作文攻略

Writing:　Thesecretofhigh-markcomposition失分原因：1.语言表达有错误，不地道。2.要点有所遗漏。3.词汇量小，句子单一。4.句子衔接不自然。5.离题句太多。6.书写差。1.要点齐全2.较多的语法结构和高级词汇3.语言地道，准确4.全文结构紧凑清析5.书写美观 高分书面表达的要求：agoodcomposition影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点Whichcompositionfeelsmoreattractive,why?影响给分的因素之二：　　　　　语言A.词汇的选择灵活新颖，高级.B.句型结构运用灵活多变.人靠衣装，文靠词装词汇层面Adj.聪明的、脑筋好的clever→smart→wise→bright→intelligent短语层面电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。1.Computersareveryimportantinourlife.2.Computersplayaveryimportantroleinourlife.3.computersareofgreatimportanceinourlife.越晚学到的词汇，越有水平。越往后想到的词汇，用的人就越少，自然就越有水平。句型层面他昨天下午来的。1.Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.2.Hedidn’tcomehereuntilyesterdayafternoon.3.Notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere.4.Itwasyesterdayafternoonthathecamehere.Rewritethesentences1.Theyarrivedattheschool.Theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.2.Iwillbegivenanotherchance.Iwillsucceed.3.HewantstoimprovehisEnglish.Hestudieshard.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档Arrivingattheschool,theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.Givenanotherchance,Iwillsucceed.ToimprovehisEnglish,hestudieshard.Usedifferentwaystodescribethepicture尝试多样化表达方式一…就受到欢迎AssoonasLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairport,theywerewarmlywelcomed.Onarrivingattheairport,LienChanandhiswife…LienChanandhiswifewerewarmlywelcomeddirectly/themomenttheyarrivedattheairport.NosoonerhadLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairportthantheywere…HardlyhadLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairportwhentheywere…影响给分的因素之三：　　　　　　　行文的流畅上下贯通、一气呵成正确而巧妙地使用好连接词使用恰当的连接词⑴排序关系合适的过渡性词汇逻辑角度⑺递进关系⑹归纳 总结 初级经济法重点总结下载党员个人总结TXt高中句型全总结.doc高中句型全总结.doc理论力学知识点总结pdf ⑸因果关系⑷转折关系⑶举例关系⑵并列关系first;firstly;second;secondly;lastbutnotleastand;too;aswellas;alongwith;togetherwithforexample;forinstance;like;suchas;astobut;however;while;though;onthecontrarybecause;since;thanksto;asaresult/consequence(of);thus;thereforeinaword;inshort;tosumup;inconclusionwhat’smore;besides;tomakemattersworse;what’sworse;worsestill;furthermore3.Sentences（同位语，倒装，强调，非谓语，定语从句，感叹句等多样化的句型与句子结构）Fivestepsforwriting(写作五步骤）1.Cross-question(审题)※Mainidea※Style※tense※Person2.Seizethemajorpoints/keywords/phrases，figureouttheoutline(提纲)5.Errorcorrecting(拼写，名词单复数，时态，主谓一致，句子结构)4.EnsurethefluencyConjunctions/conjunctiveadverbs(添加过渡，确保连贯）passage例文假设你是宏力学校学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speechcontest），希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。英语演讲比赛英语演讲比赛主题：人与自然时间：6月15日下午2：00－5：00地点：501教室参赛选手：10名学生联系人：李华（电话44876655）欢迎大家光临注意：词数100左右。Step1审题假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speechcontest），希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。写信我是李华。比赛，评委一般现在，将来1.Cross-question(审题)※Mainidea※Style※tense※PersonStep2Keypoints2.Seizethemajorpoints/keywords/phrases，figureouttheoutline(提纲)英语演讲比赛英语演讲比赛主题：人与自然时间：6月15日下午2：00－5：00地点：501教室参赛选手：10名学生联系人：李华（电话44876655）欢迎大家光临假设你是宏力学校学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speechcontest），希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。1,chairmanofStudentsUnion2,hold,takeplace3,speechcontest4,close,nearby,nottoofar5,judge,todecidewhothewinnerwillbe1,thetopic;thesubject;thetheme;themainidea2,ManandNature;Human,Humanbeings,Mankind;Nature,theWorld;Environment3,inRoom501at2:00-5:00ontheafternoonofJune15;from2:00pmto5:00pmonJune154,10students;takepartin,deliver/givetheirspeeches5,callme,contactme,phonemeStep3:sentences3.Sentences（同位语，倒装，强调，非谓语，定语从句，感叹句等多样化的句型与句子结构）1,IamLiHua,ChairmanofStudentsUnionofHenanHongliSchool,whichisclosetoyouruniversity.2,OurschoolwillholdanEnglishspeechcontestinordertoimprovethestudents’oralEnglish.3,ThetopicisManandNature.4,IamwritingtoinviteyoutobeajudgeattheEnglishspeechcontest.5,ItisinRoom501inourschoolat2:00-5:00intheafternoonofJune15thattheEnglishspeechcontestwilltakeplace.6,Tenstudentswilldelivertheirspeeches.7,Pleasecallmeifyouhaveanyquestions.8Mynumberis44876655.Step4:passage4.Ensurethefluency(添加过渡，确保连贯）DearMs.Smith,IamLiHua,ChairmanofStudentsUnionofHenanHongliSchool,whichisclosetoyouruniversity.RecentlyourschoolwillholdanEnglishspeechcontestinordertoimprovethestudents’oralEnglishandIamwritingtoinviteyoutobeajudgeattheEnglishspeechcontest.ItisinRoom501inourschoolat2:00-5:00intheafternoonofJune15thattheEnglishspeechcontestwilltakeplace.Thentenstudentswilldelivertheirspeechesonthegiventopic“ManandNature”.Wewillappreciateitifyouwillacceptourinvitationatyourconvenience.Pleasecallmeat44876655ifyouhaveanyquestions.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Withbestwishes,Yours,LiHuaStep5:correctionSpellingNounspluralTenseAgreementStructureOthers5.Errorcorrecting(拼写，名词单复数，时态，主谓一致，句子结构)1.要点齐全2.较多的语法结构和高级词汇3.语言地道，准确4.全文结构紧凑清析5.书写美观 高分书面表达的要求：agoodcomposition背诵短文日积月累