语言功底本次作文中可能用到的高级语法：主动变被动倒装句强调句with的复合结构定语从句名词性从句非谓语动词提分高级武器：高级语法彰显语言功底1.使用经典从句开头表明写信目的：1.IwonderIcanparticipateintheactivitytoassiststudentsinChenxiHopeSchoolwiththeirEnglish.结尾表明感激之情2.Iwillappreciateverymuchifmyapplicationwillbetakenintoconsideration.if/whetherit宾语从句形式宾语真正宾语从句使用定语从句和状语从句3.IhavejustreadtheadvertisementontheschoolbulletinandIamextremelyabsorbedbyit.（使用非限制性定语从句和时间状语从句改写）Ihavejustreadtheadvertisementontheschoolbulletin,____________absorbedmeextremelythemomentIsawit.分词做状语--使用非谓语动词__________________theadvertisementontheschoolbulletin,IamextremelyabsorbedtheinstantIsawit.which一看到就...(moment)Havingjustread现在分词的完成式做状语，表明动作早于主句谓语动词发生扩充练习1.我一得到足够的钱，就买它。___________________,I’llbuyit.2.ThefirsttimewhenIsawhimhewasstudyinginhisroom.(改错)Themoment/Theinstant/Instantly....Igetenoughmoney使用非谓语动词-分词作状语2.I’malsowillingtodevotemyselftoanalyzingeverystudent,____________(take)whichareadaptedtodifferentindividualsinthemeantime.3.__________(apply)thetreasuredoccupation,Iamwritingtomakeafineintroductionofmyself.takingmeasuresToapplyfor现在分词做状语动词不定式做状语表目的分词作定语--过去分词做后置定语4.Iamwritingtoapplyfortheteachingvolunteer（advertise）ontheschoolbulletin,whichabsorbedmeextremelytheinstantIsawit.advertised过去分词做后置定语使用倒装句我不仅对活动有热情，而且见多识广。1.Inotonlyhavetheenthusiasmfortheactivity,butalsoIamconfidentthatIamwell-informed.Notonly..butalso...前后连接2个句子时，notonly后的句子要部分倒装，但是butalso后的分句不用倒装Ihavetheenthusiasmfortheactivity,butalsoconfidentthatIamwell-informed.NotonlydoIam使用倒装句so+adj+that句型中，so+adj置于句首时，主句主谓要部分倒装2.IamsoproficientinEnglishthatIcancommunicatewithstudentswithease.Soproficient_____inEnglish_______IcancommunicatewithstudentswitheaseamIthat扩展练习把下列句子改为倒装句Inotonlymadeapromise,butalsoIkeptit.(notonly置于句首)————————————————————————只有努力学习才能取得好成绩。___________________________________________NotonlydidImakeapromise,butalsoIkeptit.Onlyifyouworkhardcanyougetgoodgrades.使用强调句强调句Itis/was+被强调部分+that+.......正是勤奋使我能以令人满意的成绩通过所有必修课程,为学生们树立榜样。(勤奋:diligence）enablesmetopassedalltherequiredcoursesofstudywithsatisfactorymarksandthusIcansetagoodexampleforthestudents.Itisdiligencethat1.with的复合结构,IamconfidentthatIhavemakeamplepreparationsforteachinganddevotemyselftoit.2.独立主格结构Allthings__________(consider),IstronglyrecommendmyselfformyqualificationofbeingavolunteerEnglishteacher.Withalltherequirements__________(satisfy)使用独立结构satisfiedconsidered使用省略句和虚拟语气_______________（如有可能）_，Iwouldappreciateitifmyapplicationcanbetakenintoyourfavourableconsideration.感叹句和虚拟语气__________________________________________________yourAidEducationProject!我多希望能在此次支教项目中有所作为啊!IfpossibleHowIwishIcouldmakeadifferencein主动变被动1.Iwillappreciateitverymuchifyoucanconsidermyapplication.变为被动语态Iwillappreciateitverymuchifmyapplicationwilltakeintoconsideration.（改错）2.IhaveenclosedmyCVforyourreference.Pleaseletmeknowifyouneedmoreinformation.变为被动语态IhaveenclosedmyCVforyourreference.Pleaseletmeknowiffurtherinformationneed.（改错）betakenintoconsideration.isneeded其他句式1.be+adj+enough+to足够....做某事翻译：我足够独立能够很好的照顾自己2.Itisbe+adj+forsbtodo....翻译：对我来说应付（dealwith）小学生并不难因为我很容易与他人相处。Itwon’tbehardformetodealwithpupilsasIameasytogetalongwith.Iamindependentenoughtolookaftermyselfwell.5.提分关键武器：恰当过渡语1.表罗列增加：besides,what'smore.furthermore,alsoespecially,inparticular2.表解释说明：forinstance,inthiscase,actualy3.表转折关系：otherwise,onthecontrary,inspiteof,instead...4.表并列：notonly,butalso,aswellas...6.表因果：since,nowthat,thanksto,due,therefore,asaresultof...7.表条件：aslongas,onconditionthat8.表让步evenif/eventhough,nomatterhow..9.表列举：forinstance10.表目的：forthepurposeof11.表强调：indeed,obviously,aboveall12.表 总结 初级经济法重点总结下载党员个人总结TXt高中句型全总结.doc高中句型全总结.doc理论力学知识点总结pdf ：inbrief,ashasbeenstated,atlast,inconclusion.总结高级语法句型运用顺口溜肯定不如双否好陈述不如倒装妙主动不如被动巧分词结构不能少强调，虚拟，省略高非谓语动词要用好名言谚语用地道过渡总结提分高Nowlet'shaveatryGroupwork:Rewritetheletterofapplicationbyyourselves.Group1:Para1Group2:Para2Group3:Para3Nowlet'sstart.(3')RewritetheletterofapplicationbyyourselvesDearSirorMadam,IamLiHuafromClassone,SeniorTwo.IamveryhappytowritetoyoubecauseIwanttobeateachingvolunteertohelpthestudentsstudyEnglish.Firstofall,Iamfriendlyandhardworking.IamgoodatEnglishandeasytogetonwellwithchildern.IbelieveIamindependentenoughtotakecareofmyselfandpeoplearoundme.IfIgotchance,Iwouldtrymybesttogivethembestinstructionsandlearningmethods.Ihopeyoucanconsiderme.ThankyouforreadingandIhopeyoucancallmesoon.Sincerelyyours,LiHuaPara1:语言不够正式没有清晰的表明写信目的Para2:细节不够丰富，没有未来打算，没有连接词使文章连贯.Para3:没有表达对对方的感激，语气不够礼貌。DearSirorMadam,IamLiHuafromClassOne,SeniorTwo.Iwonder____IcanparticipateintheactivitytoassiststudentsinChenxiHopeSchool_____theirEnglish.Frommyperspective,it’sararechanceandworthatry.Throughtheactivity,wecanhelpthosestudentslearnEnglishbetteranddeveloptheirinterestsinEnglish.Asfor_________(us),wecanexperiencethelifeandgetliferules______weareexpectedtofollowtherestofourlives.Notonly_____Ihavetheenthusiasmfortheactivity,________alsoIamconfidentthatIamwell-informed.IcanspeakfluentEnglishandhave_____goodknowledgeofit.Duringmydailylife,Iamindependent________tolookaftermyselfwell.Besides,itwon’tbehardformetodealwithpupilsasIameasytogetalongwith.IfIam_______(luck)enoughtobechosen,Iwillteachinaflexibleway.TellingEnglishstories,helpingthemlearnEnglishsongs,watchingEnglishmoviesareconsidered.Atlast,IreallyhopethatIcan_______________(admit)intotheactivity.YoursSincerely,LiHuaifwithourselvesthatdobutaenoughluckybeadmitted范文一：单词填空DearSirorMadam,IamLiHuafromClassOne,SeniorTwo.IwonderifIcanparticipateintheactivitytoassiststudentsinChenxiHopeSchoolwiththeirEnglish.Frommyperspective,it’sararechanceandworthatry.Throughtheactivity,wecanhelpthosestudentslearnEnglishbetteranddeveloptheirinterestsinEnglish.Asforourselves,wecanexperiencethelifeandgetliferulesthatweareexpectedtofollowtherestofourlives.NotonlydoIhavetheenthusiasmfortheactivity,butalsoIamconfidentthatIamwell-informed.IcanspeakfluentEnglishandhaveagoodknowledgeofit.Duringmydailylife,Iamindependentenoughtolookaftermyselfwell.Besides,itwon’tbehardformetodealwithpupilsasIameasytogetalongwith.IfIamluckyenoughtobechosen,Iwillteachinaflexibleway.TellingEnglishstories,helpingthemlearnEnglishsongs,watchingEnglishmoviesareconsidered.Atlast,IreallyhopethatIcanbeadmittedintotheactivity.YoursSincerely,LiHua写信目的申请原因个人优势期望onepossibleversionDearStudentUnion,Ihavejustreadtheadvertisementontheschoolbulletin,whichabsorbedmeextremelytheinstantIsawit.I’mLiMing,an18-year-oldboywithstrongconfidenceinmyEnglish.__________________I’malsowillingtodevotemyselftoanalyzingeverystudent,takingmeasureswhichareadaptedtodifferentindividualsinthemeantime.What’smore,_________________________,whichprovidesmewithcompetenceofcommunicatingandabetterunderstandingofthevoluntarywork.Asalong-termvolunteer,Ihavealwaysshownmyactivityovervisitingtheelderly,helpingschoolmatesgetridofbluesandsoon,showingthestrongsenseofresponsibility,andalsohavebenefitedmyselfthroughtheprocess.Iconsidermyworkasapreciouschancetobroadenmyhorizons.A.Itisnotonlybecauseofmytopgrades,butalsotheproficiencyinitseverydayusing.B.Toapplyforthetreasuredoccupation,Iamwritingtomakeafineintroductionofmyself.C.IcanassureyouofmydiligenceduringtheworkingtimeD.Allthingsconsidered,E.myvarietyofhobbieswillenablemetoworkmoreefficientlyF.fornowIhaveworkedfortheLovingHeartClubsince3yearsagoG.Iwilltrymybesttoattaineverydemandofmyboss.BAC范文二：7选5Furthermore,______________________,whichwillbeofgreatvaluetostudents’future.___________,IstronglyrecommendmyselfformyqualificationofbeingavolunteerEnglishteacher,hopingtogainsplendidconsequencesbeyondyouranticipation.I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreplyandpleaseemailmeatliming@yahoo.com.cn.Yourssincerely,LiMingA.Itisnotonlybecauseofmytopgrades,butalsotheproficiencyinitseverydayusing.B.Toapplyforthetreasuredoccupation,Iamwritingtomakeafineintroductionofmyself.C.IcanassureyouofmydiligenceduringtheworkingtimeD.AllthingsconsideredE.myvarietyofhobbieswillenablemetoworkmoreefficientlyF.bynowIhaveworkedfortheLovingHeartClubsince3yearsagoG.Iwilltrymybesttoattaineverydemandofmyboss.FD5.提分核武器-(整理出我的申请信模板)DearXX,写申请信的开头常用表达Iamwritingthisletterinpurposeofapplyingfor....Iamthereforeenclosingmycurriculumvitae.介绍自己符合申请的理由或资质Firstofall,Iam.....,aged....,andstudyin....Iamqualifiedfor.....because...As....Iamfondof...whichmightbehelpfulforthis...Besides,Ilike...andIoncewon.....SoIthinkIcando...wellduetomy...forit.Inaddition.sinceI...,Ihaveplentyoftimetofocusonit.(不同内容不同表达，但多以个人经历为线索，按照逻辑顺序排列。)结尾，表达想要获得的机会和愿望。Iwillbereallyappreciatedifyoutakeseriousconsiderationaboutmyapplication.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,XXPracticeMakesPerfect!2012全国一卷假定你是李华，从互联网(theInternet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括:1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);3.希望获准。注意:1.数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好.Completeyourfirstdraft.