高考英语书面表达范文及命题分析和得分要领

【2015·四川卷高考 书 关于书的成语关于读书的排比句社区图书漂流公约怎么写关于读书的小报汉书pdf 面表达】 假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharn 在网上发贴,希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平,她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。 1.表达给她提供帮助的意愿; 2.说明你能胜任辅导的理由; 3.给出讲好普通话的两点建议; 4.提出你学习英语的具体需求。 注意: 1.词数120左右,开头语已为你写好; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称; Hi Sharn, This is Li Xia I learned fr yur pst that yu want t iprve yur Mandar________________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案】 Hi Sharn, This is Li Xia I learned fr yur pst that yu want t iprve yur Mandarin I a quite interested in it I thin I’ fit fr it As a student, I have been learning Mandarin fr any years In additin ,I a hinese, which eans Mandarin is a ust fr e t cunicate with thers in y daily life S I’ quite cnfident that I can help yu learn Mandarin Learning Mandarin taes tie, s if yu want t learn it well ,yu shuld spend uch tie practicing Mandarin everyday As the saying ges, practice aes perfect Besides, yu can als read se bs in hinese、see se hinese fils and listen t se hinese radi prgraes Speaing and listening are very iprtant fr a language learning, by which yu are sure t ae great prgress In yur pst, yu say yu can teach English as a reward It is just what I want I’ eager t iprve y English S, if yu allw e t help yu learn Mandarin, yu can als help e iprve y English We can cntact each ther by vide chat every night fr half an hur in English and half an hur in hinese, s that we can iprve ur ral speaing Hpe fr yu early reply! Yurs Sincerely Li Xia 【命题意图】本题考查了学生的语言的运用能力和发挥想象的能力。从微观上考查了学生写 句子的能力。 【考试方向】把语言知识和能力结合起,综合考查学生的语言运用能力和临场发挥的能力。【得分要点】要点齐全,结构完整。使用多种句式,如定语从句:I a hinese, which eans Mandarin is a ust fr e t cunicate with thers in y daily life、表语从句:It is just what I want等。还使用了大量短语等。 【2015·上海卷高考书面表达】 Guided Writing Directins Write an English cpsitin in 120–150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in hinese 学校即将举办“读书节”,目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘阳,你已找到以下三幅图片,决定给读书节组委会写一封信,推荐其中一幅,你的信须包括以下 内容 财务内部控制制度的内容财务内部控制制度的内容人员招聘与配置的内容项目成本控制的内容消防安全演练内容 : 1 简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片; 2 阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。 【参考答案】 Dear Sir/ Mada, Since the Reading Festival is arund the crner, I’ writing t recend a picture which can be used in the brchure t reind the students f the pleasure f reading In the picture, three students are sitting at the table, discussing heatedly what they have just read It sees that they have had a lt f fun thrugh the discussin Thugh it is aditted that reading is stly a persnal activity which needs quietness and cncentratin, as far as I’ cncerned, it can als be a sharing eperience when the sae b is being appreciated Just iagine that yu have read a terrific detective stry with fascinating and intricate plts Yu are s aazed by the genius f the writer and yu can’t help sharing it with yur classates r best friends, wh turn ut t have been deeply ipressed as well The ent yu entin the b, the passin and enthusias abut the stry will eplde which can never be gained n yur wn My ideal atsphere f reading is just lie that, thrugh which yu can nt nly appreciate the cntent by yurself, but als have the pleasure f sharing the plts r pinins with yur peers, which will ultiately enhance yur understanding f the b T su up, the reasn f y recendatin is quite siple and apparent that reading, instead f being dull and islating, can be full f participatin and cn interest I sincerely hpe that yu will tae y suggestin int cnsideratin and I’ ling frward t yur early reply Yurs sincerely, Pan Yang 【命题意图】本题考查了学生的语言的运用能力和看图写话能力。从微观上考查了学生写句子的能力。 【考试方向】把语言知识和能力结合起,综合考查学生的语言运用能力和临场发挥的能力。【得分要点】结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。 运用定语从句a picture which can be used in the brchure t reind the students f the pleasure f reading; a persnal activity which needs quietness and cncentratin; yur classates r best friends, wh turn ut t have been deeply ipressed as well;My ideal atsphere f reading is just lie that, thrugh which yu can nt nly appreciate the cntent by yurself, but als have the pleasure f sharing the plts r pinins with yur peers, which will ultiately enhance yur understanding f the b;[] 运用连词Thugh, 运用副词deeply 修饰ipressed 运用了宾语从句discussing heatedly what they have just read;It sees that they have had a lt f fun thrugh the discussin; Just iagine that yu have read a terrific detective stry; it is aditted that reading is stly a persnal activity;I sincerely hpe that yu will tae y suggestin int cnsideratin 此外,文章还使用了大量习语和短语,如nt nly …but als; as far as I’ cncerned; T su up ; share with; 等。学§科§网§X§X§K] 学科网XXK] 【2015·陕西卷高考书面表达】 书面表达(满分30分) 假定你是李华。在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事,请阅读启事, 并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。 Vlunteers Wanted Our annual English Festival, which will be held n June 15-17, 2015, is nw ling fr 20 student vlunteers t prvide service fr Talent Shw, Speech ntest, and English Debate If yu are interested, please send an applicatin eail at yur earliest cnvenience t Mshen at chenlashi@aefc 写作要点: 1表示写信意图; 2陈述应征目的; 3说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。 写作要求: 1邮件词数不少于100; 2开头和结尾部分已写好,不计入总词数; 3可根据情况增加细节,使行文连贯 4不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 Dear MS hen ,[] I’Li Hua, a student fr lass2, Grade 3 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ Ling frward t yur reply Yurs truly, Li Hua 【参考答案】 Dear MS hen , I’ Li Hua, a student fr lass2, Grad e 3 I’ writing t apply fr the psitin as a student vlunteer I really want t btain this precius pprtunity because, by ffering y service, I will be able t iprve y rganizatinal ability, cunicatin sills as well as y cnfidence in speaing English in public As an utging girl, I get alng well with y classates Besides, I have such a gd cand f English that I a elected as assistant t y English teacher Successfully, I have lent a helping hand t her in several English activities f y class, which have been appreciated by bth teachers and classates学&科&网 I a sure that I can perfectly live up t yur epectatins I will be gratefull if yu culd give e a ind cnsideratin Ling frward t yur reply Yurs truly, Li Hua 【命题意图】本题考查了学生的语言的运用能力和发挥想象的能力。从微观上考查了学生写句子的能力。 【考试方向】这篇作文类似于读写类作文。首先要读懂招募启事,抓住重要信息。再结合提纲写作。内容贴近学生的生活,学生有话讲。也富有实用性。对学生的交际能力也会有所帮助。 【得分要点】 本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如I have such a gd cand f English that I a elected as assistant t y English teacher运用了s…that…句型,以及定语从句I have lent a helping hand t her in several English activities f y class, which have been appreciated by bth teachers and classates。此外,文章还使用了大量短语,如apply fr the psitin, as well as, in public, get alng well with,,have such a gd cand f, lent a helping hand t, live up t等。插入语Besides,以及副词Successfully的使用使文章内容更具有层次感,也使语言更加连贯。