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故事情节找出故事主人公遇到的问题（Problems），包括Externalproblems（外部问题）和Internalproblems（内部问题）。其中，Externalproblems是指主人公客观上遇到的困难‘Internalproblems则是指主人公内心的担忧、纠结、害怕等消极的情绪问题。然后，结合所给段首句，并针对这些问题设想解决办法（Solutions）。最后，按照办法的实施过程构思符合逻辑、衔接合理的续写情节。现以两篇模拟题为例说明如何运用PS策略构思续写情节。二、实例分析阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Beingasingleparentcanbeextremelydifficult.Irecentlywentthrougharoughtimewhileraisingmyfourdaughtersonmyown.Thingshadnotbeengoingwellformeeversincewedecidedtotakecareofourselves.Myfinancial（经济的）situationwasnotgreatsinceIhadfourgrowinggirlstofeedonmyown.Asaresultofthat,myfamilycarwasleftinbadshape.Asitbrokedownfromtimetotime,Ionlyusedthecarwhenitwasabsolutelynecessarytodoso.Butonerainynight,wedesperately（非常）neededgroceriessothefiveofuswentforaquickruntothestore.Oncewehadloadedgroceriestothecar，itwouldn'tstartnomatterhowItried.Iwashelplessintheparkinglotwithmyfourdaughtersaged9，5，2anda6-weeksold.Tomakemattersworse，Iwasnotabletocallanyonebecausemyphonewasdisconnected.Oneofmygirlshadmistakenlyleftalighton，andmybatterywasdead.Ihadnofamilytospeaktoandwasonmyown.Imusthaveaskedmorethantwentypeopleforhelpduringthetwohours.Theyallignoredme.Notevenano.TheyjustactedlikeIdidn'texist.My5-year-oldwasmeltingdown.Mynewbornscreaming，mytwo-year-oldcryingshewashungry，andmyoldestdesperatelytryingtohelp.Iwascryingandfeltliketheworstmomever.Wheneverythingseemedhopeless，anelderlyman，mostprobablyinhis70s，cameoverandgavemeaplateofchickenstrips，biscuitsandsomewater.Heaskedmetofeedmygirlsandmyself.Healsosaidthathearrangedforatow（拖）trucktocomegetmycarandhiswifewasonthewaytofetchusbackhome.Thetowtruckcame，theoldman'swifearrivedtofetchusandwewerefinallybackhome.注意：1.所續写短文的词数应为150左右;2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph1：Thenextmorning，theoldmanappearedatmyfrontdooralongwithamechanic（机修工）.Paragraph2：Afterthemechanicleft，Itriedtofindtheoldman.根据故事原文，主人公是作者本人，一位有四个女儿的单亲妈妈，她在独自养育女儿时，不仅面临经济上的压力，内心上也感到很艰难。在某个雨夜，作者和四个女儿外出购物时汽車抛锚，找不到任何人帮助，作者甚至认为自己是最糟糕的母亲。针对主人公面临的问题，结合所给段首句，设想解决办法和构思续写情节如下表所示：Apossibleversion：Paragraph1：Thenextmorning，theoldmanappearedatmyfrontdooralongwithamechanic.Atthesightofthem，Iwassurprisedandconfused.Theoldmanexplainedgently，“Itookthemechanictohelpyoufixthecar(Solutiontoexternalproblem).”Consideringmyfinancialsituation，Iwashesitated.However，theoldmanignoredmyhesitationandcontinued，“Showusyourcar.”Ihadnochoicebuttolettheminandledthemtomycarinthebackyard.Immediately，theyburiedthemselvesintheirjob(Solutiontoexternalproblem).ThefollowinghoursIwasbusytakingcareofmydaughtersanddoinghousework.Finally，Igottimetobringthemsomecoffeeandfoundthatmycarhadalreadybeenfixed(Solutiontoexternalproblem).OnlythendidInoticetheoldmanwasnotthere.IaskedthemechanichowmuchIshouldpayhim.Tomysurprise，hetoldmethatIdidn'thavetobecausetheoldmanhadpaidthebill(Solutiontoexternalproblem).Paragraph2：Afterthemechanicleft，Itriedtofindtheoldman.Ilookedforhimeverywhereinandaroundmyhousebutinvain.Notbeingabletothankhimfacetoface，Ifeltsoregretful.Becauseoftheoldman'sselflesshelp(Solutiontointernalproblem)，Icouldusemycaratanytime.MylifeturnedouttobeeasierandeasierfromthenonandIcheeredupandregainedtheconfidenceofbeingagoodmom.WheneverIgottime，Iwouldgotothegrocerystore，theparkinglotortheplacesnearbytosearchfortheoldman，hopingtoexpressmysinceregratitudetohim.ItwasawarmandbrightdaywhenImethiminacoffeeshopnearthegrocerystore.Herecognizedmeandsmiled，“Youlookquitedifferentfromthatday.”“It'syouthathelpmeregaintheconfidenceinlife(Solutiontointernalproblem).Thankyousomuch！”Igavehimabighug.三、模拟训练阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。ItwasAugust，thepeakseasonfortourism.OlavHylland，theownerofalocalrestaurant，wasexpectingasmanyas500touriststovisitandeatthere.Withajoyfulheart，hejumpedintoavan,whichjustboughttotransportcargo(货物)forhisrestaurant,andsetoff.Leavinghishome,heturnedontothemainroadwithatunnel(隧道)300meterahead.Thekilometertunnelwaytoaccessthelocalscenicspot,wherehisrestaurantwaslocated.Twoyearsearlieratruckcaughtfireinsideitandthetunnel'sclosureforrepairswasdisastrousblowtoOlav'sbusiness.Theroadtohisrestaurantwasblockedandthestreamooftouristshalted(停止)Althoughitwasdifficult,hemanagedtokeeptheirstaffon.根据故事原文,主人公是作者本人,一位有四个女儿的单亲妈妈,她在独自养育女儿时,不仅面临经济上的压力,内心上也感到很艰难。在某个雨夜,作者和四个女儿外出购物时汽车抛锚,找不到任何人帮助,作者甚至认为自己是最糟糕的母亲。针对主人公面临的问题,结合所给段首句,设想解决办法和构思续写情节如下表所示：Apossibleversion：Paragraph1：Thenextmorning，theoldmanappearedatmyfrontdooralongwithamechanic.Atthesightofthem，Iwassurprisedandconfused.Theoldmanexplainedgently，“Itookthemechanictohelpyoufixthecar(Solutiontoexternalproblem).”Consideringmyfinancialsituation，Iwashesitated.However，theoldmanignoredmyhesitationandcontinued，“Showusyourcar.”Ihadnochoicebuttolettheminandledthemtomycarinthebackyard.Immediately，theyburiedthemselvesintheirjob(Solutiontoexternalproblem).ThefollowinghoursIwasbusytakingcareofmydaughtersanddoinghousework.Finally，Igottimetobringthemsomecoffeeandfoundthatmycarhadalreadybeenfixed(Solutiontoexternalproblem).OnlythendidInoticetheoldmanwasnotthere.IaskedthemechanichowmuchIshouldpayhim.Tomysurprise，hetoldmethatIdidn'thavetobecausetheoldmanhadpaidthebill(Solutiontoexternalproblem).Paragraph2：Afterthemechanicleft，Itriedtofindtheoldman.Ilookedforhimeverywhereinandaroundmyhousebutinvain.Notbeingabletothankhimfacetoface，Ifeltsoregretful.Becauseoftheoldman'sselflesshelp(Solutiontointernalproblem)，Icouldusemycaratanytime.MylifeturnedouttobeeasierandeasierfromthenonandIcheeredupandregainedtheconfidenceofbeingagoodmom.WheneverIgottime，Iwouldgotothegrocerystore，theparkinglotortheplacesnearbytosearchfortheoldman，hopingtoexpressmysinceregratitudetohim.ItwasawarmandbrightdaywhenImethiminacoffeeshopnearthegrocerystore.Herecognizedmeandsmiled，“Youlookquitedifferentfromthatday.”“It'syouthathelpmeregaintheconfidenceinlife(Solutiontointernalproblem).Thankyousomuch！”Igavehimabighug.三、模擬训练阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。ItwasAugust，thepeakseasonfortourism.OlavHylland，theownerofalocalrestaurant，wasexpectingasmanyas500touriststovisitandeatthere.Withajoyfulheart，hejumpedintoavan,whichjustboughttotransportcargo(货物)forhisrestaurant,andsetoff.Leavinghishome,heturnedontothemainroadwithatunnel(隧道)300meterahead.Thekilometertunnelwaytoaccessthelocalscenicspot,wherehisrestaurantwaslocated.Twoyearsearlieratruckcaughtfireinsideitandthetunnel'sclosureforrepairswasdisastrousblowtoOlav'sbusiness.Theroadtohisrestaurantwasblockedandthestreamooftouristshalted(停止)Althoughitwasdifficult,hemanagedtokeeptheirstaffon.根据故事原文,主人公是作者本人,一位有四个女儿的单亲妈妈,她在独自养育女儿时,不仅面临经济上的压力,内心上也感到很艰难。在某个雨夜,作者和四个女儿外出购物时汽车抛锚,找不到任何人帮助,作者甚至认为自己是最糟糕的母亲。针对主人公面临的问题,结合所给段首句,设想解决办法和构思续写情节如下表所示：Apossibleversion：Paragraph1：Thenextmorning，theoldmanappearedatmyfrontdooralongwithamechanic.Atthesightofthem，Iwassurprisedandconfused.Theoldmanexplainedgently，“Itookthemechanictohelpyoufixthecar(Solutiontoexternalproblem).”Consideringmyfinancialsituation，Iwashesitated.However，theoldmanignoredmyhesitationandcontinued，“Showusyourcar.”Ihadnochoicebuttolettheminandledthemtomycarinthebackyard.Immediately，theyburiedthemselvesintheirjob(Solutiontoexternalproblem).ThefollowinghoursIwasbusytakingcareofmydaughtersanddoinghousework.Finally，Igottimetobringthemsomecoffeeandfoundthatmycarhadalreadybeenfixed(Solutiontoexternalproblem).OnlythendidInoticetheoldmanwasnotthere.IaskedthemechanichowmuchIshouldpayhim.Tomysurprise，hetoldmethatIdidn'thavetobecausetheoldmanhadpaidthebill(Solutiontoexternalproblem).Paragraph2：Afterthemechanicleft，Itriedtofindtheoldman.Ilookedforhimeverywhereinandaroundmyhousebutinvain.Notbeingabletothankhimfacetoface，Ifeltsoregretful.Becauseoftheoldman'sselflesshelp(Solutiontointernalproblem)，Icouldusemycaratanytime.MylifeturnedouttobeeasierandeasierfromthenonandIcheeredupandregainedtheconfidenceofbeingagoodmom.WheneverIgottime，Iwouldgotothegrocerystore，theparkinglotortheplacesnearbytosearchfortheoldman，hopingtoexpressmysinceregratitudetohim.ItwasawarmandbrightdaywhenImethiminacoffeeshopnearthegrocerystore.Herecognizedmeandsmiled，“Youlookquitedifferentfromthatday.”“It'syouthathelpmeregaintheconfidenceinlife(Solutiontointernalproblem).Thankyousomuch！”Igavehimabighug.三、模擬训练阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。ItwasAugust，thepeakseasonfortourism.OlavHylland，theownerofalocalrestaurant，wasexpectingasmanyas500touriststovisitandeatthere.Withajoyfulheart，hejumpedintoavan,whichjustboughttotransportcargo(货物)forhisrestaurant,andsetoff.Leavinghishome,heturnedontothemainroadwithatunnel(隧道)300meterahead.Thekilometertunnelwaytoaccessthelocalscenicspot,wherehisrestaurantwaslocated.Twoyearsearlieratruckcaughtfireinsideitandthetunnel'sclosureforrepairswasdisastrousblowtoOlav'sbusiness.Theroadtohisrestaurantwasblockedandthestreamooftouristshalted(停止)Althoughitwasdifficult,hemanagedtokeeptheirstaffon.
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