第七节怎样写“对比型”的文章
一.写作范例
Which Mode of Travel Do You Like?
With the general standard of living improving and the working week becoming shorter, more and more people are able to make a holiday trip to places of interest. While many like to join package tours for convenience, (作者倾向) I prefer to travel on my own.
(独自旅游的优点) I like traveling on my own not only because it costs much less but because it gives a great degree of independence and freedom. Traveling on my own, I’m my own boss, and I can decide when to start on my way, where to linger(逗留) a little longer and which spot can be skipped over to save energy and time for another spot. I can always adjust my plan. (集体旅游的缺点) On the contrary, in a package tour you’re deprived (剥夺) of as much freedom as in a military base (军事基地). At the sound of the whistle(哨子), you have to jump up from a sound sleep and hurry to the gathering place where you are collected. At the sight of the little flag waving, you must immediately take yourself away from the scenes you are marveling at the follow the guide whose sole interest is to cover all spots according to his strict schedule, regardless of the weather or your health condition.
(结论) True, you may encounter inconveniences if you travel individually, for instance, getting accommodations (住宿) for the night and finding a place for meals. But nothing can be compared with the freedom which is vital to a person who takes a holiday trip mainly to escape from constraints(约束) of his routine life.
二.对比型作文的常用
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达句式
开头1
For most people today, __________ has become their main source of _______. But as for me, ________________ should be regarded as a better source. A number of reason my help at this point.
开头2
In recent years more and more people tend to __________. Although most of them are reluctant to _____________. I feel like _____________________.
开头3
With the general living standard improving and the working week becoming shorter, more and more people are able to _________. While many like to join _____. For convenience, I prefer to do _________________.
开头4
A and
B are two important means of ___________. Although in recent years more and more Bs are being put in service, A hasn’t declined, instead, it has grown steadily.
开头5
Among the various forms of ___________. A is the most popular means, but I prefer to _______________.
开头6
It is generally accepted that most people like doing something by A better than by
B. the three main reasons for this are as follows.
正文1
I like A not only because it costs __________ but because it gives ___________.
By A, I can decide what to do _________, when to do _____________ and where to do _________________.
However/ On the contrary/ In contrast, by B you’re denied/ deprived of _______ far from _______________.
正文2
It is true that/ Admittedly/ True, B can provide/ bring _____________, but it can not do _________________.
On the contrary, A excels (突出) in __________.
Besides, B is passive in __________. But A is active in ____________________.
Most importantly, if all of us get _______________ from B, there will be decline in ______________.
By contrast, A helps _______________.
正文3
Many people appreciate the conveniences of A. They enjoy ________________.
They also prefer ________________________.
On the contrary, others are attracted by B. They like ___________.
However, both A and B have their disadvantages.
正文4
For many people, to travel with/ stay in/ live by A is a great fortune. With ______ A offers them benefits of ______________ in every respect.
For some people, however, happiness lies in B.
结尾1
When we consider A versus B on the basis of __________, shouldn’t we think that the latter/ the former is a better _______________?
结尾2
With the improvement/ development of _________, A will gain/ prove to hold/ enjoy greater advantages/ superiority/ priority over B.
结尾3
True, you may encounter inconveniences of A. But nothing can match/ be compared/ be paralleled with _________________ of A.
结尾4
Although B has its own advantages, it can not compare with A in ____________. 结尾5
In a word, both A and B have their virtues and shortcomings. Everyone can judge them in a particular way and make his choice accordingly.
结尾6
I prefer/ choose/ like to stay in/ live in/ travel by A so as to enjoy the advantages and avoid disadvantages of both.