【吹尽狂沙系列】高中语文 经典话题作文题写作指导 “依米小花的联想”写作导引

【吹尽狂沙系列】高中语文 经典话题作文题写作指导 “依米小花的联想”写作导引 语文:高考作文技法:材料作文“依米小花的联想”写作导引 【文题】 阅读下面的材料，根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。(60分) 在非洲的戈壁滩上，有一种叫依米的小花。花呈四瓣，每瓣自成一色:红、白、黄、蓝。它的独特并不止于此，在那里，根系庞大的植物才能很好地生长，而它的根，却只有一条，蜿蜒盘曲着插入地底深处。通常，它要花费5年的时间来完成根茎的穿插工作，然后，一点一点地积蓄养分，在第六年春，才在地面吐绿绽翠，开出一朵小小的四色鲜花。这种极难长成的依米小花，花期并不长，仅仅两天，它便随母株一起香消玉殒。 读了以上材料，你有何感受或联想,请选择一个角度构思作文，自主确定立意，确定文体，确定标题;不要脱离材料 内容 财务内部控制制度的内容财务内部控制制度的内容人员招聘与配置的内容项目成本控制的内容消防安全演练内容 及含意作文，不要套作，不得抄袭。 【 试题 中考模拟试题doc幼小衔接 数学试题 下载云南高中历年会考数学试题下载N4真题下载党史题库下载 分析 定性数据统计分析pdf销售业绩分析模板建筑结构震害分析销售进度分析表京东商城竞争战略分析 】 一、立意说明 在艰苦的环境中，即使你不具备大多数人能生存的条件，但是，如果你能够一心一意地扎根深处，能够耐得住寂寞坚持不懈的追求，能够一点一滴地积蓄力量，你一样能够实现自己的价值，尽管短暂，却很绚丽。 此为最佳立意，如能从这个角度切入，可给予发展等级加分。 根据材料我们可以看出，这种叫依米的小花有三大特点，这正是立意的基本角度，由此联系人生我们可以得出相应立意: 〖特点一〗“它的根，却只有一条，蜿蜒盘曲着插入地底深处” 1、扎根深处可成正果(可成/方成，如写“方成”过于绝对，不切合题意) 2、专一也是一种成功的品质 3、与其广博不如精深 〖特点二〗“它要花费5年的时间来完成根茎的穿插工作，然后，一点一点地积蓄养分，在第6年春，才在地面吐绿绽翠，开出一朵小小的四色鲜花。” 1、耐得住寂寞，才能享受生命的辉煌 2、积累力量，突破自我 3、坚韧(毅力、坚持不懈地努力) 〖特点三〗花期并不长，仅仅两天工夫，便随母株一起香消玉殒。花呈四瓣，每瓣自成一色:红、白、黄、蓝。 1、生命的价值不在于长短而在于活出特色(活得精彩) 从整体上看，也可得出以下结论: 1、人生的意义重在奋斗的过程 2、人生的意义重在永不放弃地追求。 (前面这四个方面的立意皆可视为符合题意) ※下列论点视为偏题或离题: 1、逆境使人成功(但未谈到如何使人成功,有的同学对苦难、逆境的理解十分偏激，苦难造成美丽，似乎美丽只有苦难才能造就) 2、自信、乐观(谈心态) 3、用生命去换取理想(成功):依米花牺牲并非本意，并不等于说成功一定要牺牲 4、不要做理想主义的殉道者(批评或否定像“依米”这样的做法)没注意感情倾向 5、大谈生命奇妙 6、选择奉献 7、珍惜时间 personal and collective learning on your own, combining learning reading and discussion, read, learn, and understanding of the original principles, focused learning around topics discussion, ongoing positive and negative type education. Members should close their own thoughts, work, real life, comparing reflection and further improve the pertinence and effectiveness of learning, continue to unlock the buttons, correct wrong, think of practical realization in mind, party rules discipline, firm and correct political orientation, develop discipline, and being a qualified member of the adherence to the Constitution Party rules and political discipline. Second, "to do" as the key, seriously, do try to do, to set an example. Two lies in the doing. To learn to do, and the unity of knowledge, qualified party member, is the focus of this study and education and essential point. A qualified party members not only to watch his Constitution Party rules and talk to learn how, through, dark and light, and also what does he end up doing, is not a unity. This study and education, is essential to enhance the party's political awareness, awareness of overall, core, par. In learning education in the, each members are to control "told political, and has faith, do political qualified; told rules, and has discipline, do implementation discipline qualified; told moral, and has conduct, do conduct qualified; told dedication, and has as, do play role qualified" "four told four has" this put ruler, often measure himself, view himself, transformation himself, with actual action reflected learn of effectiveness, and reflected belief faith of power. To firm to to Central par, to XI General Secretary par, to party of theory, and route, and approach par, to Central of the decision deployment par, strongly maintenance Central of authority, maintenance XI General Secretary this core, strongly obey Central of concentrated unified led, in thought, and political 8、成功源于奋斗(泛泛而谈，完全未涉及积累和专一) 二、其他扣分项目说明 1、不足400字，四类卷，不给发展等级分，不超过20分。 2、400字——800字，没有写完，结构不完整，从结构项扣分，不超过40分。 3、写完但不足800字以50个字扣1分的标准扣分。 4、缺标题，扣2分。 、1-2个错别字不扣分，从三个开始每个扣1分，重复不计算。6分封顶。 5 6、字迹卷面分3分封顶。 7、点号到底要扣1-2分。 三、评卷中发现的问题 1、不能紧扣材料，审题不细致，分析宽泛。 如:成功需要准备。依米花的为了成功开放准备了什么,在作文中却未强调它的专一，它的毅力。只是泛泛而谈。 2、议 论文 政研论文下载论文大学下载论文大学下载关于长拳的论文浙大论文封面下载 的文体意识不强。 【考场佳作】 坚持，铸就成功人生 坚持，在任何时期任何国家都是被人们所提倡的。正是因为坚持，美丽的蝴蝶才能破茧而出，夺目的珍珠才会闪耀于世，独特的依米小花才能在经历五年的积蓄后开出奇异的四彩之花。 王顺友的坚持，锻造了世界上最美的邮递路线。很难想象，一条普通人带上足够装备都走不完的路却成了王顺友数十年来来回回的邮递路线，多少个雪飘的月夜，多少个骄阳炙炼的白天，王顺友带着他的驴和藏族同胞的期盼匆匆走在这条路上。自从从父亲手里接过这条接力棒，王顺友一直坚持着，坚持到了今天，此刻，他一定还在那条路上的某个地方，唱着山歌，走着„„ 坚持使王顺友成了感动中国的人物，坚持使他实现了他一生的价值，正因他的坚持，他铸造了一个成功人生。 林肯的坚持，成就了世界上最伟大的总统。(展开之二:分论点，独立成段) 林肯出身贫寒，是鞋匠的儿子，但他一直坚持自己的梦想，从平民到总统，他经历一次又一次的竞选失败。他承受了一句又一句的冷嘲热讽，遭受了一次又一次的人生磨难，但他都坚持了下来，面对讥讽，面对挫折，他坦然，是鞋匠的儿子又怎么样，坚持到最后，林肯成了至高的总统。 坚持使林肯成为世上风云人物，坚持使他从平民蜕变成总统，可见，坚持可以铸就成功的人生。 刘翔的坚持，创造世界上最惊人的奇迹。 雅典奥运会上，刘翔那历史性的一跃永远定格在亿万人的脑海中，他为亚洲夺得了第一枚110米跨栏金牌。然而这一切的辉煌来源于他平日里坚持锻炼，据其教练孙海平说，刘翔每日都必须坚持训练，每次进步都是练出来的。 坚持使刘翔获得成功，创造奇迹，铸就成功人生。 王顺友，林肯，刘翔都体现了依米小花的精神——坚持，倘若不是坚持，成功人生如何铸造,依米小花又如何能在适宜根系庞大的植物生长的戈壁上开出美丽的四色花, 因为坚持，勾践才能再次成王;因为坚持，司马迁才能完成通古今之变的《史记》;也是因为坚持，罗女士才能用感人的信语唤醒已成植物人的丈夫„„ 曾经有人告诉我，生命贵在坚持，纵观古今中外，每个成功的人背后都有“坚持”两个字在支撑着，工作需要坚持，学习需要坚持，不是说坚持就是胜利吗, rs are to control "told political, and has faith, do political qualified; told rules, and has discipline, do implementation dsential to enhance the party's political awareness, awareness of overall, core, par. 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Members should close theie original prpersonal and collective learning on your own, combining learning reading and discussion, read, learn, and understanding of th3led, in thought, and political 德基老人毕生潜心研究烤鸡的方法。失败了再做，日复一日，终于在他80多岁的时候该研制美味烤鸡的方法。 用一生的经验，一生的体会，一生的感情去研制，终于让世人品尝到了什么是养精积蓄后的味道。 养精积蓄，收获如期而至的成功。曾经有人问过易中天对自己出的<品三国>系列丛书大赚钱的看法。易中天自豪地说:”我为此准备了30年啊!” 用30年的时间，挑灯夜读，专心苦读转眼，用现代的理念结合历史解读<三国>，这便是养精积蓄，这便是绽放美丽人生的途径。 人常有悲叹命运不公，没有命运垂青。其实这些人只会怨天尤人，庸庸碌碌，永远不知成功只垂青于懂得积累，有准备的人。 让我们像只海豚，养精积蓄，沉潜之后跃出美丽，让我们做朵依米，养精积蓄，积累之后绽放美丽。 [得分:52分] 有一种美 有一种美，要用信念来支撑。有一种美，要用生命去表达。 依米小花，不惜花费5年的时间来积蓄，甘愿忍受沙漠炎热的天气和贫瘠的土地，只为了，只为了那一朵仅仅绽放两天的四色小花。 荆棘鸟，不惜耗尽自己一生的精力，甘愿忍受荆棘刺穿喉咙的巨大疼痛，也只为了，只为了那一声美丽而动听的歌声。 是什么在支撑它们历经千辛万苦换来理想的实现?那是无法浇灭的新年。是什么使得它 那是神圣可贵的生命。 们的一生如此灿烂美丽? 虽说依米小花和荆棘鸟的生命和美丽都是极其短暂的，在美丽绚烂的那一刻，也宣告着它们生命即将殆尽，然而它们依然无怨无悔地完成自己的使命，实现自己的理想。 也正因为如此，它们的美丽是撼动我们心灵的，因为这种美是信念培养起来的，是用生命浇灌出来的。 王昭君，这一旷世美女，她的美也是感天动地，她甘愿离开富庶的大汉王朝，选择贫穷边缘的沙漠作为自己的归宿，她肩负着汉朝人民和匈奴人民的和平使命，远奔大漠，她的美便也得到了升华，这种美不仅是她惊落大雁的容貌之美，还包含她心灵上的美，凝聚着她对和平的热切渴望和她对祖国人民的热爱。。因而，她愿意把自己的余生交给呼韩邪大单于，交给茫茫大漠。这种美，远比杨贵妃使得花朵羞得闭合的美可贵，令人动容! 这世间就是有这样的一种美，这种美是短暂而绚烂无比，它来之不易，或许要我们跋山涉水，历经千辛万苦，因而需要坚定的信念，才能使我们在追求涂中忍受痛苦与寂寞。而且它消散得快，我们做不得任何事情能够使它停留多一刻。 让我们坚定心中的信念，带着无畏的勇气出发，用闪亮发光的生命去描绘这一种美，震撼大地的美。 [得分:51分] 借我华彩一瞬 一瞬的美丽绽放，依米小花用了五年的时间准备。 一瞬的华丽，可能源于长时间的战斗;一瞬的爆发，可能源于不停止的突破;一瞬间的成功，可能源于艰苦的探索。 在无声的世界里，她们绽放。 金碧辉煌的衣裳中是她们的笑魇，一伸手，一投足，风华尽露，整齐得惊人。她们在舞台下训练的千百个日夜里，在教练的比划下，挥汗如雨听不到，可她们凭着一股决心与激情，互相配合练习最终达到默契十足，勇敢地战胜了无声的困难，她们收获的是惊艳世界的《千 4General Secretary this core, strongly obey Central of concentrated unified led, in thought, and political nce XI, and route, and approach par, to Central of the decision deployment par, strongly maintenance Central of authority, maintenaffectiveness, and reflected belief faith of power. 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To learn to do, and the unity of knowledge, qualified party member, is thmember of the adherence to the Constitution Party rules and political discipline. Second, "to do" as the key, seriously, do t lifiedical realization in mind, party rules discipline, firm and correct political orientation, develop discipline, and being a quad further improve the pertinence and effectiveness of learning, continue to unlock the buttons, correct wrong, think of praction ann, ongoing positive and negative type education. Members should close their own thoughts, work, real life, comparing reflectg reading and discussion, read, learn, and understanding of the original principles, focused learning around topics discussiopersonal and collective learning on your own, combining learnin 手观音》。 在舞台上华丽的一瞬，是她们完胜敌人的结果。面对生理缺陷，若她们中途被困难击败，若她们梦想着一步登天，能有那么完美的演出吗,即使是那么一瞬的绽放，也需要长时间的付出。 在国人的期盼下，他爆发。 一枪令下，他瞬间离开起跑线。迈起矫健的步子，跃过一个个障碍。最终他第一个冲过终点，披上了中国国旗。赛前在训练场中，作为无名小卒的他一次一次练习起跑，一次一次调整姿态。他心里怀着为国争光的炽热的梦。他总是说:“我可以做得更好。”;他总是一次一次地突破自己，他总是不服亚洲人是田径弱者的言论。 冲过终点那一瞬，是他突破自己的奖赏。如果他总是停留在一个满足的成绩，而不是坚持不懈的突破自己，加强训练，那获胜的仍会是黑皮肤的人。即便那么短暂的获胜，也需要长期的突破与准备。 在众人的惊呼中，他成功。 法拉第不断挥弄着线圈，那一瞬间，他不敢相信自己的眼睛，他成功用磁产生了电。十年里，他一直在探索。起先设备在两间房内分放，根本来不及看现象。后来他改进了设备，在一间房内观察。陷入误区让他久不能解，可他没有放弃，改变方式继续尝试，最终得到一瞬。 通电流的一瞬，是他十年磨成的一把利剑。十年不断的探索，是他成功的必要环节。没有这些积累和探索，他不会是电磁感应的发现者。即便是那么一瞬的成功，也需要长久的探索。 一瞬华彩，源于长久战斗，源于长久突破，源于长久探索。借我一瞬华彩，我可以奋斗一生。 [得分:54分] 花开一时，却是辉煌 晴朗的夜空中條而划过一道耀眼的光芒，一颗流星绽放出了瞬间的灿烂，绚丽的光线刺痛了人们的眼睛，人们不由得想起那朵依米小花，那朵需要常年时间才能开出一朵独特却只绽放两天的小花。心中不禁感到一阵惋惜与遗憾。同时也为它坚定的生命力与不屈不饶的顽强精神而深深震撼。 只是一朵花，便有如此坚忍不拔的毅力。换作是人，又将如何,我信步思考，脑海中泛起阵阵波澜，他们，走进了我的思绪中。 一间破旧的旅馆里，一张摇摇欲坠的目床上，一位54岁的老人奄奄一息地望着天花板，彌留之際，他心里想的并不是他即将逝去的人生，而是他还未完成的著作。他便是著名天文学家—哥白尼。这是，门突然开了，他的助手冲了进来，大声对他说:“先生，教会的出版社终于肯出版您的书了，这是第一本!”助手将一本厚厚的书递到哥白尼手中，哥白尼嘴唇颤动着，激动的眼泪潺潺地划过面颊。书的封面上赫然印着“《天地运行论》。哥白尼著”几个大字，老人用手抚摸着它，整整十六年，这一天终究还是到了。自己的努力没有白费，老人苍白的脸上浮现出欣慰的微笑，留恋地再看了封面一眼，安然闭上了眼睛„„ 李时珍—中国古代医学家，他的巨著《本草纲目》在医学界有着不可取代的地位，并且被翻译成十几种外国语言在世界广为流传。谁可曾想过，这本书的出版背后凝聚了他多少汗水和心血,李时珍登高山，采草药，尝百草，风餐露宿，饱经磨难。我不会忘记你严冬被荆棘划破手背;我不会忘记你酷夏被骄阳炙烤的痛苦。没有它们便没有《本草纲目》的问世，没有医学界首屈一指的巨作，更没有世间如此美满和谐的幸福～ 想到这里，我猛然醒悟，五年的插根入地，继续养分才换来两天短短的绽放，所以依米小花绽放得美丽，绽放得独特。人们何尝不是这样,若无长期的基础积累与坚韧的毅力，何 r, to XI General Secretary par, to party of theory, and route, and approach par, to Central of the decision deployment par, sral parmation himself, with actual action reflected learn of effectiveness, and reflected belief faith of power. 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Members should close theie original prpersonal and collective learning on your own, combining learning reading and discussion, read, learn, and understanding of th5led, in thought, and political nifiedtrongly maintenance Central of authority, maintenance XI General Secretary this core, strongly obey Central of concentrated u 以能换来最后的成功绽放, 花如此，人如此，世间万物亦如此，只望我们共勉: 苦难作笔， 坚毅作舟， 我们不断超越～我们永不放弃～ 我们期待那时的花开～ 我们期待成功的辉煌～ [得分:52分] 依米小花 在非洲的戈壁滩上，它，要花费五年的时间积蓄水分才能吐绿绽翠，开出一朵四色小花。它叫依米小花。 没有挺拔的身材，没有硬大的枝叶，没有累累的果实，为了生存，为了绽放自己缤纷的色彩，花费两千多个昼夜的点点积蓄，换来的仅是两个昼夜的花期。一如社会生活中某些闪亮的人，经过日日夜夜不懈地奋斗，为的仅是闪亮的一瞬。虽然如白驹过隙，稍纵即逝，却能让人铭记于心，芳香永存。 披一件薄薄的布衾，电一盏微亮的枯灯，把一轴黄黄的长卷。在卷轴上细致地批改增删。我们看到的是一代文学家才曹雪芹在跳跃的火花中消廋的身影。“增删五次，批阅十载。”“都云作者痴，谁解其中味“就是这样的一代文学家在寒风中，在夜深人静之时度过了多么艰辛的修改工作，经过了多么漫长的岁月，承受了多么穷困潦倒的生活，积蓄了多么丰富的知识，才得以完成《红楼梦》这一伟大的著作。这部不朽的名作架构了一个庞大复杂而又摇摆欲坠的清王朝，它将成为中华民族文学宝库中一颗明亮的珍珠。 曹雪芹也是一朵依米小花，耗尽无数个昼夜，增删选改，终究开出了一朵耀眼的花——《红楼梦》 撑一竹蒿，回溯到安定繁荣的大汉王朝，司马迁继承父业，博览群书，研究前朝史实，走访各地，收集史学材料，曾有多少个日夜他访阅各地，露宿郊野。他一点一点地积累自己的知识，丰富自己的见闻，他一点一点地磨砺自己的意志，所以，他能有足够的广博的见识。细腻传神的笔触去完成一部前无古人的史学巨著。所以，他才能坚强如山，意志如铁，即便接受宫刑，他业能承受巨大的耻辱，坚持完成《史记》不被乡党嘲讽,,笔伐所击退。于是汗青流光，《史记》铸就。 司马迁也是一朵依米小花，以无数个昼夜去丰富自己，锻造自己，终究完成了《史记》。 无论是自然中依米小花，还是社会生活中的依米小花，它们都用自己无数个昼夜的辛劳艰苦去换得绽放自己的机会。都令我们敬仰。 你也是一朵依米小花吗, [得分:52分] 在过程中绽放 非洲戈壁滩上的一种名叫依米的小花，竟然花费了五年时间穿插根条，只为在第六年的春天绽放两天。 有人会说，这是多么可悲的花啊，才开了两天便结束了生命，然而，依米真的可悲么，真的只开了两天吗,我认为，依米是一个壮丽的生命，它在孕育花蕾的过程中久久的绽放～ 认为依米可悲的人，他们关注的只是结果而忘却了在成长过程中，生命谱写的瑶章。 我们必须要认识到过程中绽放的美好。 一提及王羲之，人们首先想到的是他创作的《兰亭序》被誉为天下第一行书。正因为《兰亭序》显要的荣誉，掩盖了王羲之在成为“书圣”的过程中，曾经拥有过的许多脍炙人口的美谈。所以，人们对王羲之的认识不够深刻，缺少了窥探一位贤人的机会。 nce XI, and route, and approach par, to Central of the decision deployment par, strongly maintenance Central of authority, maintenaffectiveness, and reflected belief faith of power. 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