2016新课标三维人教英语 选修八
Section_ⅤWriting
—_介绍某一地点的说明文
一、基本结构
第一段:总体简介。
第二段:展开描述——位置、面积、环境、交通、人口、历史、名胜古迹及特色。
第三段:结合写作要求进行结尾。
二、增分佳句
1.前门大街有600年历史,800米长,沿街有300家店铺。
①Qianmen Street with 800 meters long is a famous street of over 600 years old, along which there are more than 300 shops.
②Qianmen Street with a history of 600 years old, is 800 meters in length, along which there are more than 300 shops.
③The 800-meter-long Qianmen Street with more than 300 shops along has a history of over 600 years old.
2.坐落在山顶的寺庙经历了这个地区的许多变化。
①The temple stands on the top of the mountain, and has experienced many changes in this area.
②Standing on the top of the mountain,the temple has witnessed many changes in this area.
3.它坐落在天安门广场南面。
①It is just located to the south of Tian'anmen Square.
②To the north of it, there is Tian'anmen Square.
③It lies south of Tian'anmen Square.
4.加拿大,世界第二大国,占地 997万平方公里。
①Canada, which is the second largest country in the world, covers an area of 9.97 million square kilometres.
②Canada, the second largest country in the world, covers an area of 9.97 million square kilometres.
③Canada, covering an area of 9.97 million square kilometres, is the second largest country in the world.
5.乘车到达前门大街很方便,可乘坐公共汽车17、69、59等路,以及地铁2号线。 ①It's very convenient to get there by taking Buses No. 17, 69 or 59 besides Subway Line 2.
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②With Buses No. 17, 69 or 59 passing there, it is very convenient to get there by bus, and you can also choose to take Subway Line 2.
③With Subway Line 2 another choice, you can get there easily by taking Buses No. 17, 69 or 59.
6.万绿湖是一个很美丽的地方,湖水清澈;湖中有各种各样的鱼;你可以到那里划船、野餐、钓鱼。
①Wanlu Lake is a beautiful place, where the water is so clean that there are all kinds of fish in it, and you can go boating, go fishing and have a picnic.
②The water of Wanlu Lake, a beautiful place, is so clean that there are all kinds of fish in it, and you can go boating, go fishing and have a picnic.
[题目要求]
假如你是李华,请根据下面提示给Mr.Smith回信,介绍适合他租用的一处房子。
1.位于市中心商业区,交通便利,环境优美;
2.面积80平方米,宽敞明亮;
3.房间天然气、暖气、家具、空调等必备设施齐全;
4.房租价格合理,每月仅1 000元;
5.房子位置和户型如图所示:
第一步:审题构思很关键
一、审题
1.确定体裁:本文为说明文;
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二、构思
第一部分:引出话题。
第二部分:房屋简介。
第三部分:全文
总结
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。 第二步:核心词汇想周全 1. 坐落在…… 2.
五楼
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3. 方便
4. 含有 5. 装备
6. 设施
7. 租金
8. 便宜
第三步:由词扩句雏形现
1.一句多译 ①在它的周围有超市、医院和车站。 →Around it, there_is_a_supermarket,_a_hospital_and_a_bus_stop. (there be句型) →Around it lies_a_supermarket,_a_hospital_and_a_bus_stop. (含有lie的倒装句) ②房子有一个客厅,两个卧室,一个厨房和一个卫生间。 →There_is_one_living_room,_two bedrooms, one kitchen and one toilet in the house.(there be) →The_house_contains_one_living_room,_two bedrooms, one kitchen and one toilet. (contain)
2.按要求补全句子 ①房子在六层建筑的五楼。 storey building. ②它位于花园路和和平路的交叉路口。 ③它们是我市最繁忙的两个街道。 ④每月租金仅为1 000元。
The rent is no more than/only 1,000 yuan per month. ⑤它真的很便宜。
第四步:句式升级造亮点 1.把句③改为名词短语置于句②中作同位语 2.把升级后的句1改为which引导的非限制性定语从句,修饰句①中的building 版权所有:中国好课堂www.zghkt.cn
3.用which引导的非限制性定语从句连接句④和⑤ 第五步:过渡衔接联成篇
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