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WelcometoourClass!2013.10.25句子合并的语法精彩以上两个简单句，我们怎样才能合并成一个高级的句子呢？最重要的是，我们要理解句子间的逻辑关系，然后用并列句和复合句 表 关于同志近三年现实表现材料材料类招标技术评分表图表与交易pdf视力表打印pdf用图表说话 pdf 达出来。请看下面两个简单句：1.他考试不及格。Hedidn’tpasstheexam.(主语+谓语+宾语)Hefailedintheexam.(主语+谓语+状语）2.他的家人很失望。Hisfamilyweredisappointed.（主语+系动词+表语）最重要的是，我们要理解句子间的逻辑关系，然后用并列句和复合句表达出来。1.As/Becausehehadn’tpassedtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.2.Hedidn’tpasstheexam,sohisfamilyweredisappointed.3.Thathisfamilyweredisappointedwasbecausehehadn’tpassedtheexam.4.Thereasonwhyhisfamilyweredisappointedwasthathehadn’tpassedtheexam.5.Thathehadn’tpassedtheexammadehisfamilydisappointed.6.Itmadehisfamilydisappointedthathehadn’tpassedtheexam.7.Itwasthathehadn’tpassedtheexamthatmadehisfamilydisappointed.8.Hedidn’tpasstheexam,anditmadehisfamilydisappointed.9.Hedidn’tpasstheexam,whichmadehisfamilydisappointed.10.Afterhisfamilylearnedthathehadn’tpassedtheexam,theyweredisappointed.11.Hisfamilyweredisappointedatthenewsthathehadn’tpassedtheexam.当然，合并简单句不一定非要用并列句和复合句。我们也可以用含非谓语的动词的句子来表达。我们应该知道，状语从句、定语从句、名词性从句都可以相应的转换成介词短语或非谓语动词短语做状语、定语、主语、宾语和表语。这样，我们就可以将复合句转换成高级的简单句。Nothavingpassedtheexam,hemadehisfamilyfamilydisappointed.因为他考试不及格，所以他的家人很失望。1.As/Becausehehadn’tpassedtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.Withhimnotpassingtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointedBecauseofhisnotpassingtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.Hisfamilyweredisappointedtolearnthathehadn’tpassedtheexam.Thereasonwhyhisfamilyweredisappointedwasthathehadn’tpassedtheexam.(含定语从句及表语从句的复合句)Thereasonforhisfamily’sbeingdisappointedwashisnotpassingtheexam.Hisnothavingpassedtheexammadehisfamilydisappointed.Forthereason,hisnotpassingtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointedHedidn’tpasstheexam,whichmadehisfamilydisappointed.Hedidn’tpasstheexam,makinghisfamilydisappointed.Nothavingpassedtheexam,hemadehisfamilyfamilydisappointed.Afterhisfamilylearnedthathehadn’tpassedtheexam,theyweredisappointed.Afterlearningthathehadn’tpassedtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.Havinglearnedthathehadn’tpassedtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.句子合并的方法多种多样，重要的是清晰句子结构,理清句子逻辑关系，学会分析句子成分。即时练习。根据汉语意思，完成英文句子。1.他很忙，他没来。1）___________hewasbusy,hedidn’tcome.2）____________(be)busy,hedidn’tcome.3)Itwasbecausehewasbusy_________hedidn’tcome.4)Hewasbusy,________hedidn’tcome.5)Hedidn’tcome_________hewasbusy.6)________hedidn’tcomewasbecausehewasbusy.7)Hisnot___________(come)wasbecausehewasbusy.8)Thereasonwhyhedidn’tcomewas______hewasbusy.9)_________hewasbusymadehimunabletocome.10)__________(he)beingbusymadehimunabletocome.11)Hewasbusy,and______madehimunabletocome.12)Hewasbusy,___________madehimunabletocome.13)Hewasbusy,_______(make)himunabletocome.2.杰克出生在英国，他在美国长大。1）JackwasbornintheUK,_________hegrewupintheUS.2)____________hewasbornintheUK,JackgrewupintheUS.3)_________(bear)intheUK,JackgrewupintheUS.4)Jack,_________wasbornintheUK,grewupintheUS.5)Jack,_________(bear)intheUK,grewupintheUS.写作的基本能力是“信息句子化”，在简单句的基础上运用语法知识合并句子，体现句子的多样化，增添语言色彩，从而使写作获高分。请看下面一篇基础写作学校英语论坛针对目前城市交通拥堵、污染严重的问题进行了“治堵 方案 气瓶 现场处置方案 .pdf气瓶 现场处置方案 .doc见习基地管理方案.doc关于群访事件的化解方案建筑工地扬尘治理专项方案下载 大家谈”的讨论。以下是讨论概要：治堵方案1.少开私家车；多人共乘一辆小车。2.政府完善公共交通以方便市民。3.修建绿道（greenlanes）,鼓励骑自行车。好处：省钱、省时、节能、环保。【写作 内容 财务内部控制制度的内容财务内部控制制度的内容人员招聘与配置的内容项目成本控制的内容消防安全演练内容 】请根据以上概要写一篇短文，包括以下内容：1.存在的问题；2.解决的方案；3.方案的好处。经过审题，我们可以列出以下的信息点：1）Wehadadiscussion.2)Ourstreetsarecrowdedwithtraffic.Therearetoomanyprivatecars.3)Theairisseriouslypolluted.4)Somesolutionsareputforward./Everyoneisencouragedtooffersuggestions.5)Carownerscouldreducetheuseofprivatecars.6)Theycouldsharetheircarswiththeirfriendsandworkmates.7)Thegovernmentshoulddosomethingtoimprovethepublictransportsystem.8)Thegovernmentshouldbuildmoregreenlanes.9)Thepublictransportsystemshouldbemoreconvenientforcitizens.10)Peopleshouldbeencouragedtousetheirbicycles.11)Money,timeandenergywillbesaved.12)Themeasuresarefriendlytotheenvironment.请运用我们刚才所提及的名词短语、介词短语、with的复合结构、非谓语短语、并列连词和复合句来整合信息。名词短语整合信息点2、3。运用介词短语充当定语整合信息点2、3;2、3、4;11、12。运用非谓语整合信息7、8、9;5,8,10;2,3;5,6。运用with的复合结构整合信息6、12。运用复合句整合信息。Increasingnumbersofprivatecarscontributetoheavytrafficjamsandseriousairpollution.名词短语整合信息点2、3句。2)Ourstreetsarecrowdedwithtraffic.Therearetoomanyprivatecars.3)Theairisseriouslypolluted.Peoplearemoreawareofthefactthatincreasingnumberofprivatecarshasgivenrisetoseriousproblemsliketrafficjamsandairpollution.（2,3）运用介词短语充当定语整合信息点2、3;2、3、4;11、12。2)Ourstreetsarecrowdedwithtraffic.Therearetoomanyprivatecars.3)Theairisseriouslypolluted.4)Somesolutionsareputforward./Everyoneisencouragedtooffersuggestions.11)Money,timeandenergywillbesaved.12)Themeasuresarefriendlytotheenvironment.Weheldadiscussioninthehopeofcomingupwithsomepracticalsolutionstoendtheshamefulconditionoftrafficjamsandairpollutioninourcity.(2,3,4)Bytakingtheabovemeasures,notonlycanwesavemoney,timeandenergybutalsowecancontributetoacitywithbetterenvironment.（11,12）Thegovernmentshouldimprovethepublictransportsystemtomakeitmoreconvenientforpeople.（7、8、9）运用非谓语整合信息7、8、9;5,8,10;2,3;5,6。Buildingmoregreenlanesisobviouslyagoodwaytoencouragecyclinginsteadofdriving.(5,8,10)Thereisawidespreadconcernoverenvironmentalpollutionandtrafficjamscausedbyprivatecars.(2,3)First,carownerscouldsharetheircarswiththeirfriendsandworkmates,thusreducingtheuseprivatecars.（5,6）Hopefully,withpeoplesharingprivatecarswitheachother,ourcitywilldefinitelybeanenvironment-friendlyplacetolive运用with的复合结构整合信息6、12。Whenitcomestotrafficjamsandairpollution,somepeoplecomeupwiththeideathatcarownerscouldreducetheuseofprivatecarsbysharingcarswiththeirfriendsandworkmates.运用复合句整合信息。定语从句整合2、3句。Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,moreandmorepeoplehavetheirowncars,whichinturnleadstosuchproblemastrafficjamsandairpollution.状语从句整合7、9句Ifthegovernmentcouldimprovethepublictransportsystem,itwouldbemoreconvenientforpeopletotravel.名词性从句整合2、3、6句。Recentlytheissueoftrafficjamsandairpollutioncausedbyprivatecarshasbeenbroughttotheconcernofallpeople,especiallyusstudents,whocameupwithsomepracticalsuggestioninadiscussion(信息点1-4).Inouropinion,citizenscouldreducetheuseofprivatecarsbysharingwiththeirfriendsandworkmates(信息点5-6).Besides,whatreallymattersisthatthegovernmentimprovesthepublictransportsystemtomakeitmoreconvenientforpeopletotravel（信息点7和9）.Meanwhile,thegovernmentshouldhavemoregreenlanesbuilttoencouragecycling（信息点8和10）.Bytakingtheabovemeasures,notonlycanwesavemoney,time,andenergybutalsowecancontributetoacitywithbetterenvironment（信息点11和12）.高考 大纲 专科护士培训大纲语法等级大纲网络小说大纲模版专职安全员生产检查释经讲道讲章大纲 中常用哪些连接词1. 表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容另外，还有：and,andthen,even,whatismore/worse/better,besides,also,moreover,inaddition…2.表示转折关系但是，然而，相反：but,however,yet,instead,ontheotherhand,otherwise,onthecontrary.3.表示因果关系因为，因此，所以:for,so,therefore,asaresult,becauseof,dueto,owingto,thanksto…4.表示解释说明:thatis(tosay),inotherwords,namely,suchas,forexample,forinstance,andsoon…5.表示时间顺序:atfirst,then,later,meanwhile,intheend,finally,sincethen,atlast…6.用于陈述事实实际上:infact,actually,asamatteroffact跟你说实话:totellyouthetruth7.对一个话题进行总结总而言之，总的来说:onthewhole,inshort,allinall,ingeneral,inaword,tosumup,inconclusion… 8.其它常用到的副词personally,moreimportantly,especially,hopefully…