2014年6月大学英语六级考试作文评析(二)
上海理工大学外语学院贾从永
Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it is unwise to jump to conclusions upon seeing or hearing something. You can give examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
2014年6月的六级考试的作文
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目中的谚语贴近生活,明白畅晓,一改前面两次的抽象晦涩。三道题目中的谚语都是生活中的一些忠告,浅显易懂,但是写起来并不轻松。因为一些考生不知道该如何将这个似乎不言自明道理解释明白。
阐述道理型六级作文宜写成三个段落。开头段一般要把所要论证的名言、谚语或俗语引出来,并作简要的解释,此为破题。第二段要论述这个道理的正确性。首推的论证方法是举例法。这不仅是因为题目的写作指令中明确要求考生举出例子来论证自己的观点(give examples to illustrate your point),而且还因为举出生动的事例是证明一个抽象道理的最有效的方法。要想在考场上能举出例子,考生平时要做有心人,在阅读中要勤于积累。英语写作中的例子不拘一格,大到政要名流,小到贩夫走卒,只要其事例能够说明这个道理,都可以娓娓道来。此外,神话传说、民间故事也可以成为很好的例子。相对于中国文化来说西方文化是一种更强势文化,因此我们应尽量举西方人所熟悉的传说、故事。比如,就这道题目而言,我们在论证it is unwise to jump to conclusions upon seeing or hearing something时,就可以举出英国历史上的一个有名的传说:北威尔士王子Llywelyn 一时冲动,杀了他的一条忠实的狗,结果酿成大错。
阐述道理型作文的结尾段一般指出这个道理的现实意义,并号召读者践行这个道理。下面请看根据上述
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所撰写的范文:
Don’t Jump to Conclusions
As an old saying goes, act in haste, repent at leisure. The saying warns us against jumping to conclusions upon seeing or hearing something. Let me tell you a story to illustrate this point.
The legend has it that Llywelyn, Prince of North Wales, had a faithful dog. One
day the prince went hunting with his men and told the dog to stay at home and look after his baby son.On his return, he was greeted his dog, jaws dripping with blood. He was alarmed and searched for his son but there was no sign of him. Llywelyn concluded that the dog had savaged his baby. Mad with grief he killed the dog. Then he heard a child’s cry coming from outside. He ran out of the house and found the baby lying on the ground unhurt. Near him was a dead wolf. Thus his hasty conclusion led to an egregious mistake.
Though such an extreme example is rare, there are circumstances in our daily life where it is tempting to rush to conclusions. So l et’s always keep a cool head and think twice before arriving at any conclusions. (191 words)
语言亮点借鉴:
1. As an old saying goes, act in haste, repent at leisure. 有一句老话说,草率行动,后悔不跌。As an old saying goes, 这是引出俗语的一种常见说法。
2. The saying warns us against jumping to conclusions upon seeing or hearing something. 这句俗语告诫我们不要看到或听到什么就仓促得出结论。
3. The legend has it that ---,传说---,这是讲故事的常用开头。其中的it是一个虚宾语,没有具体意思,起凑足音节的作用,亦作The legend goes that ---。
4. On his return, he was greeted his dog, jaws dripping with blood.他刚一回来,就遇见他的狗,嘴上滴着血。jaws dripping with blood是一个独立主格结构,做定语,修饰dog。
5. savage vt(狗等)凶猛地撕咬。
6. Mad with grief he killed the dog.由于悲痛欲绝,他杀了那条狗。Mad with grief 是一个形容词短语,做状语,
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示原因。
7. He ran out of the house and found the baby lying on the ground unhurt.他跑出房子,发现那个婴儿安然无恙地躺在地上。unhurt,这种过去分词可以既修饰动词(lying),又表示句子主语所处的状态。
8. there are circumstances in our daily life where it is tempting to rush to conclusions.在我们的日常生活中有一些情况让人容易仓促得出结论。It is tempting to do sth,
很容易做(看似正确但可能是错误的)某事。
9. So l et’s always keep a cool head and think twice before arriving at any conclusions. 所以让我们时刻保持头脑冷静,在得出任何结论之前要三思。think twice,三思。
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