广东省河源市中国教育学会中英文实验学校八年级英语下册 Unit 4 Why don’t you talk to your parents写作训练（无答案）（新版）人教新目标版

PAGEWhydon’tyoutalktoyourparents学习目的：通过本节课的训练，同学们要达到以下目标：1、明确一篇高分作文须具备哪些条件。2、明确完成一篇命题作文的步骤。3、根据Unit4的话题，学会写建议信。模块一：自主学习——学法指导学习内容摘记Step1：五步骤完成书面表达第一步：审清题意。第二步：列出要点。第三步：斟酌词句。第四步：组成文章。第五步：纠错誊抄。请注意：字迹清楚，卷面工整！Step2：“建议信”的基本模式及常用句型：开头：Dear...,AfterIreadyourletter,I'msorrytoknowthat...I'mwritingtosharemyadvicewithyou.Iwouldliketoshare...Don’tworry,IthinkIcanhelpyou.Iknowyouhavetrouble...andIwouldliketo...正文：Firstly...Secondly...Then...Next...Finally...Afterthat...Asfor...Besides...What’smore...Because,sothat,if...You’dbetter...Whydon’tyou...Ithinkyoucould...Maybeyoushould...It’sbetterforyouto...It’simportantforyouto......ishelpful....mayhelpalot.结尾：Ihopethateverythingwillbefine.Ihopethesesuggestionsmayhelpyouout.Ihopeyou’llfindthesesuggestionshelpful.Pleasewritetomeifyouneedmorehelp.Icanhelpyouwhateveryouwant.模块二：交流研讨——例文分析研讨内容摘记作文要求：请同学们针对Amy的烦恼写一封回信，给她提出建议，帮她解决烦恼。字数60-80词。Dearstudents,Iamnothappythesedays.Ihavesomeproblems.Firstly,I'mangrywithmyhusbandandarguewithhimalotbecausehedoesn'thelpwithhousework.Secondly,Ican'tsleepverywellatnight,soIfeeltiredinthedaytimeandImakealotofmistakesinclass.IthinkI'mtoostressedout.WhatshouldIdo?Couldyougivemesomeadvice,mydearstudents?YoursAmy任务：小组讨论评价下列两篇例文，给出分数及理由。Whichonedoyouthinkisbetter?Why?例文1：DearAmy,Letmegaveyousomeadvice.Youshouldtalkwithyourhusbandandtellhimsharehouseworkwithyou.Youshouldn’targuewithhim.Youshoulddosomesportsorlistensomemusictorelaxyourself.YoursSam例文2DearAmy,Don’tworryaboutyourproblem.Here’ssomeadvicetosharewithyou.Firstly,you’dbetternotarguewithyourhusband.Instead,youshouldtalkwithhimnicelyandlethimknowthatyou’reverytiredofthehouseworkandyouneedhishelp.Asforyoursleeping,maybelisteningtosomerelaxingmusicwillhelpalot.What’smore,readingordoingsomesportsisalsoagoodwaytorelax.Ihopeeverythingwillbefinesoon.YoursAlice你认为例文1，例文2各可以打几分，哪个例文写得较好，为什么？_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________模块三：巩固内化——写作训练姓名学习任务摘记作文题目：假如你是Mary的好友Jane，Mary来信向你诉说了她的苦恼，请你针对信中内容给Mary提出至少两条建议，帮助她解决烦恼。要求：1、所提建议合理可行，包含所有要点。2、语言通顺，上下文连贯，字迹工整，字数60-80词。DearJane,Helpme!IthinkI’mcrazy!LastweekIfoughtwithmydeskmate,becauseIreallycan’tstandthathealwaysborrowsmythingswithoutasking.AndnextSaturdayhe’llholdabirthdayparty.Everyonewasinvitedexceptme.Ifeelreallysadaboutthat.Idon’twanttolosethisfriend.ButIdon’tknowwhattodo.Ihopetohearyouradviceassoonaspossible.YoursMary正文：DearMary，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursJanes