话题 3 如何用英语描写周围的环境

话题 3 如何用英语描写周围的环境 Pelsonal environments 必走三步 假设你是李华，参加社会实践来到武汉饭店。该饭店经理请你以经理助理(assistant manager)的身份写一封信给来店住宿的外宾朋友，征求他们对于饭店工作的意见，内容包括： 1．客房服务； 2．房间设施(facilities)  情况(电活、电视、空调……)； 3．餐厅饮食(菜肴口味及品种花样)； 4．小卖部等。 注意：1．词数 80 — 100： 2．信中应当包含上述主要内容；可以适当增减细节，使内容连贯； 3．开头已经为你写好。 Dear guests， Welcome to Wuhan Hotel．... 第一步：认真审题，提炼要点 一审格式：运用书信格式。 一审结构：动词时态以一般现在时为主，主语多用第一、二人称。 三审要点：用英语思维，理出写作要点。 improve the quality of our service，give opinions and suggestions， our room service，food at the restaurant， telephone，air-conditioner，television，and Internet， do our best to meet your requirements 第二步：紧扣主题，扩点成句 To improve the quality of our service，We hope that you will give opinions and suggestions about our work． Please let us know how you feel about our hotel，including our room service，food at the restaurant，and the conditions of the facilities such as telephone，air-conditioner，television，and Internet． We also wish to have your opinions about our shops．We shall do our best to meet your requirements． 第三步：补充修改，连句成篇 Dear guests， Welcome to Wuhan Hotel．To improve the quality of our service，we hope that you will give opinions and suggestions about our work．Please let us know how you feel about our hotel，including our room service，food at the restaurant，and the conditions of the facilities such as telephone，air-conditioner，television，and Internet．We also wish to have your opinions about our shops．We shall do our best to meet your requirements Thank you for your concern and help． Yours sincerely， Li Hua Assistant Manager Wuhan Hotel 满分作文——满分说明文三 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友 Bob 将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房情况，并告知住房面积为 25 平方米，月租 500 元。 注意：1．词数：100 左右； 2．参考词汇：房租 — rent(n．)。 范文： Dear Bob， Thank you for your last letter．I'm so glad to hear that you'll come to learn Chinese in Jianxin Chinese School in September．I've found a place for you． As you wanted，the room has a bedroom，a bathroom，a kitchen．There is a bed，a sofa，a desk and a chair in the bedroom．It's about 25 square meters on the third floor，whose window faces the Fangcao Street． It's not far from Jianxin Chinese School．You can take Bus No.11．It's only one stop． By the way，you have to pay 500 yuan for tile room every month．I'm expecting your coming． All the best! Yours Li Hua 点评 本文文体运用娴熟，行文轻巧灵活，简单句、复合句结合使用，张弛有度，尤其是定语从句的使用别具一格。 必做练习 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友 Sarah 打算暑期来北京旅游，来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信，简单介绍以下内容： 1．简况：长 800 余米、600 多年历史、300 余家商铺；2．位置：天安门广场南面；3．交通：公共汽车 17、69、59 等路，地铁 2 号线；4．特色：步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。 参考词汇：步行街 pedestrian street 当当车 trolley car 地铁 subway 注意：1．词数 100 左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。 Dear Sarah， Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street．Here is something about it．____________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua (2009 年高考全国 Ⅱ 卷) 答案： Dear Sarah， Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street．Here is something about it． Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old．Along this 800-meter street，there are more than 300 shops．As the street is in the center of Beijing，just to the south of Tian'anmen Square，it's very convenient to get there by bus．You may take Buses No.17，69 or 59．Subway Line 2 has a stop there too．Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street，but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops，but also to theatres and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life．I'm sure you'll like it． Yours， Li Hua