第三部分第一阶段第三讲第六课时

第三部分写作技能培优第六课时　如何写好定语一、前置定语与后置定语英语中定语的位置与汉语中定语的位置有很大不同，这往往导致学生写出汉语式英语句子，成为失分的主要因素之一。1．前置定语名词、数词、代词、形容词、单个的分词作定语，一般用在主语或宾语前。Chinaisadevelopingcountry.中国是发展中国家。2．后置定语短语、句子作定语时一般放于中心词的后面；另外，形容词修饰不定代词、副词作定语时也常常放于中心词的后面。Asweallknow，Chinaisacountrybelongingtothethirdworld.众所周知，中国是一个属于第三世界的国家。Themenherearealwaysbusyworkingonthefarm.这里的男人总是忙于在田间干活。[温馨提示]　在使用定语时，常出现双谓语错误。ProfessorLicomesfromBeijingUniversitywillgiveusalecturetomorrow.(双谓语错误)→ProfessorLifromBeijingUniversitywillgiveusalecturetomorrow.→ProfessorLiwhois/comesfromBeijingUniversitywillgiveusalecturetomorrow.二、从句作定语——定语从句运用定语从句必须注意两点：由关系代词或关系副词所替代的成分在从句中不能重复出现；定语从句与简单句一样，也要求句子结构既正确又完整。1.定语从句的结构将下列每组句子连成一个含定语从句的复合句，并分析定语从句中的成分。(2012·高考江西卷·书面 表 关于同志近三年现实表现材料材料类招标技术评分表图表与交易pdf视力表打印pdf用图表说话 pdf 达)Asweallknow，booksarethesourceofknowledge.正如我们所知，书籍是知识的源泉。(2013·高考天津卷·书面表达)IhavebeenclassmonitorsinceIcametoourcollege，whichbroughtmeastrongabilityoforganization.自从上大学我一直担任班长，这使我有很强的组织能力。常用句型一：由as引导的非限制性定语从句常用句型二：由which引导的非限制性定语从句句式升级：恰当地使用定语从句可以提升作文的档次。①Withoutwater，mancan’tlive，soitisofgreatimportance.→Water，withoutwhichmancan’tlive，isofgreatimportance.(句子“瘦身”。使用定语从句后句子更简练)②Hemadebrilliantremarksonthefamousfilm.→Theremarksthathemadeonthefamousfilmwasbrilliant.③Hethoughtofanimportantwaytodealwithit.→Thewayhethoughtoftodealwithitwasofgreatimportance.(使用定语从句突出了brilliant和importance)[练一练]把下列每组题中的两个简单句合并为一个含有定语从句的复合句①(2012·高考辽宁卷·书面表达)Eventhestudentshaveturnedouttobeinterestedinthesubject.ThestudentsusedtodislikeEnglish.→________________________________________________________________________________________________________EventhestudentswhousedtodislikeEnglishhaveturnedouttobeinterestedinthesubject.②(2012·高考江苏卷·书面表达)Toavoidsuchconflicts，weshouldbekindtooneanother.Itisessentialtoenjoyaharmoniouslife.→________________________________________________________________________________________________________③Theyplantedthetrees.Thetreesdidn’tneedmuchwater.→___________________________________________________Toavoidsuchconflicts，weshouldbekindtooneanother，whichisessentialtoenjoyaharmoniouslife.Theyplantedthetreesthat/whichdidn’tneedmuchwater.④TheywillflytoBeijing.TheyplantostayinBeijingfortwoorthreedays.→________________________________________________________________________________________________________⑤Theysenttheelderlysomefruits，cleanedtheroomsandhadagoodchatwiththem.Theelderlyalwaysfeellonely.→________________________________________________________________________________________________________TheywillflytoBeijing，wheretheyplantostayfortwoorthreedays.Theysenttheelderlywhoalwaysfeellonelysomefruits，cleanedtheroomsandhadagoodchatwiththem.Ⅰ.基础巩固(根据汉语意思完成句子)1．(2013·高考新课标全国卷Ⅰ·书面表达)我写信告诉你我叔叔李明将去你城市开会,我请他给你带去你想要的中国油画。I’mwritingtotellyouthatmyuncleLiMingisgoingtoyourcityforaconference，andI’veaskedhimtobringyoutheChinesepainting________________before.2．(2013·高考新课标全国卷Ⅱ·书面表达)而且，如果你需要进一步消息，一定让我知道。Also，doletmeknowifyouneed____________________.you’veaskedforfurtherinformation3．来中国的最好时间是春天或秋天。Thebesttime________________isspringorautumn.4．我们的班长正与一位女作家交谈。Ourmonitoristalkingto_______________.5．(2012·高考新课标全国卷·书面表达)我看到过你在网上张贴的夏令营通知，我对此很感兴趣。Ireadtheannouncementofthesummercamp_______________________________andIaminterestedinit.6．你们已经取得了很大的进步，这使老师非常高兴。Youhavemadegreatprogress，_____________________________________________________________.tocometoChinaawomanwriterthatyouhavepostedontheInternetwhichmakesyourteacherveryhappyⅡ.能力提升1．按要求翻译句子(1)你们是一支全球闻名的乐队。(形容词、介词短语作定语)_____________________________________________________(2)我写这份电子邮件想向您征求一些如何成立乐队的建议。(介词短语作定语)_________________________________________________________________________________________________________Youareawell­knownmusicbandallovertheworld.IamwritingthisE­mailtoaskyouforsomeadviceonhowtoformaband.(3)我们对流行音乐和现代舞蹈感兴趣。(形容词作定语)_____________________________________________________(4)我们怎样才能得到更多的表演机会？(不定式作定语)_____________________________________________________(5)如果您能够为我们的乐队想出一个名字,我们将不胜感激。(介词短语作定语)__________________________________________________________________________________________________________Weareallinterestedinpopmusicandmoderndance.Howcanwegetmorechancestoperform?We’dappreciateitifyouwouldcomeupwithanameforourband.2．选用以上句子给凤凰传奇(PhoenixLegend)发一封电子邮件以寻求帮助_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion：DearPhoenixLegend，IamLiHua.Sinceyouareawell­knownmusicbandallovertheworld，IamwritingthisE­mailtoaskyouforsomeadviceonhowtoformaband.Weareallinterestedinpopmusicandmoderndance.Andisitenoughtopracticeonlyatweekends？What’smore，howcanwegetmorechancestoperform？We’dappreciateitifyouwouldcomeupwithanameforourband.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes!Yourssincerely，LiHua本部分内容讲解结束按ESC键退出全屏播放