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书面表达与短文改错书面表达---Approachestopros&cons10月段考书面表达下面是对中学生对志愿工作的看法的调查表，请根据下面所给的词汇和短语写一篇英语小短文。70%的学生赞成参加志愿工作为社会作贡献，帮助别人是一件很有意义的工作，带来很多个人利益，为日后的工作获得宝贵的技能和经验，为自己创造机遇，增强信心、自觉意识、良好的交际能力和领导才能。25%的学生不愿意从事志愿工作无报酬，浪费时间，耽误学习。5%的学生无明确态度漠不关心。我对志愿工作的看法。对立观点展开议论写作这种题型一般会给出两个或两个以上的对立的观点，要求考生发表自己的看法或见解。这类题型的基本模式可分四段：1.对一个讨论的主题，仁者见仁智者见智2、有人认为……3、有人认为……4、我的看法是……参考 模板 个人简介word模板免费下载关于员工迟到处罚通告模板康奈尔office模板下载康奈尔 笔记本 模板 下载软件方案模板免费下载 总---分原则Wehavehadaheateddiscussionabout/on....Opinionsaredividedonthematter./Differentstudentshavedifferentattitudestowardsthematter.Somestudentsthink/believe/holdtheviewthat…However,othersarguethat……AsfarasIamconcerned,I……Thereasonsareasfollows.First,……Secondly,……Inconclusion/Inaword,……文章框架结构Differentstudentshavedifferentattitudestowardvoluntarywork.70%ofthestudentsapproveofdoingvoluntarywork.25%ofthestudentsdisapproveofdoingvoluntarywork.Therestofthestudentsdon’thaveaclearattitudetowardit,nordotheycareaboutit.Iholdtheviewthatdoingvoluntaryworkisofbenefittous.一些关键词的处理志愿工作voluntarywork对社会做贡献makeacontributiontothesociety一件有意义的工作aworthwhile/meaningfuljob个人利益personalbenefits创造机遇openupopportunities增强信心buildupone’sconfidence无报酬withoutpayment/fornothingDifferentstudentshavedifferentattitudestowardvoluntarywork.70%ofthestudentsapproveofdoingvoluntarywork.Theyconsiderthatitcanmakeacontributiontosocietyanditisaworthwhilejobtohelpothers.Itcanalsobringpersonalbenefitsandwillcontributetotheirfuturebecausetheycangainvaluableexperienceandskillsfortheirfuturecareer.Voluntaryworkoftenopensupopportunitiesforthem,builduptheirconfidence,raisetheirself-awareness,andimprovegoodcommunicationskillsandleadershipability.25%ofthestudentsdisapproveofdoingvoluntarywork.Theythinktheworkisdonewithoutpaymentanditisawasteoftime.Therestofthestudentsdon’thaveclearattitudetowardit,nordotheycareaboutit.IthinkIholdtheviewthatdoingvoluntaryworkisofbenefittous.Nomatterhowsmallitis,itwillhelpmakeadifference.Despitenopayment,wecanacquirevaluableexperience.PossibleVersionDifferentstudentshavedifferentattitudestowardvoluntarywork.70%ofthestudentsapproveofdoingvoluntarywork.Theyconsiderthatitcanmakeacontributiontosocietyanditisaworthwhilejobtohelpothers.Itcanalsobringpersonalbenefitsandwillcontributetotheirfuturebecausetheycangainvaluableexperienceandskillsfortheirfuturecareer.Voluntaryworkoftenopensupopportunitiesforthem,builduptheirconfidence,raisetheirself-awareness,andimprovegoodcommunicationskillsandleadershipability.Readoutthecomposition25%ofthestudentsdisapproveofdoingvoluntarywork.Theythinktheworkisdonewithoutpaymentanditisawasteoftime.Therestofthestudentsdon’thaveaclearattitudetowardit,nordotheycareaboutit.IthinkIholdtheviewthatdoingvoluntaryworkisofbenefittous.Nomatterhowsmallitis,itwillhelpmakeadifference.Despitenopayment,wecanacquirevaluableexperience.杨洋Thereisaheateddiscussiononvloluntaryworkthesedays.Statisticsshowthat70%ofthestudentsarewillingtotakepartinvoluntarywork.Theythinkbeingvolunteerscanmakecontributionstothesociety.Itisameaningjobforhighschoolstudentstohelpothers.What‘smore,doingvoluntaryworkisaneffectivewaytoobtainvaluableskillsandexperiences.Itcanhelppeoplegraspopportunitiesandbuilduptheirconfidence.Thosestudentsalsoconsiderleadershipandabilitiestocommunicatewithotherstobeimportant,andthesecanbeacquiredfromvoluntarywork.However,25%ofthestudentshavetheoppositeopinions.Theysaystudentswillwastealotoftime,whichisbadfortheirhealth.Anyway,youcan’tgetanyrewardfromthesevoluntarywork.Besides,5%ofthestudentsdon’tcareaboutthevoluntarywork.Theyhaven’tformedanyclearopinionssofar.AsfarasI’mconcerned,voluntaryworkcanhelpusalot.Firstly,wecaneasilymakeanynewfriends.Secondly,studentswillbeabletoachievecourage,faithfulnessandotherwonderfulpersonalitiesfromvoluntarywork.Thus,Ithinkitisgreatforstudentstotakepartinvoluntarywork.储备一些固定句型结构如何多样化表达不同看法1）People_______________________________doingvoluntarywork．2）People__________________________doingvoluntarywork．3）People_________________________doingvoluntarywork．4）_______________________doingvoluntaryworkisworthwhile．___________________doingvoluntaryworkisawasteoftime.________________________doingvoluntarywork.Everycoinhastwosides.have（take，adopt，assume)differentattitudestowardshavedifferentopinionsontakedifferentviewsof（on）SomepeoplebelievethatOthersarguethatOpinionsaredividedon如何表示赞成?70%ofthestudentsapproveofdoingvoluntarywork.70%ofthestudents_______________doingvoluntarywork.70%ofthestudents_______________doingvoluntarywork.70%ofthestudents_____________voluntarywork______.70%ofthestudents________________doingvoluntarywork.areinfavorofareforthinkofpositivelysupport如何表示反对25%ofthestudentsdisapproveofdoingvoluntarywork.25%ofthestudents__________doingvoluntarywork.25%ofthestudents__________doingvoluntarywork.25%ofthestudents___________doingvoluntarywork.25%ofthestudents___________doingvoluntarywork.25%ofthestudents____________doingvoluntarywork___________.areagainstobjecttoopposethinkofnegativelyareopposedto如何表达个人看法Ithinkeachofusshouldmakeacontributiontosociety.___________,eachofusshouldmakeacontributiontosociety.___________________________,eachofusshouldmakeacontributiontosociety.___________,eachofusshouldmakeacontributiontosociety.___________________eachofusshouldmakeacontributiontosociety.InmyopinionSofarasIamconcernedPersonallyIholdtheviewthat在写作中除了使用以上谈到的重点句型外，还应该注意文章的逻辑结构和五种过渡词的使用。例如：1.表示举例时使用：forexample,suchas,take...forexample,anotherexampleof,hereareafewexamples,namely等。2.表示列举时使用：first,second,t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总结 初级经济法重点总结下载党员个人总结TXt高中句型全总结.doc高中句型全总结.doc理论力学知识点总结pdf 时使用：inaword,inall,tosumup,inbrief,inshort等。4.要加强句与句之间的连贯时使用：inaddition,what’smore,furthermore,ontopofthat,besides,moreover等。5.表示转折时使用：however,while,onthecontrary等。May25,SundayCloudyThismorningIwenttotheshoptochangethecoatIboughtyesterday.Thesalesgirltreatedmecoldly.Shedidn’tadmitthecoatwassoldinhershop.ShesaidthatImadeitdirty.Shegavevariousexcusestorefusemyrequest.Igotangry.Iquarreledwithher.Themanagerturnedup.Heaskedwhatwasthematter.Heknewallaboutthis,heapologizedtomeandcriticized（批评）thesalesgirl.Theychangedanothercoatforme.Isaidgoodbyetothemandtookithomehappily.HoweverAtthebeginning,InawordsothatJustthen/JustatthatmomentAfterAtlast(Intheend),SoAndthenMay25,SundayCloudyThismorningIwenttotheshoptochangethecoatIboughtyesterday.__________，thesalesgirltreatedmecoldly.______________，shedidn’tadmitthecoatwassoldinhershop.________，ShesaidthatImadeitdirty._____________，Shegavevariousexcusestorefusemyrequest.___________________Iquarreledwithher.___________________,themanagerturnedup.Heaskedwhatwasthematter.______________________heknewallaboutthis,heapologizedtomeandcriticized(批评)thesalesgirl.Theychangedanothercoatforme.Isaidgoodbyetothemandtookithomehappily.HoweverAtthebeginningAndthenInawordIgotsoangrythatAssoonas/ThemomentJustatthatmoment1）表列举：forexample、suchas、namely，etc　　2)表补充：besides、inaddition、moreover，what’smore,etc　　3)表对比：inspiteof，onthecontrary,despite,etc　　4)表原因：becauseof、thanksto、dueto、owingto，asaresultof,etc　　5)表结果：therefore、thus、asaresult、so，etc6)表结论：onthewhole、inaword、inbrief、tosumup，generallyspeaking,etc7)表转折：however、nevertheless、yet，etc Differentstudentsassumedifferentattitudestowardsvoluntaryworkaccordingtothesurvey.Wearegladtoseethat70%ofthestudentsapproveofdoingvoluntarywork.Intheiropinion,makingacontributiontosocietyandlendingahelpinghandtoothersisaworthwhilejob.Atthesametime,itbringsalotofpersonalbenefits.Theycangainvaluableexperienceandskillsforfuturecareer.What’smore,voluntaryworkopensupvastquantitiesofopportunitiesforthemtobuildupconfidence,raiseself–awareness,andimprovegoodcommunicationskillsandleadership.However,25ofthestudentsdisapproveofdoingvoluntarywork.Theyconsiderthatworkingwithoutpaymentisawasteoftime.5%ofthestudentschoosetobeneutral.Inotherwords,theydon’tcareaboutitatall.Inmyopinion,we’dbettertakethechancetoparticipateinvoluntarywork,nomatterhowsmallitis.Differentstudentsassumedifferentattitudestowardsvoluntaryworkaccordingtothesurvey.Wearegladtoseethat70%ofthestudentsapproveofdoingvoluntarywork.Intheiropinion,makingacontributiontosocietyandlendingahelpinghandtoothersisaworthwhilejob.Atthesametime,itbringsalotofpersonalbenefits.Theycangainvaluableexperienceandskillsforfuturecareer.What’smore,voluntaryworkopensupvastquantitiesofopportunitiesforthemtobuildconfidence,raiseself–awareness,andimprovegoodcommunicationskillsandleadership.However,25ofthestudentsdisapproveofdoingvoluntarywork.Theyconsiderthatworkingwithoutpaymentisawasteoftime.5%ofthestudentschoosetobeneutral.Inotherwords,theydon’tcareaboutitatall.Inmyopinion,we’dbettertakethechancetoparticipateinvoluntarywork,nomatterhowsmallitis.Thesurveyshowstheopinionsofhighschoolstudentsonvoluntarywork.70%ofthestudentsareinfavorofvoluntarywork.Bydoingthework,wecanmakecontributionstothesociety.Andthereismuchpointinhelpingothers.Itcanbringuslotsofpersonalbenefits.Wecanalsogainpreciousskillsandexperiencewhichwecanmakeuseofinthefuture.What’smore,takingpartinvoluntaryworkisawaytoopenupopportunities.Furthermore,ithelpstobuildupourconfidenceandraiseself-consciousness.Ourabilityofcommunicationandleadershipwillalsobedevelopedbydoingvoluntarywork.However,25%ofthestudentsdon’tapproveofvoluntarywork.Theyconsidervoluntaryworkasawasteoftimebecausetheyworkwithoutpayment.Therestofthestudentsdon’thaveaclearattitudetowardsvoluntarywork.Inmyopinion,aswearemembersofthesociety,allofusshouldsparenoefforttomakeitbetterandbetter.Thesurveyshowstheopinionsofhighschoolstudentsonvoluntarywork.70%ofthestudentsareinfavorofvoluntarywork.Bydoingthework,wecanmakecontributionstothesociety.Andthereismuchpointinhelpingothers.Itcanbringuslotsofpersonalbenefits.Wecanalsogainpreciousskillsandexperiencewhichwecanmakeuseofinthefuture.What’smore,takingpartinvoluntaryworkisawaytoopenupopportunities.Furthermore,ithelpstoraiseourconfidenceandbuildupself-consciousness.Ourabilityofcommunicationandleadershipwillalsobedevelopedbydoingvoluntarywork.However,25%ofthestudentsdon’tapproveofvoluntarywork.Theyconsidervoluntaryworkasawasteoftimebecausetheyworkwithoutpayment.Therestofthestudentsdon’thaveaclearattitudetowardsvoluntarywork.Inmyopinion,aswearemembersofthesociety,allofusshouldsparenoefforttomakeitbetterandbetter.典型错误70%ofthestudentsareinfavorofjoininginvoluntaryworks.70%ofthestudentsareinfavorofjoininginvoluntarywork.workworksworkjob2.70%ofthestudentsapprovethatdevotethemselvestothesocietyisameaningfulwork.70%ofthestudentsapprovethatdevotingthemselvestothesocietyisameaningfuljob.3.However,wehavetoleavetimestudyingandfinishingourhomework.However,wehavetoleavetimetostudyandfinishourhomework.Therearealso5%ofthestudentshavenoclearideaaboutit.5%ofthestudentshavenoclearideaaboutit.Therearealso5%ofthestudentshavingnoclearideaaboutit.Therearealso5%ofthestudentswhohavenoclearideaaboutit.Therearealso5%ofthestudentswithnoclearideaaboutit.5.Thereasonsfortheydon’twanttojointhevoluntaryworkareasfollow.Thereasonswhytheydon’twanttojoininthevoluntaryworkareasfollows.高考链接002年普通高等学校招生全国英语统一考试书面表达 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最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票。请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。60%的同学认为：：1、不应收门票2、公园是公众休闲的地方3、如收票，需建大门、围墙、会影响城市形象40%的同学认为1、应收门票，但票价不宜高2、支付园林工人工资3、购新花木I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.60%ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefees.Ontheotherhand,40%thinkthatfeesshouldbecharged.门票anentrancefee免费freeofcharge城市形象theappearance/imageofacity园林工人gardenerI’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.60%ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefees.Theybelievedapublicparkshouldbefreeofcharge.Peopleneedaplacewheretheycanrestandenjoythemselves.Chargingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway.Whatismore,itwillbecomenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls,whichwilldoharmtotheappearanceofacity.Ontheotherhand,40%thinkthatfeesshouldbechargedbecauseyouneedmoneytopaygardenersandotherworkersandtobuyplantsandyoungtrees.However,theysuggestthatfeesshouldbechargedlow.DearEditor,I'mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe'vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.Opinionsaredividedonthequsstion.60%ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefees.Theybelieveapublicparkshouldbefreeofcharge.Peopleneedaplacewheretheycanrestandenjoythemselves.Chargingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway.What'smore,itwillbecomenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls,whichwilldoharmtotheappearanceofacity.Ontheotherhand,40%thinkthatfeesshouldbechargedbecauseyouneedmoneytopaygardenersandotherworkers,andtobuyplantsandyoungtrees.Theysuggest,however,feesshouldbechargedlow.Yourstruly,LiHuaPractice现在正是春暖花开春游时节。你校学生会以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”为题，向高三学生作调查。请你根据下表所提供的调查结果，以　“WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting?”为题，写一篇短文，上交学生会。3、春游耽误学习。3、活动使精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习。2、高考临近，没有心情玩。2、接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利于健康。1、不应该春游1、应该春游35%的学生认为65%的学生认为注意：1、短文标题已给出，不计入总词数。2、词数：词数150左右。3、参考词汇：高考：collegeentranceexamination.WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting?WehavehadaheateddiscussiononwhetherSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.Moststudents,about65%,arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringOntheotherhand,about35%studentsareagainsttheidea.春游springouting接触自然beclosetonature呼吸新鲜空气breatheinfreshair放松relaxoneself/feelrelaxed高考thecollegeentranceexamination临近bedrawingnear/beapproachingWhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting?WehavehadaheateddiscussiononwhetherSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.Moststudents,about65%,arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting.Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairandwhat'smore,theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic.Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudies.Ontheotherhand,about35%studentsareagainsttheidea.Theysaythatwithcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,theydon'tfeellikegoinganywhere.Besides,theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff.Theycan'taffordthetime.Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudies.