【高考英语满分作文Green,Action,in,Our,Class】高考英语满分作文

【高考英语满分作文Green,Action,in,Our,Class】高考英语满分作文【高考英语满分作文Green,Action,in,Our,Class】高考英语满分作文高考英语满分作文GreenActioninOurClass高考英语满分作文GreenActioninOurClass【试题回放】情景作文假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“GreenActioninOurClass”为题的英文稿件。注意：词数不少于60提示词：郊区suburbs【满分作文】Gre...

【高考英语满分作文Green,Action,in,Our,Class】高考英语满分作文高考英语满分作文GreenActioninOurClass高考英语满分作文GreenActioninOurClass【试题回放】情景作文假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“GreenActioninOurClass”为题的英文稿件。注意：词数不少于60提示词：郊区suburbs【满分作文】GreenActioninOurClassApril12ismemorablebecauseourclasshadameaningfulexperienceonthatday.Inthemorning,webicycledtothesuburbstoplanttrees,talkingandlaughingalltheway.Uponarrival,webegantoworkimmediately.Somewerediggingholes.Somewerecarryingandplantingyoungtrees.Otherswerewatering.Aftergettingtheworkdone,weputupaboardremindingpeopletoprotectthetrees.Beforeleavingwetooksomephotostorecordourgreenaction.Seeingthelinesoftrees,weallhadasenseofachievement.Wefeelit’sourdutytoprotectandbeautifyourenvironment.【名师点评】本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。文章思路清晰，要点连贯，在语言的表达上选词新颖，同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。【阅卷老师点评】亮点1：正确使用原因状语从句，如“…becauseourclasshadameaninefulexperienceonthatday.”。亮点2：正确使用了难度较大的介词短语，如uponarrival，aftergettingtheworkdone，beforeleaving等，把时间概念交代得十分清楚。亮点3：正确使用并列句式，如“Somewerediggingholes.Somewerecarryingandplantingyoungtrees.Otherswerewateringthem.”句意丰富，富有表现力。亮点4：正确使用现在分词作状语，如seeingthelinesoftrees等，句式灵活。延伸补充：《GreenActioninOurClass》优秀范文一OnApril12th,ourclasswenttoplanttreesinsuburbanarea.Itwasasunnydayandtemperaturewasmoderate.Theplacewewereheadingtoweren“tfarfromourschool,andbecauseofenvironmentalprotection,weallrodebikesandittookusapproximatelyanhourtoreachourdestination.Wecooperatedwitheachothertoplantthetrees.Afterwefinishedourplanting,webuiltupasignthathassomewords,“protecttrees",onit.Afterwefinished,weaskedalocalpersontotakeaphotoofus.Weweresojoyfulanddelightedthatwegotthisgreatopportunitytoprotectenvironmentourselves.Thanksforthecommunistpartythatofferedusthechancetoexperiencethefeelingofnature《GreenActioninOurClass》优秀范文二OurclassdecidedtoplanttreesonsuburbsonApril12th.Itwasasunnyday,andmyclassmatesandIrodebikestothesuburbs.Onourway,welaughedandsangsongshappily.Onarrivingthere,wedugholesandplantedtreesintothembeforewewateredthem.Inordertoremindpeopletolookafterthemwell,wesetupasignwhichread"PleaseProtecttheTrees."Afterhavingfinishedourwork,wetookaphototogetherasamemorial.Weacquiresomethingmorethanknowledgeandsatisfaction_it"stheawarenessofourresponsibility.Whatanenjoyableandmeaningfulday!

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