读后续写微技能指导系列1——环境描写课件（共13张PPT）

读后续写微技能指导—环境描写环境描写，可以起到融情与景的效果，衬托人物的内心世界。适当的环境描写可以让文章读起来有立体感和真实感。写作思路：第一步，先尝试概括性描述（总体描述）。第二步，在概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系及语意的合理。Icanwellrememberthattherewasatimewhenadeepbluesky,thesongofthebirds,moonlightandflowerscouldneverhavekeptmespellbound.(M1U1)关于天气炎热的描写用天热衬托恶劣环境的时候，常用的词有：（热）；（融化）；（汗流浃背）；（热得吓人）翻译练习：1）天气很闷热。（概括描写）1）Theweatherwassohot.1)Thisweatheristerrible.hot；melt；sweatlikeapig；terrible翻译练习（细节描写）：2）天气很闷热，我汗流浃背。2）天气很闷热，一丝风也没有，稠乎乎的空气好像凝住了。2）天气很闷热，我都没法呼吸了。希望很快能够凉快一点。2)Thisweatheristerrible,Iamsweatinglikeapig.2）Theweatherwassohotthattherewasnowind,andthethickairseemedtobefrozen.2）TheweatherwassohotthatIcanhardlybreathe.Ihopeitwillbecoolersoon.关于雨的描写翻译练习：1）下起了大雨。（概括描写）用雨衬托恶劣环境的时候，常用的词有：大暴雨;下倾盆大雨;被雨淋1）Itwasrainingcatsanddogs.1）Therewasaheavydownpour.aheavydownpour大暴雨raincatsanddogs下倾盆大雨becaughtintherain被雨淋翻译练习（细节描写）：2）下起了大雨，溪水上张，风吹着拍打着房子。2）下起了大雨，我到家时全湿了。2）Itwasrainingcatsanddogs.AndIwasallwetwhenIgothome..2）Itwasrainingcatsanddogs,thestreamsroseandthewindsblewandbeatagainstthehouse.Thewindwas__________dreadfullyandtherainwas_________fromtheheaven,__________againstthebranchesoflinedtress.howlingpouringwhippingspecificsurroundingscenes?1.As______________________________________,（天空越来越黑，光线越来越暗）hequickenedhissteps.2.__________________(微风)strokedhishead,asifcomfortingallhistiredness.theskygraduallydarkenedandthelightdimmedThegentlebreeze3.Fromthedistance,hesaw_______________(昏暗的灯光)inthevillage.somedimlightPara.1Hetookthestrawberrieshome.(asentence)Practice11....itwasdark.(增加细节描写)Thesunhidhimselfbehindthemountains,makingithardtoseeanythinginthethickdarkness.2016.10浙江高考真题Para1Butnomorehelocopterescameanditwasgettingdarkagain.________________________________Shehadnochoicebuttostopforanothernight.AgustofcoldwindblewandshestartedtomissthewarmthofTom'shug.Practice21.Itgotdark.(增加细节描写)2018.06浙江高考真题Para2Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.________________________________Silencebetweendadandmemadememorenervousandscared.Atthatmoment,itwascompletelydarkexceptthefaintlightgivenoutbyafewstarsinthesky.Practice31.Wesawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.(增加细节描写)2017.11浙江高考真题Para2Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.___________________Practice4Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintheirpower.—Book1“Anne’sBestFriend”Iclosedmyeyesinthespeedingcar.Windingrivers,loftymountains,deepvalleysandsunnybeachesheldmeentirelyintheirfascination.Thewindwashowlingdreadfullyandtherainwaspouringfromtheheaven,whippingagainstthebranchesoflinedtress.Theworldwasburdenedwithaseaofdrakness._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________asenseofhorrorcreepinguponme.Iimmediatelyturnedaroundtoslideintothebedandcurledup.Iwasseizedwiththeroaringpowerofnature,Thewindwashowlingdreadfullyandtherainwaspouringfromtheheaven,whippingagainstthebranchesoflinedtress.Theworldwasburdenedwithaseaofdrakness.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afloodoffearwashingoverme,Iimmediatelyturned1.2.aroundtoslideintothebedandcurledup.“景”“情”过渡，过渡要融洽更融洽？续写一个段落，努力用上环境描写Homework