2019高中英语作文写作指导-- 建议信(共34张PPT)

LeadinWatchavideoaboutsomestudentsinourschoolandfindout______________________________Whatisbotheringthemlately.Somestudents’problemsS4:Ican'tgetonwellwithmyfriendsandIdon'tknowhowto_______________S1:I___________myparentsandIfeeltheyonlycareaboutmy_______S3:Iamworriedabout________andIwanttoimprovemy______.S2:___________keepsincreasingandMyclassmatesoften________me.Howcanwehelpthem?quarrelledwithMyweightstudylaughtatmyEnglishwritingimproveourfriendship.TeachinggoalTask1Structureofwritingaletterforadviceshowthe_______oftheletter(1)understandthe_________(2)putforwardspecific________(3)explainthe______or_______expressyour___________注意：语言要礼貌，顾及对方感受。problemspurposesuggestionsreasonsbenefitsexpectaiontheStructureofaletterforadviceGreeting,Body:1stpart:2ndpart:3rdpart:Complimentaryclose(结束语),SignaturethepurposesuggestionsandreasonshopethereceivertoconsiderthesuggestionsDear…,Yourssincerely,Robert假如你是某英文周报“PLEASETELLME”专栏的编辑Robert。南县一中高三年级学生XuMeili因最近感觉学习压力大，成绩下降，和父母经常吵架而写信向你求助。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1、对该同学存在的问题 表 关于同志近三年现实表现材料材料类招标技术评分表图表与交易pdf视力表打印pdf用图表说话 pdf 示理解2、提出建议并给出理由注意：1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。实际操练Task2.Understandtheproblemsandproposepracticalsuggestions1.学习压力大2.成绩下降3.和父母经常吵架提出建议1.保持乐观，放松心情。2.分析成绩下降的原因，与老师沟通，弄懂错题3.和父母常交流沟通，相互理解。原因：是释放压力的好办法。益处：逐渐取得进步方法：遇困难求助师生Task3.Comeupwithkeywords给某人提建议向某人征求意见和……相处好这是一个普遍的问题把……考虑在内givesb.someadviceon…asksb.foradvicegetalong/onwellwithThisisacommonproblemtakesth.intoconsiderationHelpfulphrases压力山大成绩下降和父母经常吵架释放压力建议某人做某事feelstressfuldecreaseingrades/performancedeclinequarrelwithmyparentsreleasepressureadvise/recommendsb.todosth.suggest/advise/recommenddoingsth.Helpfulphrases给某人提建议向某人征求意见和……相处好这是一个普遍的问题把……考虑在内压力山大成绩下降和父母经常吵架释放压力建议某人做某事givesb.someadviceon…asksb.foradvicegetalong/onwellwithThisisacommonproblemtakesth.intoconsiderationfeelstressfuldecreaseingrades/performancedeclinequarrelwithmyparentsreleasepressureadvise/recommendsb.todosth.suggest/advise/recommenddoingsth.Task4.RecitethekeysentencestructuresYouhaveaskedformyadvicewithregardto/onhowtogetalongwellwithyourparentsandIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.Iamquitedelightedtohearthatyouwanttoasksomeadvice/suggestionsabout..Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewson/concerning…1.建议信开头常用句式：Foronething…foranother…ontheonehand…ontheotherhand…Tobegin/startwith…what’smore/besides/furthermore……lastbutnotleast…Inaword/Inconclusion…2.常见连词Youaresupposedto/oughttodo...Itwouldbeagoodideatodo...Iwouldliketosuggestthat…You’dbetterdosth…Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould...IfIwereinyourposition,Iwould...Itishightimethatsbdid/shoulddosth.3.表达建议常用句式：Ihopethatmysuggestionsareofhelptoyou,andpleasefeelfreetocontactmeformorequestions.Iamlookingforwardstoyourconsiderationaboutmyproposals/suggestions.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementslater.IfyoucouldtakewhatIsuggestseriously,Iwouldappreciateitverymuch.4.建议信结尾常用句式：Task5.Beautifyyoursentences例句：Actually,itiscommonformoststudentstobeanxiousaboutthebusyandtoughschoollifeofSeniorThree,whichalwaysmakesusstressful.句型仿写：学习英语是非常重要的。Itisveryimportant(foryou)tolearnEnglish.Itisofgreatimportance(foryou)tolearnEnglish.葵花宝典一：Itisadj./n.(forsb).todosth.葵花宝典二：Thereisnodoubt/denyingthat…例句：Thereisnodenyingthatyourparentsloveyouandcareaboutyou.Thereisnodenyingthatfriendshipisofgreatsignificancetoteenagers.句型仿写：毫无疑问，友谊对青少年非常重要。葵花宝典三：notonly…butalso…例句：Youcannotonlyaskfortheteachersforhelp,butalsoyoucanlearnfromyourfellowstudentstoimproveyourstudy.句型转换：使用倒装句型Notonlycanyouaskfortheteachersforhelp,butalsoyoucanlearnfromyourfellowstudentstoimproveyourstudy.葵花宝典三：notonly…butalso…你不仅应该集中精力学习，你还应该注意运动。句型仿写：Youshouldnotonlyconcentrateonyourstudybutalsoyouaresupposedtopayattentiontodoingsports.Notonlyshouldyouconcentrateonyourstudybutalsoyouaresupposedtopayattentiontodoingsports.葵花宝典四：which引导非限制性定语从句扩充句子Youaresupposedtogetupearlyinthemorning,which___________________________________________Itwouldbeagoodideatohaveatalkwithyourfriendandexplainthemisunderstandingtohim,which________________________________________________DearXumeiliYouhaveaskedformyadviceonhowtoimproveyourgradesandgetalongwellwithyourparentsandIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.Actually,itiscommonformoststudentstobeanxiousaboutthebusyandtoughschoollifeofSeniorThree,whichalwaysmakesusstressful.Besides,Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucouldcarefullyanalyzethereasonwhyyourperformancedeclined.Furthermore,notonlycanyouaskfortheteachersforhelp,butalsoyoucanlearnfromyourfellowstudentstoimproveyourstudy.Lastbutnotleast,thereisnodenyingthatyourparentsloveyouandcareaboutyou.IfIwereinyourposition,Iwouldcommunicatewiththemaboutyourproblem.Ihopethatmysuggestionsareofhelptoyou,andpleasefeelfreetocontactmeformorequestions.YoursRobertMyadvicetoXumeiliTask6Groupwork：TaskallocationFirstandlastparagraphsaregiventoyou.Pleasewritethemainpartwith4piecesofadviceonthepaper!Youshouldtrytouseasmanysentencestructuresaspossibble.Now,6minutes.Pleasedoit.Task6GiveadvicetotheotherthreestudentsS4:Ican'tgetonwellwithmyfriendsandIdon'tknowhowtoimproveourfriendshipS1:IquarrelwithmyparentsandfeeltheyonlycareaboutmystudyS3:IamworriedaboutmyEnglishandIwanttoimprovemywriting.S2:MyweightkeepsgainingandmyclassmatesoftenlaughatmeWeneedyourhelp!XumeiliXiaoduanXiaoyangXiaoze√DearXXX----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------YoursLihuaGroupwork：TaskallocationIhopethatmysuggestionsareofhelptoyou,andpleasefeelfreetocontactmeformorequestions.Youhaveaskedformyadviceonhowtogetalongwithyour...andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.youradviceManyteenagershavedifficultygettingalongwiththeirparents.YourPresentationAdviceAdviceAdviceAdviceFlytothemLifeisfullofupsanddowns.Whenwefeeldown,wecancheerourselvesupbyaskingothersforhelp.WheneveryouareinTrouble,rembemberyoucanturntomeforhelp,andIamalwaysonyourside.Troublecanalsobeyourfriendandmakeyougrowup.SummaryEnjoyafilmInsideout(头脑特工队).GivesomeadvicetoRileyonhelpingheradapttothenewenvironment.HomeworkTHANKYOU!