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IBT-SAT小马过河—专业备考社区小马过河Xiaoma.com——专业备考社区写作训练方法1－5篇不限时写作结构完整300字以上6－10篇1小时350字以上结构完整要求：检查语法、拼写错误跑MATCH_ word word文档格式规范word作业纸小票打印word模板word简历模板免费word简历 _1713881851563_2、表达不清问题11－20篇半小时400字以上要求：检查语法、拼写错误跑题、表达不清问题润饰文章理由不能太具体否则不容易展开要擅于利用“万金由”各个理由的关系，必须是并列关系，排列顺序由段落长短来决定。开头1背景＋论题＋各方观点的理由＋作者论点和理由背景＋论题＋反方观点＋（反方理由）＋过渡＋作者观点＋作者理由开头段写理由的好处怎样写背景：提出一种普遍的或值得关注的现象（紧扣论题）作为背景从远到近，由大到小，谈论紧扣论题的社会观点作为背景官方、权威数据，调查研究结果开头2事例＋论题＋各方观点（和理由）＋作者理由和论点⑴媒体（电视、电台、报纸、杂志和网络）的报道⑵朋友、邻居、同事的故事开头3问题＋论题＋各方观点（和理由）＋作者论点和理由把背景用问题方式提出连续提问（煽情式提问）开头4“引语”＋论题＋各方观点（和理由）＋作者论点和理由主题句必须是陈述句必须表面观点不要直接写事实由观点到事实态度必须坚决每段都要有主题句通常位于段首或段末结尾总结全文（论点＋各方观点）＋重述论点和理由＋提出建议/解决问题/深化意义把对方的优点移植到己方，把己方的观点消灭掉，提出实施 方案 气瓶 现场处置方案 .pdf气瓶 现场处置方案 .doc见习基地管理方案.doc关于群访事件的化解方案建筑工地扬尘治理专项方案下载 和注意事项深化意义＝展望未来＋对国家社会的好处黄金规则一–Thelonger,thebetter⑴每一个论点都要有理由⑵每一个理由都要有例子⑶每一个例子都要有细节黄金规则二----------“万金由”黄金规则三重述语意的技巧⑴使用同义词进行替换⑵使用同根词进行替换Oppose-oppositionBuild-buildingAnnounce-announcementExplain-explanation⑶使用短语进行替换(Support)arguefor/votefor/beinfavorof(Oppose)argueagainst/voteagainst/objectto/beopposedto⑷使用全新的表达法进行替换Acompanyhasannouncedthatitwishestobuildalargefactorynearthecommunity.----------alargefactoryissupposedtobuiltnearthecommunityaccordingtotheannouncementissuedbyacompany.Discusstheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofthisnewinfluenceonyourcommunity.------Thereisagrowingawarenessofboththepositiveandnegativeinfluencesthattheconstructionplanbringstoourcommunity.黄金规则四－黄金句型pricelesssentencepatterns超酷超炫超难句型大比拼注意：主题句尽可能2－1格式细节提升每个段落开头强调句（1－2）Themore…,themore(1－2)Themorefrequentlywecommunicatewithfamilymembers,themoreharmonioustherelationshipinthefamilybetweenusis.(只要涉及交流都可以用)3.倒装句（2－3）①So…that….以至于Sobigistheclassroomthatitmayholdtenthousandpeople.Sofastdoesherunthatthetraincouldn’tcatchupwithhim.②As…as(more…than…)比较结构Irunasfastashedid-----Irunasfastasdidhe.③表示地点、位置、范围、处所的状语或表语提前至句首Mysisterisamongthosestudents.----Amongthosestudentsismysister.④分词或形容词短语提前至句首主语（＋定语）＋be＋形容词/过去分词/不及物动词现在分词＋介词＋名词主语（＋定语）＋be＋及物动词现在分词＋n.E.g.Contraryto/coincidentwiththeopinionofmanypeopleismyheartfelt(忠心的)objectionto/agreementwiththeideathatstudentsshouldstudytogetherwithclassmates.Thosepeople/parentswhoholdtheopinionthatmoneyistheonlysymbolofsuccessaresatisfiedwith/contentedwith/interestedin/worriedabout/opposedtotheirchildrenfindingahigh-payingandlong-workingjob.------------Satisfiedwith/contentedwith/interestedin/worriedabout/opposedtotheirchildrenfindingahigh-payingandlong-workingjobarethosepeople/parentswhoholdtheopinionthatmoneyistheonlysymbolofsuccessArguingforthosestudentslivingoutsidethecampusarethosepeoplewhoholdtheopinionthatindependenceisthemostcriticalcharacteristicofauniversitystudent⑤形容词＋though/as+主语＋谓语＋主句Richthoughheis,heisunhappy.Thoughtheadvantages(thatowningabusinessenjoys/leadsto/resultsin)areconsiderable/wonderful/numerous,theycannotcompetewiththebenefits(thatworkingforothersbringsabout/causes),when/ifresponsibilityistakenintoconsideration/deliberation/account.Thoughtheadvantagesthatlivinginoutsidethecampusenjoysareconsiderable,theycannotcompetewiththebenefitsthatlivingininsidethecampusbringsabout,whensafetyistakenintoconsideration.(通常用在第一段的最后一句话提出文章论点和理由，2－1文章的承上启下部分或文章的结尾)----------------------------considerablethoughtheadvantagesthatlivinginoutsidethecampusenjoysare,theycannotcompetewiththebenefitsthatlivingininsidethecampusbringsabout,whensafetyistakenintoconsideration.⑥表示否定的副词或短语＋助动词＋主语＋谓语＋其他成分No/not/never/Neither/nor/(全部否定)seldom/rarely/barely/scarcely/hardly（部分否定）NeverwillIformanideathatbicyclesaffecthumanbeings’lifestylemostprofoundlyamongalltransportationmeans.⑦Only＋状语置于句首＋助动词＋主语＋谓语＋其他成分OnlythoughthiscrisisdoIunderstandthatyoulovemebestintheworld.比较结构和倍数关系(1－2)As…as…AisfivetimesasbigasBAisfivetimesbiggerthanBAisfivetimesthesizeofB.修辞问句(1－2)Whenhumanbeingsenjoytheirhappylife,isn’titnecessarythattheygivesomeconsiderationtothosecuteanimalswithoutenoughplayingground?Whenthosepeopleenjoytheirhappylifeoutsidecampus,isn’titnecessarythattheygivesomeconsiderationtothegreatopportunitieswiththeirclassmatesiftheyliveinsidecampus?Whenthosepeopleenjoyconveniencebroughtbyautomobiles,isn’titnecessarythattheygivesomeconsiderationtotheheavilypollutedairandthosepeoplewhoareinjuredseverely(had)inthecaraccidents?Whenpeopleenjoytheconveniencebroughttheconstructionplan,isn’titnecessarythattheygivesomeconsiderationtotheheavilypollutedairandthosepeoplewhoareinjuredseverelyordieinthecaraccidentbecauseofthetrafficjamaftertheconstructionofthefactory?并列结构(2－3)Teachingmachinesaredevicesthatcanstoreinstructionalinformation,presentdisplays,receiveresponsefromalearner,andactonthoseresponses.虚拟语气阐述各种假定的恶劣后果时，可以使用虚拟语气。Ifwebuiltafactoryinourcommunity,therewouldbemuchpollution.表示建议时，可以使用虚拟语气。Isuggesthe(should)gonow③论及不太可能会实现或不可能会实现或不希望会实现的事情时，可以使用虚拟语气。插入语（2－3次）重要的插入语列举：indeed，surely，（however，nevertheless，nonetheless，admittedly,notwithstanding）转折，意思完全一样,obviously，besides,furthermore,briefly,similarly,honestly\frankly\generally(speaking)，naturally，luckily\fortunately，astonishingly,conversely,undeniably,undoubtedlystrangetosay，needlesstosay，mostimportantofall，worseofallinsum\short\summary，inotherwords，inasense，ingeneral，inmyview\opinion\judgment，inconsequence,inconclusioninthefirstplace，inadditionOnthecontrary,incontrasttomyjoy\delight\satisfaction\surprise\astonishment\amazement\regret\disappointment，ofcourse,forinstance\example,infact,asamatteroffacttobesure，tosumup，totellthetruth,tostartwith，Iamsure，Ibelieve\wonder\suppose，itseems，asIseeit，whatisimportant(serious)，I’mafraid，itissaid语言的雕琢聪明的cleverbrilliantsmartintelligentwisegeniusbrighttalentedgiftedquick-wittedquick-mindedingenious非常veryextremelyextraordinarilyhighlyunusuallyprettyconsiderablyremarkablyamazinglyastonishinglysurprisinglyimpressivelynoticeablenotably著名的well-knownfamednotedcelebratedrenownedeminentEnjoyanation-wide/world-widefame/name/recognition/Celebrity/eminence/reputationbewidelyrecognizedacknowledged关于regardingconcerninginvolvingasregardsrelatingtowithrespecttowithregardtowithreferencetowithrelationtoE.g.:Concerningthisissue,asfarasIamconcerned,IthinkyouareveryfamousandcleverFrommypointofview,youareextraordinarilywell-knownandintelligent.文章中禁止使用的项目About,get,famous,clever,very,lovely,good,bad,big,many,important在每个名词前，试图加上一个形容词；在每个形容词前，试图加上一个副词 词汇 英语3500词汇语境记忆pets3考试词汇二年级反义词和近义词初中词汇词汇大全考研英语二高频词汇表 选择的 标准 excel标准偏差excel标准偏差函数exl标准差函数国标检验抽样标准表免费下载红头文件格式标准下载 UnderstandableAcceptableCorrecte.g.aslim/ampleopportunitytakecareofyourselfPlaywright(剧作家)Gain/obtain/accumulate/acquireknowledge(获得知识)AppropriateExactIdiomatic(合乎语言习惯的)Interesting段落的实现⑴例证法每个理由后面必须同时有例子每篇文章至少两个例子提出论点－列举事例－分析事例－得出结论－（重述论点）我认为－因为我觉得－比如说－你看举例之后一定要强调这样的例子不胜枚举。。。AbrahamLincoln⑵因果法提出论点－原因－分析条件（如果这样会有什么好处/坏处，而这正是我们所需要/担心的）－得出结果Leadto/resultinresultfromBecauseof/dueto/thanksto/owingto/byreasonof/onaccountofFor表示“因为”时不能放在句首Because/for/since/asAsaresult/outcome/consequenceofInconsequence/intheend/consequentlyTherefore/thereby/hence/thus(副词)So（连词）⑶比较对照法（整体、分项比较）整体比较的好处：写起来容易整体印象完整缺点：两者对比不鲜明分项比较的好处：两者对比特别鲜明缺点：零碎的印象，大量的重复Interweave交织⑷分类法/并列法总论点分论点一在A方面在B方面在C方面分论点二分论点三⑸定义法衔接手段使用连接词和短语（表示并列、转折、递进、因果、比较、对照、举例）使用代词使用语意粘连举例：同意建工厂常用词汇和结构表示第一项Firstly,tobegin/startwith,firstofall,inthefirstplace,ontheonehand,themostimportantreasonis,firstandforemost另一项secondly,inthesecondplace,ontheotherhand,besides,furthermore,additionally,inaddition,moreover,equallyimportantis,also,too,another最后一项lastbutnottheleast,mostimportantofall,finally,thirdly,anotherpoint/reason题型分类：⑴观点选择给出两个对立观点或者一个观点的对立两个方面，要求支持其中一个观点或者观点的一个方面。Doyouagreeordisagreewiththestatements:parentsarethebestteachers带有绝对性的题目，驳论更好写⑵比较对比类给出两个对立观点或者一个观点的对立两个方面，要求进行比较论述，并给出个人观点Ithasbeensaid,”Noteverythingthatislearnediscontainedinbooks”compareandcontrastknowledgegainedfromexperiencewithknowledgegainedfrombooks.Inyouropinion,whichsourceismoreimportant?Why?⑶自定义类考试频率最低、难度最大Youhavetheopportunitytovisitaforeigncountryfortwoweeks.Whichcountrywouldyouliketovisit?Usespecificreasonsanddetailstoexplainyourchoice.给出一个范围或论题要求自己确定观点并论述、正面反面都可以写如何审题：确定题目的类别（题材/题型）确定切入点，寻找绝对词汇(never/conly/anything/best)和其他带有限制性含义的词语（形容词、介词短语）列提纲时间短于两分钟简短提纲＝观点＋理由＋闪现的句子和名言主体框架1＋1支持面＋理由两点论述2＋1（两种）A型支持面优点的充分论述＋反对面的缺点一到两点的简略改进（自由选室友or学校决定）B型支持面的理由两点充分论述＋支持面的另一个理由简略论述2－1（两种）－重点推荐支持面优点两点充分论述＋反对面优点一到两点的简略改进讨论点的优点两点充分论述＋讨论点的缺点一到两点论述折中方案各种题型的框架观点选择类：1＋1、2＋1、2－1、折中方案