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首页 你是想找一份挣钱多的工作还是感兴趣的工作

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你是想找一份挣钱多的工作还是感兴趣的工作

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简介:本文档为《你是想找一份挣钱多的工作还是感兴趣的工作doc》,可适用于高等教育领域

你是想找一份挣钱多的工作还是感兴趣的工作这是一篇今年月份《世纪》报和新东方合办的“大学英语四六级作文征文比赛”中我看到的一位同学的作文。尽管是一位英语专业同学写的有牛刀宰鸡之嫌但确实不失为一篇好文章甚至可以作为专八作文的范例。作文题目的大意是问你是想找一份挣钱多的工作还是感兴趣的工作。原文如下略有改动PrevalentisthecontroversywhichshouldcomefirstprofitsorpersonalinterestwhenoneistoplungeintothejobmarketPeoplewhofocusonmonetaryrewardscontendthatajobismainlyasupplierofbreadandbutterinourlivesandthusotherfactorsshouldreasonablycomelaterAfterallonecandonothingwithoutmoneyWhileothersmaintainthatcareergoesbeyondmerelyameansofearningalivingandyoucanneverfullyrealizeselfvalueunlessinapositionwhichisintrinsicallyattractivetoyouIndeed“AprofitablejoborajobIlove”aquestioneverygraduatewillinescapablybeconfrontedbycanboildowntothechoicebetweenfinancialbenefitsandotherfactorsthatonerelishesmoreinanoccupationGiventhecontextoftheglobalfinancialcrisisaprofitablejobshouldlogicallytopourprioritylistasfarasIamconcernedThebankruptcyofthousandsofbusinessesandthevolatilityinstockpricehasbeenrelentlesslyremindingpeoplethatthefalloutofthiscreditcrunchwillnoteasilyandsoonevaporateOngoingcutbacksinjobsandslicedpayrollshavemadealucrativejobincreasinglytantalizingNoonecanturnhisorherbackontheharshrealitywhichforcesustoexertandexhibitsobrietywhenmakingsuchalifealteringdecisionIcanhardlythinkofapersonwhoremainscheerfulandjubilantwhenhehasnostufftofillthestomachandnosheltertohideinAfteralleconomicfoundationdeterminesthesuperstructureAnyenjoymentobtainedonthespiritualquestfadeswhenthepersonfailstoreachthesubsistencelevelBesidesaprofitablejobandabelovedonearenotmutuallyexclusiveAcleancompactofficeenvironmentintimacyamongcolleaguesinterestandproficiencyinthejobitselfallthosecanbecultivatedthroughindividualeffortsandthenwillsurelymakethejobmoreappealingandloveworthwhileSowhenofferedanoptionofafinanciallydecentlivingwhilenotlosingtheopportunitytomaketheoccupationmoreidealisthereanyonewillingtoturnitdownInanutshell“aprofitablejob”gainsmoreweightwhencomparedwithoneinwhichapersonmerelyhassomeinterestOnlybybeingvisionaryandtakingthelongterminterestsintoaccountcanwefulfilltheuniversaldreamofablissfullifeSomeothersthinkthatmoneyistherootofallevilDuetothegreedformoneypeoplewilldovariouskindsofevilthingssuchasstealingrobbingorevenmurderMoneycaneasilychangeakindhonestmanintoacruelcunningwoeInmyopinionbothoftheabovementionedviewpointsgotoanextremeMoneyitselfisneithergoodnorevilItalldependsonhowwelookatitWecannotdenytheimportanceofmoneyinthemodernsocietyMeanwhileweshouldnotignorethefactthatsomethingcannotbeboughtbymoneysuchasfriendshiptrueloveandsoon这两例都是采用了对应写作方式将提示中的三句分别扩展成三段三段之间相互衔接构成一个完整的篇章。调整法尽管是提纲式写作提纲所提示的只是文章所要包括的主要内容却不是文章的结构模式一般情况下同学们应根据英语文章的类型重新安排文章。如上面有关quot钱quot的一个写作按照英语的表达习惯最好是加上一个引子。WhatismoneyTothisquestiondifferentpeopleholddifferentlySomethingmoneyisthesourceofhappinesswhilesomeregarditastherootofallevilsAsfarasIamconcernedtheybothhavetheirreasonsThosewhoconsidermoneyasthesourceofhappinessarguethatmoneymeansmassivehousebeautifulclothesorluxuriouscarsandcanenablethemandtheirfamilieslivecomfortablyTheyevenbelievethatmoneycanbringpowerfriendshipandloveButduetothetemptationofmoneytherearemanypeoplewhobecomethievesrobbersormurderersItisalsooutofthegreedformoneythatsomeofficialsforgettheirdutyandcauseenormouslossestothecountrysosomepeoplethinkthatmoneyistherootofallevilandsuggestthatwekeepawayfrommoneyInfactmoneyismerelyamediumofexchangeItmaybringyouhappinessitmayleadyoutoalifeofcrimeWhetheritisgoodorbaddependsonhowitisused二、首段和尾段的写作上一讲中我们介绍了段落的扩展模式也就是说我们已经了解了文章中间一部分的叙述模式。根据四六级写作的特点一般首段和尾段都要自己补上那么怎么才能写好首尾段呢下面我介绍一下首尾段的写作方式。首段的写作首段的写作方式一般为:运用事实性信息、调查或故事等引出话题导入主题然后提出自己的观点也就是文章的论点首段开篇的方式常见的有:谚语法由于谚语一般已经被大家所接受用谚语提出自己的观点也容易被读者所接受。AsthesayinggoesquotMoneymakesthemaregoquotbuttherearemanythingswecantbuywithmoneysuchastimeandtruelove…定义法定义法是通过对文章中的关键词做一些简单或正面或反面的解释限定其范围这样比较有利于引出主题。quotPracticemakesperfectquotisanoldsayingIttellsusthatitdoesnotmatterifweareclumsyatdoingsomethingAslongaswekeepontryingandpracticingwewilldoagoodjobintheend提问法通过提问一个或一连串的问题可以激发读者的兴趣从而引出主题。aDoyouhavemanyfriendsAretheysimilartoyouordifferentfromyouWhichkindoffriendsdoyoupreferbWhatisagoodstudentDifferentpeoplemayhavedifferentanswerstothisquestion概括法概括法指先总结文章内容所涉及的现状然后引出主题。InrecentyearswiththedevelopmentofscienceandtechnologytheInternethascomeintomoreandmorehomesandisplayingamoreandmoreimportantroleinourworkanddailylifeIthasbecomeamusttousbutatthesametime故事法指用简单有趣的Internethasalsobroughtwithitalotofproblems故事法故事激发读者的兴趣从而提出自己的观点。如下面quotIsStressaBadThingquot引语法quotJustaseatingwithoutlikingharmsthehealthlearningwithoutinterestharmsthememoryandcantberetainedquotFromVinciswordswecanseehowimportantitistomotivatethestudentsinlanguagelearning调查法为了得到读者的认可文章的开始可以引出调查数据等借以提出主题如下面quotIsStressaBadThingquot的和quotCanSchoolchildrenStartUsingtheInternetquot的。假设法假设法是指通过假设提出一种选择交代文章要涉及的问题从而提出文章的主题。Supposeyouwereofferedtwojobsoneishighlypaidbutratherdemandingtheotherislessdemandingbutpoorlypaidwhichwouldyouprefer…综合法具体写作时同学们没有必要拘泥于一种方式可以将上述方法总和起来。首段示例:题目:IsStressaBadThing提纲:有人害怕压力有人认为压力并不是一件坏事我的看法quotIcantstandthepressureandcompetitionquotexplainedonefriendofminewhenaskedwhyhedecidedtoquithishighlypaidbutdemandingpositioninhiscompanyrecentlyMyfriendmayhavehisownreasonsbutIdontthinkhisdecisioniswiseinrealityItistruethatmyfriendscaseisnotuniqueInthelastfewyearsquiteanumberofmenandwomenhavechosentodosomethinglesscompetitiveatthecostofacomfortableeasylifeahighlypaidjobcanobtainTheyareafraidthatthestressesandstrainsofworkwillrobthemofjoyandhappinessanddothemharmbothphysicallyandmentallyInfacthoweverstressisntthebadthingitisoftensupposedtobeUnlessitgetsoutofcontrolacertainamountofstressisvitaltoprovidemotivationandchallengeandtogivepurposeandsignificancetoanotherwisemeaninglessidlelifePeopleunderstresstendtoexpresstheirfullrangeofpotentialandtoactualizetheirownpersonalworththeveryaimofahumanlifeStressisanaturalpartofeverydaylifeandthereisnowaytoavoiditWhatwecandoistodevelopouradaptiveabilitiestodealwithitratherthantoescapefromit就这一标题而言根据所提示的提纲首段的写作还可以采用下列方式:AccordingtoarecentsurveyinthelastfewyearsquiteanumberofyoungpeoplehavechosentoquittheirdemandingbuthighlypaidjobsAlthoughtheymayhavetheirownrespectivereasonsIdontthinktheirdecisioniswiseinrealityWhichjobdoyoupreferahighlypaidbutverycompetitivepositionorapoorlypaidbutalsolessdemandingjobYoumaychoosethelatterandhaveyourownreasonsbutIdontthinkthischoiceiswiseenoughwhateverreasonsFacedwithahardanddemandingtaskpeoplesattitudevarieswidely:sometrytoavoiditandothersregarditasachallengetotheirabilitiesInfactthechoicewemakebetweenquotflightquotorquotfightmakethedifferencebetweenleadersandmediocrities平庸之辈首段示例:标题:CanSchoolchildrenStartUsingtheInternet提纲:随着科技的发展网络越来越普及网络有其优点但也有缺点我的观点根据上面的提示首段可有下列几种方式:NowadaysusingtheInternethasbecomeafashionManyparentsbegintoteachtheirchildrentousetheInternetHowevertherearediverseopinionsonthisSomethinkitwisebutIdontagreewiththemTodaytheInternetisbecomingmoreandmorecommonItbeginstoplayamoreandmoreimportantroleinoursocietyandlifeItssousefulthatmostadultsarelearninghowtouseitWhataboutchildrenOfcoursetheycanstartusingitTodaywiththedevelopmentofscienceandtechnologytheInternetisbeginningtoplayamoreandmoreimportantroleinourlifeMoreandmorepeoplearestartingtousetheInternetincludingschoolchildrenHoweverIthinkschoolchildrenaretooyoungtostartusingtheInternetAccordingtoarecentsurveyInternetusersarebecomingyoungerandyoungerandInternetbarshavebecomearesortforschoolchildrenwhologintochatorplaygamesFacedwiththisphenomenonmanypeopleargueformeasurestopreventschoolchildrenfromusingtheInternetandIthinktheyhavetheirreasons结论段的写作结论一般采用归纳概括、主题重述或提建议等方式。常见的方式有:重述或总结主题重述主题指于结论处以另外一种表达方式重申主题与首段照应。FamiliesofferuswarmthandcareFriendsgiveusstrengthandhorizonTheybothhelpusunderstandtheworldasitisBothofthemarethedearestpartsinourlife提出建议SincepostcardsdousmoreharmandgoodsincewehavemanyotherwaystoconveyourfeelingsandpromoteourfriendshipIhopeeveryonewilltakeactionsnowtostopusingpostcards概括总结AswecanseefromtheabovelivinginthesuburbwecanstayawayfrompollutionleadaneasyleisuretimeandneedntinvesttoomuchmoneysoIpreferlivinginthesuburbtolivinginthecity引用名人名言InparticularIenjoywhatFrancisBaconsaidquotStudiesservefordelightforornamentandforabilityquot综合法与首段一样结论段也可以是多种方法的综合。一般说来总结加建议的比较多。尾段示例:如quot网络quot的结论段可以如下所示:AsweallknowthenextcenturywillbecomeoneoftheInternetInternetwillbecomemoreandmoreimportantinbothourdailylifeandourworkSoIsuggestthatschoolchildrenshouldstartusingtheInternetSoIthinkschoolchildrennotonlycanstartusingtheInternetbutalsoshouldstartusingitTheyaresuretobenefitalotfromtheinternetInternetcanhelpourchildrenknowtheworldgetusefulinformationandenrichtheirknowledgeSoIthinkschoolchildrencanstartusingtheInternetInawordInconclusionInsummaryTosumupInshorttheInternetisplayingamoreandmoreimportantroleinourlifeanditishelpfulforchildrensgrowthbothphysicallyandmentallyItisbetterforthemtostartusingtheInternetasearlyaspossible转承语的使用根据不同的段落要求选择适当的转承语比较对照比较:likeAB…JustasAB…AsimilarlycorrespondinglylikewiseinthesamewayB…对照:UnlikeContrarytoAsopposedtoAB…AhoweverontheotherhandincontrastBA…Bhoweverontheotherhandincontrast…列举FirstSecondNextThirdThenLastFinally…ThefistThesecondThethirdThelastThefinalFirstlySecondlyThirdlyLastFinallyOneAnotherStillanotherThelastThemostessentialmostimportantprimarychiefis…因果asaresultconsequentlythereforehencesobecauseofthisforthesereasonsduetothefactthat起承转合常用语quot起quot的常用语WhenaskedaboutWhenitcomestoFacedwith…somepeopleclaimthinkarguebelievethat…butwhileothers…differentlyNowadaysthereismuchgeneraldiscussionasto…Withthedevelopmentimprovementgrowthof…Nowitiscommonlywidelyincreasinglybelievedthoughtheldacknowledgethat…Accordingtoarecentsurveyinvestigationpoll…Haveyoueverthoughtwondered…Suppose…Asthesayinggoes…quot承quot的常用语Thosewhohold…Itistruethat…TobesureFirstFirstly…Themainleadingunderlyingrootprimarychiefessential…quot承接上文quot的方式与文章的段落结构有关比较的与列举的不同与举例的也不同。同学们应根据具体的情况选择适当的承接语。quot转quot的常用语ItsoundslikeagoodattractiveideasuggestionbuttheyfailtounderstandseenoticeThereisprobablyanelementoftruthintheargumentsideasbuttheyignoreamoreimportantbasicfact…Closerexaminationanalysishoweversuggestsshowsthatthisargume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