考研英语作文写作技巧（推荐）

无 需 积 分 ， 无 需 回 复 ， 只 要 你 带 宽 足 够 大 ， 你 资 料 就 足 够 多 ！ 大 家 网 考 研 论 坛 http://club.topsage.com /forum -28-1.htm l 真 正 的 全 免 费 公 益 性 考 研 论 坛 ， 等 待 您 的 光 临 ！ 声 明 ： 本 资 料 由 大 家 论 坛 考 研 论 坛 http://club.topsage.com /forum -28-1.htm l 收 集 整 理 ， 转 载 请 注 明 出 自 http://club.topsage.com 无需积分，无需回复，只要你带宽足够大，你资料就足够多！大家网考研论坛 http://club.topsage.com/forum-28-1.html真正的全免费公益性考研论坛，等待您的光临！ 声明：本资料由 大家论坛考研论坛 http://club.topsage.com/forum-28-1.html 收集整理，转载 请注明出自 http://club.topsage.com Stylish English is... Concise 简洁才是美 好的写作，首先而且至关重要的一点就是简洁。繁冗的写作堆砌了许多无用的词藻，反而 减弱 表 关于同志近三年现实表现材料材料类招标技术评分表图表与交易pdf视力表打印pdf用图表说话 pdf 述的清晰度。当然，也不能仅仅因为简短就认为短句一定优于长句。只要一个单词 确实能起到一定的作用，它就应该留在句中。一般来说，只有在进行强调或修饰、美化句 子时，才能使用重复的单词、语音和短语。修改文章，就是要删繁就简。比较下面这对句 子，注意体会二者的差别及效果。 1) Dr. Sun Yat-sen went to Japan by means of a big boat. 2) Dr. Sun Yat-sen went to Japan by boat. 斜体字部分较啰嗦，因为"by"就是"by means of boat"。 请看下列例句 Wordy: It makes me feel painful to think that she has to work 12 hours a day and seven days a week. Better: It pains me to think that she has to work 12 hours a day and seven days a week. Wordy: It will be our aim to ensure proper health care for each and every one of the Chinese people. Better: Our aim is to ensure proper health care for all Chinese. Wordy: This book will help you master the basic elements of good writing. Better: This book will help you master the basics of good writing. Wordy: The search of the forest that they conducted was entirely complete. Better: The search of the forest was complete. 或They conducted a complete search of the forest. 第二个句子合乎汉语表达习惯，即他们对森林进行了彻底的搜查。 Wordy: He has no sense of principles, whether he is in public or in private. Better: He has no principles, public or private. Wordy: Whenever anyone telephoned her to ask her for help with their homework she always obliged right away. Better: She immediately obliged anyone who telephoned for help with homework. Wordy: In a cautious manner the car went around the corner. Better: The car negotiated the corner. Wordy: If the government agency finds that an individual has received a payment to which the individual was not entitled, whether or not the payment was due to the individual's fault or misrepresentation, the individual shall be liable to repay to the government the total sum of the payment to which the individual was not entitled. Better: If the government agency finds that you received a payment that you weren't entitled to, you must pay the entire sum back. Wordy: Another important aspect is good health. It is one of our great blessings. It may be achieved through proper diet and exercise. Rest is also desirable. Better: The great blessing of good health may be had through proper diet, exercise, and rest. 词语简化的一些技巧 策略之一：用介词短语替代从句。 例: Wordy: While they were playing tennis, she started an argument that lasted all morning. 无 需 积 分 ， 无 需 回 复 ， 只 要 你 带 宽 足 够 大 ， 你 资 料 就 足 够 多 ！ 大 家 网 考 研 论 坛 http://club.topsage.com /forum -28-1.htm l 真 正 的 全 免 费 公 益 性 考 研 论 坛 ， 等 待 您 的 光 临 ！ 声 明 ： 本 资 料 由 大 家 论 坛 考 研 论 坛 http://club.topsage.com /forum -28-1.htm l 收 集 整 理 ， 转 载 请 注 明 出 自 http://club.topsage.com Better: During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning. Wordy: When you come to the second traffic light, turn right. Better: At the second traffic light turn left. 策略之二：删除诸如"who is”或"that is"之类的关系代词，变从句为短语。 例: Wordy: The novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the Middle Ages. Better: The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages. 注：把句中的”three parts”改用形容词来表达，节省了四个不必要的单词”which is written in”。我们经常可以将关系代词如”that”去掉，这只会引起最少的变动。 策略之三：剔除你不需要的单词 "Two joint partners will present their views over a long-distance telephone call." 写完这样的句子后，你自己再读一遍，挑出单词”joint”和”telephone”，注意删去不必要 的词。 策略之四：表达否定意义时，尽量避免使用否定词。 英语 关于好奇心的名言警句英语高中英语词汇下载高中英语词汇 下载英语衡水体下载小学英语关于形容词和副词的题 中很多词不用"no's"或者"not's" 也能表达否定含义的词汇，你尽可以采取更为委婉的表达方式。 例： Thus college students who do not have sufficient financial backing, 也就是college students who lacks sufficient financial backing。 如果你不想使用太多的否定词，就应该尽量避免使用它们。 赘句范例及其改进建议 Wordy (赘语) Improved (替换语) as a usual rule as a rule at that point in time then at this point in time now at your earliest convenience now, soon concerning the matter of about due to the fact that because for the reason that because has proved itself to be has proved, is in connection with with in order to to in relation to with in the event that if modern factories of today modern factories next steps to take next steps puzzling in nature puzzling regardless of the fact although the reason why is that because total effect of all this total effect with reference to about Stylish English has… Variety Brevity is not always a virtue 无 需 积 分 ， 无 需 回 复 ， 只 要 你 带 宽 足 够 大 ， 你 资 料 就 足 够 多 ！ 大 家 网 考 研 论 坛 http://club.topsage.com /forum -28-1.htm l 真 正 的 全 免 费 公 益 性 考 研 论 坛 ， 等 待 您 的 光 临 ！ 声 明 ： 本 资 料 由 大 家 论 坛 考 研 论 坛 http://club.topsage.com /forum -28-1.htm l 收 集 整 理 ， 转 载 请 注 明 出 自 http://club.topsage.com 变化才是真 简短未必是美德 许多人将简洁与简短混为一谈，其实二有很大区别。简洁的主旨是用尽量少的词汇讲述整 个故事，简短的主旨则是为保持文章篇幅短小，精心撰写或随意删除文中的某些词语或章 节。 简洁并不意味着总写短句子。事实上，如果句式缺乏变化，文章就会显得支离破碎，缺少 联系，让人觉得写作技巧贫乏。句式的变化能令文章协调而流畅，会让读者感觉到作者对 主题把握得游刃有余。虽然短句没什么语法错误，但用得太多会使本应合在一起的意思分 离开来。 记住：不要使用一串串短的、支离破碎的句子。要理清自己的思路，尽量使句子长度有所 变化。 例: Before: The Art of Strategy was written by Sun Tzu. It is a fifty-six-hundred-word Chinese classical work. The writer put forth a set of principles in a very tightly compressed manner. They deal with how to defeat oppositions and win battles. 这种表达的问题在于： (1)简单的“主语+谓语”结构太多； (2) "written"和"writer","The Art of Strategy"和"It"，"set of principles"和"they"为重复用 语； (3)读起来很单调。 After：In his fifty-six-hundred word classic, The Art of Strategy, Sun Tzu put forth a tightly compressed set of principles for achieving triumph over opposition. 介词结构+同位语+主语+谓语的形式比较好，因为将"Sun Tzu"放到了最重要成分-主语 的位置，其他成分按逻辑排序居次要地位。整个句子很流畅。 再看下面各例 Choppy: Of course, the weapons at Sun Tzu's time were quite primitive. The armies were very large. They were nearly as large as those in World War Two. The devastation and human sufferings were just as profound as in World War Two. Better: Compared with World War Two, the weapons at Sun Tzu's time were quite primitive, but the armies were nearly as large and the devastation and human suffering just as profound. Choppy: Proverbs are short sayings. They are drawn from long experience. Better: Proverbs are short sayings drawn from long experience. Choppy: People change and places change as well. Jennifer felt this strongly. She had been away for eleven years. Better: On returning after an eleven-year absence, Jennifer had a strong feeling of how people and places change. Choppy: Beijing streets are crowded with taxis, company cars and private vehicles owned by the newly affluent. The number has been rising rapidly in the last few years. The latest statistics show there are now 1.2 million vehicles in Beijing alone. Better: Taxis, company cars and private vehicles owned by the newly affluent have crammed Beijing streets in rising numbers in the last few years-1.2 million vehicles at last count. Choppy: Moby Dick is a book. It is a long book. It is about a whale. A man named Ahab tries to kill it. Herman Melville wrote it. Better: Herman Melville wrote a long book called Moby Dick. It is the story of a struggle of a man against a whale. Choppy: Thousands of buildings met the same fate. This alone is now being preserved. It marks 无 需 积 分 ， 无 需 回 复 ， 只 要 你 带 宽 足 够 大 ， 你 资 料 就 足 够 多 ！ 大 家 网 考 研 论 坛 http://club.topsage.com /forum -28-1.htm l 真 正 的 全 免 费 公 益 性 考 研 论 坛 ， 等 待 您 的 光 临 ！ 声 明 ： 本 资 料 由 大 家 论 坛 考 研 论 坛 http://club.topsage.com /forum -28-1.htm l 收 集 整 理 ， 转 载 请 注 明 出 自 http://club.topsage.com the center of the nuclear explosion. It is being preserved as a symbol. It symbolizes our wish that there be no more Hiroshimas. Better: Of the thousands of buildings that met the same fate, this alone, marking the center of the nuclear explosion, is now being preserved to symbolize our wish that there be no more Hiroshimas. Choppy: I have always had a dream. My dream has been to be a famous writer. Everyone would read my books. I would become very wealthy. Better: I have always dreamed of being a wealthy, famous writer, read by everyone. Choppy: This is a wreck. It was formerly the stately Imperial Garden. It is preserved deliberately as a reminder and symbol. Better: This wreck, formerly the stately Imperial Garden, is preserved deliberately as a reminder and symbol. 句式变化的一些技巧 英语的一个显著特征是它可轻易地把简单结构(一个中心意思)转化为复合结构(两个中心意 思)和复杂结构(一个中心意思和一个从属意思)甚至转化为复合-复杂结构(两个或以上的意 思)。主句，又称独立句，表达可独立成句的思想内容。从句，又称非独立句，表达不能独 立成句，而需与主句一起构成完整的思想内容。 达到句式多变的最佳期途径是把关键词或短语换到开头或结尾，从中发现达到你的目的和 适合你的品味的最好 方法 快递客服问题件处理详细方法山木方法pdf计算方法pdf华与华方法下载八字理论方法下载 。通过连接短句 - 省词，增词，改变词序或把不那么重要的思想 放到从句中去 - 你就可以写出更流畅，成熟的句子。 例 Before: Lu Hao graduated last summer. He joined the First Auto Works in Changchun soon after graduation. He received an engineering degree from his college. 采用从句能将这三个简单句以不同方式连接起来。 After: After graduating last summer with an engineering degree, Lu Hao soon joined the First Auto Works in Changchun. (介词结构+主语+谓语) 或： An engineering degree-holder, Lu Hao joined the First Auto Works in hangchun last summer soon after graduation. (同位语+主语+谓语+状语) 或： Having graduated with an engineering degree, Lu Hao joined the First Auto Works in Changchun last summer. (状语+主语+谓语) 关于"but"的用法 中国人喜欢使用"but"从句：同中文一样，在英文中这也是连接两个短句的简单方法。 要避免单一的"but"从句，可以考虑采用以下这些变化形式： Plain: The children at school were familiar with many games, but Li Hua had never even heard of them. Interesting: The children at school were familiar with games Li Hua had never even heard of. Plain: The room was silent, but suddenly there was a clap of thunder outside. Interesting: The silence of the room was broken by a sudden clap of thunder outside. Plain: They were passionate lovers not only onstage but also off stage. Better: They were passionate lovers onstage and off. Plain: Outside the cinema, she lit a cigarette, not necessarily because she had a desire to smoke, but because she felt the need for warmth. Better: Outside the cinema, she lit a cigarette, as much from the need for warmth as from any desire to smoke. 无 需 积 分 ， 无 需 回 复 ， 只 要 你 带 宽 足 够 大 ， 你 资 料 就 足 够 多 ！ 大 家 网 考 研 论 坛 http://club.topsage.com /forum -28-1.htm l 真 正 的 全 免 费 公 益 性 考 研 论 坛 ， 等 待 您 的 光 临 ！ 声 明 ： 本 资 料 由 大 家 论 坛 考 研 论 坛 http://club.topsage.com /forum -28-1.htm l 收 集 整 理 ， 转 载 请 注 明 出 自 http://club.topsage.com Plain: It was meant to be a brief kiss, but it turned into a long, lingering one. Interesting: What was meant to be a brief kiss turned into a long, lingering one. Plain: Music lightens life, but literature deepens it. Interesting: Music lightens life; literature deepens it. Plain: The film "Chariots of Fire" is about some young runners, but it is more than just that. Interesting: The film "Chariots of Fire" is much more than just a story of young runners. Plain: It is not his height but his weight that prevented him from competing in the race. Interesting: His weight, not his height, prevented him from competing in the race. Plain: Susan seemed unsuitable for the part, but she turned out to be the best actress in the production. Interesting: Susan seemed unsuitable for the part, yet she turned out to be the best actress in the production. Plain: Old Wang is often described as a happy-go-lucky person, but the last half hour of the hike home he was interested in nothing but a bath and a bed. Interesting: Old Wang, an otherwise happy-go-lucky person, thought of only two things the last half hour of the hike home: a bath and a bed. 关于"if... then"和"if"从句 除了"but"从句，很多学英语的人还会过多使用"if … then"或是"if"从句。这些从句本 身并不是不好。但我们这里讨论的是多样性及其必要性。看看下例： Before: If you fail to pass the drug test, we will have to dismiss you from your job. After: Failure to pass the drug test will result in job dismissal. 修改后的句子语气显得稍强一些。同时因为句中省掉了"you"，使句子在语气上减少 了对抗性。这个解题对策适用于每种人称，不单单指"you"。 Plain: If one imitates, one cannot expect to be great. Interesting: No person ever yet became great by imitation. Plain: If we want to end a war quickly, we must lose it. Interesting: The quickest way to end a war is to lose it. Plain: If we were directed from government bureaucracy when to sow, and when to reap, we should soon want bread. Interesting: Were we directed from government bureaucracy when to sow, and when to reap, we should soon want bread. Plain: Several staff members have checked the manuscript to see if it is accurate and easy to use. Interesting: Several staff members have checked the manuscript for accuracy and ease of use. Plain: If words are taken out of context, they are not very likely to mean the same as they do when they are in context. Interesting: Words taken out of context do not always mean what they do in context. 关于"even though"和"although"从句 另一个被广为使用的从句是"even though"或"although"。请注意在此谈论的并不是句 子的错误，我们强调的是文体风格问题。 Plain: Although they were very important in California, laundries were even more significant in other parts of the United States, for laundering was one of the four "pioneer" occupations that enabled Chinese to move eastward across the continent. Interesting: Important as they were in California, laundries were even more significant in other parts of the United States, for laundering was one of the four "pioneer" occupations that enabled Chinese to move eastward across the continent. 无 需 积 分 ， 无 需 回 复 ， 只 要 你 带 宽 足 够 大 ， 你 资 料 就 足 够 多 ！ 大 家 网 考 研 论 坛 http://club.topsage.com /forum -28-1.htm l 真 正 的 全 免 费 公 益 性 考 研 论 坛 ， 等 待 您 的 光 临 ！ 声 明 ： 本 资 料 由 大 家 论 坛 考 研 论 坛 http://club.topsage.com /forum -28-1.htm l 收 集 整 理 ， 转 载 请 注 明 出 自 http://club.topsage.com Plain: Even though the summer of 1889 was the warmest on record, the winter of the same year was cold. Interesting: The summer of 1889 was the warmest on record, followed by a cold winter. 关于"so... that..."或"such... that..."或"so..."从句 中国老师们经常大段大段地教授这些形式，并要求学生们不断练习。结果学生们过 度依赖这些句式，就不怎么考虑别的用法了。 Plain: The comedian was so funny that as soon as he started talking people laughed. Interesting: The comedian soon had them all laughing. Plain: This is such an indispensable book that anyone who wants to speak and write with clarity, effectiveness, and individuality should possess one. Interesting: This is an indispensable book for anyone who wants to speak and write with clarity, effectiveness, and individuality. Plain: The professor was so quick-witted and so knowledgeable of the theater that he was instantly recognized as the best critic in his country. Interesting: The professor's quick wit and his awesome knowledge of the theater had won him instant recognition as the best critic in his country. Plain: Jackie Chan was such a wonderful singer that his songs held eleven thousand people breathless. Interesting: Jackie Chan's songs held eleven thousand people breathless. Weak: Many people in Shanghai used to live in attics, so they could see only a blank wall surrounding them. Better: Many people in Shanghai used to live in attics, their only vista* a blank wall. Plain: It was such an exhilarating experience that he felt dazed the whole evening, well after the concert. Interesting: It was an exhilarating experience, one that left him dazed the whole evening, well after the concert. 避免过多适用"in order to..." Plain: In order to advance his or her career, a genius needs strong financial support. Interesting: All geniuses need a millionaire to further their careers. Plain: During rush hours in Hanoi, cars often scoot into bike lanes in order to get ahead of the traffic jams. This forces bikers to hug the curbs. Interesting: During rush hours in Hanoi, cars often scoot into bike lanes to cut through traffic jams, forcing bikers to hug the curbs. Plain: In order to prepare for millions of visitors for millennium celebrations, the city has launched many projects, some ambitious, some modest, to beautify and modernize itself. Better: Some projects are ambitious, others modest, and all will beautify and modernize a city expecting millions of visitors for millennium celebrations. 不要过于依赖"because..."从句 Plain: We decided to take a taxi because we missed the bus by a second. Interesting: Missing the bus by a second, we decided to take a taxi. Plain: Because my schedule was so busy, I was not able to attend Susan's birthday party. Better: My schedule did not allow me to attend Susan's birthday party. Plain: Because I am dealing with the subject at the moment, let me give you a few statistics. Better: While I am on the subject, let me give you a few statistics. Plain: Deng Xiaoping initiated the responsibility system in the countryside and because of that he took the rural reform program to the next step. Better: Deng Xiaoping initiated the responsibility system in the countryside and furthered the cause of rural reform. 无 需 积 分 ， 无 需 回 复 ， 只 要 你 带 宽 足 够 大 ， 你 资 料 就 足 够 多 ！ 大 家 网 考 研 论 坛 http://club.topsage.com /forum -28-1.htm l 真 正 的 全 免 费 公 益 性 考 研 论 坛 ， 等 待 您 的 光 临 ！ 声 明 ： 本 资 料 由 大 家 论 坛 考 研 论 坛 http://club.topsage.com /forum -28-1.htm l 收 集 整 理 ， 转 载 请 注 明 出 自 http://club.topsage.com Reverse the sequence for effect 妙用倒装 如果你行文平淡，那就枯燥无味。你需要不时地改变一下你的行文规则，把简单的东西紧 缩，放在一起写，有时你得打破你叙述事情的惯用模式。达到语言变化自如的途径之一是 颠倒句子的正常顺序。倒装使文章清新，出人意料,富于创造性。 打破词或句子的自然顺序可获得强调的效果，但注意：如果过分使用倒装会使文章矫揉造 作，有明显的雕琢痕迹。同时句子次序的变化不应该造成歧义。 例Wrong: Those who teach rarely get rich. 这个句子含义模糊，分辨不出是"teach rarely"还是"rarely get rich?" Reversed/ Correct: Rarely do those who teach get rich. Reversed/Correct: Rarely do people get rich by teaching. 优秀作家一般在句子的一半处引出主语。可是很多学生几乎不用这种写法。应该变换这种 主语开头的写法。 经典范例 To be or not to be: that is the question. - William Shakespear Never before have we had so little time to do so much. - 美国前总统Franklin D. Roosevelt Plain: We sat on the cliffs by the sea, watching the sunset. Interesting: On the cliffs by the sea we sat, watching the sunset. (介词短语-主语-谓语-分词) Normal: The professor walked in. Reversed: In walked the professor. (谓语-主语) Normal: Jeremy scorned honest men. Reversed: Honest men Jeremy scorned. (宾语-主语谓语) Normal: Although I am fond of my children, I hope they won't grow up spoilt. Reversed: Fond as I am of my children, I hope they won't grow up spoilt Normal: He never gave up certain habits of his youth, and one of them was that he liked to inspect his clothes thoroughly for wrinkles before he stepped out of the door. Reversed: Certain habits of his youth he never gave up, and one of them was that he liked to inspect his clothes thoroughly for wrinkles before he stepped out of the door. Normal: Stephen was a bungler then. Reversed: A bungler Stephen was then. (补语-主语-谓语) Normal: We shall never feel secure. Reversed/Interesting: Secure we shall never feel. (补语-主语-谓语) Normal: This is a lost generation. Reversed: This is a generation lost. Plain: The immense expanse of the Gobi Desert stretches before us. Interesting: Before us stretched the immense expanse of the Gobi Desert. (介词短语-谓语-名词) Plain: He wasn't cut out to be a peacetime officer. He wanted glory, he wanted the excitement of war. No one, except possibly himself, has ever doubted his physical courage (or any other kind of courage). Interesting: He wasn't cut out to be a peacetime officer. 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