阐述性论说文

阐述性论说文无需对一个观点先作批评和评论,它主要是对自己的观点进行正面阐述。它的结构比较简单，主要单一地对某一事物、某一观点的必要性、重要性、正确性、优越性或危害性、错误性阐述。写法可以从同一方面一层一层地对观点进行阐述。也可以从两个不同方向来分析。 阐述模式一 S1 Topic:            点明文章要讨论阐述的事物或现象 S2 Thesis:            我对这个事物或现象的基本看法 S3 Argument:        赞成的理由因为其重要性(或反对的理由因为其危害性) S4 Importance I        重要性之一(或危害性之一)  (Effect I)            S5 Details:            具体说明这个重要性(或危害性) S6 Importance II        重要性之二(或危害性之二) (Effect II) S7 Details:            具体说明这个重要性(或危害性) S8 Importance III    重要性之三(或危害性之三) (Effect III) S9 Details:            具体说明这个重要性(或危害性) S10 Conclusion:        结论 句型 1. All  available / indisputable / reliable / striking / statistical    evidence  goes to show that / points to the fact that / piles up to show that / lends support to the view that...... 2. This / It  brings out / sets forth / reveals / demonstrates  the important / unquestionable / hard  fact that … 3. In my opinion, …plays an important role in / becomes indispensable to / does more harm than good 4. … will contribute to / will exert a harmful effect on  both  children’s physical and mental development / individuals and society. 5. To have a  better / full  understanding / appreciation  of …, we may  first look / examine    at … 6. A good case in point / A typical example of this    is that… 7. History / Our society  is filled / abounds  with the examples of …… 8. The  significance / importance / consequence  of … cannot be  overstressed / overemphasized  for… 范文1 The Growth of College Athletics 1. 大学里体育活动的现状 2. 开展大学体育活动的重要性 3. 结论 (1) In recent years there has been a big growth in the area of college athletics.(现状facts) (2) Sports are so popular on campus that they have become an indispensable part of college education. (中心论点 opinion) (3) College athletics contribute both to students' physical well-being and to their mental well-being.(更具体地阐明自己的观点) (4) There is a new appreciation of the importance of sports as students' bodies are increasingly weak and vulnerable to disease because of inactivity. (5) School authorities, as well as students themselves, have realized that sports are especially necessary to a person who works with his brain most of the day. (6) Besides, sports offer a healthy form of escape from their monotonous routine studies. (7) Taking part in swimming, jogging and ball games can make their academic life richer and fuller. (8) And most importantly, sports help to promote the development of a student's personality. (9) Such traits of character as competitiveness, self-discipline, teamwork and endurance---the things much needed in their later career and life---are encouraged and cultivated in sports. (10) College athletics plays a vital role in a student's life, and it deserves further attention from colleges and universities. 范文2 What Would Happen If There Were No Power (1990,1) 1) Ever since early this century, electricity has become an essential part of our life. 2) If there were no electric power... 3) Therefore… Ever since early this century, electricity has become an essential part of our modern life. It has become almost as necessary as water and air in modern society. Without it life would be unimaginably difficult. If there were no electric power, life would be hardly imagined. People couldn’t use any electric devices such as refrigerator, air-conditioner, washing machine and microwave oven. Machines couldn’t be run in the factory, surgical operations couldn’t be performed in the hospital, and banking services couldn’t be done in the bank. Besides, TV and broadcasting stations couldn’t transmit signals, films couldn’t be shown in cinemas, and many other entertainment services had to be closed. Therefore, the authorities concerned should ensure electric supply by all means. Besides, the government should attach importance to electric industry, developing atomic or hydraulic power stations to meet the increasing needs of the social development. 阐述模式二 (谚语、警句或名言的现实意义) S1 Topic:            点明文章要阐述的谚语或名言 S2 Definition:        用自己的话解释这一谚语或名言的意思 S3 Thesis:            论点句,表明自己对这一谚语的观点态度 S4 Positive side:        从正面说明这一论点(如其意义) S5 Detail:            具体例子说明 S6 Restatement:        从例子得出的结论再说明论点 S7 Negative side:    从反面论证这一论点(如其意义) S8 Detail:            具体事实说明 S9 Restatement:        从事实引出结论，再说明论点 S10 conclusion:        阐明其现实或更深远意义 句型 1. An English proverb says, / One of the great men once remarked, / Nearly every civilization has its own equivalent to the proverb,   “No pains, no gains” / “Where there is a will, there is a way” “Time is money”   2. It means that … In other words, …   3. It goes without saying that / It is obviously clear that / It is universally acknowledged that   4. History / Our society  abounds with the examples of… 5. Edison / Columbus / Einstein 6. Such  examples /instances  might be given indefinitely, but this will be sufficient to show that… 7. On the other hand / On the contrary, if … 8. There is hardly a man who can achieve success without … 9. All evidence  points to / justifies / lends support to  the fact … 10. For us college students, the  saying / proverb  has a profound and realistic significance; for … 范文 No pains No gains (1) Nearly every civilization has its own equivalent to the proverb “No pains no gains”. (2) It means that nothing that is really worth doing can be gained without painstaking efforts and that no knowledge or skill can be acquired without sweat or toil. (3) You don’t have to look very far to prove the truth of the proverb. (4) Darwin’s great discovery was not the work of a moment, but was preceded by years of patient, arduous observation. (5) Mozart was not an accomplished pianist at the age of eight as the result of watching countless hours of TV. (6) Nor did Edison make himself the greatest inventor in the modern world by spending his spare time on going to parties and bars. (7) His words “Genius is 99 percent perspiration and one percent inspiration” reveal the secret of thousands of successful men and women. (8) All accomplishments and success they achieved, without exception, come from sustained endeavor.