大作文 提高教师工资是否有利于教学质量answer

提高教师工资能否提高教学质量? It is not exaggerating that teachers with low payment s are always well-known people. [亲你的point是什么啊? illogical statement] In my opinion, raising teachers’ payments can not (does not necessarily indicate) the rises in qualities of teaching. Teachers now are more likely to care about(focus on the source of their students rather than their incomes) what the students they are teaching. A good source of students can take the teachers more benefit than money do. On the other hand, enhancing the payments may cause the teachers to be much lazier under the large lure and are not able to concentrate in teaching. Although(raising income) m oney comes with the opulence, honor and circumstance ( a escalation in social status),disadvantage of money can be overweight (overweigh)the benefits it take. Obviously, qualities of teaching can be enhanced by raising the honor of the school(promotion of a better school’s reputation), the (increasing) rate of the extraordinary students or improvement of (advancement in) teaching equipments. The details why I choose this are as follows.[ this statement is absolutely crap]. Firstly, raising the teachers’payment can not push teachers into a complete concentration on the teaching and education. What teachers care most about is the source of students. If students have fantastic futures with happiness and opulence. Teachers will be happier than before. (Teachers are motivated by the achievements and accomplishments of students rather than the financial rewards).Because of the excellent students taught by the teachers, they will also benefit from this case, attacking(WTF?) lots of other students with the fees of teaching. (This sentence contradicts your argument)Money will then comes with not only a kind of expect given from the leaders but also the representative of honor and mortal virtues, which motivates the teachers to concentrate on their great enterprise.For example, Shenzhen Middle School, a famous school in Shenzhen, gathering the well-known and highly experienced teachers without good equipments exhibiting the old form such as the old cracked classrooms.(亲这句的谓语在哪?) In that case, teachers are not really care about the payments and condition there. Secondly, raising teachers’ payment s will not make sense in some ways, for the teachers will not be concern ed about the extra money only if the leaders mention the situation.(ETS的考官不了解中国国情).Money can not attract the teachers’ attention, for they only regard the money as the past fruit of(what the fuck is this ?)laboring. They will still tend to be as what they like in the past. The qualities of teaching will not change. Teachers’ teaching should build up on the basis of the much concentration of teachers. For example, the teachers with high-paying (high payments) in Xinlan School tend to be in the low situation in the whole province now but used to be highly prized in province of China.(例子没有解释清楚论点) Finally, payment which used in the teachers will not change the skills of teachers. Skill will be immutable only if the teachers undergo the harsh training. (Training, rather than other “short cut”, is the only way that teachers can improve their skills) .Whatever how much money will be given to the teachers, they will still in the situation (in what situation?). The money will cause the teachers think much about the benefits taken from money. As I think, it is better to put more money in the equipments rather than in teachers’ income, teachers are the great job that make most of the teachers work hard on their works(病句) and they indeed want to teach us and what they do are always for our sake. Otherwise, income may motivate the teachers feel under pressure. To sum up, you can easily know from me(my essay)that I do not consider the increasing income for teachers is a better choice, thinking about (based on) the greed, desire and lazy it takes.