考研1号《写作160篇》考研英语话题作文经典必背20篇之“因材施教”读者练习

考研1号《写作160篇》考研英语话 题 快递公司问题件快递公司问题件货款处理关于圆的周长面积重点题型关于解方程组的题及答案关于南海问题 作文经典必背20篇之“因材施教”读者练习 写作原文 As is vividly demonstrated in the picture above，a duck mother is begging the monkey teacher to teach her little child to climb the tree. The monkey teacher is astonished and puzzled when hearing that. The deeper meaning of this interesting cartoon is that parents despite of children's talents and capability when searching for a teacher. Athough the   teacher is famous in this field, he could not teach the children well. That is   to say, a fish can never fiy in the blue sky and a child can never success in   the field he or she have no capability and interesting. This phenomenon is    not uncommon in today's society. There are many reasons can account for   this social problem, but the most crucial one is that parents hold high hopes for their children so that regardless of personality of children and make them lose hope after serval failures. With the regard to myself, parents should give up the blind education and discover children's interests and talents carefully. Only by doing so, can the children developed freely and have a promising future! 原作点评 第一段点评 ①As is vividly demonstrated in the picture above, a duck mother is begging the monkey teacher to teach her little child to climb the tree. ②The monkey teacher is astonished and puzzled when hearing that. 首段描述漫画内容。写作者观察的很仔细。 ⑴第一句，the→a。 第二段点评 ①The deeper meaning of this interesting cartoon is that parents despite of children's talents and capability when searching for a teacher. ②Athough the teacher is famous in this field, he could not teach the children well. ③That is to say, a fish can never fiy in the blue sky and a child can never success in the field he or she have no capability and interesting. ④This phenomenon is not uncommon in today's society. ⑤There are many reasons can account for this social problem, but the most crucial one is that parents hold high hopes for their children so that regardless of personality of children and make them lose hope after serval failures. 二段揭示漫画主旨并运用道理和事实进行论证。 ⑴第一句，despite不能动词，不能充当谓语，建议改成ignore。 ⑵第二句，could→can。 ⑶第三句，注意主谓一致，建议将画线部分改成，he or she has no gift（天赋） and interest（兴趣）。 ⑷第五句，一句话中是不能出现两个谓语的，建议将画线部分改成，there are many reasons that account for this social problem；but the most crucial one is that parents hold high hopes for their children so that regardless of personality of children and make them lose hope after serval failures. →and the most crucial one is that parents hold high hopes on their children and neglect the personality and interest of children so as to make them lose themselves after serval failures. 第三段点评 ①With the regard to myself, parents should give up the blind education and discover children's interests and talents carefully. ②Only by doing so, can the children developed freely and have a promising future! 总结全文，写作者给出自己的观点。 ⑴第一句，这里建议将with the regard to myself改成in my opinion会更好。 ⑵第二句，developed→develop。 总体点评 文章亮点：文章表达完整；思路清晰准确；部分句子写得很地道。 文章错误：①语法错误：有少量语法错误（主谓一致等）。 ②表达问题：个别句子在一定程度受到汉语的影响。 ③整体把握：个别地方用词不够准确。 修改 意见 文理分科指导河道管理范围浙江建筑工程概算定额教材专家评审意见党员教师互相批评意见 ：落实写作160篇中的必背20篇的揣摩与背诵工作；多看外文刊文，减少汉语对英文的影响；写完习作，建议多查字典矫正词汇、短语等方面的小错误。 参考分数（满分20分）：13 修改展示 As is vividly demonstrated in the picture above，a duck mother is begging a monkey teacher to teach her little child to climb the tree. The monkey teacher is astonished and puzzled when hearing that. The deeper meaning of this interesting cartoon is that parents ignore childrens' talents and interests when searching a teacher for them. Athough the teacher is famous in that field, he could not teach the child well. That is to say, a fish can never fiy in the blue sky and a child can never success in the field that he or she has no gift and interest. This phenomenon is not uncommon in today's society. There are many reasons that can account for this social problem, and the most crucial one is that parents hold high hopes on their children and neglect the personality and interest of children so as to make them lose themselves after serval failures. In my opinion, parents should give up the blind education and find children's interests and talents. Only by doing so can children develop freely and have a promising future! 考研英语【考研1号】系列图 书 关于书的成语关于读书的排比句社区图书漂流公约怎么写关于读书的小报汉书pdf 为您提供诚挚的服务！更多考研资料获取请登录考研1号网站www.ky007.com