掌握扩展语句和压缩语段的方法

掌握扩展语句和压缩语段的方法 掌握扩展语句和压缩语段的方法 2009年1月17日 学习目的与要求: 了解高考该测试点的考查形式，掌握扩展语句和压缩语段的方法。 教学 内容 财务内部控制制度的内容财务内部控制制度的内容人员招聘与配置的内容项目成本控制的内容消防安全演练内容 : 扩展语句的考查要求考生在已有信息的基础上运用想象、联想等手段，使语句更加充实丰富，目的是为了将句子说得具体、生动、形象、精确。扩展语句类试题的解答，要求答题者不仅要有扎实的语言基础知识，如丰富的词汇、多彩的语句，而且要有多维的表达、敏锐的语感，要具有综合运用多种语文知识、采用合理的联想和想象、运用多种表达技巧的能力。 一、从对高考试题和一些训练材料中本测试点的训练题的分析来看，目前该测试点考查的形式主要有下列几种: ?情景演绎式扩展，就是提供一个具体的情景，要求考生根据这一情景通过合理的联想和想象，进行扩展。2000年高考第27题，要求“根据下列两种情景，以„歌声?为重点，分别扩展成一段话，每段不少于30个字”。 情景一:毕业典礼上 同学们 歌声 情景二:考试前夕 我 歌声 题中提供了两种情景，扩展出的内容只要与这两种情景相一致，且能以歌声为重点即可。考生要根据题干中规定的情景展开合理的想象，增加与这些情景相关的内容，使这些情景变得生动形象，丰富饱满。 ?中心阐发式扩展，就是提供一句话作为扩展的中心内容，要求考生围绕这一中心内容进行扩展。基本方法就是以提供的语句为中心内容加以阐释、发挥，使之成为一个完整的语句或语段。如:将“语文活动是语文教学内容不可缺少的一个重要方面”这句话扩展成一段话，使它符合如下要求:?从正反两方面进行阐释;?提供的语句必须放在段尾;?不超过80个字。做这个题目，主要采用阐释的方法进行扩展。 当然，这种方法也可用于描述和叙述性的语句。 ?枝叶添加式扩展，就是提供一句简单的话语，要求考生为它增加修饰、限制或补充说明的成分，使它变得生动具体，血肉丰满。这种形式主要通过增加句子的定语、状语和补语等附加成分进行扩展。如:将“她在上海南京路购物”一句话扩展，使其生动形象，不超过30个字。句子结构完整，地点交代明确，事件叙述清楚，我们可主要通过添加附加成分，使叙述具体形象。 ?续写补写式扩展，就是提供一句话或一段话，要求能根据所提供的具体的语言环境补写或续写一段话或一句话。补写或续写的句子必须做到与原句文意相通，中心一致，语境和谐，句式相类，甚至语言风格和修辞手法也应和原句保持一致，当然，关键的是必须符合题干所规定的要求。如:揣摩文意，注意句式，把下面这段话补写完整。“古人对牡丹和荔枝有过这样的评论:„花之艳为牡丹，然而不实;累累结为荔枝，然花不艳。?句中贬大于褒，我很为它们鸣不平。如果我们用宽厚的态度去看待事物，应把古人的评论改为 ”。从内容上分析，作者主要是为了一反古人对牡丹和荔枝的评价而要表明自己的看法，句式上古人采用了转折复句，前半句为褒，后半句为贬，语意上贬强于褒。解题时，应从以上的分析入手，做到内容上反古人之意，句式上与原文相一致，语体上要采用书面语言。 值得注意的是，续写补写式扩展，不同于仿写，也不同于一般的造句，它要求表意前后一致，语言形式前后一致，要使前后形成一个有机的整体，因此，考生在做这类试题时首先要认真审读题干，明确试题要求;其次要把握所提供文段或文句的语脉，搞清整个语段或句子前后personal credit business process management, and development of business processes, clear the loan object and scope, establish loan operation of assessment and accountability mechanisms. Diversity management principles the Bank's strict separation between business and consumer use of personal credit, then according to the different varieties of business to establish the appropriate access standard, post-lending management requirements. Business use personal credit should be strictly in accordance with the qilu Bank's small business credit risk management guidelines and associated working capital loans management requirements, such as assessing the management of production and operation, repayment ability, the level of risk, and so on. Income debt ratio control principle of Bank income debt ratio control mechanism, combined with the borrower's income, debt, expenditures, loans, guarantees and other factors, determines the loan amount and term, control each repayment does not exceed the amount of the borrower repayment ability. Principles of trans-regional limits Branches shall not in principle to operating income mainly comes from offsite (prefecture-level cities and administrative divisions at or above) or inward (MS) charge provided credit support for individual customers is located in different places, but except those with unique advantages such as critical. Have set up branches in different places, other bodies are not entitled to carry out the branch of credit business in the region. Branch County area has been established, other bodies are not entitled to apply for the credit within the County. Double before going through the personal credit business credit investigation, Contracting, security verification, credit check, key account manager should be double handle. Bank supports risk managers, loan review, professional 句之间的内在联系;第三要注意语言表达形式上的相互联系，如句式、修辞手法等。要从试题当然形式和内容上入手进行分析，进行扩展。要注意防止只顾形式不顾内容，或只顾内容不顾形式和草率审题，盲目机械地答题等错误。 二、试卷和训练中学生常见的错误 下面以2001年春季高考题中的语句扩展题为例，列举学生在扩展语句中出现的错误。 1( 另起炉灶 扩展语句题与病句修改、句式转换题的相同之处就在于应保持原句的基本面貌。有的同学扩展中改变了原句的本意，甚至丢开原句，自己写一通。如有的同学写人生某阶段起跑时的重要写成了“人生的每一个阶段都很重要，每一个阶段都是前一阶段的延续，又都是后一个阶段的开始。”这样就完全改变了原句的本意。 2( 不合情境 扩展语句一般都明确给出或前后文暗示出要按照一定的情境进行扩展，有的同学扩展 之后的语句和规定的语境不相符。如“也许我们每个人开始都站在同一条起跑线上，这条线对坚定执着的人是好的开始，成功的一半，对意志薄弱的人，是起点也是终点。”又如“当我们事业成功时，我们回首往事，应该说人生之初都在一条起跑线上，可我们又有多少人能坚持到最后的冲刺呢,”这两段话与规定的情境“人生某阶段”明显不符。 3( 偏离话题 有的学生在扩展过程中没有把握扩展的重点，而偏离了话题。如“田径场上，运动员们在雪白的起跑线前做着充分的准备，期待着光辉时刻的到来。”“中学时代是我们人生的黄金时代，它是我们人生道路上洁白的起跑线，它将带领我们迈出坚实的每一步。”这样话题完全变成了运动员和中学时代，与题干要求的以“起跑线”为重点大相径庭。 4( 缺乏意蕴 有的同学的 答案 八年级地理上册填图题岩土工程勘察试题省略号的作用及举例应急救援安全知识车间5s试题及答案 形式上和内容上都符合扩展的要求，但整个扩展的内容缺乏意蕴，甚至让人难以理解，仍然得不到理想的分数。如有的同学写成“烈日炎炎，运动员们蓄势待发，俯视着起跑线，仿佛它就预示着成功，是啊，没有这条起跑线，我们怎么有机会跑到终点线呢,”此段话语意不连贯，前后间的语意经不起推敲。 三、扩展语句方法例说 1( 附加成分，修饰限制 扩展单纯的主谓关系的句子可以采取补充附加成分的办法。句子的主干只是单纯的陈述与支配关系，而句子的附加成分(定语、状语、补语)能起到修饰、限制和补充的作用，要使语句扩展开，变得生动、具体，就要发挥附加成分的作用。 例句一:扩展下面语句，要求突出梅花不畏严寒的品格。 梅花开放了。 补充附加成分我们可以说成“(什么样的)梅花[怎么样地]开放了”。为突出梅花的不畏严寒，还可以再加一些状语进行限制。 答案:当积雪压断枝头的时候，当冰凌高挂悬崖的时候，当百花纷谢凋零的时候，梅花迎着风雪带着微笑悄悄地开放了。 2( 根据要求，描写渲染 有些句子只用补充附加成分的办法，不足以达到题干要求的生动、具体，这就要在 简单修饰限制的基础上进行适当的描写和渲染。 例句二:扩展下面语句，使其生动、具体，字数在70个字左右。 琴声吸引了许多路人驻足倾听。 补充附加成分我们只能写成“(什么样的)琴声[怎么样]吸引了许多(什么样的)路人[怎么样地]驻足倾听，听得〈怎么样〉”。这样写还不能写出具体和生动来，我们还需要对琴声怎personal credit business process management, and development of business processes, clear the loan object and scope, establish loan operation of assessment and accountability mechanisms. Diversity management principles the Bank's strict separation between business and consumer use of personal credit, then according to the different varieties of business to establish the appropriate access standard, post-lending management requirements. Business use personal credit should be strictly in accordance with the qilu Bank's small business credit risk management guidelines and associated working capital loans management requirements, such as assessing the management of production and operation, repayment ability, the level of risk, and so on. Income debt ratio control principle of Bank income debt ratio control mechanism, combined with the borrower's income, debt, expenditures, loans, guarantees and other factors, determines the loan amount and term, control each repayment does not exceed the amount of the borrower repayment ability. Principles of trans-regional limits Branches shall not in principle to operating income mainly comes from offsite (prefecture-level cities and administrative divisions at or above) or inward (MS) charge provided credit support for individual customers is located in different places, but except those with unique advantages such as critical. Have set up branches in different places, other bodies are not entitled to carry out the branch of credit business in the region. Branch County area has been established, other bodies are not entitled to apply for the credit within the County. Double before going through the personal credit business credit investigation, Contracting, security verification, credit check, key account manager should be double handle. Bank supports risk managers, loan review, professional 么那么吸引人进行一番描写和渲染。 答案:优美的《梁山伯与祝英台》小提琴协奏曲，轻轻地飘出小白楼的窗户，穿过蒙蒙细雨，洒落在林间的小路上。许多行人情不自禁地停下了脚步，听得如痴如醉。 3( 瞻前顾后，填补空白 瞻前顾后，就是从前后的语句中找出暗含的对形式和内容方面的约束信息，根据这些 约束来进行扩展，填补空白。 例句三:仿照画横线的句式扩展语句，要求语意连贯，并加一个抒情议论性的话作收束。 童年的一切都是那么美好，在童真的爱的目光下，一只蝴蝶就是一只凤凰， 。 此题在扩展的同时，还考查了句式的仿写。我们提炼出已给句式的结构共性为:一(量词)+(名词)就是一(量词)+(名词或名词性短语)，内容上已给句子提供的是:在孩子眼里，所有的东西都是美好的、新奇的。以这些内容与形式方面的限制信息，我们可以填补为:一朵轻云就是一条飞毯，一棵老树就是一个会讲故事的老人家，一湾小河就是一个无比欢乐的海洋。啊，多么令人难忘的童年～ 4( 讲求方法，突出重点 对于要求以一个名词为重点的扩展题(如以“歌声”“起跑线”为重点)，学生往往不 能突出这一重点而使重点转移。要使其成为重点可以从形式和内容上把握。 在形式上让这一名词作陈述中心(作主语)，在内容上可以强调这一名词的重要作用。 作主语: 例句四:毕业典礼上，同学们真挚优美的歌声仿佛在讲述三年的学习历程，将我们带入了对往昔岁月的美好回忆之中。(歌声作主语，歌声的作用是将我们带入了回忆之中。) 例句五:田径场上，那条富于神秘色彩的白色起跑线一时间成了运动员们迈向成功的起点，亿万观众关注的焦点。(起跑线作主语，作用是可以迈向成功) 作宾语然后解释宾语(实际还是让其作后面句子的主语): 例句六:考试前夕，我听着那时而如溪，时而若泉，时而似海的优美歌声，逐渐消除了心中的紧张。(歌声作宾语，再解释歌声的作用——消除紧张) 例句七:田径场上，人们的目光都聚焦在那条细细的起跑线上——那是运动员们奔向胜利的起点。(起跑线作宾语，再注释起跑线的作用——奔向胜利的起点) 5( 多用手法，增强意蕴 使扩展的文字有意蕴，就要泛中求异、异中求新、新中求优。在内容上或发挥想象， 合理创造;或进行联想，发散思维;或设身处地，感悟情境。题干中有的明确要求使用某种表达方式(如例句三要求用抒情议论收束)或某种修辞方法。没有特殊要求的情况下，在表达上要充分使用多种表达方式和多种修辞手法，以收到加强表达效果的作用。 例句八:根据下面的思路，合理展开叙述，组成8 0字 个人自传范文3000字为中华之崛起而读书的故事100字新时代好少年事迹1500字绑架的故事5000字个人自传范文2000字 左右的语段。 夏天和冬天，各有各的情趣。 此题的扩展关键是要对夏天和冬天分别进行叙述和描写，写出各自的情趣，而描写和叙述的有无意蕴便是此题扩展优劣的关键。 答案:夏有夏的草绿花红，冬有冬的琼枝玉叶。夏天有百川灌海，漫天碧透，雨后泛舟，总能让人心旷神怡，流恋往返;冬天千里冰封，万里雪飘，湖面溜冰，一样使人逸兴神飞，意趣盎然。 此段文字的成功之处就是使用了许多的修辞手法(对比、夸张、对偶、比喻)加强表达效果，除此之外，使用了整齐的句式，并大量使用富有色彩的形容词。 压缩语段是考查考生对现有信息进行概括、归纳、提炼、表达的能力，它要求把一段话的主要内容用极其简要的文字准确地概括并表达出来。随着社会的发展，人们要求能更快更多的personal credit business process management, and development of business processes, clear the loan object and scope, establish loan operation of assessment and accountability mechanisms. Diversity management principles the Bank's strict separation between business and consumer use of personal credit, then according to the different varieties of business to establish the appropriate access standard, post-lending management requirements. Business use personal credit should be strictly in accordance with the qilu Bank's small business credit risk management guidelines and associated working capital loans management requirements, such as assessing the management of production and operation, repayment ability, the level of risk, and so on. Income debt ratio control principle of Bank income debt ratio control mechanism, combined with the borrower's income, debt, expenditures, loans, guarantees and other factors, determines the loan amount and term, control each repayment does not exceed the amount of the borrower repayment ability. Principles of trans-regional limits Branches shall not in principle to operating income mainly comes from offsite (prefecture-level cities and administrative divisions at or above) or inward (MS) charge provided credit support for individual customers is located in different places, but except those with unique advantages such as critical. Have set up branches in different places, other bodies are not entitled to carry out the branch of credit business in the region. Branch County area has been established, other bodies are not entitled to apply for the credit within the County. Double before going through the personal credit business credit investigation, Contracting, security verification, credit check, key account manager should be double handle. Bank supports risk managers, loan review, professional 捕获信息，各种媒体上简讯、一句话新闻、标题新闻等应运而生，这些新闻形式，其实也是新闻工作者对语段、文章进行压缩而形成的。 压缩语段类试题解答的常用方法就是反复阅读所提供的材料，筛选出关键的信息，从而准确地提炼出文章所表达的最主要的内容。压缩语段类的材料可能涉及各种表达方式，由于各种表达方式的不同特点，因此筛选信息的方式方法和切入点也会有所不同。 ?记叙类语段 记叙类语段包括叙事、写人等叙事性文字。这类语段的压缩，可以通过抓记叙要素的方法来提取主要信息。只要抓住了记叙的时间、地点、人物(对象、身份等)、事件的起因、经过、结果，也就抓住了语段的主要内容。在六要素中，事件的叙述较难把握，对此，我们必须认真审读材料，通过对材料的分析，排除干扰因素，筛选出有效信息，抓住语段的本质，归纳出语段的中心。还有一些语段，信息相当集中，只要抓住了中心句，也就抓住语段的中心内容，压缩此类语段，可以直接从材料中摘录语句进行概括。例如新闻，如果有现成的导语，导语就是全文的中心句。 在记叙类语段中，新闻概写题是热点。新闻概写题有如下类型: 1(拟写一句话新闻 2(拟写导语 3(压缩主体 4(拟写标题 5(拟写结尾 新闻有如同记叙文一样的基本要素，但由于其各个部分的内容要求不尽相同，故其各个部分的概述要点不尽相同，下面分类说明。 1(拟写一句话新闻 一句话新闻就是运用一句话，采用标题新闻的语言表达形式，完成一篇新闻稿件的报道任务。它区别于新闻标题，不必有正题、引题、副题，它要严格完全地反映新闻事实，以尽可能少的语言表达尽可能丰富的新闻内容。 一句话新闻应该有的新闻要素是: ?形式:可以是单句，可以是复句，以单句为主，句末有标点。 ?内容:“一句话新闻”就是标题新闻，要揭示新闻事件的内容的意义，它必须包含以下要点:(可以取舍) ?时间，地点，人物，事件(过程、结果)，原因(目的)，方法(措施、手段、途径) 一句话新闻拟写的步骤方法: ?细看要求，确定要点 ?阅读材料，筛选信息 ?抓住重要句(首括句、总结句、过渡句) ?把握关键词(尽可能用原文中负载重要信息的原词，必要时，则应将若干词语概括抽象为新词) ?注意附加条件(特别是题干中提示的或限制的条件) ?选择形式，组合信息 ?选择句式，安排层次 一句话新闻(标题新闻)通常采用陈述句式:人物+事件+时间+地点+原因，人物和事件构成主谓句，时间地点安排于状语位置，原因或作状语或安排于分句中，也可用对偶句 ?控制字数，草拟答案 ?依据倾向，验证答案 验证草拟的答案能否准确涵盖所供的新闻材料。 personal credit business process management, and development of business processes, clear the loan object and scope, establish loan operation of assessment and accountability mechanisms. Diversity management principles the Bank's strict separation between business and consumer use of personal credit, then according to the different varieties of business to establish the appropriate access standard, post-lending management requirements. Business use personal credit should be strictly in accordance with the qilu Bank's small business credit risk management guidelines and associated working capital loans management requirements, such as assessing the management of production and operation, repayment ability, the level of risk, and so on. Income debt ratio control principle of Bank income debt ratio control mechanism, combined with the borrower's income, debt, expenditures, loans, guarantees and other factors, determines the loan amount and term, control each repayment does not exceed the amount of the borrower repayment ability. Principles of trans-regional limits Branches shall not in principle to operating income mainly comes from offsite (prefecture-level cities and administrative divisions at or above) or inward (MS) charge provided credit support for individual customers is located in different places, but except those with unique advantages such as critical. Have set up branches in different places, other bodies are not entitled to carry out the branch of credit business in the region. Branch County area has been established, other bodies are not entitled to apply for the credit within the County. Double before going through the personal credit business credit investigation, Contracting, security verification, credit check, key account manager should be double handle. Bank supports risk managers, loan review, professional 例题一、根据信息产业部在新闻发布会上所传出信息的要点(包括价格变动状况)，拟一条一句话新闻。(不超过22个字)(1999年高考题) 今年2月28日上午，信息产业部召开的新闻发布会上传出信息:从3月1日起，在基本不增加用户负担的前提下，电话通话费每分钟低于0.16元的，调整到0.16元;高于0.22元的降到0.22元。固定电话初装费指导性 标准 excel标准偏差excel标准偏差函数exl标准差函数国标检验抽样标准表免费下载红头文件格式标准下载 降为500至1000元，移动电话入网费指导性标准降为500至1500元;住宅用户同址安装两部以上电话，从第二部起不再收取初装费。与电信收费标准进行结构性调整的同时，邮资也进行了调整:平信、印刷品今后按本埠和外埠区别收费，不超重的本埠平信由20克0.50元提高到0.60元，外埠由20克0.50元提高到0.80元。 [分析]首先针对要求，确定本则新闻的要素为人物(对象)+事件+时间+事件“调价”的结果。其次筛选信息，本则新闻的重要句为过渡句“与电信收费标准进行结构性调整的同时，邮资也进行了调整”，关键词为电信费、邮资，题干中的限制条件为“包括价格变动状况”。由此，我们可以得出答案:电信费、邮资3月1日起上调，价格有升有降。(3月1日起邮资上调，电信费有升有降。 例题二、根据材料拟一条一句话新闻，不超过30个字。 北京市公安机关在追逃专项斗争中，采取“网上作战”等高科技手段和对在逃人员的分级督捕，自7月1日至8月2日，将211名在京作案后的逃跑的犯罪嫌疑人缉拿归案。 据介绍，按照中央政法委和公安部的部署，北京市公安局自5月份开始对全市1991年以来的负案、批捕、扣押的在逃犯嫌疑人和从监管等场所逃脱的犯罪人和罪犯，进行全面的调查，将查出的1000余名在逃人员的情况全部输入计算机上网，并与公安部联网。 为加强追逃专项斗争的力度，北京市公检法机关于8月2日发出通告，限令在逃人员，主动投案自首。 [分析]这一道题可从导语中筛选答题要素，因为导语把新闻事实的要点揭示出来了。如果没有导语，可从新闻主体材料中寻找。 时间:7月1日至8月2日(亦即7月份) 地点:北京 人物对象:北京公安与逃犯 事件(过程结果)，找重要动词:缉拿 结果:211名逃犯归案 原因:上级部署 方法(手段):网上作战，分级督捕 根据以上要素，进行组句，就可写出较好的答案:7月份北京公安采取“网上作战”分级督捕等措施缉拿逃犯211名。(“网上作战”分级督捕，北京公安7月份缉捕逃犯211名。) 2(压缩主体和拟写导语 新闻的的主体部分自然要包括新闻六要素，其在事件的顺叙中，有时还插入有关的背景材料和其它相关内容。压缩主体时，自然要删去那些插叙、补叙部分的背景材料及其他相关内容。 导语是新闻的纲领和中心所在，读者可以从导语中得到整个新闻的总印象。导语的要点是要用精练的语言将消息的主要内容概括出来，要交代清人、事、地及主旨。常见的导语写法有叙述式、描写式和结论式等。 例题三、下面是一则消息，按后面的要求完成??两题。 今年3月，南海市明湖公园采取公园与职工个人共同筹资的方法购买了一台“挑战者号”时空穿梭机。时空穿梭机又名娱乐仿真模拟器，是仿真科技与多媒体技术结合的产物。三维立体图象，震撼人心的音响效果和高度仿真运动，使人惊心动魄，会产生超越时空的感觉。这台时空穿梭机开始营业以来，三个月的营业收入就达到40万元人民币，其中仅“五一”节一天personal credit business process management, and development of business processes, clear the loan object and scope, establish loan operation of assessment and accountability mechanisms. Diversity management principles the Bank's strict separation between business and consumer use of personal credit, then according to the different varieties of business to establish the appropriate access standard, post-lending management requirements. Business use personal credit should be strictly in accordance with the qilu Bank's small business credit risk management guidelines and associated working capital loans management requirements, such as assessing the management of production and operation, repayment ability, the level of risk, and so on. Income debt ratio control principle of Bank income debt ratio control mechanism, combined with the borrower's income, debt, expenditures, loans, guarantees and other factors, determines the loan amount and term, control each repayment does not exceed the amount of the borrower repayment ability. Principles of trans-regional limits Branches shall not in principle to operating income mainly comes from offsite (prefecture-level cities and administrative divisions at or above) or inward (MS) charge provided credit support for individual customers is located in different places, but except those with unique advantages such as critical. Have set up branches in different places, other bodies are not entitled to carry out the branch of credit business in the region. Branch County area has been established, other bodies are not entitled to apply for the credit within the County. Double before going through the personal credit business credit investigation, Contracting, security verification, credit check, key account manager should be double handle. Bank supports risk managers, loan review, professional 的收入就超过了公园300条游船的总收入。在近两年来许多公园经济效益很不景气的情况下，明湖公园这台时空穿梭机所带来的如此大的收益，使全园职工倍受鼓舞。据说，娱乐仿真模拟器已经成了国外许多公园，游乐园的换代的标志性设备，无论是好莱坞还是日本海洋公园，仿真模拟器都是当地的“盈利明星”。 ?将报道的主要内容进行压缩。压缩后的内容包括具体的营业收 入状况，不超过80个字。 ?为这则消息拟一条导语，不超过30个字。 分析:该则消息的主要信息集中在人物、事件和事件的前因后果上， 概括时必须集中这些方面的信息加以分析、综合。叙述的是谁,南海市明湖公园;做了什么,采取公园与职工个人共同筹资的方法购买了一台时空穿梭机;结果怎样,营业三个月，收入达40万元人民币，使全园职工倍受鼓舞。前因是经营不景气。只要将以上要素加以串连，就能得知压缩后的语段为:(南海市)明湖公园采取公园与职工个人共同筹资的方法购买了一台时空穿梭机。开机几个月，收入达几十万元。在公园经营不景气的情况下，能有如此大的收益，职工们倍受鼓舞。其它诸如时空穿梭机的名称、特点、效果、国外使用情况都不是报道的主要内容。 通常情况下，导语部分除时间、地点(报道具体时间具体地点的动态新闻要有这两个要素)外，其余要素(人物、事件——包括经过和结果)均应具有。据此可将导语拟写为:(南海市)明湖公园利用筹资购置的娱乐仿真模拟器获得可观的经济效益。 3(拟写标题 标题是新闻的“眼睛”，有一行标题和多行标题之分。主标题旨在揭示消息的主题或重要新闻事实;副标题用以补充说明情况，或指出内容范围，作出内容提要等。概写标题通常要求的是一行标题的概写。 例题四:为下面这则消息拟一个标题，限14字以内。 3月3日下午，澳门经济司、财政司和水警稽查队联合行动，公开销毁了在最近两年中缉获并已完成了行政或司法检控程序的盗版光盘100万张。这是澳门官方首次采取这种行动。 答案:澳门官方首次公开销毁盗版光盘 由于标题下有具体的新闻内容，而一句话新闻(标题新闻)下没有具体内容，可以说，标题较标题新闻更简洁，往往不需要时间，只要求两个必备要素人物、事件。 4(拟写结尾 结尾(有时可无)，是整个消息的结束语，它用于揭示事实的意义，指出事件发展的趋向，具有画龙点睛的作用。其除基本要素“人物”“事件”外，其他要素往往不必出现。形式有小结式、评论式、希望式等。 例题五:根据下面消息的信息，用一句话概括其结尾。(不超过26字) 美国空间 计划 项目进度计划表范例计划下载计划下载计划下载课程教学计划下载 的新目标，是建立一个永久性的载人空间站。这个空间站重40吨，可居住6—8人。每次飞行时间6个月。空间站上有比较宽敞的生活区，有科学与工业实验室、卫星修理车间、观察太空的天文望远镜和观察地球的遥感设备。空间站还有一个面积达到2000平方米的太阳能电池翼，可提供75千瓦电力。这是美国航天局继航天飞机后提出的又一大胆的设想。 永久性航天站的出现将使空间工业逐步成为现实。载人空间活动的发展将由科学实验和军事应用变为商业应用，在轨道中制造稀有的药物和价值数百万美元一磅的钻石，能大大提高生产率。无人空间飞行的商业应用早已付诸实施，例如用卫星进行通信、导航、预报天气、全面探测地球上粮食、水源、森林、土地和矿物资源的分布和数量等，已经为人类带来了数以亿计的效益。但是，载人空间站将会带来更多的利益。 分析:可抓住其“人物”——“载人空间站”、“事件”的作用和发展趋向拟其结尾为:未来载人personal credit business process management, and development of business processes, clear the loan object and scope, establish loan operation of assessment and accountability mechanisms. Diversity management principles the Bank's strict separation between business and consumer use of personal credit, then according to the different varieties of business to establish the appropriate access standard, post-lending management requirements. Business use personal credit should be strictly in accordance with the qilu Bank's small business credit risk management guidelines and associated working capital loans management requirements, such as assessing the management of production and operation, repayment ability, the level of risk, and so on. Income debt ratio control principle of Bank income debt ratio control mechanism, combined with the borrower's income, debt, expenditures, loans, guarantees and other factors, determines the loan amount and term, control each repayment does not exceed the amount of the borrower repayment ability. Principles of trans-regional limits Branches shall not in principle to operating income mainly comes from offsite (prefecture-level cities and administrative divisions at or above) or inward (MS) charge provided credit support for individual customers is located in different places, but except those with unique advantages such as critical. Have set up branches in different places, other bodies are not entitled to carry out the branch of credit business in the region. Branch County area has been established, other bodies are not entitled to apply for the credit within the County. Double before going through the personal credit business credit investigation, Contracting, security verification, credit check, key account manager should be double handle. Bank supports risk managers, loan review, professional 空间站，将给科学和经济带来无可估价的利益。 ?议论性语段 议论性语段的压缩，首先必须抓住议论的“三要素”来阅读。如果“三要素”齐备，压缩时应尽力压缩事实论据，然后把论点和论据用简洁的语言组织起来。如果“三要素”不齐备，比如缺论点，则必须分析事实材料、理论材料的本质及其联系，方能概括出论点。另外，要注意提示性语句，如“首先”、“其次”、“第一”、“第二”等。 例题六:用25个字概括下面这段文字的主要内容。 创造性思维对思维者的素质提出了很高的要求。创造性思维与思维者的天赋有一定的联系。在某种意义上，创造性思维的天赋就是一种高度的敏感性、感受力和洞察力，他就象卓越的探矿者，善于发现并开掘深深地掩埋在地下的矿藏。再者，思维者对他所思维的对象应有浓烈的兴趣，一个研究者对他们研究的对象缺乏兴趣，他要进行创造性的思维是不可能的。当然不管一个人有多么高的天分，也不管他对自己思维的对象怀着多么强烈的兴趣，要是他是浮躁的、缺乏意志力的，他不能把自己的注意力长久地、锲而不舍地集中在自己的思维对象上，要作出创造性思维是很困难的。 分析:本段第一句为论点，以下几句为论证，是首句中“思维者的素质”的具体展开。分三层，“再者”、“当然”是把握层次的关键词。“天赋”、“兴趣”、“意志力”是三层的关键词。 答案:创造性思维与思维者的天赋、兴趣和意志力有关。 ?说明类语段 试题一般是要求根据材料对某一概念下定义。压缩的关键是抓住被说明事物的特征，即事物的性质、特点、成因、作用等。表述时用“被定义者=种差+临近的属”的句式。 例题七:用定义法压缩下面语段。(不超过45个字) 在一些山区的沟谷中，由于地表径流对山坡和沟床不断地冲蚀掏挖，山体常常崩塌滑坡，塌滑下来的大量的泥沙石块等固体物质，被水流夹带搅拌，变成粘稠的浆体，在重力的作用下急速奔泻。这就是人们常说的泥石流。 分析:语段主要说明了泥石流的成因、环境、特点、形态等。 答案:泥石流是山坡上大量泥沙石块等固体物质，经地表径流的冲蚀夹带，沿着斜坡或沟谷奔泻的激流。 扩展语句练习 1( 根据要求扩展下列语句。 ?给“阁楼里住着一位画家”的主语添加多重定语。 ?给“他画着一幅画”添加多重状语。 ?给“窦娥的三桩誓愿直发得……”添加复杂补语。 ?你自己去吧。 ?扩展成并列复句 ?扩展成因果复句 ?扩展成假设复句 ?将“写好文章的途径就在于多读多思”扩展成一个并列复句。 personal credit business process management, and development of business processes, clear the loan object and scope, establish loan operation of assessment and accountability mechanisms. Diversity management principles the Bank's strict separation between business and consumer use of personal credit, then according to the different varieties of business to establish the appropriate access standard, post-lending management requirements. Business use personal credit should be strictly in accordance with the qilu Bank's small business credit risk management guidelines and associated working capital loans management requirements, such as assessing the management of production and operation, repayment ability, the level of risk, and so on. Income debt ratio control principle of Bank income debt ratio control mechanism, combined with the borrower's income, debt, expenditures, loans, guarantees and other factors, determines the loan amount and term, control each repayment does not exceed the amount of the borrower repayment ability. Principles of trans-regional limits Branches shall not in principle to operating income mainly comes from offsite (prefecture-level cities and administrative divisions at or above) or inward (MS) charge provided credit support for individual customers is located in different places, but except those with unique advantages such as critical. Have set up branches in different places, other bodies are not entitled to carry out the branch of credit business in the region. Branch County area has been established, other bodies are not entitled to apply for the credit within the County. Double before going through the personal credit business credit investigation, Contracting, security verification, credit check, key account manager should be double handle. Bank supports risk managers, loan review, professional ?用比喻的形式扩展“时光一去不复返了”。 2( 运用联想、想象丰富下面语句，其中要有一个比喻或拟人句;只要保留原词语的电 (闪)、雷(鸣)、雨(水)即可。 原句:闷热的夜，令人窒息，忽然，电闪，雷鸣，雨水如注。 扩展句:闷热的夜，令人窒息，忽然， 3( 扩展下面文字，内容要能上下衔接，字数在50字左右。 春天和青春是生命中两片最美的风景， 双重的意蕴，一样的主旨，耐人寻味，催人奋进。 4( 根据第?段和第?段的文意补写第?段，要求三段话之间主旨连贯，结构基本一致。 ?我们不会忘却旧中国苦难、屈辱的历史。西方的坚船利炮打破了国门，帝国主义勾结 封建势力恣意宰割，山河破碎，风雨飘摇。 ? ?我们不会忘却旧中国一穷二白的国情。当年的美国国务卿艾奇逊曾断言:人民的吃饭问题是中国政府必然碰到的第一个问题，一直到现在，没有一个政府能够使这一问题解决，中国共产党也不可能解决这一问题。 5( 在下文横线上另补事例，使内容合理完整。 娇生惯养是低能儿的摇篮;高山寒土使苍松翠柏更加挺拔。司马迁受宫刑，文章字字珠 玑，李后主被囚禁，词境为之一变; ， ， ， :生于忧患，死于安乐，真是至理名言啊～ 6( 扩展下面语句，使其更精确、明白。 长江是著名的河流。(可包括源头、长度、流域面积、支流、水量) 长城应该是有机整体。(扩展后的句子必须合理表述下列内容:长城是由关隘、城堡、 墙体、烽燧等子系统组成的;这些子系统是相互联系的;这些子系统是按特定结构组合在一起的;长城具有防御功能。 7( 扩展下面语句，要求表现江水和海潮的气势 江海关上的大钟，高耸入云，你是要迎接江水，还是要眺望潮水, 8( 写一段话，用正反说理结合的手法来回答“面对责任和尊严，怎样才能成为生活的 强者“的问题(130字左右)。 任何理由都不足以使我们心安理得的放任自己， 9(将下列文句中划线的句子扩展成以《木兰诗》开头并且包含转折和递进两重关系的复句。 我国的古典文学作品，语言精练而又富有形象性。不足400字的《木兰诗》，记叙了木兰从军12年的动人故事。 10(一位学生在习作中写落叶飘零的情状为:“一片片的落叶，轻轻悠悠飘向原野、大道，也飘在人们的身上。”请将这句话扩展得形象些，读起来有一种韵律感。 personal credit business process management, and development of business processes, clear the loan object and scope, establish loan operation of assessment and accountability mechanisms. Diversity management principles the Bank's strict separation between business and consumer use of personal credit, then according to the different varieties of business to establish the appropriate access standard, post-lending management requirements. Business use personal credit should be strictly in accordance with the qilu Bank's small business credit risk management guidelines and associated working capital loans management requirements, such as assessing the management of production and operation, repayment ability, the level of risk, and so on. Income debt ratio control principle of Bank income debt ratio control mechanism, combined with the borrower's income, debt, expenditures, loans, guarantees and other factors, determines the loan amount and term, control each repayment does not exceed the amount of the borrower repayment ability. Principles of trans-regional limits Branches shall not in principle to operating income mainly comes from offsite (prefecture-level cities and administrative divisions at or above) or inward (MS) charge provided credit support for individual customers is located in different places, but except those with unique advantages such as critical. Have set up branches in different places, other bodies are not entitled to carry out the branch of credit business in the region. Branch County area has been established, other bodies are not entitled to apply for the credit within the County. Double before going through the personal credit business credit investigation, Contracting, security verification, credit check, key account manager should be double handle. Bank supports risk managers, loan review, professional 11(增加词语，使下面一段文字分别表现出清新明丽和凄清苍凉两种意境来。 原文:早晨，太阳发出光芒，树上的鸟儿叫着，树下的流水流向远方。 ? ? 12(根据下句的话题，展开列举，组成100字左右的语段。 翻开古诗文，你可以一一品味历史文人们深切的思想感情。 13(根据下面两种情景，以“下雨”为中心，分别扩展成一段话，每段不少于40字。 情景一:春天 野外 下雨 情景二:夏天 校园 下雨 14(根据下面两种情景，以“风”为重点，分别扩展成一段话，每段不少于30字。 情景一:冬天 早晨 风 情景二:夏日 傍晚 风 15(以“创造”或以“爱心”为话题写一段文字，必须用比喻句和排比句，字数在80字左右。 压缩语段练习 1(根据下面这则新闻材料，拟写一句话新闻，不超过15个字。 据欧洲联盟统计局今天公布的统计数字显示，英国已取代法国成为世界第四经济强国。这项统计报告指出，以欧元为计算单位，英国1999年国内生产总值为13480亿欧元，法国为13470亿欧元，退居世界第五位。 1998年英国国内总值为12530亿欧元，名列法国之后，法国的国内生产总值达12970亿欧元。主要因为英镑比欧元稳定，因此英国去年经济表现较欧元国家为优。但欧盟官员警告，这项排名并非一成不变的。德国以19800亿居欧洲联盟龙头地位。 2(将下面的简讯改写为一句话消息。(不超过20个字) 中国文联、中央电视台、中国舞协、中国艺术研究院舞蹈研究所联合主办的“中华民族二十世纪舞蹈经典”评审工作目前已经结束，产生了七十六个提名作品。颁奖晚会将参考“奥斯卡颁奖典礼”的方式，届时三十二个舞蹈经典精品及“二十世纪杰出舞蹈家”的折桂者名单将一并揭晓。 3(为下面这则报道，写一条一句话新闻。(20个字以内) 王建章在外经贸部和信息产业部联合举办的“移动通信行业配套合作与发展国际研讨会”上发表讲话。在谈到移动通信产品国产化配套问题时，他表示，目前国内尤其是元器件生产具备一定基础，今后的主要工作是对整机配套关键的元器件进行重点部署。王建章透露，国家将从今年六百亿债券中拿出四亿元来支持此配套项目的完成，希望国内配套的元器件厂家和整机厂沟通，并与国内外厂家建立关系，可通过技术引进方式，也可合资合作，强强联合，在中国本土生产，使移动通信产品国产化配套率在2001年超百分之五十。 4(根据下面提供的材料，拟一条一句话新闻。 personal credit business process management, and development of business processes, clear the loan object and scope, establish loan operation of assessment and accountability mechanisms. Diversity management principles the Bank's strict separation between business and consumer use of personal credit, then according to the different varieties of business to establish the appropriate access standard, post-lending management requirements. Business use personal credit should be strictly in accordance with the qilu Bank's small business credit risk management guidelines and associated working capital loans management requirements, such as assessing the management of production and operation, repayment ability, the level of risk, and so on. Income debt ratio control principle of Bank income debt ratio control mechanism, combined with the borrower's income, debt, expenditures, loans, guarantees and other factors, determines the loan amount and term, control each repayment does not exceed the amount of the borrower repayment ability. Principles of trans-regional limits Branches shall not in principle to operating income mainly comes from offsite (prefecture-level cities and administrative divisions at or above) or inward (MS) charge provided credit support for individual customers is located in different places, but except those with unique advantages such as critical. Have set up branches in different places, other bodies are not entitled to carry out the branch of credit business in the region. Branch County area has been established, other bodies are not entitled to apply for the credit within the County. Double before going through the personal credit business credit investigation, Contracting, security verification, credit check, key account manager should be double handle. Bank supports risk managers, loan review, professional 8月16日是南京电信局办理上网按月包时服务的第一天。一大早，鼓楼和云南路两个电信营业厅便被前来办理此项业务的市民围得水泄不通，粗略估计两个受理点至少有2000人。原本8点半开门的营业大厅临时提前到8点钟，截至到10点钟，两个受理点已办理约500户用户，而南京现在的非注册用户就有20多万，希望电信部门能够早日把上网费整体降下来。 5(阅读下面一段文字，完成文后题目。 在重庆库区，国家决定初步纳入保护的文物点为754处，到目前为止，在501处地下文物中已开展工作的项目仅42处，不足10%;已经完成发掘面积的4.85万平方米，不足发掘总面积128.76平方米的4%。地面文物244处，由于规划滞后，文物搬迁选址工作举步维艰，至今搬迁工作无法实施。与此同时，近年来，随着移民迁建区的施工建设与开发，大量古墓葬、古遗址、古民居、石刻等遭到破坏;盗掘古墓葬、古遗址的事件屡有发生，也给挽救工作增加了难度。 ?给这则新闻加一个恰当的主标题(不超过15字) ?概括这段文字的要点 6(阅读下面这段文字，简要概括旧式教育的三种弊端(每条不超过8个字) 旧式教育是守着古典主义的:读古人的书籍，意在把书中内容装进头脑里去，不问它对于现实生活适合不适合，有用处没用处;学古人的文章，意在把那一套程式和腔调模仿到家，不问它对于抒发心情相配不相配，有效果没效果。旧式教育又是守着利禄主义的:读书作文的目标在取得功名，起码要能得“食禀”，飞黄腾达起来做官做府，当然更好;至于发展个人生活上必要的知能，使个人终身受用不尽，同时使社会间接蒙受有利影响，这一套，旧式教育根本就不管。 第一种弊端是: 第二种弊端是: 第三种弊端是: 7(为下面一则新闻拟写导语 [路透社莫斯科9月16日电] 俄罗斯航天局发言人谢尔盖?戈尔布诺夫说:“根据我了解的情况，第一批宇航员将于2000年，也许是在1999年底，到达国际空间站。” 由于俄罗斯经济形势继续恶化，比其他任何国家都具有长时间太空飞行经验的俄罗斯已没有能力履行它承担的义务。 俄罗斯尚未完成国际空间站上供宇航员居住舱的建造，原计划于明年7月把俄美两国3名宇航员送入国际空间站的计划，现在看来不大可能按时实施。 有关部门的官员，将于本月28日在莫斯科讨论第一批宇航员进入国际空间站的时间再次推迟的可能性。戈尔布诺夫说，目前的金融困难还有可能迫使俄罗斯让已在和平号空间站上工作了半年的两名宇航员再延长几个月。 8(试用一句话概括下面一段话的主要内容(不超过30个字) 当我们与身边的朋友相处或者与远在天边的朋友通信时，我们往往会从他们的行为或信中看到一个与我们的内心极不相同的世界，这一世界可以说是我们自己的内心世界的扩展;在这个被扩展了的世界里，我们心灵的眼睛将有一个更开阔的视野;我们也将从这个被扩展了的世界里，感悟到我们在自己的那个狭小的世界里感悟不 练习到的东西。 personal credit business process management, and development of business processes, clear the loan object and scope, establish loan operation of assessment and accountability mechanisms. Diversity management principles the Bank's strict separation between business and consumer use of personal credit, then according to the different varieties of business to establish the appropriate access standard, post-lending management requirements. Business use personal credit should be strictly in accordance with the qilu Bank's small business credit risk management guidelines and associated working capital loans management requirements, such as assessing the management of production and operation, repayment ability, the level of risk, and so on. Income debt ratio control principle of Bank income debt ratio control mechanism, combined with the borrower's income, debt, expenditures, loans, guarantees and other factors, determines the loan amount and term, control each repayment does not exceed the amount of the borrower repayment ability. Principles of trans-regional limits Branches shall not in principle to operating income mainly comes from offsite (prefecture-level cities and administrative divisions at or above) or inward (MS) charge provided credit support for individual customers is located in different places, but except those with unique advantages such as critical. Have set up branches in different places, other bodies are not entitled to carry out the branch of credit business in the region. Branch County area has been established, other bodies are not entitled to apply for the credit within the County. Double before going through the personal credit business credit investigation, Contracting, security verification, credit check, key account manager should be double handle. Bank supports risk managers, loan review, professional 9(按要求为以下一则报道拟“引题”和“主标题”。 (引题，由两个短语构成) (主标题，不超过12个字) 本报讯 园林绿化工作一直是在内蒙古前列的包头市，日前宣布退出今年举行的第四次全国卫生大检查和卫生城市的评比活动。次项活动许多城市都很看重且积极参加。包头市曾连续两次参加并被评为“全国卫生模范城市”。此次市政府的决定确乎出人意料。 该市负责同志告诉记者，包头的卫生工作不以迎接大检查为目的，这是市委、市政府的共识。他还对记者说，包头地震后，城市建设有目共睹，但我们认为与“卫生模范城市”的标准还有差距，与其搞形式主义的“突击行动”，不如多做些实事，让老百姓满意更为重要。 10(用简短的语言概括下列文字的内容。(不超过20个字) 因特网作为一种媒体，与19世纪的报刊和20世纪的广播、电视不同的是跨越时空，全球一网，信息无限，时效更快;文、图、动画、声音等多种媒体为一体;每个人可选择自己所需要的内容，发表意见，每一个新闻机构甚至个人都可以随时向全世界发布新闻。对于下个世纪的因特网，有的专家这样描述——这是一张个性化的电子报纸，它是一个带超薄型大平面显示版的移动式网络计算机，不仅有图文声情，甚至扩展到三维空间，它以我为中心，按照受众的需要进行信息项目自主选择、组织。有的专家称之为“我的报纸”。 扩展语句答案 1(?那条整洁而又充满花香的小街拐角处的平房顶上A字形的阁楼里住着一位画家。 ?当我们找到他的时候，他正在那个破烂不堪的阁楼里*着双腿用那支用了多年早已磨秃的画笔在左一下右一下专心致志地画着一幅画。 ?窦娥的三桩誓愿直发得天地惊鬼神泣黎民愁贪官栗山陵崩江河逆。 如果他不来，你自己去吧。 ??我不去了，你自己去吧。?我有点事，你自己去吧。? ?要写好文章，一定要多读书，没有丰富的知识，写出文章就不会有较深的文化内涵;要写好文章，一定要多思考，没有多维的思考，写出的文章就没有较高的思想品位。 ?时光，如流水，如行云，如白驹过隙，一去不复返了。 2(一道道闪电划破漆黑的夜幕，一阵阵沉闷的雷声如同战鼓轰鸣，接着便下起了瓢泼大雨。 3(春天铺展在我们身边，处处充满生机;青春涌动在我们体内，时时激励人们。要像迎接春天一样去迎接青春，要像珍惜春天一样珍惜青春。 4(我们不会忘却旧中国积贫积弱的困境，那是一个千疮百孔的烂摊子，经济萎缩，民生凋敝，百废待兴。 5(石崇喜爱夸富，最终死于东市，炀帝耽于声色，帝国土崩瓦解。 6(发源于唐古拉山的长江，全长6300公里，流经13个省市，是中国第一大河，也是世界的第三大河。 长城是由关隘、城堡、墙体等相互联系的子系统，按特定结构方式组合而成的具有防御功能的有机整体。 7(江海关上的大钟，高耸入云，你是要迎接从唐古拉山直泻而下，波涛滚滚、浊浪排空的江水，还是要眺望从东海腹地汹涌而来，排山倒海、势如奔马的海潮, 8(更不能放纵我们的灵魂流浪于欲海之中。因为那是逃避，那是怯懦，那是在人的责任和尊严面前，屈下了自己的双腿，垂下了自己的头颅。我们的灵魂必须属于我们自己，只有直视它，让它为我们驯服地存在，我们才能成为生活的强者。 9(《木兰诗》虽然篇幅短小，不足400字，却记叙了木兰从军12年的动人故事，而且人物形象鲜明，情节生动，气韵流畅。 personal credit business process management, and development of business processes, clear the loan object and scope, establish loan operation of assessment and accountability mechanisms. Diversity management principles the Bank's strict separation between business and consumer use of personal credit, then according to the different varieties of business to establish the appropriate access standard, post-lending management requirements. Business use personal credit should be strictly in accordance with the qilu Bank's small business credit risk management guidelines and associated working capital loans management requirements, such as assessing the management of production and operation, repayment ability, the level of risk, and so on. Income debt ratio control principle of Bank income debt ratio control mechanism, combined with the borrower's income, debt, expenditures, loans, guarantees and other factors, determines the loan amount and term, control each repayment does not exceed the amount of the borrower repayment ability. Principles of trans-regional limits Branches shall not in principle to operating income mainly comes from offsite (prefecture-level cities and administrative divisions at or above) or inward (MS) charge provided credit support for individual customers is located in different places, but except those with unique advantages such as critical. Have set up branches in different places, other bodies are not entitled to carry out the branch of credit business in the region. Branch County area has been established, other bodies are not entitled to apply for the credit within the County. Double before going through the personal credit business credit investigation, Contracting, security verification, credit check, key account manager should be double handle. 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Diversity management principles the Bank's strict separation between business and consumer use of personal credit, then according to the different varieties of business to establish the appropriate access standard, post-lending management requirements. Business use personal credit should be strictly in accordance with the qilu Bank's small business credit risk management guidelines and associated working capital loans management requirements, such as assessing the management of production and operation, repayment ability, the level of risk, and so on. Income debt ratio control principle of Bank income debt ratio control mechanism, combined with the borrower's income, debt, expenditures, loans, guarantees and other factors, determines the loan amount and term, control each repayment does not exceed the amount of the borrower repayment ability. Principles of trans-regional limits Branches shall not in principle to operating income mainly comes from offsite (prefecture-level cities and administrative divisions at or above) or inward (MS) charge provided credit support for individual customers is located in different places, but except those with unique advantages such as critical. Have set up branches in different places, other bodies are not entitled to carry out the branch of credit business in the region. Branch County area has been established, other bodies are not entitled to apply for the credit within the County. Double before going through the personal credit business credit investigation, Contracting, security verification, credit check, key account manager should be double handle. Bank supports risk managers, loan review, professional