高考英语书面表达常见错误

null 书面 表 关于同志近三年现实表现材料材料类招标技术评分表图表与交易pdf视力表打印pdf用图表说话 pdf 达 常见错误类型 及改进意见 书面表达 常见错误类型 及改进意见 错误类型一: 汉式英语错误 2011-10-18书面表达常见错误* 错误类型一: 汉式英语错误 不少考生在英语书面表达时易受汉语习惯影响,所写句子虽然语法正确,却不符合英语表达习惯,造成不少汉语式英语病句.要减少汉式病句必须做到: (1)养成用英语思维进行写作的习惯,注意中西文化差异所带来的不同表达. (2)平时多归纳总结,纠正汉式英语. (3)多收听对外广播、收看英语节目、广泛阅读英文版书籍、报纸及其它材料. 2011-10-18书面表达常见错误* 不少考生在英语书面表达时易受汉语习惯影响,所写句子虽然语法正确,却不符合英语表达习惯,造成不少汉语式英语病句.要减少汉式病句必须做到: (1)养成用英语思维进行写作的习惯,注意中西文化差异所带来的不同表达. (2)平时多归纳总结,纠正汉式英语. (3)多收听对外广播、收看英语节目、广泛阅读英文版书籍、报纸及其它材料. ⑴误:He cost five yuan to buy a dictionary. 正: 或 ⑵误:Good good study, day day up. 正:2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⑴误:He cost five yuan to buy a dictionary. 正: 或 ⑵误:Good good study, day day up. 正:It cost him five yuan to buy a dictionary.If you study hard ,you will make progress every day. The dictionary cost him five yuan.⑶误:Here is suitable to grow cash crops. 正: ⑷误:There is a notice in the park saying “ To take notice of safe; the sidewalk is very crafty.” 正:2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⑶误:Here is suitable to grow cash crops. 正: ⑷误:There is a notice in the park saying “ To take notice of safe; the sidewalk is very crafty.” 正:It is suitable to grow cash crops here.There is a notice in the park saying “Watch your step. Slippery sidewalk.” ⑸误: His fever is high. 正: ⑹误: The student is standing there is my brother. 正: 或 2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⑸误: His fever is high. 正: ⑹误: The student is standing there is my brother. 正: 或 He has a high fever.The student standing there is my brother. The student who is standing there is my brother. ⑺误: The price of the computer is expensive. 正: ⑻误: The population of China is many. 正:2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⑺误: The price of the computer is expensive. 正: ⑻误: The population of China is many. 正:The price of the computer is high.The population of China is large. ⑼误: Recently our village have taken place great changes . 正: ⑽误: There are twenty students in our class have been to Beijing. 正:2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⑼误: Recently our village have taken place great changes . 正: ⑽误: There are twenty students in our class have been to Beijing. 正:Recently great changes have taken place in our village. Twenty students in our class have been to Beijing. ⑾误: That factory broke out a fire last Sunday. 正: ⑿误: This building likes a school. 正:2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⑾误: That factory broke out a fire last Sunday. 正: ⑿误: This building likes a school. 正:A fire broke out in that factory last Sunday. This building looks like/is a school. ⒀误: He will able to write articles in English next year. 正: ⒁误: I will by bus to Beijing. 正:2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⒀误: He will able to write articles in English next year. 正: ⒁误: I will by bus to Beijing. 正:He will be able to write articles in English next year. I’ll go to Beijing by bus tomorrow. ⒂误: Professor Li comes from Beijing University will give us a lecture tomorrow. 正: ⒃误: His friends are few. 正: 2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⒂误: Professor Li comes from Beijing University will give us a lecture tomorrow. 正: ⒃误: His friends are few. 正: Professor Li from Beijing University will give us a lecture tomorrow. He has few friends.⒄误: Wei Fang’s father scolded her coming late to school. 正:2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⒄误: Wei Fang’s father scolded her coming late to school. 正:Wei Fang’s father scolded her for her coming late to school. ⒅误: To attend this meeting is important. 正: ⒆误: His teaching methods are many. 正:2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⒅误: To attend this meeting is important. 正: ⒆误: His teaching methods are many. 正:It is important to attend this meeting. He has many teaching methods. 错误类型二: 句子结构不完整或结构错误 2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*错误类型二: 句子结构不完整或结构错误 一个句子至少包括主语和谓语两部分(祈使句除外)。如果把句子的某一个部分当成一个句子，就会导致非完整句子。两个各含有主语和谓语的分句不能写在一起，也不能只用逗号隔开。 2011-10-18书面表达常见错误* 一个句子至少包括主语和谓语两部分(祈使句除外)。如果把句子的某一个部分当成一个句子，就会导致非完整句子。两个各含有主语和谓语的分句不能写在一起，也不能只用逗号隔开。 ⑴误: There were foreigners came to our school. 　正: ⑵误: Without a friend will feel lonely. 　正:2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⑴误: There were foreigners came to our school. 　正: ⑵误: Without a friend will feel lonely. 　正:There were foreigners who came to our school.Without a friend one will feel lonely. ⑶误: The girls cleaned the desks and chairs, the boys mopped the floor. 　正: 正:2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⑶误: The girls cleaned the desks and chairs, the boys mopped the floor. 　正: 正:The girls cleaned the desks and chairs; the boys mopped the floor. The girls cleaned the desks and chairs, and the boys mopped the floor. ⑷误: The book was interesting. I read it rapidly. 　正: 正:2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⑷误: The book was interesting. I read it rapidly. 　正: 正:The book was interesting; I read it rapidly.The book was interesting, and I read it rapidly. ⑸误: The woman talked to you just now is our English teacher. 　正: ⑹误: I can’t imagine what life would be like if have not any TV sets. 　正:2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⑸误: The woman talked to you just now is our English teacher. 　正: ⑹误: I can’t imagine what life would be like if have not any TV sets. 　正:The woman who talked to you just now is our English teacher.I can’t imagine what life would be like if we have not any TV sets. ⑺误: China is no longer what used to be . 　正: ⑻误: Although rained, we went on working. 　正:2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⑺误: China is no longer what used to be . 　正: ⑻误: Although rained, we went on working. 　正:China is no longer what it used to be .Although it rained, we went on working. ⑼误: They finished the homework, they went out. 　正: ⑽误: I am tired, I must go to bed. 　正:2011-10-18书面表达常见错误* ⑼误: They finished the homework, they went out. 　正: ⑽误: I am tired, I must go to bed. 　正:Since/As they finished the homework, they went out.I am tired, so I must go to bed. ⑾误:The sun gives off heat and light, this makes it possible for the plants on the earth to grow. 　正:2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⑾误:The sun gives off heat and light, this makes it possible for the plants on the earth to grow. 　正:The sun gives off heat and light, which makes it possible for the plants on the earth to grow. ⑿误:You practise more reading, you will improve your reading ability. 　正:2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⑿误:You practise more reading, you will improve your reading ability. 　正:If you practise more reading, you will improve your reading ability. ⒀误:I arrived at the station, the train had left. 　正:2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⒀误:I arrived at the station, the train had left. 　正:When I arrived at the station, the train had left. ⒁误: China is still a developing country, most people can’t afford a car. 　正:2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⒁误: China is still a developing country, most people can’t afford a car. 　正:Because China is still a developing country, most people can’t afford a car. 错误类型三： 重复累赘 2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*错误类型三： 重复累赘 有些英语单词本身自带某个意思，或由于语法需要不能再出现某个单词，而学生基本功夫不够扎实，常常出现累赘现象。 2011-10-18书面表达常见错误* 有些英语单词本身自带某个意思，或由于语法需要不能再出现某个单词，而学生基本功夫不够扎实，常常出现累赘现象。 ⑴误: The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry it. 正: ⑵误: We hope to improve our work better. 正:2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⑴误: The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry it. 正: ⑵误: We hope to improve our work better. 正:The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry.We hope to improve our work. ⑶误: We are very like his lesson. 　正: ⑷误: Your’s class was interesting. 　正:2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⑶误: We are very like his lesson. 　正: ⑷误: Your’s class was interesting. 　正:We like his lesson very much. Your class was interesting. ⑸误: In spite of the fact he is lazy, I like him. 正: ⑹误: Personally I think he is a good student. 正:2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⑸误: In spite of the fact he is lazy, I like him. 正: ⑹误: Personally I think he is a good student. 正:In spite of his laziness, I like him.I think he is a good student. ⑺误: I seldom go to the Shanghai Library due to the reason it is far away from my home. 正:2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⑺误: I seldom go to the Shanghai Library due to the reason it is far away from my home. 正:I seldom go to the Shanghai Library because it is far away from my home. ⑻误: Mary married with John. 正: ⑼误: I returned back the book to you yesterday. 正:2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⑻误: Mary married with John. 正: ⑼误: I returned back the book to you yesterday. 正:Mary married John.I returned the book to you yesterday. ⑽误: The teacher repeated the sentence again. 正: ⑾误: My most favorite song is “Hand in Hand”. 　正:2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⑽误: The teacher repeated the sentence again. 正: ⑾误: My most favorite song is “Hand in Hand”. 　正:The teacher repeated the sentence.My favorite song is “Hand in Hand”. ⑿误: The train is entering into the tunnel. 　正:2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⑿误: The train is entering into the tunnel. 　正:The train is entering the tunnel. 错误类型四： 句子缺乏逻辑性或连贯性 2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*错误类型四： 句子缺乏逻辑性或连贯性 一个句子必须表达一个完整、 前后语意一致的意思。如果把不相干的意思放子一个句字里或一个句子表达不完整，就会出现逻辑问题。 句子无论长短，在安排上要合乎逻辑，衔接自然，使句内语意关系明确。而学生在习作过程中常出现悬垂修饰语、指代不明、缺少过渡词语、非平行结构和语意不完整的分割句等错误。2011-10-18书面表达常见错误* 一个句子必须表达一个完整、 前后语意一致的意思。如果把不相干的意思放子一个句字里或一个句子表达不完整，就会出现逻辑问题。 句子无论长短，在安排上要合乎逻辑，衔接自然，使句内语意关系明确。而学生在习作过程中常出现悬垂修饰语、指代不明、缺少过渡词语、非平行结构和语意不完整的分割句等错误。⑴误: Being an honest man, Tom worked very hard. 正: ⑵误: Liu Hua is a kind-hearted girl. She will be successful in anything she tries. 正: 2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⑴误: Being an honest man, Tom worked very hard. 正: ⑵误: Liu Hua is a kind-hearted girl. She will be successful in anything she tries. 正: Being an honest man, Tom never tells a lie. AS she has a strong will and confidence in herself, Liu Hua may be successful in anything she tries.⑶误: Rose is in love with John, John is in love with Mary. 正:2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⑶误: Rose is in love with John, John is in love with Mary. 正:Rose is in love with John, but John is in love with Mary. 错误类型五： 语法、词法错误 2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*错误类型五： 语法、词法错误 许多考生写作中易犯关系不一致、词性混用、选词或搭配不当，时态语态错误、指代不清、语序不当等方面的错误。 2011-10-18书面表达常见错误* 许多考生写作中易犯关系不一致、词性混用、选词或搭配不当，时态语态错误、指代不清、语序不当等方面的错误。 ⑴误: In the bedroom there are a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. 正: ⑵误: He closed the door and hurries away to class. 正:2011-10-18书面表达常见错误* ⑴误: In the bedroom there are a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. 正: ⑵误: He closed the door and hurries away to class. 正:In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. He closed the door and hurried away to class. ⑶误: 60% of the students against the idea of entrance fees. 正: ⑷误: 2 days past before his letter arrived. 正:2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⑶误: 60% of the students against the idea of entrance fees. 正: ⑷误: 2 days past before his letter arrived. 正:60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees.2 days passed before his letter arrived. ⑸误: In order to learn English well, I should increase/raise the method of study. 正:. ⑹误: Tom was in such a hurry that he forget his schoolbag on the bus. 正:2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*⑸误: In order to learn English well, I should increase/raise the method of study. 正:. ⑹误: Tom was in such a hurry that he forget his schoolbag on the bus. 正:In order to learn English well, I should improve the method of studyTom was in such a hurry that he left his schoolbag on the bus. 错误类型六： 拼写错误及注意标点符号 2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*错误类型六： 拼写错误及注意标点符号 考生出现单词拼写错误的原因： 一是因为发音错误导致拼写错误，如：strick（strict）；二是因为不知道动词的不规则变化所导致的，如： teached（taught）等。 标点符号是一种变相文字，是书面表达不可缺少的重要手段，很多学生不了解不同标点符号的用途或英汉标点差异，结果出现错误。 2011-10-18书面表达常见错误* 考生出现单词拼写错误的原因： 一是因为发音错误导致拼写错误，如：strick（strict）；二是因为不知道动词的不规则变化所导致的，如： teached（taught）等。 标点符号是一种变相文字，是书面表达不可缺少的重要手段，很多学生不了解不同标点符号的用途或英汉标点差异，结果出现错误。 null2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*null2011-10-18书面表达常见错误*