2010短文改错新
题
快递公司问题件快递公司问题件货款处理关于圆的周长面积重点题型关于解方程组的题及答案关于南海问题
型6篇
(1)
Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air was hotter, and all is quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catch them, big drop of rain began to fall. When I came back into house, it was raining harder and harder. I tried very hard to close the window. Then I heard a loudly crashing(碰撞的)sound from the back of the house. When I ran out to find that a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the back room.
(2)
I have been planning to join in our college basketball team
next year, so now I am spending as more time as I can with other people who likes to play. They are teaching me the most important rules and technologies of the game, and I am getting the better all the time. We have a neighborhood team that play against other teams in the area. One of my neighbors is helping rest of us improved our skills. Tonight we are playing against one of the best teams in the city, and I think we can win them if we won't make any mistakes.
(3)
Fang Tong is 34 years old, an actor, director and teacher of Beijing Opera Theatre. Most of her students are from other part of China and have come to Beijing at a very young age of sixteen or seventeen. He hopes create an environment for his students that it is much more relaxing than the one he used to study in. He thought that an actor should relax himself when performing. Yet his students deep respect him and he never needs to raise his voice in order to be hearing. For his opinion, actors should go on even when they feel they have made a mistake in their performances because the moment is already gone but people can never be back to it. So art is always changing and developing.
(4)
Today is Sunday, I have been studying all day long. On the morning, I had a dry breakfast. We have no water to drink because the water supply had cut off. The water come back in the evening. I did math then. I didn't stop after 12 o'clock. After a
short lunch I had the break. Then I went to my Sunday English Class. After a long and tired class for more than two hours, I got to home. Some work had been done but some hadn't. I must review all my subject such as the Sciences, the Humanities, which include Chinese, English, Politics and History as well. That's terribly! Especially when there was no water.
(5)
I have recent been told that listening to loud music is gradual harming people’s hearing. I'm sure it has already been happened to my neighbor. For years she has turned a deaf ear to my requests to turn her radio down. When she gave a party ,she isn't have to invite the rest of the street. Everyone can dance in her music in his own room. Now a scientist has discovered a certain electronic sounds have strange effects on rats. He declares they break down, almost paralyze(瘫) with legs trembled. Then it is simply a matter of throwing them
out by their tail. I wonder if the same thing will happen to my neighbor one day.
(6)
Dear Ralph,
I'm a senior student. I have be in love with a boy for three years. But he is a shy boy, so I wrote him a letter firstly to express my feeling. And he wrote back. In his letter he said, "We are students. Our task is study. Let us wait to see until we have any chance after graduation." So after graduation I telephoned to him, asking him about go out . But he said he didn't want to. He just
wanted to sleep and watched TV. How do you think I should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up Sheila?
Keys
1
1.a-the 2. sudden--suddenly 3 hotter---hot 4 is--was 5. out--out of 6. drop—drops 7. house前加the 8. loudly---loud 9. 去掉when 10. broke—broken
2
1. 去掉in 2. more → much 3. likes → like 4. technologies → techniques 5. 去掉the 6. play → plays 7. rest前加the 8. improved → improve 9. win-beat 10. won't → don't
3
1.her-his 2. part- parts 3. a-the 4. hope∧to 5 去掉 it 6. thought-thinks 7. deep-deeply 8. hearing-heard 9. For-In 10. but-and
4
1. On→In 2. have→had 3. 在cut前加上been 4.been 5. after→until 6. the→a 7. tired→tiring 8. 去掉to 9. subject→subjects 10. terribly→ terrible
5
1.recently 2.is 3. 去掉been 4. gave---gives 5. isn't---doesn't 6. in---to 7. 去掉a 8. with后加their 9. trembled---trembling 10. tail---tails
6
1. be--been 2. firstly--first 3. feeling—feelings 4. study前加to 5. until-- if / whether 6. 去掉to 7. go--going 8. watched--watch 9What 10. and—or