【doc】儿科医学论文英文摘要的撰写（八）

【doc】儿科医学论文英文摘要的撰写（八） 儿科医学论文英文摘要的撰写(八) 572中华儿科杂志2006年8月第4-4卷第8期ChinJPediatr,August2006,Vol44,No.8 5AirdWC.Sepsisandcoagulation.CritCareClin,2005,21:4l7-431. 6WarrenBL,EidA,SingerP,eta1.Caringforthecriticallyillpatients.High— doseantithrombin?inseveresepsis:arandomizedcontrolledtria1. JAMA.2001.286:1869—1878. 7AbrahamE,ReinhartK,OpalS,eta1.Efficacyandsafetyoftifacogin(recombinanttissuefac torpathwayinhibitor)inseveresepsis:arandomized controlledtria1.JAMA.2oo3.29o:238-247. 8vanderWouwerM,CoilenD,ConwayEM.Thrombomodulin—proteinC— EPCRsystem:integratedtoregulatecoagulationandinflammation. ArterisclerThrombVascBiol,2004,24:1374—1383. 9姚咏明,盛志勇.重视对脓毒症本质的探讨.中华急诊医学杂志,2005,14:185—186. 10OBrienLA,GuptaA,GrinneilBW.ActivatedproteinCandsepsis.FrontBiosci,2006,11:6 764598. 11ParkerMM.HazelzetJA,CarciiloJA.Pediatricconsiderations.CritCareMed,2004,32:$ 591一s594. (收稿日期:2006-04-30) (本文编辑:李贵存) 儿科医学论文英文摘要的撰写(八) 照日格图 3.结果 在这一段介绍最主要的研究结果.时态用一般过去时. 一 般不主张用图表,可以介绍一些关键的数据.国内外不少 杂志都主张结果中要包括一些统计学处理的结果(具有可 信区间的有关数据或P值等).描述结果时,为简练起见, 应当避免以下这些语句:"Theresultsofourstudyshowed that","Itwasshownthat","Thepresentstudyshowedthat"等 等.因为前面有个小标题Results,所以可以直接开始描述结 果.例如:ResultsOf241infantswhowereevMuatedfor gastrointestinalsigns,11hadileusorbenignpneumatosis intestinaliswithpersistentlynormalCRP;gastrointestinal manifestationsresolvedwithin48hours.antibioticswere discontinuedin<48hours.andfeedingswererestartedearly withoutcomplications.Fifty—fiveinfantshadNECstages?and ?:allhadabnormalCRPregardlessoftheirbloodculture results.Ininfantswithstage?NEC.CRPretumedtonormal atameanof9daysexceptinthosewhodevelopedcomplications suchasstrictureorabscessformation.(Pediatrics.2005.116: 1064)这段文字简明扼要地介绍了研究和观察的结果,以文 字描述为主.又如:ResultsThemortalityratewas30.8 percentintheplacebogroupand24.7percentinthedrotrecogin alfaactivatedgroup.Onthebasisoftheprospectivelydefined primaryanalysis,treatmentwithdrotrecoginalfaactivatedwas associatedwithareductionintherelativeriskofdeathofl9.4 percent(95percentconfidenceinterval,6.6to30.5)andan absolutereductionintheriskofdeathof6.1percent(P= 0.005).Theincidenceofseriousbleedingwashigherinthe drotrecoginalfaactivatedgroupthanintheplacebogroup(3.5 percentvs.2.0percent,P=0.06).(NEnglJMed,2001, 344:699)这段文字清楚,简捷,列出了各组的病死率和P值, 作者单位:100009北京,中国医学论坛报 . 继续教育. 并没有罗列很多数字. 描述结果时最常遇到的问题是比较的句子.在组织句 子时,应力求简练,避免重复,避免罗列太多的数字.例如: ThemeanALTofgrouppatientswassignificantlyhigherthan thatofgroups2and3patients(P<n01).前面这一句已十 分清晰地表达了比较的 内容 财务内部控制制度的内容财务内部控制制度的内容人员招聘与配置的内容项目成本控制的内容消防安全演练内容 ,但如果用下面这个句子,则显 得更简练:ThemeanAIJTlevelwashigheringroupthanthat ingroups2and3(P<n01).请注意,than后面要有与比较 项目相应的代词,that(单数)或those(复数).但比较的句 子也可以不用带有than的句子,只用比较级,而后面用as comparedto….例如上面的句子:ThemeanAIJTofgroup patientswassignificantlyhigherascomparedtogroup2and3 (P<n01).这样的句子可在用了若干个带than的比较句 子之后使用,换一个方式,免得太单调,重复. 国内作者常在介绍各组比较项目的数据之后,还加如下 一 句话:"Therewerestatisticallysignificantdifferencesbetween groupandgroup2(P<n05)".这往往没有必要,仅需把 (P<n05)附上即可,多数读者都能理解,差异是有显着性的. 下面这个例子的问题较多:Results:?Thirty—three (34.7%)0f95patientsinthecasegroupand2(0%)of0 healthychildreninthecontrolgroupwerepositivefortheviral DNA(P<n01).?Eleven(22.0%)of50patientsinthe casegroupandnoneofthechildreninthecontrolgroupwere positiveforIgMantibodytothevirus(P<n01).?The positiveratesofviralDNAandIgMantibodyinpatientswiththe 5diseasesmentionedabovewere25%and20%,37.2%and 20%,40%and20%,42.9%and28.6%,37.%and 25.0%.respectivel~Therewasnodifferenceinthepositive ratesoftheviralDNAandIgMantibodyamongtheabovefive typesofchildrenscommondiseases(P>n05).(未完待续) (收稿日期:2006-05-20) (本文编辑:李贵存)