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The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Sample Answer
第一段The graph shows the percentage of the UK population over the age of four years old
that listened to the radio and watched television throughout the day in 1992. 第二段The number of TV audiences increased rapidly from 6:00 a.m. to 8:00 a.m. At 8:00, it
reached its first highest point at nearly 30%. Then, for the rest of the day, the number
dropped gradually, with a slight increase around 3:00 p.m. After that, the number of
TV audiences rose sharply until 8:00 p.m., peaking nearly at 50%. From then, the
number fell rapidly until around 4:00 a.m. next morning.
第三段Unlike television, there was a slight increase in the number of radio audiences from
about 3% at 6:00 a.m. to about 7% at 8:00 a.m. From 8:00 a.m. to about 10:00 a.m., it
remained almost stable. From then on, the number dropped slight at first and then
rose steadily till about 1:00 p.m., peaking at 16%. Then it dropped gradually until
4:00 a.m. next morning.
第四段Around 1:00 p.m., the number of people listening to the radio was nearly equal to
that of people watching TV. However, for the rest of the day, much more UK
audiences chose to watch TV rather than listen to the radio. As a whole, throughout
the whole day, the average number of TV audiences was larger than that of the radio. 范文2
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Task 1
主要是表鸭鸭鸭
For example
The diagram below shows the distribution of men of womenin key profession in Malaysia in 1970.
Para 1 :鸭鸭一段,一般写两句:第一句先改写目鸭鸭;第二句写的体。鸭鸭鸭鸭鸭鸭鸭
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s”。
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第一段第一句如下
“The diagram indicates the distribution of males and females in 11 key professions in Malaysia in
the year of 1970.”
鸭鸭鸭鸭鸭鸭鸭鸭鸭鸭鸭鸭“第二句,是体。可以使用套句It is apparent to note,from the diagram,that...”.or.“From the diagram,we have the following general trend that ...”
第一段第二句如下
“From the diagram,we have the following general trend that males dominated the great majority
of the 11 key professions with the expectation of nurses and midwives”
鸭鸭鸭鸭鸭第二段,使用,如:first of all,to start with,etc 另外需住使用鸭鸭鸭鸭“in terms of”
第二段
“First of all,in terms of males domination in key professions in Malaysia in 1970,the percentage
of over 90% was related to law,accounting,scicence and economy professions,as opposed to
females less than 10%.”
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