考研英语高分作文黄金模板预测作文及点评

建议信 预测作文 Directions: Suppose that you are a student and find some of your classmates have formed extravagant habits. Write a letter in about 100 words to the administrative department of your university to show your suggestions for this situation. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, use “Li Ming” instead. 【经典范文】 Dear Sirs, I am an ordinary student of this university and am writing to draw your attention to the fact that some students around me have had extravagant habits. They do not cherish their money at all. Some buy expensive mobile phones and laptop computers, some spend money on video games or Internet chat, and some go to restaurants and bars often. However, it is known to all that thrift and economy are a prime requisite of well-ordered living and successful career. To solve this problem, in my mind, the leadership and students of our university should work together to create a general atmosphere of thrifty life. Teachers should teach by their action that thrift is an indispensable virtue, and students of high awareness can have a positive influence on those around them. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 【文章点评】 这封信是写给主管部门，针对某一现象，提出自己的建议。因而开篇先说明了写信的目的：希望某些同学的浪费现象能引起主管部门的注意。然后描述了他们浪费习惯的具体 表 关于同志近三年现实表现材料材料类招标技术评分表图表与交易pdf视力表打印pdf用图表说话 pdf 现。最后为解决这个问题，提出自己的建议。 首段的extravagant表示“奢侈的，浪费的”。第二段的laptop computer表示“笔记本电脑”。第三段的thrift表示“节俭”。 辞职信 预测作文 Directions: Three months ago you got a job as a manager for a company. But now you find that the work is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Williams, telling him your decision, stating your reason(s), and making an apology. Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter, use “Li Ming” instead. You do not need to write the address. 【经典范文】 Dear Mr. Williams, I am writing to inform you of my decision to resign from my current position. After three months of work, I find it inappropriate for me to take the position as a manager here for the following reasons. First and foremost, I have expected the job to be interesting and challenging, which turns out to be the opposite. In addition, the salary has proven to be much lower than you originally promised, and I have a large family to support. Therefore, I have decided to quit the job after much deliberation. Please let me know if there is anything I need to do before my departure. Thank you very much for offering me the opportunity to work with the outstanding staff here. I sincerely hope that you approve of my resignation. I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Sincerely yours, Li Ming 【文章点评】 这封辞职信结构清晰。第一段说明这封信是告知雇主自己想辞去工作。第二段详细说明辞职的原因。第三段对于辞职引起的不便表示歉意。 第二段用了“First and foremost, In addition, Therefore” 作为衔接手段，使文章结构清晰、一目了然。“I find it inappropriate for me to...” 意思是“我发现我不适合做…”，使辞职的语气委婉。 致歉信 预测范文 Directions: Suppose that you cannot go and see your teacher Mr. David off as you have promised for some emergency. Write a letter in about 100 words to make an apology to him. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, use “Li Ming” instead. 【经典范文】 Dear Mr. David, Kindly excuse me for my not being able to keep my promise to see you off at the railway station tomorrow morning. My brother, who works in a company near our university, suddenly fell ill and was taken to a hospital this morning. As his friends and colleagues are all occupied by their work and he has no relatives in this city other than me, I have to go to the hospital right away and take care of him. According to one of his colleagues who have sent him to the hospital, it will take a few days for him to recover, so I am afraid that I cannot go to the station to see you off tomorrow. I’m really sorry and I hope you will be back soon. I surely will miss you when you are away. Have a pleasant trip. Sincerely yours, Li Ming 【文章点评】 开篇表明自己因不能如约去给对方送行而致歉。而后说明是因为哥哥生病无人照顾，所以抽不出身来去送行。原因写得合情合理，条理清楚。第二段再次致歉，并表达对即将离开的老师的思念。最后祝愿老师旅行愉快。体现了真挚的师生情谊。 首段的fall ill表示“病倒”，see sb. off表示“送行”。 Directions: Suppose that you have received a letter complaining about the misbehavior of a particular employee. Write a letter of apology in about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, use “Li Ming” instead. 【经典范文】 Dear Mrs. Robinson, Thank you for your letter of June 17th, complaining about the conduct of one of our employees. We have investigated your complaint already and the person concerned will be severely reprimanded and punished. Please accept our sincere apologies for this unhappy experience. We assure you that such a matter will never happen again. Thank you also for bringing this matter to our attention. We place great importance on the conduct of our employees and your complaint will give us the opportunity to remedy any problem that may exist. Please believe that we pay great attention to the rights of our customers and you will be sure to feel the change for the better in the days to come. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 【文章点评】 这是一篇对投诉信进行回复的特殊的致歉信。首段说明接到了对方的投诉信。次段说明已调查该事，当事人将被处罚。第三段表示深深的歉意，并保证此类事件不再发生。第四段感谢对方的来信并说明本单位将改进工作。该信环环相扣，结构紧凑，值得大家细细研读，认真学习。 首段的conduct表示“行为”。次段的reprimand表示“训斥，斥责”。第四段的remedy表示“补救，纠正”。 求职信 预测作文 Directions: Suppose you are going to graduate from Yanshan University. Write a letter to a company in around 100 words to show your interest in the position as a secretary and apply for it. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, use “Li Ming” instead. 【经典范文】 Dear Sir, I wish to apply for the position of secretary which you recently advertised in the local newspaper. I am going to graduate from Yanshan University next month and get my B.A. degree in British and American literature. I am sure that I meet the qualifications you specified in your advertisement. I am a student in the top ten percent of our department, and I have worked as a secretary in summer and winter vacations in the Huafeng Company. I have also attended several meetings and exhibitions on behalf of our university to introduce products to potential customers. My references are available and I can send as soon as possible upon notice. Thank you for your consideration of my application. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 【文章点评】 首段说明自己应聘的职位及个人的基本情况。次段首句是段落主题句，之后说明自己的学习和工作经历。第三段说明自己备有推荐信(references)可供参考。最后表示感谢并期待回复。 首段首句即写明所应聘职位和从何处获知信息，条理非常清晰。句中使用定语从句，相当恰当。第二段首句的qualifications指“条件”，即“工作所需的资质和技能”，specify表示“指明”。 感谢信 预测作文 Directions: Suppose you were recommended by Professor Liang to get further education in Sydney University last June and now you have been admitted by that university. Write a letter to Professor Liang to express your gratitude in about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, use “Li Ming” instead. You do not need to write the address. 【经典范文】 Dear Professor Liang, I am writing to extend my gratitude to you because with your help I am now a student of Chemistry Department of Sydney University. Last June, when I applied to become a graduate student of Sydney University, you really gave me a lot of valuable help. You not only wrote a recommendation for me to Professor Wells who works in the Sydney University and also gave me careful and patient instructions on how to fill the application forms and write the application letters. It is your unreserved help that enables me to obtain this splendid opportunity of further education. For the following two years I will study hard to reciprocate your sincere help and expectations with excellent grades. Yours truly, Li Ming 【文章点评】 第一段说明因对方帮助自己成为悉尼大学化学系学生而表示感谢。第二段具体谈了自己在大学申请过程中所受到的对方的帮助。第三段再次表示感谢并决心以优异的成绩来回报对方的真诚帮助和期望。 第二段中的application form指“申请表”。第三段首句中的unreserved表示“无保留的，坦率的”。次句中的reciprocate表示“回报，报答”。 申请信 预测作文 Directions: You are a secretary of a company that is looking for a sales manager. Write an application for a transfer to the new position. You should write about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, use “Li Ming” instead. You do not need to write the address. 【经典范文】 Dear Sirs, Having learned that our company is looking for a sales manger, I venture to write to seek this vacancy. I am at present a secretary in the Advertising Department where I have been working for nearly three years. But my major in university was marketing research and I took part in various practices in international trade. So I have been feeling very much like working in the Sales Department. Besides, the three years working experience as a secretary enables me to be fluent in both Chinese and English and have strong interpersonal skills. I believe these abilities, as shown in detail in the resume I enclose, should qualify me for the position as a sales manager. My leadership, fully aware that I am more suitable as a sales manager, has approved of my transfer should you find it desirable. I would like to extend my appreciation in advance if you could grant me an interview. Cordially, Li Ming 【文章点评】 这封信第一段说明申请的内容——本公司一个销售经理的职位。第二段说明自己想从广告部秘书的职位调到销售部任经理的理由以及自己胜任这一职位的相关条件。第三段表明自己现任领导对自己工作调动的意见。最后为礼貌性结语，表明自己希望获得面试的机会。 首段的sales manager表示“销售经理”。次段的Advertising Department表示“广告部”。第三段的transfer表示“调动”。 投诉信 预测作文 Directions: Suppose that you ordered a refrigerator but later found a worrying problem. Write a letter of complaint to describe the matter and require settlement. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, use “Li Ming” instead. 【经典范文】 Oct.18th, 2008 Dear Sir, I am happy that the refrigerator we ordered last week has arrived on time. But it is a great pity that we find there is something wrong with the refrigeration facilities. After we used it for several days, we found that food stored in the refrigerating compartment turned bad quickly. When we finally decided to take the temperature in it, we were surprised to find it was around 15℃, far from the standard temperature range from 0℃ to 9℃. This problem has affected our normal life. Would you please let me know whether or not you can send a repairman as soon as possible? I hope that my problem will get your kind consideration. Yours faithfully, Li Ming 【文章点评】 这封投诉信的结构极其清晰。首段简述所定购的冰箱出了问题。次段详细说明具体的问题。第三段首句说明了该问题的后果；次句向对方提出明确的 要求 对教师党员的评价套管和固井爆破片与爆破装置仓库管理基本要求三甲医院都需要复审吗 ；末句表达了自己希望该问题尽快得到解决的意愿。 首段首句相当礼貌，肯定了对方按时送货上门的做法。次句以but开头表示转折，指出了问题所在，其中refrigeration facilities表示“制冷设备”。第二段中首句的refrigerating compartment表示“冷藏室”，是冰箱中的专业术语；次句的range表示“范围”，这里是名词。第三段第二句使用would you please提出自己的要求，非常礼貌。 Directions: Suppose you received the telephone bill and found that you are overcharged. Write a letter in around 100 words to describe the matter and ask for the mistake to be corrected. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, use “Li Ming” instead. 【经典范文】 Dear Sir, I have just received my telephone bill for last month. To my great surprise, it is much higher than I have expected. My normal telephone expense was around ＄30 but this time it is three times more than that amount. I have checked the bill carefully only to find that the record shows I made several international calls. I have not a single relative or friend overseas so I never made such calls. I am sure there are technical or man-made errors involved, and I hope you can make an investigation into this matter as soon as possible. Anyway, I will pay the bill before tomorrow so as not to cause any inconveniences to you. I hope I can get my refund as soon as possible. Best regards. Yours faithfully, Li Ming 【文章点评】 首段说明自己收到电话账单后感到很惊讶。次段说明了具体情况。第三段说明自己期待问题尽快解决。 第二段中的overseas表示“海外”，technical表示“技术的”，man-made表示“人为的”。第三段的refund表示“退还，归还（钱款）”。 询问信 预测作文 Directions: You were on business several days ago and lived in a hotel for a couple of days. Unfortunately when you came back, your briefcase was found lost. Write to the hotel enquiring for it. Tell the manager your boarding information in detail and what your briefcase looks like, mentioning the possible place it was left, to make it more easily found. You should write about 100 words and needn’t write the address. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter, use “Li Ming” instead. 【经典范文】 Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to ask if you have found a briefcase which I left when I departed from the hotel. I stayed at the hotel from 20 to 27 October; my room number was 262. I think I probably left the briefcase somewhere in the reception area as I hurried off for a taxi. I am afraid it does not have my name on it. It is black with one zip compartment and several other compartments. There are two paper back books and a plastic folder inside it. If you find it, please let me know, and I will be very happy to claim it. Yours faithfully, Li Ming 【文章点评】 首段表明写信的目的：请求酒店经理帮助查找一个丢失的公文包。第二段写明了自己在该酒店所住的具体时间及房间号；同时进一步描述了那个公文包的一些具体的特征。 第二段中的depart from表示“离开”，hurried off for a taxi表示“匆匆忙忙赶去打的”，claim 是“认领”的意思。 Directions: You were on business travel for 1 week. Write a letter inquiring about a hotel in about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, use “Li Ming” instead. 【经典范文】 Dear Mr. and Mrs. Zhong, I am writing at the suggestion of a friend who stayed at your hotel last summer and has warmly recommended it to me. I am scheduled to arrive in Lijiang on July 29th and would like a single room with a private bath. I shall be staying for four days and would like to have all my meals at your hotel. Would you please book a seat for me at the Grand Music Fair hosted by Xuan Ke? I enjoy local music very much, and I want to know more about it. Would you please let me know whether such a room is available and how much my stay is likely to cost? I shall be looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Li Ming 【文章点评】 首段说明自己是为询问旅馆的情况而写信，点明是朋友热情介绍而来，这样一下子拉近了自己与旅馆经营者之间的关系。次段说明自己到达的时间与具体的要求(单人间，能洗澡，在旅馆吃饭，住四天，参加音乐会等)。第三段询问是否有这样的房间及其价格。第四段说明期待早日得到答复。 第一段的recommend表示“推荐”。第二段首句的schedule表示“安排，定于”；次句中使用了将来进行时，非常形象生动；第三句的book表示“预定”，host表示“主持”。 邀请信 预测作文 Directions: Write a letter to one of your high school classmates who is a student of another university in your city, and invite him to the small dance held by your university at this weekend. Some necessary details must be included. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, use “Li Ming” instead. 【经典范文】 Dear Sherry, How are you these days? We haven’t seen each other since the graduation. But I’m very glad that we are now studying in the two universities that are in the same city and not far away from each other. So how about a meeting for us recently? It happens that there will be a small dance in our university this Saturday afternoon. If you are interested and free then, we can go to it together. After the dance, I’d like to treat you to dinner since there is a fairly good Sichuan restaurant and I know hot dishes are always a favorite for both of us. And don’t worry that it will be too late for you to go back, for I will certainly ride you back to your university by my bicycle. What do you think of my plan? If you couldn’t come, please let me know before Friday for I would book a table in the restaurant that day. And if you agree with my plan, it’s unnecessary for you to send a reply and I will meet you at the East Gate of our university on Saturday at 1∶00 p.m. Hoping to see you as soon as possible. Yours, Li Ming 【文章点评】 这封邀请高中同学来自己大学见面的信，语言比较随意，但非常礼貌并言辞恳切，很能打动人，体现了对朋友的真挚友谊。第一段说自己与对方在同一城市的两所大学学习，但很久没有见面了，因此提议近期聚一下。第二段提出了一个细致周到的聚会计划：首先说正好自己大学本周六下午有一个舞会，邀请对方来参加；并安排舞会后共进晚餐，然后用自行车送对方回学校。第三段征求对方对此邀请的意见，并说明在对方无异议的情况下，两人见面的地点和时间。最后一段表达自己希望尽快见到对方的愿望。 第二段中的hot dishes表示“味道辣的菜”。第三段中的book表示“预定”。 祝贺信 预测作文 Directions: Suppose that your friend’s birthday is coming. Write a letter in about 100 words to congratulate her. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, use“Li Ming”instead. 【经典范文】 Dear Helen, I remember all the time that your birthday is around the corner. I am sure all the friends and relatives are planning a grand birthday party and happy surprises for you. May I join them in wishing you a happy birthday? How I wish I could stretch out my hand to shake with you, but you are so far away on the other side of the globe. Do you know how much I cherish our friendship during the past ten years, and how much I anticipate maintaining it for the years to come? I write this letter to send my heartiest congratulations. I am sure that your birthday party will be a great success and I wish you many happy returns. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 【文章点评】 首段先对对方即将到来的生日表示祝贺。次段首句表达了自己对朋友的思念之情，次句表达自己对这份友谊的珍视。第三段首句再次表明写信的目的，次句祝贺生日聚会圆满成功。 首段首句中的around the corner表示“即将到来”。次段首句的stretch out表示“伸出”，cherish表示“珍惜，珍视”，anticipate表示“期望”。第三段首句的hearty表示“衷心的，诚挚亲切的”。 推荐信 预测作文 Directions: You are asked to write a letter of recommendation for Miss Guo Li who wants to get a teaching position in a high school. Write a letter to the high school in about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, use “Li Ming” instead. 【经典范文】 To Whom It May Concern, I am writing on behalf of Miss Guo Li, an applicant for the position as an English teacher in your school. Miss Guo Li is now one of my students, actually one of the most excellent ones. As a result of her unremitting efforts in learning English, her major, she has had a good command of it and especially her spoken English is very fluent and standard as well, as can be demonstrated by her straight A grades on all required subjects. Moreover, Miss Guo’s personal traits are impressive too. She is highly motivated, energetic, reliable and cheerful, and above all she has strong interpersonal skills. In closing it is my belief that Miss Guo Li is well competent for the job of a high school English teacher. Her dedication to the teaching career and professional abilities will no doubt add to your work efficiency and quality. Sincerely yours, Li Ming English Professor, Tongji University 【文章点评】 这封信写给自己并不认识的某中学的招聘负责人，因而采用了这个不一样的称呼。开篇即点明要推荐郭丽女士来应聘对方学校的英语教师一职。第二段说明郭丽在校时的学习情况以及适合做老师的性格特点。最后重点说明郭丽完全胜任中学英语教师这一职位。并以对她的敬业精神和专业能力的高度评价作为总结。 次段的unremitting efforts表示“不懈的努力”。 介绍信 预测作文 Directions: Suppose that your student is going to study in a new city. Write to a friend in that city and ask him to act as the sponsor. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, use “Li Ming” instead. 【经典范文】 Dear Mr. Smith, Please allow me to introduce to you the bearer of this letter, Mr. Li Xiaobin, one of my best students who is going to study in your city at the beginning of next month. Xiaobin graduated from Department of Physics, Fudan University this summer with distinction and is going to study in Stanford University for his master’s degree. I have got his accommodation arranged already. I want to ask you such a favor as to act as his sponsor if it will not bring you too much trouble. He is an upright and honest young man and I am sure he won’t cause you any trouble. I will shoulder the responsibility in case anything does happen. Thank you for your kindness. Wish you happy and healthy. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 【文章点评】 此信的首段介绍了持信人与自己的关系，通报了其下月去收信人所在城市学习的消息。次段介绍了持信人的情况。第三段提出请对方担任持信人担保人的请求，并说明此举不会给对方带来任何负面影响。第四段是对对方的感谢和祝福。 首段的bearer表示“带信人，持信人”。第二段的accommodation表示“膳宿”。第三段的in case表示“万一”。 Directions: Write a letter in about 100 words to inform a colleague of a coming partner. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, use“Li Ming”instead. 【经典范文】 Dear Anna, I want to take this opportunity to inform you that Peter will be joining us shortly. He has worked in this field for twelve years and we are delighted that he has decided to join our company at this stage of our development. He is a person of efficiency and responsibility and I have no doubt you will find a good partner in him. Peter is currently involved in a project which might be of interest to you, and he shall be contacting you immediately after his arrival. I am sure it will be a happy and valuable experience for both of you. Sincerely yours, Li Ming 【文章点评】 首段通告了Peter将要来到的消息，并对他做了简要介绍。次段继续介绍，并相信他将会成为收信人的好搭档。第三段说明了Peter将与收信人联系，并对