专题6 第5课时夹叙夹议文的写作要领

nullnullnull (珠海市2011年5月高三综合测试〈二〉) 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求，写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 A passenger told an air hostess that he needed a cup of water to take medicine when the plane just took off. She told him that she would bring him the water in ten minutes. null Thirty minutes later, when the passenger's ring for service sounded, the air hostess realized it at once. She was kept so busy that she forgot to deliver him the water. As a result, the passenger was held up to take his medicine. She hurried over to him with a cup of water, but he refused it. null In the following hours on the flight, each time the air hostess passed the passenger, she would ask him with a smile whether he needed help or not. But the passenger never paid attention to her words. null When he was going to get off the plane, the passenger asked the air hostess to hand him the passengers' booklet( 意见 文理分科指导河道管理范围浙江建筑工程概算定额教材专家评审意见党员教师互相批评意见 簿). She was very sad. She knew that he would write down sharp words, which might result in the loss of her job. But with a smile she handed it to him. null Off the plane, she opened the booklet, and cracked a smile, for the passenger put it, “On the flight, you asked me whether I need help or not for twelve times in all. How can I refuse your twelve sincere smiles？” That's right! It was the twelve smiles of the air hostess that touched the passenger deeply and of course she wouldn't lose her job! null【写作内容】 1. 以约30个词概括短文的内容要点； 2. 以约120个词谈谈微笑对人们的情感或行为的影响，内容包括： (1)你是如何看待微笑的作用的； (2)谈谈你所经历的让你最感动或给你印象最深刻的一次微笑； (3)你对微笑的感悟。null【写作要求】 1. 作文中可使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子； 2. 文章中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。null One possible version： An air hostess forgot a passenger's requirement, which made him angry. Though during the whole flight the passenger paid no attention to her, she still served him politely. Finally he was touched by her sincere smiles. null Once I failed in a math exam, I had been crying for a whole afternoon. Knowing what had happened, Mom came by my side, stroked my hair and comforted me gently. Instead of finding the slightest disappointment on her face, I saw Mom's sincere smile. She told me not to give up and encouraged me to go on fighting. Believe it or not, Mom's smile had such magic power that I regained my confidence and I did a much better job in the following exam. null From where I stand, I am fully convinced that smiles play a significant role in our lives. A smile is a cure to one's anxiety. Besides, a smiling face never fails to cheer up those around us and makes people feel at ease and comfortable. For me, the smile from my mother is the most beautiful one that I will always treasure in my life. null【思路点拨】 这是一篇叙议结合的文章，第一个问题是“微笑的作用”，是议论文体；第二个问题是“你最感动或最难忘的亲身经历”，是记叙文体；第三个问题“你对微笑的感悟”，是议论文体。从文章的标题以及内容的三点要求，我们可以列出这篇文章写作要点的总体框架： nullnull一、议论文的基本知识 1. 时态较为统一，多用现在时； 2. 强调语言表达的客观性； 3. 要有合情合理的阐述和论证，即论据和论点。null二、叙议的结合值得注意的几个方面 1. 夹叙夹议作文的叙事部分与记叙文的叙事部分有不同之处。 注意：①人物、地点和发生的主要情节简单叙述清楚。②语言简练，学会忍痛割爱，心理活动、人物描述等细节要略去。 2. 议论部分是有感而发，可以是一件事情，可以对自己是正面的影响也可以是负面的影响，由负面影响从而学到某种道理或者经验教训。 3. 议论是结合叙事部分展开，和所叙述的故事紧密结合，可以升华也可以只谈对自己的影响和感受，但是必须是“紧密结合”并且是有感而发。null One possible version: This passage tells us that Monty Roberts, who had such strong belief that he didn't give up his dream all the time, eventually succeeded in owning a horse ranch. For a person, belief always plays an important role in his/her life. As a saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” Anyone who has strong belief can enjoy a colorful life. Otherwise, he will lose himself in his way of life. null From my personal point of view, it can be seen that one with firmly­held belief is likely to achieve success and master his own life.