山西省永济市涑北中学高三英语复习 文章分析

山西省永济市涑北中学高三英语复习 文章分析 山西省永济市涑北中学高三英语复习:文章分析 Dear Peter, I’m very glad to receive your e-mail asking for information about the host family we have arranged for you to stay( Let me introduce some information about the host family. Firstly, the family has a big house which is big enough for you to live in, and we have been due to leave a beautiful room for you where you can have a good view of the city. What’s more, the family has private car which will make it convenient for you to go out. Besides, the people of the family speak English very well, so you can communicate with them to talk avout what you want. Last but not least, the hostess can make very delicious food yuou can enjoy it happily. The host family had taken after the student from the US. I’m looking forward to your early reply. ours Y Li Hua (点评:这篇文章定语从句运用灵活得体，而且关联词运用的也很好，使文章读起来很流畅。) B (by Lian Xi) Dear Peter, I’m very glad to receive your e-mail asking for information about the host family we have arranged for you to stay I’m writing the letter to tell you about the information of the host family. As there is a big house, so you can have a room of your own. Besides, far as I am concerned, it’s convenient for you to go out because the host family has a car. What’s more, the family can speak English and they are good at communicating. It’s a good thing if you can come. Last but not least, the hostess is good at cooking, so you will enjoy Chinese food well. They also have a lot of experience and they had a USA student in 2009. If you can come, I believe the host family will be very happy. Yours Li Hua (点评:关联词同样用的很好。) C (by Zhao Yongxing) 高考学习网,中国最大高考学习网站Gkxx.com | 我们负责传递知识～ Dear Peter, I’m very glad to receive your e-mail asking for information about the host family we have arranged for you to stay( You will have your own room, and it’s very big for you. The traffic is convenient for you, and the host family has their own car, so you can go out and come back conveniently. What’s more, all the host family members can speak English; therefore you can communicate with them easily. If you have problems, you can also tell me and I will help you. The hostess’ cooking is very good, and you can taste all kinds of delicious food if you like it. The host family also hosted a US student in 2009. Please don’t worry about the attitude of them. Have you a good trip. Thank you! Yours Li Hua D (by Niu Jia) Dear Peter, I’m very glad to receive your e-mail asking for information about the host family we have arranged for you to stay( Now I’m introducing the information to you. The living condition is very good. You will have your own bedroom and the house is big enough. Besides, the host family has their own car and the traffic is convenient, which is convenient for you to go out. What’s more, the hostess is very good at cooking so that you can eat much delicious food. Last but not least, everyone in the host family can speak English and like talking, so you will not have difficulty talking with them. And they looked after an American student in 2009. Do you have any problem? ours Y Li Hua (点评:这两篇文章虽然句式简单，但语法错误较少，而且表达准确。) 高考学习网,中国最大高考学习网站Gkxx.com | 我们负责传递知识～