关于大学英语作文修改
There must be a classical brand of mobile phone remained in most of our minds-Nokia ,which is the same with someone imprinting in our mind. As for me, my boyfriend is exactly that classical phone.
Considering my boy friend and Nokia phone, what comes in my mind is they are both practical. Nokia mobile phone has been well-known for this major character, especially when it comes to its ruggedness. If someone accidently fell off his or her mobile phone from a high place, it’s likely turning out to be a misfortune, however, if it’s a Nokia mobile phone, on the contrary, he or she probably won’t be bothered to buy a new one. My previous Nokia phone wonderfully proved it right. Further more , the ruggedness lies in many other ways. Such as it can accompany you many years, longer than other brands; it was cost-effective which distinguished it as a top brand previous years. Though in today’s digital market, with smart mobile phones rushing in rapidly from day to day, symbian OS indeed can’t compete with other systems ,especially android OS and apple OS, we can’t deny the convenience Nokia did bring us.
Compared with Nokia phone, my boyfriend is more like a never out Nokia phone . He’s not the type of person who is tall, rich and handsome, though in my sight he’s the most handsome one, an affordable man to describe him would be more accurate. He’s functional. Cooking, doing laundry, cleaning and such housework are not beyond him. In addition, he has good commands of drawing, dancing and calligraphy. Those are just additions decorating him and fascinated me at the very beginning. What’s more important was when we got along, I realized him more. His diligence and preciseness reflected in study, which I’m supposed to learn from. However, he’s not a stubborn bookworm. He’s always occupied amusing others around him and humor added to his glamour. So no wonder I’m always laughing. Like a Nokia phone, his loyalty to me doesn’t need to be questioned and accompany me to go wherever I go and to do whatever I do.
Though now the phone at my hand isn’t a Nokia phone, I still regard it as the most classical phone at the bottom of my heart. However, my boyfriend will be here, accompanying me,caring for me and loving me ,still.
Comments:
A very interesting comparison between Nokia phones and your B. F.
It shows keen observation and insight, though your language occasionally fails to do you full justice.
Score: 88
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