2013高三英语二轮专题复习指导：书面表达— 辩论对比话题指导（教师版）（ 2013高考）

2013高三英语二轮专题复习指导：书面表达—辩论对比话题指导（教师版）（2013高考）2013高三英语二轮专题复习指导:书面表达—辩论对比话题指导(教师版)3(参考词汇:巩固strengthen:自学selfstudyIsTrainingClassOrFamilyTeacherNecessary?Moreandmore;middleschoolstudentsaregoingtoallkindsoftrainingclassesorhavingfamilyteachersonweekends.Therearetwodifferentviewpointsaboutit…【写作思路】本文为辩论式议论文。其格式和结构为:第一段，综述辩论的内容(本文已经给出);第二段，表述正方观点及理由;第三段，表述反方观点及理由;第四段，陈述自己的观点。【写作指导】IsTrainingClassOrFamilyTeacherNecessary?Moreandmore;middleschoolstudentsaregoingtoallkindsoftrainingclassesorhavingfamilyteachersonweekends.Therearetwodifferentviewpointsaboutit.表示“一些……，一些……”，用some…，others来表示。?动词原形不可以作表语，要用tomake或making。?if应改为whether，因为if不可引导主语从句。?beweakat中的at不可以省去，因为后面有宾语acertainsubject。【优秀范文】IsTrainingClassOrFamilyTeacherNecessary?Moreandmoremiddleschoolstudentsaregoingtoallkindsoftrainingclassesorhavingfamilyteachersonweekends,Therearetwodifferentviewpointsaboutit.Somethinksitnecessary.Firstly,it'smoreeffectivetostudywithateacherthanbythemselves.Secondly,itcanstrengthenwhatislearntinclass.Besides,theycanlearnalotmore.Othersthinkitunnecessary.Foronething,studentscaneasilybecomedependent.Foranother,studentsneedtimetorelaxfromtimetotime.What'smore,thepurposeofmanytrainingclassesandfamilyteachersistomakemoney.Personally,Ithink,whetheratrainingclassorfamilyteacherisneededdepends.Ifyouarereallyveryweakatorinterestedinacertainsubject,maybeit'sOKforyou.Butbesuretochooseagoodandsuitableclassorteacher,Otherwiseitwouldbeawasteoftimeandmoney.实例指导2—是否参加培训班【写作任务】如今，寒暑假甚至周末，许多孩子被父母送去各种培训班学习。对此现象，有以下两种不同的观点，请你根据提示写千篇短文，并发表自己的看法。1(赞同者:参加培训班使孩子多才多艺，比他人优秀，且能充实孩子的生活。2(反对者:学得多而不精;占用孩子的休息时间。要求:1(不要逐句翻译;2(词数:120-150。参考词汇:多才多艺的versatileholidays.Therearetwoopinionsonthematter.Somepeopleagreewithit.First,theythinkitisgoodforparentstomaketheirchildrenversatile.Second,theybelievethatattendingtrainingclasseswouldmakechildrenmoreexcellentthanothers.Howevel,somepeopledisagreewithit.Intheiropinion,ifchildrenspendtoomuchtimeonstudy,they'llhavenotimetorest,【参考范文】Nowadays,manychildrenaresenttoattendvarietiesoftrainingclassesbytheirparentsduringtheirholidays.Astothis,opinionsaremainlydividedintotwogroups.Ontheonehand,peoplewhoareinfavorofitholdtheviewthatitisgoodforchildrentoattendthoseclasses.Theythinkitcanmakechildrenversatile.Atthesametime,theybelievethatattendingtrainingclassesWouldmakechildrenmoreexcellentthanothers.Besides,childrencanenjoyeveryday.Ontheotherhand,othersareagainsttheview.Intheiropinion,theburdenofstudyonchildrenistooheavy,sotheywouldn'tfullymasterwhattheyhavelearnedintheirtrainingclasses.What'sworse,theyhaven'tenough'timetotakearest.AsfarasIamconcerned,whethertheyshouldattendthetrainingclassesdependsonchildrenthemselves.Itisbetter.toarrangetheirstudyaccordingtotheirownneedsandmakefulluseoftheholidays.实例指导3―电子游戏【写作任务】中学生玩电子游戏非常普遍。加入你是班长王军，你通过在校内进行调研，调查的结果如下表，现在要求你根据调查内容，你写了一个调查 分析 定性数据统计分析pdf销售业绩分析模板建筑结构震害分析销售进度分析表京东商城竞争战略分析 报告 软件系统测试报告下载sgs报告如何下载关于路面塌陷情况报告535n,sgs报告怎么下载竣工报告下载 ，寄给报社。(字数120左右)一些同学认大部分同学认为调查后得出结论为中学生玩电中学生花太多时间玩游戏玩游戏是一种娱乐活动，在有子游戏可以对身体健康和学习有害。足够的自制力的情况下，适当提高反应速放松也未尝不可。度，促进智力发展。【参考范文】Deareditors,Asisshowninthetable,computergameshavebecomeverypopularinrecentyears.Wheneveryougo,youcanseemiddleschoolstudentsplayingthegamesinclubs,storesorathome.Obviously,thegamegivegreatpleasureandsatisfaction.Somestudentsthinkthatthegamescantrainthemtorespondtothingsquickly,improvetheirmindaswellasinterestinginscience.Butthemassthinkthatthestudentsspendtoomuchtimeplayingthegames,whichcertainlydoesharmtotheirhealthandstudy.Inmyopinion,computergamesareakindofwonderfulentertainment.Ifyouhaveenoughself-controlability,youcangetpleasureandbenefitfromthem.Your,WangJun实例指导4—ArePaintingsWorthBuying?多人认为买字画是浪费钱财，他们说钱应该花在更有用的东西上;而有些人认为买字画值得。他们认为这些字画能给他们带来艺术的享受，而且买字画还可以赚钱。那么你的观点呢?现在请你根据以上内容，以ArePaintingsWorthBuying?为题，写一篇120词左右的英语短文。注意:文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。ArePaintingsWorthBuying?Aboutbuyingpaintings，differentpeoplehavedifferentideas(Manypeoplethinkthat______【写作指导】本题可以从这几个方面去写:1(提出需要议论的议题;2(摆出正反两方面的观点;3(表明作者持何种态度;4(论证自己观点的正确性从而使读者接受自己的观点;5(小结。【学生习作】ArePaintingsWorthBuying?1(总体许价:作者能根据本文特点进行组材，按照内容提示写出了不同人对于买画的不同观点，并发表了自己的看法，所写文章符合写作要求。作者所采用的句式结构灵活多变，全文的表达也很通顺，具有很强的可读性。美中不足的是文中出现了几处小错误。2(亮点或采分点:用了一些较复杂句式，如:宾语从句，表语从句和状语从句等，这些结构的使用提升了文章的档次。3(错误更正:?waste前加a。awasteof意为“浪费”。?betterspend改为bebetterspent。根据句子结构，这儿应用被动结构。?manypleasures改为muchpleasure。pleasure当“乐趣”讲时，是不可数名词。?去掉a。“以……为条件”是onconditionthat…。?which改为出that。guarantee后接的是同位语从句，而不是定语从句。【参考范文】ArePaintingsWorthBuying?Aboutbuyingpaintings,differentpeoplehavedifferentideas.Manypeoplethinkthatbuyingpaintingsisawasteofmoney.Theysaythatthemoneycouldbebetterspentonmoreusefulthings.Onthecontrary,othersthinkpaintingsareworthbuying.Theysaypaintingscangivethemmuchpleasure.What'smore,theycanearnmoneybybuyingorsellingpaintings.Personally,Ithinkwecanbuysomepaintingsonconditionthatwehavemuchmoney,Ithinkabigadvantageofbuyingpaintingsisthatpeoplecangetlotsoffunandpleasureinenjoyingpaintings.Butlikeanyotherinvestment,thereisnoguaranteethatyouwillmakehugeprofitsbybuyingpaintings.So,thebestpieceofadviceIcouldgivewillbe--buytoenjoy!实例指导5—如何礼貌地解释【写作任务】加入你是迈克，在一家小的公司上班，现在你打算离开这家公司，请你用150词左右来给你的老板希尔先生解释你离开的原因。1.希望在贸易方面，能获得更广泛的经验。2.照顾住在远地的年老母亲，而申请辞职。3.由于希望获得更高的职位负更多的责任，而离开现职。注意:文章的题目和开头已经给出。ReasonsforleavingDearMr.Will,IamsorrytotellyouthatIwillleaveourcompany…【学生习作】ReasonsforleavingDearMr.Will,IamsorrytotellyouthatIwillleaveourcompany.WiththehelpofyouIhavehadagoodtimehere,soIreallydon’twanttoleavehere,butforsomereasonsIhavetomakethedecision.Firstly,IthinkthemainreasonisthatIamdeterminedtogetmuchmoreexperienceintrading.Afterall,ourcompanyisstilladevelopingcompany,andIhavenotmanychancestoimprovemyselfintreading.Secondly,Iamleavingourcompanytobewithmymotherandcareformyagedmotherinadistantcity.Shehasbeenveryillforalongtime,sosheneedslookingafterverymuch.Lastly,ofcourse,Iwanttoimprovemypositionandhavemoreresponsibilityinanothercompany.Iwishyoucanacceptmyapplication.Thankyou!Yours,Mike实例指导6---援助与否【写作任务】假若你是四川地震灾区学生，你班在上周的班会上就“地震灾区人民是否应该接受社会援助”进行了激烈的讨论。请根据下表内容写一篇英语短文，并发表自己的看法。多数同学赞同接受社会援助一些同学反对接受社会援助你的看法1.一方有难，八方支援。1.虽然我们受了灾，但我们的2.接受援助可以较快地重精神依旧。建家园，恢复正常的生活和2.活着就是一种幸运，我们应……学习。尽我们所能来进行重建。3.一年来，全国人民的无私3.有的人为了得到这种援助，援助给灾区真正带来了希压力很大，这对他们有不良的望。影响。注:1不可逐条翻译，可适当增加所给内容，开头已写出，不少于120词。2参考词汇:earthquake-strickenareas灾区Lastweek,ourclasshadaheateddiscussionabout…【写作指导】对比类写作是英语考试书面表达的一种常见的命题形式，也是近年高考写作的一个重要考查形式。由这类题型通常采用现在时和过去时，如2001年南考全国卷的书面表达(对比“减负前后的周末活动”)，1999年高考全国卷的书面表达(“学校三年前后的变化”)。二、正反观点对比此类写作要求往往是对同一件事情表达不同看法，即正反两种观点。如2006年高考陕西卷书面表达(比较暑假“待在家中”与“外出旅游”之优缺点)。写作顺序一般为:提出问题—介绍两种不同观点——对两种观点的论据逐项进行对比――陈述自己的观点并简单说明理由。时态一般以现在时为主。在写此类文章时，应尽量解释清楚要比较的两个或多个事物、地点、人或想法之间的相同点和不同点。清楚地描述相同点及不同点，会使读者更容易了解你所要比较的事物。三、数据分析对比这类对比写作主要通过对数据的分析和比较得出某种结论或说明某种现象。此类写作切忌将所给数据简单罗列(这往往是相当一部分考生的通病)，正确的写作思路应是通过所给数据进行分析比较得出某物(某人数)增加了或减少了，说明了什么趋势，从而得出何种结论。写作顺序一般为:提出所要说明的现象——数据对比一得出结论。时态一般以现在时为主，有时根据要求而定。常见的关联词有:正方观点:On(the)onehand，…反方观点:Ontheotherhand，…支持某一方观点的过渡词:and，besides,inaddition,meanwhile，what'smore…※典句积累?总起下文:Differentpeopleholddifferentopinions.Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem.Peopletakedifferentviewsonthisquestion.?表达观点一:…ofthemholdtheopinionthat….…ofthemareinfavoroftheideathat…Peoplewhoarefor/againsttheideathink…?表达不同观点及衔接:However,…ofthemholdadifferentview.Peoplewhoareagainstitdon’tthinkso.However,eachcoinhastwosides.※写作步骤1.审题该文以 表格 关于规范使用各类表格的通知入职表格免费下载关于主播时间做一个表格详细英语字母大小写表格下载简历表格模板下载 形式出现，讨论的话题是地震灾区人民是否应该接受社会援助。从命题形式上确定这是一篇提纲作文;从文体上看，主要应用一般现在时;人称为第一人称和第三人称。2.写提纲列出较重要的汉语提示要点，用英语写出相应的短语和句型。1)赞成:beinfavorof;“一方有难，八方支援”可以简单译为:Oncesomeoneisintrouble,othersshouldgivehimahandassoonaspossible;恢复正常的生活和学习make…returntonormal2)反对beagainst;受灾sufferalotfromearthquake;活着就是一种幸运Itisluckythatwearestillalive.3)在我看来，主要靠自己而不一味依赖他人inmyopinion,dotheworkbyourselves,dependonothers3.连词成句注意在整理上述信息要点时，不要生搬硬套，要灵活表达，在保持连贯的基础上，尽量使用1.文章结构安排合理。全文分四个自然段。第一自然段提出要讨论的问题,再用Differentstudentshavedifferentopinions过渡。二、三自然段采用总分式，先点出主题句，然后进行说理。第四自然段点出自己观点。2.以理服人。由于有以上的结构安排，加上合理发挥，对于是否接爱社会援助有明确信息。3.语言生动，具有较强的针对性，这正是对比性文体不可缺少的特点。如第一自然段的过渡句，第三自然段中which引导的定语从句，及结尾的Only开头的倒装句。同时全文使用了许多副词、形容词(如possible,quickly,lucky,mainly,simply等)更加强了这种针对性的语气，而however,inmyopinion,onlyinthisway等短语衔接上下文，使全文浑然一体。4.恰当地运用相关典句，为全文增添了不少亮点。实战演练自“神九”返回以后，人们就“普通人去太空旅行”的话题展开了热烈的讨论。请你根据下表的提示，以“TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofSpaceTravel”为题写一篇词数不少于100字的英语短文，并简要地发表你自己的观点。太空旅行的益处太空旅行的弊端1(提供居住的新场所1(花费太大2(给人类提供新能源2(人类住在其他星球上的想法不切实际3(对人们更好地了解其他领域3(太空旅行有危险有好处你的看法TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofSpaceTravelThereareseveraladvantagesofspacetravel.Firstofall,itcouldprovidemanwithnewplacestoliveandnewsourcesofenergy.Inaddition,spacetravelhelpspeopleunderstandtheuniversebetter.Alsospacetravelresearchisgoodforotherresearchfields.However,spacetravelalsohassomedisadvantages.Ononehand,itcoststoomuchmoneywhichcouldbespentinotheraspects.Ontheotherhand,theideaofpeoplelivingonotherplanetsisunrealistic.What'smore,spacetravelcouldbedangerous,too.Inaword,thoughtherearedisadvantages,Ithinkspacetravelisagoodthing.Itisimportantforustoexploreandlearnabouttheuniverse.时下，司机开车打手机现象已经变得越来越普遍，并备受关注。为此，你班同学就“司机开车打手机是否应该禁止”作了调查，结果显示如下表，，请你就此写一篇短文反映情况，并谈谈你的看法。词数120左右。观点比例理由赞成30,不应该禁止，手机作为现代通讯工具之一，它方便快捷，尤其是遇到有要事要谈时反对70,应该禁止，开车打、乜话危险，容易引起事故Nowadays,ithasbecomemoreandmorepopularfordriverstotalkonthecellphonewhiledriving.Butthroughthesurveywedid,wefoundthatpeoplehavedifferentOpinionsaboutthispractice.Amongthosepersonsweinterviewed,30%agreewiththispractice.Theysaythatbeingamodernmeansofcommunication,thecellphoneisconvenientandfast,especiallyifyou-havesomethingimportanttosay.Whilethemajoritysurveyed,about70%areagainstthepractice,sayingthatitisdangeroustotalkonthecellphonewhiledriving,andcancauseaccidentseasily.Inmyopinion,itwouldbebetterfordriversnottousethecellphonewhiledrivingforhissafetyandothers'.Iftheydohavesomethingimportanttosay,theyshouldstoptotalk.注意:1.摇滚音乐rock-n-rollmusic2.应说明你自己的观点;3.可以适当增加细节，使文章连贯。thMarch6,2007FineTodayourclasshadaheateddiscussionaboutrock-n-rollintwogroups.Werealizethat,withthedevelopmentofsociety,musichasbeencloselyconnectedwithpeople’slife.Rock-n-rollmusicisabranchofmusic.Butisitgoodorbad?55%ofthestudentsthinkrock-n-rollmusicisakindofpopularmusicthatspreadswidelythroughouttheworld,reflectingcharacteristicsofthechangingtimes.Itisaformofextremelygoodexpressivenessthroughtunesandwords.Notonlylearnedpeoplebutalsocommonpersonscanenjoyit,forit’salivelywayoffreecommunicationsHowever,45%ofthestudentsthinkthatlistenersmightgettoonervousandexcitedtorelaxthemselvesatthethrillingmusic.What’smore,lackingculturalcontextoftenmakesithardforittostandlongtasting.Inmyopinion,somewell-donerock-n-rollisverypopular,butsomewillmakepeopletired,soweshoulddeveloprock-n-rollmusicproperly.