高中英语作文教学课件

nullnull英语写作讲解null高考作文类型： A. 数据说明类文章 B. 提示议论文类文章 C. 看图说话类文章null影响高考英语书面 表 关于同志近三年现实表现材料材料类招标技术评分表图表与交易pdf视力表打印pdf用图表说话 pdf 达得分的几个 因素 1.语篇信息是否完整 2.行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。 3.是否使用高级词汇 4.是否使用复杂句 5 .卷面整洁,书写工整null写作基本步骤： 仔细审题，列举大纲。 ２．围绕要点，写出句子。 ３．添加过度，确保连贯。 ４．先求正确，再求灵活。 ５．认真眷写，卷面整洁。null 现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一篇短文。nullIntroduction (topic)Body (supporting ideas)Conclusionnull nullThe outline of the writing:Conclusion paragraph: …Introduction paragraph: …nullKey words: 1.introduction(topic): 高三学生（senior 3 students） 春游(go spring outing） 讨论（discussion） 2.body(supporting ideas): 接触自然（be close to nature） 呼吸新鲜空气（ breathe some fresh air ） 精神放松（relax themselves ） 大脑休息（rest their brains ） 高考临近（ with college entrance examination drawing near ） 没心情玩（don’t feel like going ） 耽误学习(waste the time) 3.conclusion: in my opinion…nullKey words:中学生middle school students 身体差in a poor state of health In bad condition 充足的睡眠enough sleep 加强锻炼，增加户外活动 take more exercise and do more outdoor activities 定时吃饭少吃零食 have three meals regularly,eat less non-staple food. 讲卫生 nullForm/develop the habit of hygiene 主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，开门见山，句式力争多样性主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，开门见山，句式力争多样性How will you start you passage? 问句： … … 从句： … … Introduction:（sample） Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. 巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系Pay special attention to the transition sentences: Opinions are divided on the question. The body part The body part Point1: 65%的人认为应该春游（亮明观点） Sentence pattern: Most of us (about 65%) hold the opinion that…,since it tends to…,which is unfavorable to … Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康Sentence pattern: They think it good to do sth……/ sth do good to sth In their opinion, it is of great benefit to do sth…… Eg:They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air Reason 2:活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习 Reason 2:活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习 （注意：两个观点之间的连接） 递进 what’s more ；besides ; moreover ; in addition；furthermore Eg: they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.Conclusion: 小段 总结 初级经济法重点总结下载党员个人总结TXt高中句型全总结.doc高中句型全总结.doc理论力学知识点总结pdf ，进一步亮明观点，前后呼应。Conclusion: 小段总结，进一步亮明观点，前后呼应。 Eg: They think it will do good to their students. nullPoint 2:３５％的学生认为不应该春游（亮明观点） 注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落（承上启下） Sentence pattern: However, others prefer to… Some others have just the opposite opinion….. On the other hand…. Eg: On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea.nullReason 1:高考临近，没有心情玩 Sentence pattern: They say/believe/hold the opinion… that…. Eg: They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they don’t feel like going anywhere. nullReason 2:春游耽误学习 （注意：两个观点之间的连接） Eg:Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They can’t afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies null Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. 　Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and what’s more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they don’t feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They can’t afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies 表示观点对比类写作套语 表示观点对比类写作套语A.总起: Opinions are divided on this question. Different people hold different / opposite opinions. People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards … People have different opinions on this problem. People take different views on this question. B.表达观点一: …of them hold the opinion that …. …of them are in favor of the idea that… People who are for the idea think … nullC.表达不同观点之间的衔接: However, …of them hold a different view. / …of them hold the opposite opinion. People who are against it don’t think so. However, every coin has two sides. Different from those…., …people think …. On the other hand, … people think …. D.结尾常用套语: In my opinion/Personally, … As far as I’m concerned, … In short/ in brief/ in a word, … null Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. 　Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and what’s more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they don’t feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They can’t afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students, about 65%, are for the idea thatOn the other hand, about 35% students areagainst the idea.null表列举说明的关联词: Firstly/ First of all/ To begin with, .... Secondly… Thirdly… In the first place… In the second place… In the third place… Finally/ Last but not least/, .... 表示递进、强调的关联词 .... Besides/Apart from/ What’s more/ In addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover/worse still/ to make matters worse… null Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. 　Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and what’s more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they don’t feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They can’t afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students, about 65%, are for the idea thatOn the other hand, about 35% students areagainst the idea.what’s more,Besidesnull　 A、运用高级词汇或短语 B、增加形容词或副词 C、灵活运用各种句型 　亮点点拨null Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. 　Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and what’s more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they don’t feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They can’t afford the time. 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