最新四级一句话搞定9分作文笔记

最新四级一句话搞定9分作文笔记 一句话搞定9分作文 一、必备词句 本节听讲的“必备词句”是指为了写?第一节所述的“一句话搞定9分作文”准备的问汇和句型结构: —)必备词汇及词组: sharp 急剧的，猛烈的 witness 目击，看见，经历 steady 稳定的，持续的 conduct 进行，执行 decade 10年期 slight 轻微的，微不足道的 survey 调查 a proportion of 比例 according to 根据 carry out 执行，进行 二、必备句型: 1((According to a recent survey conducted by CCTV,China Daily)，the past decade,5 years has witnessed a sharp,steady increase,decrease in((((from((()to((( 例1((2008(6)According to a recent survey conducted by CCTV，the past decade has witnessed a sharp increase in the kind of recreational activities nowadays people take up to an astonishing number of 2，490，ranging from horse riding to Kara OK，from Internet games to skating. 根据最近CCIV所做的调查，过去几十年见证了娱乐活动种类的急速增长，其种类达到惊人的2490种，从骑马到卡拉OK，从电脑游戏到滑板，应有尽有。 例2((2006(12)The past two decades has witnessed a steady decrease in the number of people watching the Spring Festival Gala from 943，500，000 to 728，500，000( 过去二十年见证了观看春节联欢晚会人数的持续减少，从9亿4350万减少到7亿2850万。 例3((2005(6)The following semester witnessed a sharp rise in my score of English examination from 68 to]35( 接下来的学期我的英语考试分数急剧上升，从68分升至135分。 the hours students spend on computer per week from 3(6 to 12(例4((2002(6)The past 12 years has witnessed a sharp increase in 在过去12年里，学生花在电脑的时间急剧增加，从每周3(6小时增加到每周12小时。 2((Take(((as an example)，the past 5 years has witnessed a sharp,steady increase,decrease in((((from((()to((( 例1((2007(12)Take Beijing Normal University as an example，the past 5 years has witnessed a sharp increase in the number of selective courses from 4 to 129( 以北京师范大学为例，过去的五年巾，选修课的数量急剧增长，从4种增长到129种。 例2((2006(1)Take Qinghua University as an example，the past 5 years has witnessed a steady number of 4，360，000 people visiting the famous university every year(以清华大学为例，过去的五年里，每年多达436万人观光该校。 例3((2003(1)Take food safety as an example，the past five years has witnessed an average number of 4，320 factories producing contaminated food every year( 以食品安全为例，过去五年里每年平均有4320家厂厂生产受污染的食物。 例4((2000(1)The past decade has witnessed a steady rise in average university tuition and fees from RMB 500 to RMB 3，450( 过去十年里，大学平均学费和杂费稳步上升，由500元上升到3450元。 例5((1996(6)Take China's remote areas as an example，the past 5 years has witnessed an average number of 37，500，000 people suffering from shortage of water everyday(以中国的边远地区为例，过去5年里，平均每天有3750万人遭受缺水的痛苦。 3(According to a recent survey conducted by CCTV,China Daily,School Union，a high,slight proportion of(((as high as 86(5,8(37 percent((( 例1((2007(6)According to a recent survey conducted by School Union，a high proportion of students as high as 86.5 percent admit that they practice and improve their English in our activities in a relaxed and comfortable way(根据最近学生会进行的一项调查显示，高达86(5,的学生承认，参加社团活动能让他们以轻松愉悦的方式练习并提高英语。 例2((2001(1)According to a recent survey conducted by China Daily，a high proportion of interviewers as high as 86(5 percent make the decision by interviewees’ behavior of the first 30 seconds(根据最近《中国日报》的一项调查显示，高达86(5,的面试官会根据被面试人员前30秒的行为举止做出判断。 例3((2000(6)According to a recent survey conducted by China Daily，a slight proportion of college graduates as low as 8(37 percent actually use spoken English in their daily work(根据最近《小国日报》所做的调查，仅仅有8(37,的大学毕业生在日常工作中使用到英语口语。 例4((1999(6)According to a recent survey conducted by CCTV, a high proportion of scientists as high as 86(5 percent admit that reading extensively plays a key role in their comprehensive development and later on making remarkable achievements(根据最近CCTV所做的调查，高达86(5,的科学家都承认:博览群书对他们日后的全面发展和取得非凡 成就起了关键作用。 CCTV, a high proportion of colleges as high as 97(5 percent 例5((1997(6)According to a recent survey conducted byencourage students to get in touch with the world outside the campus(根据最近CCTV的调查显示，高达97(5,的高校鼓励学生接触校园外的世界。 作文趋势 1(对应用文的考查增多; 2(对社会热点话题和校园热点话题的考查趋向稳定; 3(评分越来越注重整体感觉而不是具体语言错误的多少; 4(具体评分不提倡使用大词、超纲词，而是鼓励使用短语和常见词的引申义; 5(鼓励使用句内和句间连贯手段，鼓励英语文章的线性思维而非汉语文章的螺旋思维。 一、积极准备应用文功能词汇 应用文类别 功能词句 感谢信 Extend my sincere thanks to(((;I am sincerely,extremely grateful to you for((; It is generous,nice, kind,good of you to((( 道歉信 Express my deepest apology to((;1 would like to apologize for the inconvenience l have caused you(((;I hope you will accept my sincere apologies;I must apologize for((( 申请信 I’d like to apply for….;I am particularly interested in.....;I am writing to you in the hope that l may obtain an opportunity to((( We would appreciate some information from you about...; I'd like to 咨询信 know if.../have some information about...; I wonder / am wondering if you could / would let me know... It was delightful news for me to learn of...; Warm / Sincere / Hearty congratulations; 祝贺信 I was delighted to learn of your success/achievement in...; Congratulations and all best wishes for an even more prosperous future ! I am writing to complain about ...; I must protest against.../complain about...; I 投诉信 was extremely disappointed with ... I am applying for / writing to apply for the vacancy / job / post / position of...; I 求职信 would like to apply for / to be considered as a candidate for the job / post / position advertised in... It is my pleasure / privilege to recommend to you...; I have no hesitation in 推荐信 recommending sb. to you...; I recommend sb. without reservation... I'm very glad to have the chance to...; I sincerely hope you will give me a chance...; 演讲 It is a great honor and pleasure to... There will be... in...; It has been decided by ... that ...; Welcome to ... 通知/告示 I am writing to...; I’m writing in reply to... 应用文通用 (一)社会热点话题 话题 话题相关词及短语 run the red light闯红灯 rush hour交通高峰期 Traffic jam subway地铁 traffic jam交通堵塞 pavement;sidewalk人行道 drive after drinking酒后驾驶 Zhengzhou astronaut航天员 VII spacecraft launch a satellite发射卫星 spacecraft宁宙飞船 space exploration宇宙探索 to log on the Internet 上网 website网站 Internet virtual reality虚拟现实 web addiction沉溺于网络 surf the Internet网—上冲浪 online shopping网上购物 online education网络教育 tourism Exploit tourist resources开发旅游资源 Fast developed tourism快速发展的旅游业 guide book旅游指南 home (overseas) journey国内(外)旅游 natural scenery自然风光 places of interest名胜古迹 environmental conserve natural habitats保护生存环境 protection environmental awareness环保意识 environmental degradation环境恶化 global warming全球变暖 white pollution白色污染 disruption of ecological balance生态失衡 food quality health-care food保健食品 dairy products牛奶产品 packaged foods包装食品 credit credit crisis信用危机 improve people's sense of credit提高人们的信用意识 establish strict laws建立严格的法律 donation provide relief to disaster-stricken areas (people)支援灾区(灾民)，救灾 carry forward the fine traditions发扬优良传统 earthquake地震 (二)校园生活话题 话题 话题相关词及短语 protect privacy保护隐私 living on or individual development个人发展 out of campus good academic atmosphere良好的学术氛围 a harmonious dormitory environment和谐的宿舍生活 go abroad for further study出国深造 higher education高等教育 study abroad obtain the first grade scholarship获一等奖学金 academic activities学术活动 work-study program勤工俭学 the craze for graduate school考研热 take part in the entrance exams for postgraduate schools考研 postgraduate guidelines for education教育方针 education background学历 diploma毕业证书 bachelor's (master's，doctor's)degree学士(硕士、博士)学位 improve the sense of applying knowledge to the solution to practical problem提高将理论应用到 social practice 实践的意识 have a better understanding of the specific aim of their study对学习的目标有很好的理解 三、积极使用一些高分词汇和短语 我们在表达一些熟悉的意义时，经常习惯于使用一些大家都能想到的表达，其实我们可以用一些意义相近但是用词 或结构出色的词或短语来表达，这样文章才会有新意、有吸引力。 一)高分词汇 1(increasingly逐渐地，越来越……(优于“more and more”) 2(thought-provoking发人深省的(比用deep好) 3(be inclined to 倾向于，往往(比用always出彩) 4(prevalent流行的(优于popular) 5(witness目击(优于see) 6(convey传达，告诉(比用tell精彩) 7(overjoyed狂喜的(比用glad好) 8(triumphant胜利的，成功的(强于successful) 9(abundant丰富的，充裕的(优于enough和much) 10(apparent显然的(比用obvious好) 11(vigorously巨大地，有力地(强于greatly) 12(advantageous有利的(优于good等表达) 13(rocket急速上升(比用increase出彩) 14(deteriorate恶化(比用worsen精彩) 15(trigger引发(优于cause) (二)高分短语 1(a boom迅速增长(比用rapid development出彩) 2(a great variety of各种各样的(优于all kinds of) 3(alleviate the pressure缓解压力(alleviate比reduce准确) 4(Be + adj(= be of great,vital + n( 如:be of great importance(优于be important) 5(be most happy to非常乐意(明显强于通常表达的would like to;be glad to;be willing to等) 6(make remarkable achievements取得非凡的成就(remarkable 优于我们习惯用的great) 7(strike a balance between…and…在……和……之间保持平衡(strike优于keep) 8(Superior to优于(优于better than) 9(take advantage of利用(比用use好) 10(be in a dilemma[ di'lem?, ,dai- ]左右为难(比用don't know how to make the choice更加言简意赅) 11(be in unfavorable situations处于困境中(比用be in trouble 更精彩) try one's best to 出彩) 12(commit oneself to sth.致力于，尽努力去做(比用 13(be competent in有能力，能胜任(优于be good at) 14(be confronted with面临，面对(强于be faced with) 15(meet one's Waterloo 惨败，失败(强于be defeated) 四、积极使用连接词 连接问在保持文章的连贯性方面发挥着重要作用，下面就简单地列举些常见的连接词，以供构建框架时使用。 1(表示举例的连接词 for example，for instance，such as，take(((for example，a case in point， take(((as an illustration， to illustrate， namely， in other words， that is，especially，in particular 2(表示列举的连接词 first(1y)，second(1y)，third(1y);to begin with;for one thing， for another;on the one hand，On the other hand;in the first place，in the second place 3(表示递进关系的连接词 moreover，furthermore，what's more，in addition，besides，also， next，and 4(表示因果关系的连接词 so，consequently，as a result，since，therefore，accordingly，be? cause(of)，thanks to，due to，owing to，for this reason，hence，thus， on account of， on that account， on the grounds of， therefore 5(表示总结和结论的连接词 in general，generally speaking，in fact，in effect，at last，finally， in a word，in conclusion， in short， in brief， on the whole， all in all， in summary， as a general whole， to sum up， to conclude， in my opinion，as for as l am concerned， in my view，in my viewpoint，as for me， to some extent， in a way 6(表示条件的连接词 if，provided，provided that，granted that，unless，of course，to be sure 7(表示让步的连接词 although，even though，even if，however，nevertheless，yet，in spite of，despite，admittedly，after a11，still 8(表示对比转折关系的连接词 but，however，otherwise，in contrast，by contrast，on the contrary，similarly，likewise，like，conversely，rather than， instead，on the other hand，equally(important)，nevertheless，yet，unlike，still，in the same way，compared with，compared to 9(表示时间顺序的连接词 at the present time，at the same time，presently，soon，beforehand，in due time，at this point，until now，later，meanwhile，once，afterwards，at times，sooner or later，up to the present time，then，during，eventually，at last，finally，currently 10(表示空间顺序的连接词 nearby，opposite to，to the left,right，in the middle，adjacent [ ?'d?eis?nt ] 毗连的to，next to，across，alongside，in front of，at this point 11(表示强调的连接词 anyway，especially，even worse，particularly，obviously，above a11， no doubt， indeed, needless to say, to be sure, surely, more often than not，unquestionably，in fact，as a matter of fact，actually，most important of a11，after a11 五、积极使用程度副词和评论性副词 程度副词主要用来增强语气，强调客观事实;而评论性副词则起到客观评述的作用。它们都能使文章更为简洁、地道。 (一)程度副词 1(If l am fully prepared，I’1l apply for the test without hesitation( 2. This is an extremely difficult task. 3. Some elder people enjoy Beijing opera immensely. 4. Although he's over eighty, his mind is still remarkably alert. 5. Your composition has improved tremendously. 6. Virtually all the members were in agreement with the proposal. 7. She has not been sufficiently stretched at school this term. 8. We utterly failed to convince them. 9. He immersed himself totally in his work. 10. His attitudes were shaped partly by early experiences. 11. Most people thoroughly disapprove of that opinion. 二、评论性副词 1. Above all, do not be proud to ask for advice. 2. They unfortunately turned out to be the victims of the event. 3. Undoubtedly, more hasty, less speed. 4. Without exception, everything needs a procession. 5. There is no denying that diligence will lead to success. 6. At present, piracy is becoming unprecedentedly visible in China. 7. The youngsters optimistically believe they will have a promising future. 打动阅卷老师， 写正确，写出彩 信息醒目，数据，大写字母，特殊的标点符号，不要写感叹号， 吸烟有害健康:smoking is harmful to people’health smoking is of great harm to people’s health. The number of people who died of smoking every year increased from..to..between..and.. 数据:2000000—2，385，000 增长increased sharply 20105736 5736592590 一句话搞定9分模版 Sharply,which equals to… According to a recent survey conducted by CCTV,WTO 一句话技巧的使用场合 现象后，观点后，尤其是数据 The past 6 months(所以后面不用BETWEEN AND) has witnessed a sharp increase in the number of people who visited museums for free from..to.. 信息醒目，表达出彩 True happiness comes from helping others. In my point of view, the happiest individuals in the world are those who are volunteers like Lei Feng. They help others without any expectation of substantial returns. They obtain true happiest from their unselfish acts of making others happy. They are in some sense the angels to people who are in need of help. The spirit of volunteering is of much significance to build a warm society. Some people nowadays tend to earn much money for themselves or their family. To an extent, they are not truly happy but being selfish. Their happiness is reduced to individualistic happiness. In order to have a better community, more volunteers who are willing to help others are needed. In conclusion, contributing first by helping others is the key to get true happiness. Only in that way can all the people, including the volunteers themselves and the people receiving their help, feel happy. With everyone embracing the spirit of volunteering, out country will be a warmer and happier home for all of us. Maintain、consider、think、urge、note、suggest、believe、approve、propose、content、assert、show、reveal、display、prove、acknowledge、reveal、indicate、demonstrate、affirm、hold、discuss put forward、come up with、point out、take the attitude that、harbor the idea that、view on、stake out、probe into、I agree with your view: I favor your view、I am in favor of your view、I support your view、I am supportive of your view、sad to say、In my opinion: on my personal level、from my perspective、in my view、my sense is、in my eyes、in my judgment ? 判断性副词:indeed， surely， obviously， frankly，naturally，luckily (或happily) for sb.，strangely，honestly，briefly, certainly，probably，personally ? 形容词性短语:strange to say， needless to say， most important of all，worse still ? 介词短语:as a matter of fact, in fact，as to me, as for me, above all /first of all，by the way, for instance(或example，in a few words(或in sum，in short)，in other words，in a sense，in general，in my view，in his opinion(judgment)，in conclusion，in summary，in fact，in the first place， in addition，of course，to our knowledge，to my joy(delight，satisfaction)，to their surprise(astonishment，amazement)，to her regret (disappointment). 分词短语:strictly speaking，generally speaking，judging from„,generally considering? ? 不定式短语:to be sure，to sum up，to be frank，to tell(you )the truth ? 插入句:I am sure， I believe，I wonder，you know， you see， that is， it seems， as I see it， what is important (serious)，I’m afraid，it is said e.g. 1 Judging from the evidence offered, we may draw the conclusion that silence is not always gold. 2 What is more important, information superhighways can carry great amounts of information around the country quickly and cheaply. 文章中起承转合的衔接词 表时间: when, after, before, until, later, afterwards, soon, lately, recently, since, from then on, eventually, in the meantime, then, suddenly, at the same time, next, early this morning/year/century, after an interval, now, after, presently, later, afterward, somewhat later, finally, at last, all of a sudden, 表陈述事实: in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth 表换一种方式表达: in other words, that is to say, to put it another way, 表并列补充: what is more, besides, also, as well, moreover, furthermore, in addition, 表转折对比: but, however, yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary, although, in contrast to, despite, in spite of, whereas, nevertheless, not only„but also, years ago„today, the former„the latter, the first„whereas the second, once„now, on the one hand„on the other hand, 表特定的顺序: above all, first of all, firstly, first, secondly, the , next, finally, in the end, at last, 表总结: on the whole, in short, all in all, general, in a word, in conclusion, in closing, in summary. 表因果: since, as, because (of), for, so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that, lead to, owing to, thanks to, be responsible for 表条件: if, on the condition (that), as long as, unless, or else, 表举例: for instance, for example, like, such as, including, to illustrate 表比较: in comparison with, in contrast to, on the contrary, in contrast, while, in the same way 用于文章开头的句子: 1 When it comes to …, people’s opinions differ. 2 There is a public discussion today about …… 3 There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of… 4 Currently, …turns increasingly serious/ widespread, which has been brought into focus/ aroused great concern. 用于阐释原因的句子: 1 Some reasons are responsible for this. 2 There are lots of reasons for the dramatic growth/decrease.First, … Second, … Finally, … 3 The phenomenon/change in … mainly results from the fact that … 4 One may regard the phenomenon as a sign of … 用于文章结尾的句子: 1 it is high time that we took measures to … 2 judging from all evidence offered, we may safely come to the conclusion that … 3 all the evidence points to the fact that … 4 It is essential that effective measures should be taken to control this situation. 1) 起承转合类 表时间关系的: when, after, before, until, later, afterwards, soon, lately, recently, since, from then on, eventually, in the meantime, then, suddenly, at the same time, next, early this morning/year/century, after an interval, now, after, presently, later, afterward, somewhat later, finally, at last, all of a sudden 表陈述事实: in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth 表换一种方式表达: in other words, that is to say, to put it another way 表并列补充关系的: what is more, besides, also, as well, moreover, furthermore, in addition 表转折对比关系的: but, however, yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary, although, in contrast to, despite, in spite of, whereas, nevertheless, not only„but also, years ago„today, the former„the latter, the first„whereas the second, once„now, on the one hand„on the other hand 表特定的顺序关系: above all, first of all, firstly, first, secondly, the , next, finally, in the end, at last 表总结: on the whole, in short, all in all, general, in a word, in conclusion, in closing, in summary. 2) 逻辑关系 表因果关系的: since, as, because (of), for, so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that, lead to, owing to, thanks to, be responsible for 表条件关系的: if, on the condition (that), as long as, unless, or else 表进行举例 说明 关于失联党员情况说明岗位说明总经理岗位说明书会计岗位说明书行政主管岗位说明书 : for instance, for example, like, such as, including, to illustrate 比较关系:in comparison with, in contrast to, on the contrary, in contrast, while, in the same way 选择关系:or, rather than, instead of, whether„ or, neither„ nor, either„ or