托福试题：TPO 18【精选】独立写作满分作文

托福试 题 快递公司问题件快递公司问题件货款处理关于圆的周长面积重点题型关于解方程组的题及答案关于南海问题 ：TPO 18【精选】独立写作满分作文 托福试题:TPO 18独立写作满分作文 智课网出品 TPO,全称TOEFL Practice Online,是ETS有偿提供给考生的托福备考 材料 关于××同志的政审材料调查表环保先进个人材料国家普通话测试材料农民专业合作社注销四查四问剖析材料 ,是ETS之前考过 的托福试题,对于托福考生考前模拟和复习具有很大的价值,智课网为大家带来托福TPO 18 独立写作试题并附托福作文范文及托福满分作文答题要点,考生们要认真备考。 托福TPO 18 独立写作试题: Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends. 托福满分作文-范文赏析: All of us are surrounded by different kinds of people every day. For students, when they are at school, they are mainly surrounded by teachers and their friends. Both of these two kinds of people have great influence on students. However, I still believe that friends have greater influence on students than teachers do. 内容 财务内部控制制度的内容财务内部控制制度的内容人员招聘与配置的内容项目成本控制的内容消防安全演练内容 详细条目 段落 此段结构 首段,首句写了背景,即每个人都被不同人包围,而 学生在学校主要是被老师和朋友包围,引出了文章主 题。之后进行转折,提出了自己的观点,认为朋友的 影响力更大。 此段功能 文章首段给出了背景信息,介绍了文章主题。最后指 www.smartstudy.com 出自己观点。即朋友的影响力更大。 Usually, a student and his friends are almost of the same age or at least the same age. Therefore, they will have a lot in common, such as hobbies. As a consequence, they can talk to each other and imitate each other’s behavior easily. My little brother and his friends are both interested in soccer games and they spend almost all their spare time talking about soccer games worldwide and great football players. What is more, my brother’s friend is a good soccer player and my brother tends to imitate his behavior. As a result, my chubby brother became better at sports, especially playing soccer. Meanwhile, a teacher will not have such great influence on a student since teachers have less in common with students. 内容 详细条目 段落 此段结构 本段承接上文指出,学生和他们的朋友基本一样大, 所以又很多共同点,因此总是彼此聊天和模仿。之后 举了自己的弟弟和他朋友都喜欢足球的例子,证明朋 友的影响力。最后对比老师,指出老师的影响力不及 朋友。 此段功能 本段通过演绎推理和举例论证,证明了朋友的影响力 更大。 Moreover, in most schools in my country, teachers just appear in front of students when there is a class and they will leave the classroom as soon as the class is over. www.smartstudy.com Thus, students actually have limited time to communicate with their teachers. Even if they do have some time to discuss with their teachers, the topic of discussion is usually the subject in class. However, a student can have hundreds of different topics, ranging from daily life or school subjects, to talking with their friends. They have more time communicating and therefore, they know and understand each other better than their teachers. As for me, I can spend a whole day talking to my best friends but only an hour talking with my teachers. 内容 详细条目 段落 此段结构 本段首先指出了大多数学校中老师总是一下课就离 开教室,之后进行具体说明,学生一般没时间和老师 交流,即使有时间交流也是学业上的问题。之后和朋 友进行对比。和朋友有很多时间在一起,因此会更加 了解彼此,最后举了自己的例子证明。 此段功能 本段对比了老师和朋友交流时间的长短和了解程度, 证明了总论点。 In addition, an everlasting friend may have greater influence in the long run than a teacher. Some of our friends at school may become friends forever. This kind of friend will influence us even when we graduate. However, teachers, on the contrary seldom become everlasting during our lives. They will not have as great an influence in the long run as our friends do. www.smartstudy.com 内容 详细条目 段落 此段结构 本段并列前两段。首句提出长丽的朋友会比老师产生 更深进的影响。之后进行说明。之后对比老师,指出 老师在毕业之后就不能对我们产生影响了,证明总论 点。 此段功能 本段对比了老师和朋友对我们影响时间的长短,证明 总观点。 All in all, though I have to admit that teachers and friends both have great influence on students, I still believe that students are more affected by their friends. The more people have in common with you, the greater influence they will have on you. Therefore, a friend, who is the most similar to students, is the greatest influence during a student’s life. 内容 详细条目 段落 此段结构 本段是文章 总结 初级经济法重点总结下载党员个人总结TXt高中句型全总结.doc高中句型全总结.doc理论力学知识点总结pdf 段。首先进行让步,肯定了老师和朋 友都对学生产生很大的影响。之后进行转折,重申自 己观点,即朋友的影响更大。最后进行总结重申。 此段功能 本段总结了作者观点。 托福作文满分要素剖析: 一、 语言 表 关于同志近三年现实表现材料材料类招标技术评分表图表与交易pdf视力表打印pdf用图表说话 pdf 达 本文长短句结合,读来自然流畅,很有节奏感。而且作者多次使用了因果推理的推进方 www.smartstudy.com 式,让分析过程完整流畅,非常符合正常的思维过程。特别是当中的因果连接词的使用,更 体现出了作者分析的逻辑性。在用词方面本文中规中矩,并没有华,的技巧,却完整清晰地 表达出了作者的思路。 1. As a consequence, they can talk to each other and imitate each other’s behavior easily. 本句的重点在于As a consequence表示结果。这个因果逻辑连接词 清晰地表明了本句和前一句的关系,是逻辑关系的显性体现。相似的词语还有therefore, thus, as a result, consequently等。 2. However, a student can have hundreds of different topics, ranging from daily life or school subjects, to talking with their friends. Ranging from…to…表示范围, 可以作为including, such as的替代,进行列举。 3. All in all, though I have to admit that teachers and friends both have great influence on students, I still believe that students are more affected by their friends. 本句是经典的总结句说法。Though I have to admit that表示我尽管必须承 认,首先进行让步,对自己不支持的观点做出肯定。I still believe that我还是认为后 面接作者自己的观点。这个句式可以作为固定用法在总结句中使用。 二、 逻辑结构 本文的不论是整体逻辑结构还是每段段中结构都十分清晰。作者首先提出了自己的观 点,即认为朋友对学生的影响力更大。之后用三个段落从三个方面进行证明。最后进行了观 点的总结重申。而在每段当中,作者都使用了对比和举例的方式进行证明,顾及两方,而不 仅仅对朋友影响大这一论点进行分析,非常符合题目的要求。 智课网温馨提醒:考生们拿到托福作文试题,审题后,先决定总体思路,然后列出两三个具 www.smartstudy.com 体的分论点,每个论点找出一些例子来说明。这里要注意例子的选择,尽可能生活化、生动化、形象化,不要太死板,托福写作模板和范文仅供大家学习和借鉴,不要生硬的背诵。祝各位托福考生能够取得满意的托福满分作文。 www.smartstudy.com