雅思写作以及范文

Last updated on January 12, 2006 Global IELTS School (BJ) All rights reserved. Always shoot for the sky, because if you fail, you will be among the stars. 第一讲 雅思写作考试对中国考生的四个难点 (Chapter 1: The Four Hurdles in IELTS Writing Test) 难点一: Academic Writing 学术类写作问题的特殊 要求 对教师党员的评价套管和固井爆破片与爆破装置仓库管理基本要求三甲医院都需要复审吗 (改错练习) 1. Since private companies don't care much about the public interests, so the government has a significant role to play in scientific research. (不能缩写) 2. Why these travellers damage the environment should be analyzed. (英式美式拼法不 能混用) 3. We must do our best(utmost) to protect (preserve) animals. (词汇用法太嫩) 4. It is clear (manifest) that pornographic shows do harm to (undermine, endanger, jeopard) the lives of lots of youngster (adolescent).词汇,专有特定的修饰 5. Nowadays (In present-day society), human beings face big challenges in many areas. 6. In these day and age, many companies have replaced telephone with internet. 7. We are confronted with many environmental problems. They are becoming more and more serious. (句式,语法) 8. The traffic problem is becoming worse. We must work together to solve it.(句子结构) 9. So individuals, communities and the government all must work hard to fight crime! (不 应该带感情色彩) 10. We must be friendly to other because the Bible said, "Treat your neighbors as you would like to be treated." (文化背景,圣经不可用) 难点二: No specific topic pool. 题库大,没有公开,而且题目变化多. 对策:雅思话题不会超出十大类别: 文明类: Tourism Education Government Women and families Language and culture Technology and the Media Development and globalization 野蛮类: Crime Animals Environmental problem 难点三:中国大陆考生对很多话题不熟悉,考场上思考素材花费时间太长 对策:掌握思考素材的四种方法 a 分类法 Some high-school graduates go to travel or work for a period of time before they go to study in universities. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this practice to their studies. Some people think old building should be destroyed and replaced to make room for new 环球国际英语学校 GLOBAL IELTS SCHOOL 全真版本写作训练班专用教材 www.IELTS.com.cn 2 constructions. To what extent do you agree or disagree B 替代法 Some people think motorized flight was the greatest invention in the twentieth century. Do you agree or disagree Some people think stricter punishment for driving offenders is the only effective way to improve safety on the road. To what extent do you agree or disagree Some people think animal experimentation should be banned because they are cruel. To what extent do you agree or disagree C 综合法 Some people think students should be allowed to evaluate the teachers' job performance. Others think this will lead to loss of discipline and respect. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Some people think the government should pay for education and health care. Others think this is not the responsibility of the government. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. D 裸奔法 (无想法时的救命稻草) People today can perform the everyday tasks such as shopping, banking or even business transactions, without meeting others face-to-face. What effects will this phenomenon have on individuals and society as a whole Unlike many other countries, police officers in the UK do not carry guns. Some people think this is a wise policy. To what extent do you agree or disagree 往以下这些方面考虑论点 取第一个字母缩写: TM STREEC $ Technology & Efficiency Environment & Health Mind & Soul Employment & Competition Society & Crime Culture & Population Time & Space Money & Fun Rights & Responsibilities TM STREEC $ Tech & Ef Envi & Heal Mind & soul Empl & Comp Soci & Crim Cul &Plp Times & Spa Mo & Fun Ri & Resp 难点四: 中国考生掌握语法的深度和广度让人惊叹,但是使用时准确度不够 对策: 雅思写作"语法的七宗罪"改错练习 1. Employee can benefit more from telecommuting than employee. (n.可数不可数) 2.1 Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency. (v.原型不 可做主语) 环球国际英语学校 GLOBAL IELTS SCHOOL 全真版本写作训练班专用教材 www.IELTS.com.cn 3 2.2 Children who are raise in impoverished families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years. (被动语态) 2.3 The problems that are created by environmental contamination is very hard to resolve. (主谓一致) 2.4 In present-day society, cultures were becoming very similar. (时态) 3. Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers. 副词 4.1 Countries should pay attention on the disadvantages globalization may create. 介词 4.2 The Internet has instead of teachers in many classrooms. 5. Some parents do not obey traffic rules himself. 6. These old buildings should be destroyed, new buildings must be constructed. 逗号 7. These are a great many children think the main purpose of education should be to afford them pleasure and enjoyment. 补充材料IELTS 作文复杂句的七种内部关系 (Seven possible relationships Underlying a complex sentence) Cause and effect 因果关系 标志词1) 表 关于同志近三年现实表现材料材料类招标技术评分表图表与交易pdf视力表打印pdf用图表说话 pdf 示原因的 because, as, since, due to, owing to (画 横线的连接词请重点掌握) 2)表示结果的 hence(因此),thus(因此),therefore(因此),As a consequence,…(作为 结果)Accordingly…(相应的),As a result…(作为结果)Consequently…(作为结果) so…that…(如此…以致…) E.g. The ecological problems are being aggravated. Hence, it is imperative that we take measures to curb the pollution of the environment. 生态系统正在急剧的恶化,因此,我们必须采取严厉的措施遏制对环境的污染. Exemplification 举例关系 标志词 …is a case in point.(某人或某事是一个恰当的例 子.)Take…for example.(以…为例) for instance. (比如…) To Illustrate…(例如…) As an illustration…(作为例证…) e.g. The Asian countries are getting westernized at a staggering rate. Take China for example, when youngsters go to the movies, it is standard practice for them to choose Hollywood blockbuster over domestic films. 亚洲国家正以一种惊人的速度变得西方化,以中国为例,当年轻人去电影院的时候,通常都 会选择好莱坞大片而不是中国电影. Comparison and contrast 对比关系 标志词 While …,whereas…,whilst…,in contrast e.g. Whereas/ while modern man is so rushed and so stressed, our ancestors could often perform their business in a relaxed manner.(对比) 现代人的生活是如此的奔忙与紧张,而我们的祖先却可以不慌不忙的从事他们的事务. e.g. The educational and medical facilities in big cities are mostly very advanced. In contrast, their counterparts in the country tend to be of inferior quality. Concession 让步关系 标志词 Despite /in spite of …(后面只能跟名词 名词词组或者动名 词)(尽管有…),albeit…(尽管 ,后面只能跟形容词或者介词短语), 形容词+as it may be…(尽管,前面只能加形容词),Nonetheless/Nevertheless,(尽管如此) e.g. 1 Tough as it may be to get accustomed to a new culture, it will prove very rewarding. 尽管适应新的文化可能很难,但这会被证明是很值得的. 2 Rote Learning is at times necessary, albeit monotonous. 死记硬背有时候是必要的,尽管很枯燥和机械. 环球国际英语学校 GLOBAL IELTS SCHOOL 全真版本写作训练班专用教材 www.IELTS.com.cn 4 3The government plays a crucial role in scientific research, Nonetheless, private companies hold certain advantages in conducting scientific research. Definition 下定义关系 标志词 A is best characterized by…( A 最明显的特征是…),A constitutes…(A 构成…) A means…, A consists of …(A 由…组成). e.g. A fine journalist is best characterized by discipline, determination and keen observations. 一个好的记者最重要的特点是自律,毅力和敏锐的观察. Animal experimentation, in some cases, constitutes callous abuse of test animals. Supposition 假设论证, 标志词 provided that…(如果) given the choice…(如果可以选择的 话…)only if…(只有…)as long as…(只要) if…, suppose that… e.g. Provided that we can minimize the pain of test animals, animal experimentation should be continued. e.g. Given the choice, many people would live in big cities rather than the countryside. Modification 修饰关系 标志词 that, which, who In this day age, we have a proliferation of buildings that look exactly like the buildings our ancestors built. Today, teenage students are under increasingly severe stress in their studies, which has disturbed and alarmed many adults. 补充资料 IELTS 写作考试的常用 模板 个人简介word模板免费下载关于员工迟到处罚通告模板康奈尔office模板下载康奈尔 笔记本 模板 下载软件方案模板免费下载 和句型 说明 A 内容分为三部分:开头段通用模板,主体段为加分句型,结尾段为模板;B 为了方便同学 使用,又分为进步类,倒退类,中间类和解决类模板;C 这里职包括作者Patrick 在IELTS 写作大作文里实际写作种经过检验确实实用的模板,不常用的或者小作文的模板没有包括. 开头段通用模板 进步类 1) In contemporary society, the human race is advancing at an unprecedented rate in a multitude of arenas. 在当今社会,人类正以前所未有的速度在很多领域向前发展. 2) Today we have embarked upon the …era. 今天,我们已经进入了…的时代.We have embarked upon the information era. 3) Since the advent/arrival of the…era… 随着…时代的到来…例句:Since the advent of the information era, our efficiency at work has been greatly enhanced.随着信息时代的 到来,我们的工作效率得到了很大的提高.例句2 With the advent of the information era, school education has undergone profound changes at an accelerated rate. 倒退类 4) But A is attended/accompanied by B 但是伴随着…(某种好现象)的到来,某种坏现 象也出现了.例句:But the proliferation of English is accompanied by the extinction of many lesser-known languages.但是随着英语的广泛传播的是大量小语种的消亡. 5) Accompanying all the boons brought about by the profound social changes have com some sufferings; and …is very prominent among them. 随着深刻的社会变革带来的种 种好处,出现了很多问题,…是其中很显著的一个. 6) With the incidence(发生率) of …hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed. …的发生率居高不下,这引起了很多人的困扰和警觉.例句:With the incidence of driving offenses hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed. 环球国际英语学校 GLOBAL IELTS SCHOOL 全真版本写作训练班专用教材 www.IELTS.com.cn 5 7) In this day and age, it is standard practice for … to do something. 今天,某些人做某事 是很普遍的.例句:In this day and age, it is standard practice for parents to rush around all day busying themselves with their work. 8) Such a grave situation merits our careful attention.这样一个严重的情况值得我们关注. 9) The issue of … has been thrown into sharp relief/focus. …引起了人们的强烈关注.例 句:Soaring car ownership has thrown the issue of car accidents into sharp relief. 10) However, there is no consensus on …yet. 或者 people hold divergent /contrasting/conflicting view on… 或者 people are divided over… 不同的人关于某个 问题持不同的看法.例句:People hold contrasting views on animal experiments.人们 对动物试验持不同的看法. 11) Something has been growing at an alarming/ staggering rate. 某事物正在以令人 震惊的速度增长.例句:With the car ownership soaring in China, traffic accidents have been growing at an alarming/staggering rate. 12) Whether…has triggered/sparked/aroused/given rise to spirited debate.是否应 该…引起了激烈的辩论,同样的意思还可以用以下三个常用句型表达 …Whether…is a highly debatable issue. 或者Whether… is an issue open to debate 或者 Whether…is a controversial issue. 例句:Whether student should appraise their teachers' performance is an issue open to debate.是否学生应该评价老师的教学是一个没有定论 的问题. 13) Some (people) assert/contend/argue/hold/maintain/claim/think/believe that… 有 一些人认为…例句:Some people assert that relocating large companies to the countryside is the best way to resolve the traffic and housing problems in cities. 一些 人认为把大公司搬到乡村是解决城市交通和住房的最好方法. 14) …is largely fuelled by...某现象主要是被…所推动.例句:The proliferation of plastic bag is largely fuelled by the pursuit for lower costs. IELTS 议 论文 政研论文下载论文大学下载论文大学下载关于长拳的论文浙大论文封面下载 主体段写作加分37句型 前进类 1 profit from People the world over can profit from the advancement in motorized flight. 2 A is an integral /indispensable part of B Advertising has become an indispensable part of our lives and it has been exerting profound influence on the way we live, work, play and learn. 3 something plays a pivotal /key role in … It is universally acknowledged that education plays a pivotal role in individual success. 4enable /allow somebody to do something Cultural assimilation enables newly-arrived immigrants to get ahead in the new society successfully. 5get accustomed to do something/adjust to /adapt to New immigrants must get accustomed to the local culture to succeed. 6Someone can get access to something 或者 can access something 或者can utilize something In this day and age, many individuals can access the Internet via computer or mobile phone. 倒退类 环球国际英语学校 GLOBAL IELTS SCHOOL 全真版本写作训练班专用教材 www.IELTS.com.cn 6 1…is attended by /…is accompanied by The staggering advancement of technology is attended by server pollution of the ecosystem. 2The more…the more… The more vehicles on the road, the more traffic congestions to occur. 3A can be attributed to B 或者B stems from A The proliferation of traffic accidents can be in large measure attributed to the traffic law not being stringent enough. 4be afflicted with/be plagued with In present-day society, a host of countries are afflicted with chronic poverty. 5deprive someone of something Modern cities deprive city-dweller of fresh air and the comfortable pace of life. 6something prompt/impels somebody to do… Peer pressure often impels youngster to spend excessively on fancy clothes and accessories. 7A has rendered B + adj./noun 形容词或名词 We must ensure that technological innovations will not render us slaves to high technology. 其中 We must ensure that..意思是我们必须确保… 我们必须确保科技创新不会让我们变成高科技的奴隶. The fast-paced way of life has rendered many people alienated from one another. 快节奏的生活让很多人彼此疏远. 8A recent study conducted by the (Chinese academy of Social Science) reveal that… 如果是教育问题用UNESCO如果是犯罪问题可以用the Ministry of Justice 交通问题可以 用the Ministry of Transportation 建筑问题可以用the Ministry of Construction 环境问题可 以HSUS and Greenpeace A recent study conducted by HSUS and Greenpeace suggested that there were over one million mammals in lab cages today. 9 be addicted to /preoccupied with something In present-day society, many individuals are addicted to /preoccupied with various forms of gambling. 10 something is the chief culprit in 或者something is the root cause of … The population explosion is the chief culprit in/ the root cause of water scarity. 11be confronted with something In contemporary society, we are confronted with a plethora of violent and pornographic TV shows. 12 present/pose a threat to… In contemporary society, the proliferation of non-biodegradable rubbish poses a grave threat to humanity. 13 be awash with/be inundated with something The media are be awash with/be inundated with detailed crime coverage. 14 if…something will ensue If parents neglect their offspring, lack of discipline and respect will ensue. 15With the incidence of … hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed. 环球国际英语学校 GLOBAL IELTS SCHOOL 全真版本写作训练班专用教材 www.IELTS.com.cn 7 With the incidence of driving offenses hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed. 16something is unwarranted /unjustifiable Experimenting upon lab animals without trying to alleviate their pain is unwarranted/ unjustifiable. 中间类 1…on the grounds that… Some others oppose to animal experimentation on the grounds that it is inhumane. 2 exert beneficial/ baneful/ profound influence on something In this day and age, globalization is exerting profound impact on the way we work, live, play and learn. 3 A prevail over / outweigh/ outbalance B The advantages of imposing stiffer punishment on driving offender prevail over the disadvantages. 4 A bring about/ generate/ breed/ engender/ spawn /induce B. Technological innovations have brought about profound changes to the political, economical and cultural arenas. 5 A is a key determinant of B In an individual's career, tenacity is a key determinant of success. 6 It is manifest that …或者It is universally acknowledge that… It is manifest that globalization can also engender a host of banes to the lives of people in the third-world countries. 解决类 1 give priority to something The government should give priority to the optimization of its financial resources. 2 dedicated A to B The government should dedicate more money to the alleviation of chronic poverty. 3 be likely to fall prey to / be vulnerable to Without proper parental guidance, children are very vulnerable to the violent or pornographic content on TV shows. 4 something should be condemned rather than condoned(押尾韵) Indiscriminate copying of traditional architectural style today should be condemned rather than condoned. 5 it is imperative/ crucial/ key/ essential that… 或者 something is of paramount/ overriding importance. To the newly-arrived immigrants, it is imperative that they adapt to the local culture immediately. 6 abide by/ comply with It is essential that government pass more stringent laws to compel drivers to abide by/ comply with the law. 7 something requires/ necessitates /call for… The grave ecological problem requires/ necessitates/ call for joint effort of all the nations on the globe. 环球国际英语学校 GLOBAL IELTS SCHOOL 全真版本写作训练班专用教材 www.IELTS.com.cn 8 8 distinguish between A and B Many youngsters lack the capacity to distinguish between right and wrong. 9 must ensure that Parents must ensure that they dedicate enough time and energy to their offspring. 结尾段常用模板 1) based on the above discussion, I am convinced that…(用于一边倒文章的结尾段)基 于以上的讨论,我确信… 2) In the final analysis, I concede that… However, ….On balance…(用于折衷式文章结尾 段) 作为最后总结,我承认…但是…综合起来看… 3) The upside of something, outweighs its downside 或者the strengths of something, prevail over its weaknesses或者the pros of something outbalance its cons.某事利大 于弊(如果 弊大于利把顺序颠倒一下就可以了) IELTS 作文常用同义词 人类the human race, humanity, man, humankind, Homo sapiens 在当代in contemporary society, in present-day society, in this day and age 解决(及物动词)tackle, address, resolve, combat 破坏(及物动词)undermine, jeopardize, devastate(最后一个与其最强) 影响(名词)impact, repercussions, ramifications, implications 危险(名词)perils, hazards, dangers 明显的(形容词)manifest, apparent, evident, obvious 从事(及物动词)carry out, conduct, perform, go about 积极的,好的 beneficial, advantageous 消极的,坏的 baneful, detrimental 好处-坏处benefits, blessings, boons—banes, pros—cons, advantages—disadvantages, merit—demerit 无处不在的 prevalent, pervasive 大量的 a host of, a multitude of, a vast number of (后面跟可数名词复数) a great deal of, a vast amount of(后面跟不可数名词单数) 增进enhance代替improve 贫穷的impoverished代替poor 保护preserve代替protect 富裕的affluent/wealthy代替rich 污染contamination代替pollution 需要(及物动词)require, necessitate, call for Patrick 考试经验分享 (test-taking tips) 有人提出先写task2再写task1.这种说法听起来好像很新颖,其实是在回避考试的不 确定性,与先写task1再写task2的做法没有本质的优劣之分,那么到底应该如何决定写作 顺序呢 根据我参加雅思考试的经验以及学生的反馈,在拿到考卷以后,不管一个人心理素质多好, 绝对没有人只会看一道题就开始写作.任何考生都一定会本能的现把两道题都很快的看一遍 再开始写其中的一道题.同学们很快地看完两道题目以后,如果确实觉得task2地题目自己 准备地很充分,有信心在40分钟左右写出一篇自己满意地议论文,那么就应该先写task2, 因为task2占总分地60%.但是如果看完两道题之后,你觉得task2地题目自己准备得不 充分或者一时想不出足够得内容,那么我强烈建议大家先写task1.这是因为task1的结尾 段往往需要从图表中总结出深层的关系,这个task1结尾段深层关系对 评分 售楼处物业服务评分营养不良炎症评分法中国大学排行榜100强国家临床重点专科供应商现场质量稽核 是很重要的.而 task2的结尾段,与一些老师所持的观点相反,除了"discuss both views and give your own 环球国际英语学校 GLOBAL IELTS SCHOOL 全真版本写作训练班专用教材 www.IELTS.com.cn 9 opinion"这一类题型之外,其他题型的结尾段只起概括上下文作用,在实际评分中并不是那 么重要.因为考官在评阅大家的task2结尾段时,一般都清楚多数同学写这一段的时候时间 已经时第58分钟甚至59分50秒了,所以考官知道task2的结尾段时无法准确反映一个考 生的写作水平的,评分的时候互放松对结尾段的要求,而重点打击开头段和主体段. 第二讲 十大全真版本范文,词汇与模板 Education 类 Some people think students should be allowed to evaluate their teachers' job performance. Others believe that will lead to loss of respect and discipline. Discuss and give your own opinion. 开头段(不少于4句) In this day and age, it is standard practice for business executive to fill out performance-evaluation forms to give their assessment of their subordinates' work. But when it comes to the evaluation of school teachers' job performance by their students, people hold divergent views. Some argue that students should be allowed to do so. Others contend that disrespect and indiscipline will ensue if students evaluate their teachers work. Personally, I believe both these two views have some merit. 主体段1(不少于5句) Granted, there could be some possible drawbacks to students evaluating their teachers' work. First, if not well-managed, evaluation by the students may be completely worthless or even misleading. It is manifest that not all students would give their evaluation responsibly and some students may make mean comments. Secondly, some students criticize their teacher not because their teachers have a slack attitude about their job. Rather they do so because they dislike or even despise schooling. 主体段2(不少于7句) However, encouraging students to evaluate their teacher can bring about more boons. In the first place, it is an effective means of motivating the teachers to improve their lectures. Teachers have to keep adjusting their teaching to measure up to the expectations of the student. In the second place, regular input affords the teacher objective and balanced ideas about their own performance. Without such feedback, it is hard for the teacher to have accurate assessment of their own teaching. In the third place, a measure of students' autonom