六年级小升初英语作文

六年级小升初英语作文 英语作文，获得高分的方法 书面 表 关于同志近三年现实表现材料材料类招标技术评分表图表与交易pdf视力表打印pdf用图表说话 pdf 达是考查学生英语综合水平的一个重要途径，很多孩子英语口语好，却无法写好英语作文。而现实情况却是从初一甚至从小学开始就已经有了对书面表达的考查，所以练习英语写作也是我们学而思小升初课程的重要环节，帮孩子们打好基础。 现将写好英语作文的重要要素，总结如下: 1、格式:拿到作文题，一定要把握好题目的要求，看清是哪种类型的题目，确定好相应的格式。 常考的题如日记，日记的格式就是需要在第一行左方顶格写上日期和星期，右方写上天气，然后再开始写正文。成功英语需要提醒大家的是，日记基本上都是描写已经发生过的事情，所以孩子们注意一定要用一般过去时哦! 2、语法:这是现在孩子们在英语写作中丢分最多的一项。 (1)写完作文后要记得检查:语法知识需要靠我们平时一步步积累，但是孩子们要注意在写完作文之后一定要细心检查自己的作文，一些学过的语法点不要再错了。 (2)避免使用自己拿不准的句子:很多孩子喜欢用长句、 1 复合句等。可是又对这些句子掌握得不是很牢固，所以很容易出错。一切拿不准的词和句子，都应该使用自己会的简单句和简 单词 英语单词 下载七年级上册英语单词表下载英语单词表下载深圳小学英语单词表 下载高中英语单词 下载 ，这样才能给考官留下好印象。 3、词汇:如果在文章中能够正确使用一些高级词汇和词组，而不再是简单词汇，这会让老师耳目一新。例如:如果要孩子们来写holiday。很多孩子们一开始就会写I went to „„ last year. 用went就很大众化了，但是如果用take a trip这个词组就会显得你的英语水平跟其他人不一样了!对于词汇这个点，成功英语向孩子们提两点建议: (1)词汇需要平时积累，但是大家积累的时候一定要注意灵活使用学过的词。大家已经学过很多词组和单词了，可是大家都不会拿出来用，原因就是在于大家学的时候只记得了它的意思，没有认识该怎么使用，该在什么情况下使用。所以大家以后学习词汇的时候一定要翻翻词典学习例句，自己也拿来造个句子，要知道自己以后该怎么用。 (2)学习语言并不是纸上谈兵，练习写作也应该要多加练习。熟能生巧，练得多了，自然也就会知道什么时候用什么词，该怎么写作文了。 4、书写:这一点看似不重要，却最影响老师对你作文的整体评价。我们不要求要做到美观，但那是一定要整洁、认真。这样老师也能很快读懂你的文章，更能对你作文产生好的印象。 2 小升初英语作文范文10例 (1) I have a best friend. She has long straight black hair big black eyes and a small nose. She is very thin and kind, she is cute too. Her English and Chinese is very good. She ishard-working. She favorite season is summer, because its hot ,she can eat ice- cream. She like playing the piano ,reading books and singing songs. Whos she? She is my best friend ---Sun Meng Qi. She has a very good English name, too---Angle. 我有个最好的朋友。 她有着长长的黑色直发，大大的黑眼睛和一个小鼻子。 她很瘦，对人非常和蔼，她也很可爱。她的英语和语文非常 好。她学习十分认真。 她最喜欢的季节是夏季，因为夏天很热，她能吃冰淇凌。 她喜欢弹琴，读书和唱歌。她是谁?她就是我最好的朋友— —孙梦琪。她还有一个很好听的英文名——Angle.(安琪儿) (2) My Family This is my family. There are four people in my family. My grandmother, my father, my mother and me. My grandmother has short white hair. She looks very 3 nice. My father has short black hair and small eyes. He looks very fat, so I often call him “fat man”. He works at a factory. My mother works at a L.D.T. My mother has long black hair. She likes sports and traveling, so I often go on sports with my mother. On holidays my family often go to travel. I study at Guiyuan Primary School. We are very happy. 家人 这是我的家. 有4人在家里. 奶奶、爸爸、妈妈和我. 奶奶短白发. 她看起来很漂亮. 爸爸小眼睛,短黑发. 他 看起来很肥,所以我常常称呼他为肥人. 他在一家工厂工作. 妈妈在工程船名妈妈早已黑发. 喜欢运动和旅游,所以经常 去体育与妈妈. 假日经常到我家旅行. 我念小学的同志. 我 们感到非常高兴. (3)自我介绍的英语作文 Everybody is good, my name is called He xuan, my English name is called Angle. Everybody knew that Angle is the angel meaning, I hoped that I forever can look like the angel equally happily, joyful, is carefree all day! I in the sixth grade, faced with rose the middle school now, father and mother, grandfather paternal grandmother, teacher schoolmates place the very big expectation to me, I will certainly not disappoint their expectation, will study 4 diligently, passes an examination junior middle schools key class! In the future will become social a person of great ability and tremendous potential, will make the contribution for the motherland! 中文: 大家好，我的名字叫何璇，我的英文名字叫Angle。大 家知道吗，Angle是天使的意思，我希望我永远都会像天使 一样开开心心，快快乐乐，整天无忧无虑的～我现在上六年 级了，面临升中学了，爸爸妈妈，爷爷奶奶，老师同学都给 我寄予很大的期望。我一定不会辜负他们的期望，努力学习， 考上初中的重点班～将来成为社会的栋梁之才，为祖国做出 贡献～ (4)感谢帮过你的人 Last week I saw a young man giving up his seat to a woman with a baby in her arms on a bus. To my great surprise, the woman did not thank the young man; on the contrary, she glared at him coldly, which made him embarrassed. This incident set me thinking. If everyone acted like that woman, who would like to help others? And what would our society be like? If anyone gives you a hand, you should express your 5 sincere gratitude to him or her. Only in this way will everyone be ready to help others and feel satisfied with it. 上周，我在公共汽车上看到一个年轻人给一个怀抱婴儿 的妇女让座。让我感到奇怪的是，这位妇女没有感谢这位年 轻人，反而用冷淡的目光盯着他，使他感到困窘。 这事令我深思。如果每个人都像那个妇女那样，谁还愿 意帮助别人?我们这个社会将会变成什么样子? 如果有人帮了你，你应表示衷心感谢。只有这样，大家 才会愿意帮助别人，并从中得到满足。 (5)感恩节英语作文:Earthquake love Thanksgiving Human love, love compatriots, and in a race against time. We believe that life can not be separated by mountains and rivers of love, can not be buried ruins of the love of life, heavy rain pouring on the life of the immortal love, dark clouds overhead can not be the love of life. When disaster comes, we can not avoid, we can do only with strong and smiles to the world that we are strong, no difficulty can make us lose the hope of Health. 地震?爱?感恩 人性之爱，同胞之爱，在和时间赛跑。我们相信，山川 阻隔不了对生命的爱，废墟掩埋不了对生命的爱，暴雨浇不 灭对生命的爱，乌云遮蔽不了对生命的爱。 6 当灾难来临时，我们不能逃避，我们能做的只有用坚强 和微笑去向世人证明，我们是坚强的，任何困难都不能使我 们失去生的希望。 (6)英语作文关于爸爸 想念爸爸(I Miss My Father) I am a girl of ten, and I live in a small mountain village far from Taiyuan. The only person that lives with me is my mother, because my father is away for eight years, working in a city. During the Spring Festival, my father came back home. He looked thin and tired. He gave my mother two thousand yuan, and told her that he would work even harder, earn more money, and then he could take us to the city He stayed at home for only ten days. We are living a poor life now. But what I want most is not money, but my father. I miss him very much! 【参考译文】 我是一个十岁的女孩，我住在离太原很远的一个小山 村。和我共同生活的唯一的人是我妈妈，因为我爸爸离家已 经八年了，他在城里干活。 春节期间爸爸回家了。他看起来瘦瘦的，很疲倦。他把 2，000元交给妈妈，并告诉她说他要拼命地干活，多赚点钱， 然后把我们接到城里去。他在家只呆了十天。 我们的日子 7 很苦，可是我最需要的不是钱，是爸爸!我很想念他! (7)Planting Trees 植树 Spring is coming. It is the season for planting trees. On Sunday, our teacher led us to the suburb to plant trees. We brought some spades, pails and saplings with us. On arriving there, everybody went into action in no time. We dug square pits first. Then two persons were needed to plant a tree. One held the sapling carefully and the other put the soil in. I wish the saplings would grow up quickly. 【译文】 春天来了，又是一个植树的季节。星期天， 老师带领我们去郊区植树。同学们拿着铁锨、水桶和小树苗 上路了。到了目的地后，大家不由分说，争先恐后地干起来。 我们先挖坑，然后两个人合作，一个扶着小树苗，一个培土。 小树啊，你快快长大吧。 (8)My winter holiday This winter holiday, I went to Kunming with my family. Kunming is a very beautiful city, I think. The sky is blue and the air is clean. You can see many kinds of nice flowers everywhere. The weather there is great. It′s never too hot or too cold all the year round, so people always call it Spring City. Kunming is surrounded by beautiful scenery. And one of the most famous views is The Stone Forest. It is really 8 scenic. We just stayed in Kunming for six days, but I felt very happy, and I like Kunming very much. 译文: 这个寒假，我和我的家人去了昆明。我觉得， 昆明是一座非常美丽的城市。昆明的天空蓝蓝的，空气是那 么清新。到处都可以看到许多种类的美丽鲜花。那里的天气 也非常棒。全年都不会太热或太冷，所以人们都称昆明为“春 城”。 昆明周围有许多美丽的景观。最著名的风景就是“石 林”了。那可是真正的天然景观。 我们虽然只在昆明待了 六天，但是我觉得非常快乐，而且我非常喜欢昆明。 (9)My winter holiday my winter holiday was very interesting. As that day i got back to my native hometown, cousins and cousines took me to ski. My skiing skill isnt well, got down for 15 times, they laughed at me behind, i cant help smiling too. The day of Spring Festival was the most happiness day, we had meal for the first, a table of delicious food, that made me so glad. Then we played the fireworks. The childrens waving the lightening ticket while watching the adults playing the fireworks. That was so beautiful! Like the stars rainning down the world. At the end, it was time to get the red bag. we were very exciting, and satisfied. Sometimes, we also go shopping and buying 9 something we like. Winter holiday life was really abundant! 我的寒假生活非常有趣.刚回老家那天,哥哥姐姐弟弟妹 妹就拉着我去溜冰场溜冰.我技术不好,摔了15个跟头,他们 都在那边笑我,我也情不自禁的笑了.大年三十那天最开心.先 是吃团圆饭,一桌子的美食,让我大饱口服.然后就是放烟花. 我们几个小孩一边拿着荧光棒甩,一边看大人们放烟花.好美 啊!像降落在人间的星星.最后就是拿红包拉,我们都很兴奋, 也很满足.有时,我们还会去逛街,买一些自己喜欢的东西. 寒 假生活真美好! (10)My Family Members 我的家人 I am student of Southwest Weiyu Middle School. I am in Class Two Grade Six. I’m a girl. I’m twelve years old. I’ m tall and thin. I like to sing and dance. I can sing POP music very well. I like to eat meat, because I think it’s very delicious. I’ good at English, because I like it very much. I like to write a composition and I like to read many nice books. I think it’s good for me. I like drawing, but I can’t draw very well. I like cats very much, but I can’t have them, because my mother doesn’t like them, she think they’re very dirty. I want to travel around the world, but I haven’t enough money. But I’m happy, because I have many friends and a happy family. 10 My mother is a shop assistant. She’s thirty-six years old. She’s tall and thin too. She’s pretty. Her hair is short and straight. She likes to sing and she likes Zhang Xueyou’s songs and English songs. She likes to eat crabs. She always goes shopping with me. She’s good at Maths. When I have problems with Maths she will help me. She doesn’t like pets; because she thinks they are dirty. I like my mother very much. My father is a manager. He’s forty-six years old. But he looks like very young and handsome. He always goes to park with me. He likes to smoke. But I think smoke is bad for himself. He likes English songs. He’s good at Chinese. He sometimes helps me to write a composition. My father likes pets very much. I like my father very much. My grandmother and my sister live together. My grandma is sixty-three years old. She’s retiring. My sister is a student of fourteen years old. She has two big eyes and long straight hair. She’s a small famous singer in her city. She likes to sing and dance. She can sing very well. She joins in many competitions and she always be champion. 篇二:小升初英语作文 小升初英语作文:My Good Friend [标签:作文 小升初] 11 小学精华资讯 免费订阅 摘要: My Good Friend My name is Liu Xiaoling.I have a good friend . Her name is Liu Yun. She lives in China . Her mather is a singer. She likes swimming. Her father is a TV reporter. He likes listening to My Good Friend My name is Liu Xiaoling.I have a good friend . Her name is Liu Yun. She lives in China . Her mather is a singer. She likes swimming. Her father is a TV reporter. He likes listening to mnsic. Liu Yun likes piaying the violin and riding her bike. Every morning , she goes to school on foot. Every evening, she reads newspaper ai home. Then she goes to bed at nine. This is my good friend Liu Yun 小升初英语作文:My Best Friend [标签:作文 小升初]小学精华资讯 免费订阅 摘要: I have a best friend. She has long,straight,black hair,big,black eyes and a small nose.She is very thin and kind,she is cute,too. Her English and Chinese is very good.She is hard-working. She favorit I have a best friend. She has long,straight,black hair,big,black eyes and a small nose.She is very thin and kind,she is cute,too. Her English and Chinese is very good.She is hard-working. 12 She favorite season is summer,because its hot ,she can eat ice- cream.She like playing the piano ,reading books and singing songs. Whos she? She is my best friend ---Sun Mengqi.She has a very good English name,too---Angle. 译: 我有个最好的朋友。 她有着长长的黑色直发，大大的黑眼睛和一个小鼻子。 她很瘦，对人非常和蔼，她也很可爱。她的英语和语文非常 好。她学习十分认真。 她最喜欢的季节是夏季，因为夏天很热，她能吃冰淇凌。 她喜欢弹琴，读书和唱歌。她是谁?她就是我最好的朋友— —孙梦琪。她还有一个很好听的英文名——Angle.(安琪儿) 小升初英语作文:我的家人 [标签:作文 小升初]小学精华资讯 免费订阅 摘要: My Family This is my family. There are four people in my family. My grandmother, my father, my mother and me. My grandmother has short white hair. She looks very nice. My father has short black hair My Family This is my family. There are four people in my family. My grandmother, my father, my mother and me. 13 My grandmother has short white hair. She looks very nice. My father has short black hair and small eyes. He looks very fat, so I often call him “fat man”. He works at a factory. My mother works at a L.D.T. My mother has long black hair. She likes sports and traveling, so I often go on sports with my mother. On holidays my family often go to travel. I study at Guiyuan Primary School. We are very happy. 家人 这是我的家. 有4人在家里. 奶奶、爸爸、妈妈和我. 奶奶短白发. 她看起来很漂亮. 爸爸小眼睛,短黑发. 他 看起来很肥,所以我常常称呼他为肥人 . 他在一家工厂工作. 妈妈在工程船名妈妈早已黑发. 喜欢运动和旅游,所以经常去体育与妈妈. 假日经常到我家 旅行. 我念小学的同志. 我们感到非常高兴. 小升初英语作文:快乐周末 [标签:作文 周末 小升初]小学精华资讯 免费订阅 摘要: OK, let me tell you something about my weekend. I am going to do many things and be very busy on the weekend. So I do my homework on Saturday morning. In the afternoon, I am going to do housework wit OK, let me tell you something about my weekend. 14 I am going to do many things and be very busy on the weekend. So I do my homework on Saturday morning. In the afternoon, I am going to do housework with my mother. Because I am a good girl, I am helpful at home. On Sunday morning, I am going to visit my grandparents with my parents. In the afternoon, we are going to the park together. Because there is a kite show. And my grandparents likes making kites. I think, we can see many beautiful kites there. And we are going to buy some beautiful kites, too. Then, we are going to fly the new kites, that’s fun. In the evening, we are going to have a big dinner. We are going to have fish for dinner. Because my grandparents likes eating fish. And my grandma cooks fish well. After dinner, we are going to watch TV together. We are going to be very happy. This is my happy weekend. I like my weekend very much. What about your weekend? Can you tell me? 小升初英语作文:Happy Holiday [标签:作文 小升初]小学精华资讯 免费订阅 摘要: May Day is coming. I m so happy because my father and my mother take me to Wu Quan Park this holiday. In the park, I see many trees and beautiful flowers. There are many children and many h(来自:WwW.ZW2.CN 15 爱作文 网)appy playi May Day is coming. I’m so happy because my father and my mother take me to Wu Quan Park this holiday.In the park, I see many trees and beautiful flowers. There are many children and many happy playing games, too.My parents take me to the zoo. There are lions, tigers, eagles, bears, deer, monkeys, and so on. I like the monkeys best because they are very clever and they make us laugh. How lovely they are!I have a good time that day. What a beautiful and happy holiday 小升初英语作文:我的新学校 [标签: 作文 小升初]小学精华资讯 免费订阅 摘要: I have moved to my new school since Septmber. It is a modern and nice school which is in Beijing. It has a playground, a library, several labs, classrooms with electronic equipment and so on. It s qu I have moved to my new school since Septmber. It is a modern and nice school which is in Beijing. It has a playground, a library, several labs, classrooms with electronic equipment and so on. Its quite different from my old school. Its larger, much more modern. This is why I love my new school. If you are free, you are warmly welcomed to come to our school to have a look. 16 篇三:小升初英语作文写作与指导 小升初英语作文写作与指导 作文主要考察学生运用所学词汇、句型、语法等内容进行组句成文的能力，是一种考查学生综合运用英语能力的题型。 一、作文的评分标准: 第四档(很好):(9-10分) 完全覆盖了所给信息，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，没有语法和词汇错误，具备较强的语言运用能力，完全达到了预期的写作目的。 第三档(好):(6-8分) 覆盖了所给信息，应用的语法结构和词汇符合要求，基本没有语法和词汇错误，达到了预期的写作目的 第二档(一般):(4-5分) 未完全覆盖所给信息，未描述清楚主要内容，有语法和词汇错误，影响对写作内容的理解，未能清楚地传达信息。 第一档(差)(1-3分) 未覆盖所给信息，写了一些无关内容，语法结构单调，词汇数量有限，有较多的语法和词汇错误，影响对写作内容的理解，未能传达信息。 0分:未能传达给读者任何信息，内容太少，无法评判，写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容没法看清。 17 二、作文要求: 1. 内容要点是否完整 2. 语法结构是否正确 3. 词汇运用是否准确 4. 书写是否整洁(如书写较差，以至影响阅卷，将分数降低一个档次) 书写注意事项: ?作文答题纸一般为单线，我们应将单线作为“四线格”中的第三线并以此为基准书写，不?要把它作为第四线，让字母吊在线上。 ?坚决不能在试卷上出现乱涂、乱写、或用修正液覆盖现象——给人一种凌乱的感觉。 一旦写错，规范修改——用一条斜线划掉即可。 He can speker English very well. 三、写作步骤: 1、审:确定基本要素5W1H。 Who(第几人称,单数还是复数,) When(什么时态) Where What How ，即 何人 何时 何地 如何 做了何事 为何 2、列:用核心词汇或短语列出文章要点 3、整:将列出的核心词汇或短语整理成句子,使结构完整，符合表达习惯。 4、连:恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。 表示并列: and 18 表示条件: if 表示顺序: first , next，then 表示因果: because, so 表示选择: or 表示转折: but, however 5、美:修改词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下改变 句式或添加语句，展示自己的语言功底。 四、写作中普遍存在的问题。 1. 粗心马虎，审错题目。 例如:“ 假设你是小明，你„„” 一部分学生一看到 小明就想当然以为是用第三人称写。 2. 单词拼写错误。 I come form China. 3. 单词大小写。 I don’t like Winter, It’s too cold. Let’s go the Jiaxin cinema this afternoon. 4. 标点符号。 There is a chair、a desk and a shelf in my study。 5. 语法错误。 名词单复数。 I have a friend, they are Mike and Tom. I have some eggplant and tomato. 19 I can see much fish in the river. 时态。 They are runing to us. He can sweeps the floor. She goes to park tomorrow. Chinglish 现象. My city has a nice park. I often go there on Sundays. My friends and I by bus to school. 行文的逻辑性。 Apples are tasty, because I like them. You can go there by bus and on foot. 词类错用。 He is a good singer, he sings good. I often go there with he. Let’s try. 做小老师修改以下作文。 (1) Hallo, my name is Liu xiao ming.They are three peoples in my family. There are my father, my mother and me. I get up at 6 on Monday to Friday. Than I have breakfast. I go to school by bus, because is not far from My school. My father usually get up at 7. He usually go to the work by car, but him 20 car is broken, so him by bus go to work. My friend go to school on foot, because them homes it’s very near our school. (2) My is a girl. My name is Li Xiao Ming. I am a Zhongshan school’s student. My age is 11 years old. I have a big eyes and a nose. I is helpful. I can water flower and cook dinner. I like play ping-pong and read a book. My favourite food is a eggplant, because it healfty. I very like Chinese’s food. Because is very tasy. 五、考试题型。 1. 介绍人。 周杰伦是广受大家喜爱的歌星。请你根据下面提供的信 息以“My favourite singer”为题写一篇50-60字的短文。 English Name:Jay Chow Height:173cm Birthday:Jan,18,1979 Favourite Sport:Basketball Weight:60KgFavourite Food:Chicken Favourite NBA Player:Michael Jordan. Hobbies:Songwriting,movie,computer games _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 21 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 写事。 根据下面图片，以 “My day”为题写一篇60-70字的 的小作文，要求句子正确，表达连贯，语言得体，书写工整。 (不要出现真实姓名、学校等信息。) __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 22 ________________________________________ 3. 书信。假设你是张俊,你有一位美国笔友叫Jim,请你 写一封email告诉他你是怎样度过每年的父亲节的.提示如 下: 1.早上给爸爸做早餐. 2.下午和爸爸一起踢足球. 3. 晚 上一家到外面吃饭.饭后,和爸爸合照. 4. 给爸爸制作了一张卡片并告诉爸爸: “我爱你!” 要求: 1. 词数60个左右,邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计 入总词数. 2. 所写短文必须包括以上所有要点,但可适当发挥. 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名,校名和地名. Dear Jim, How are you ? I miss you very much. I make my father very happy on Father’s Day. _____________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 23 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Jim, how do you celebrate Father’s Day? Can you tell me something about it? Please write to me soon. Yours, 24