2010高考英语短文改错破题技能[1]

2010高考英语短文改错破题技能[1] 高考英语短文改错破题技巧 铁西区Peter精品高分英语家教: ,育才、实验、二中专用, 主编人:吴军 一、解题思路(三步解题法): 第一步、快速浏览全文，把握文章的主要时态、人称及文章的主旨大意，顺便标记自己一眼就能看出的错误。 第二步、细读文章的每一句话。一般要结合文章的前后句以及出题规律来做题。 第三步、代入已经修改完成的答案通读全文，看其是否通顺。 二、出题规律以及破解关键: 1.动词: (1)主要考察能力:时态、主谓是否一致、固定搭配。 (2)出题形式: ?时态混用 ie, Then the trouble started. We can not open the door. So we asked the policeman for help. 讲解:很显然此句子主时态是一般过去式，因此应把can改为could。 ?主谓不一致 ie, There were a football game on TV last Saturday evening. 讲解:原句中a football game决定了谓语动词必须用单数，所以应该把were改为was。 ?固定搭配 ie, I have given up somke. The dog doesn?t like the smell. 讲解:give up doing sth。因此动词somke应该改为somking。 2.名词: (1)主要考察能力:单复数混用。 (2)出题形式: 单复数混用ie, Helen is seventeen year old. She is very busy. 讲解:“年龄多大了”应该为复数形式，应此应该把year改为years。 注意:代词单复数混用类似。 As for a friendship, we can readily find them in our classmates and other people around us. 讲解:显然因该把them改为it，指代前面提及的friendship。此句话意思是“就友谊来说，我们可以很容易地从我们的同学和周围的人中找到。” 3.形容词/副词 (1)主要考察能力:两者之间是否混用。 (2)出题形式: 形容词与副词混用。即该用形容词的地方原文用了副词，该用副词的地方原文用了形容词。 ?副词代替正确形容词出现在文章当中 ie, During the football season, Helen is much busier than usually. 讲解:很明显“与平时相比较更忙”，因此需要把usually改为usual。 ?形容词代替正确副词出现在文章当中 ie, As the time clock showed one minute and forty-two seconds leaft in the game, she began cheering excited, “Come on-get going!” 讲解:原文意思是说比赛还剩一分四十二秒时，她开始兴奋地叫道-----，显然应把excited改为excitedly，用来修饰动词cheer。 4.介词 (1)主要考察能力:(特别是与动词的)固定搭配。 (2)出题形式: ?介词省略 ie, I?m surt you will get rid the sorrow and unhappiness caused by the disaster. 讲解:get rid of 是固定搭配，意思为“摆脱，除去” ?介词多余 ie,My wife is also happy because of I have given up smoking. 讲解:这里显然示对because of与because用法的辨别区分。前者不能接句子，而后者充当连词可以接句子。所以应该把of去掉。 ?介词用错(一般为固定搭配) ie, I pick out her false hair and said, “Don?t be sad, Miss.” 讲解:pick out应该为pick up。pick out挑选的意思;pick up捡起的意思。 5.连词 (1)主要考察能力:前后两句话之间的衔接关系。 常考三种关系: but转折 and并列 because原因 ?ie, One day, my wife and I went shopping at a store. We drove the car but we had a lot of things to buy. 讲解:显然原文中所要 表 关于同志近三年现实表现材料材料类招标技术评分表图表与交易pdf视力表打印pdf用图表说话 pdf 达的意思是“我们开车去的原因是因为我们要买好多东西”，所以应该把but改为because/as/for。 ?ie,Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, but improve their English if they are talking with native speakers. 讲解:原文表达的意思是“通过网上聊天，学生能够更加轻松自由地表达自己的想法和观点，并且如果他们同外国人交谈，能够提高他们的英语(论坛)水平。”所以前后句之间是并列关系，因该把but改为and( 6.句式 (1)主要考察能力:常考that与what或which/how与what之间的转换。 (2)出题形式: ?ie, She never has enough time for that she wants to do. 讲解:原文意思是“她没有足够多的时间来做自己想做的事情”，很明显应该把that改为what。注意:这一形式是改错常考点。 ?ie, We Chinese people have always been concerned about which has happened in your area. 讲解:原文中需要一个连接词承接前后连个句子，这个连接词充当be concerned about引导宾语从句中的主语，所以应该把which改为what。 7. 冠词 (1)主要考察能力:句中冠词是否多余 (2)出题形式: ?冠词多余 ie, I sat in the front of the TV at 7 o?clock, when the game just began. 讲解:区分in front of sth和in the front of sth。解决这个问题记住一句顺口溜就可以了“有the是内无the是外”，即in the front of sth显然是指在事物(sth)内部空间的前面，比如说I prefer to travel in the front of the car.(我愿意坐在汽车的前面);而in front of sth是指事物(sth)外部空间的前面，比如说the car stops in front of the house(汽车停在房前)。因此原文中应该把the去掉。 ?冠词遗漏 As we all left home at early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. 讲解:at an ---- age固定搭配词组，表示“出于---年龄”，比如说at an early/tender age，可以翻译为“很小/年幼的时候”. 8.代词 (1)主要考察能力:代词是否多余，以及与反身代词之间的混用。 (2)出题形式: ?代词多余 ie, Don?t lose your heart. With the help of the people all over the world, I?m sure you will get rid of the sorrow and unhappiness. 讲解:lose heart:become discouraged泄气;丧失勇气;而lose one?s heart(to sb/st):fall in love爱上;钟情于。原文意思很明显是“别泄气”。所以应该把your去掉。一字之差，离题千里。 ?代词混用 ie, We were living in a big family. We treate each other as brothers and sisters. If any one of them had any difficulty, the other would help him or her out. 讲解: 原文意思是说“我们生活在一个大家庭之中，彼此间相处如同兄弟姐妹。如果我们之中谁有困难，其他人就会帮助他/她解决困难。”所以应把them改为us;把other改为others。 注意:the other表示两者之中“另一个”;the others表示在一个范围内的其他全部。 ?代词遗漏 A teacher could make classes lively and interesting. 讲解: 应该在classes前加his，表示“使他的课堂生动有趣”。 动词 (1) He lied down by the side of the path to rest. (lied 改为 lay，lie 表示“躺”时，其过去时是 lay) (全国卷) (2) Charles and Linda were seeing near the top of the building. (seeing 改为 seen，因为从含义上看，此处谓语应用被动语态) (全国卷) 3) Books may be keep for four weeks. (keep 改为 kept，因此处要用被动语态) (全( 国卷) (4) …and let you know when the book you want has returned. (returned 之前加 been，因从句意上看，此处要用被动语态) (全国卷) (5) Uncle Ben will also go back for Christmas. (go 改为 come，由句意可知) (全国卷) (6) They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of questions. (eager 前加were，因此处缺谓语动词) (全国卷) (7) I„d like to your pen-friend， and get to know more about your country. (to 后加 be / become，因 would like后要接不定式，根据句意此处应加 be / become) (全国卷) (8) What your favourite sport, (what 后加 is 或将 What 改为 What„s，此句缺谓语) (全国卷) (9) I use to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time， but now I am interested in football. (use to 改为 used to，此为习语，意为“过去经常”) (全国卷) (10) I was used to watch it every night. (去掉 was，因 used to do sth 是固定表达，意为“过去常常做……”) (全国卷) (11) There will an important game next month. (will 后加be，此处缺谓语动词) (安徽春季卷) (12) Because of so much viewing， children may not be develop the habit of reading and the ability to enjoy themselves. (去掉 be，因它与其后的动词 develop 相冲突) (北京春季卷) (13) I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day. (去掉 should，因 put 和 followed 是平行结构，作并列谓语) (全国卷) (14) As we were all left home at an early age. (去掉were，因句中已有谓语动词left， (天津卷) “我们离开家”又是主动，不能再加be) (15) I often dream of a teacher. (a teacher 前加上 being 或 becoming.根据后文的内容看来，作者不是梦见老师，而是自己梦想“成为”一名教师) (年湖北卷) (16) Without enough knowledges， you can never learn well.(learn改为teach，因上句讲“为了教好，教师不得不学”，此句便是“没有学问，就决不会教好”) (年湖北卷) 主谓一致 (1) Bill was standing at the side of the car， talking to two men who was helping him to repair it. (was 改为 were，因先行词 two men 是复数，所以修饰该先行词的定语从句的谓语动词也应用复数) (全国卷) (2) Playing football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit. (give 改为 gives，它与makes 为平行结构，构成并列谓语动词) (全国卷) (3) Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library. (is 改为 are，因主语是 my picture and the prize，故谓语动词要用复数) (全国卷) (4) But then there is always more mysteries to look into. (is 改为 are，因其后的 mysteries 为复数，故谓语动词要用复数) (北京春季卷) (5) But not allinformation are good to society. (are改为is，因为主语是不可数名词information，表单数) (广西卷) (6) So then， a concert cost so much. I may just listen to music. (cost改为costs，因主语是单数a concert，根据全文用的都是现在的时态，故用一般现在时) (年四川卷) (7) If I listen to my own records， there are no need to spend money. (are改为is，因为在there be结构中的be用is还是用are，由紧跟在be后的那个名词的单复数来决定，此处no need是单数，所以用is) (四川卷) (8) …you will probably want to join the Stamp Collectors„ Club which exist to add more stamps to your collection. (exist改为exists，因主语which是指the Stamp Collectors? Club，这是单数，所以用exists) (浙江卷) (10) One evening she told me that something happened when their parents was out. (was改为were，因为主语their parents是复数，所以不用was要用were) (年福建卷) 时态 (1) We were driving along a narrow road when the car stop…(stop改为stopped) (全国卷) (2) …and had returned to the car～ Bill is standing at the side of the car (is 改为 was) (全国卷) (3) Two months ago they were back in America. Last Sunday， police cars hurry to the… (hurry 改为 hurried) (全国卷) (4) Today， it is much easier to be healthy than it is in the past. (第二个is 改为 was) (全国卷) 5) Also， scientists and doctors had learned how to deal with many diseases. (had 改( 为 have) (全国卷) (6) Anyone may borrow books， and it cost nothing to borrow them. (cost 改为 costs) (全国卷) (7) If the book you will want is out， you may ask for it to be called back for you. (去掉 will) (全国卷) (8) I had always wanted to return to the village after moving away and it is really great to see most of my old friends again. (is 改为 was) (全国卷) (9) They offered me coffee and other drinks. We have a good time talking and laughing together. (have 改为 had) (全国卷) (10) I learn about you from my English teacher， Miss Fang. (learn 改为learned) (全国卷) (11) My favourite sport is football. I was a member of our school football team. (was 改为 is) (全国卷) (12) I am happy with any programme but the others spent a lot of time arguing and there was no way of settling the matter except by selling the set. (am 改为 was) (全国卷) (13) I„d like very much to come but I had an examination on Monday morning. It is a very… (had 改为have) (北京春) (14) I remembered her words and calm down. (calm改为calmed)(全国卷) (15) They did not want me to do any work at home; they want me to devote all my time to… (did 改为 do) (全国卷) (16) He said he is busy. (is 改为 was) (北京春) 17) On the way up I was busy taking pictures since the scenery was so beautiful. The time ( passes quickly. (passes 改为 passed) (全国卷) (18) But his parents think going to college is more important than playing sports and college was the only place for a smart boy like his son. (was 改为 is) (安徽卷) (19) At once I apologize and controlled myseff at my best till the dinner started.(apologize改为 apologized) (江苏卷) (20) Sometimes， we talked to each other very well in class， but after class we become stranger at once. (talked改为 talk) (全国卷) (21) She stopped to look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor„s house. (find改为 found) (福建卷) (22) We were living in a big family. We treat each other as brothers and sisters. (treat 改为 treated) (天津卷) (23 I am always young when I was staying with them. (am改为 was) (湖北卷) 名词 (1) We stopped to rest for a while and to drink some waters from a stream. (waters 改为 water，因“水”为物质名词，不可数) (全国卷) (2) We climb everywhere， not only in America. We have been to Europe many time. (time改为 times，many times 意为“许多次”) (全国卷) (3) There are branch library in many villages. (library 改为 libraries，因其前的谓语 are为复数) (全国卷) (4) I hope that you two could come and visit us some times soon. (times 改为 time，some time 意为“某时”) (全国卷) (5) Today I visited the Smiths — my first time visit to an American family. (去掉time，因first 已含有“次”的意思) (全国卷) (6) They were eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of question. (question 改为 questions，因其前有表示复数意义的修饰语 lots of) (全国卷) (7) We study quite a few subject， such as maths， Chinese， English and physics. (subject 改为 subjects，因 a few 后应接复数可数名词) (全国卷) (8) …and often watch football match on TV together. (match 改为 matches) (全国卷) (9) Happy birthday， Peter， and many happy return of the day～ (return改为 returns，many happy returns of the day～ 为祝贺生日的惯用表达) (北京春季卷) (10) She said that she and my schoolmate all wished me success. (schoolmate 改为 schoolmates，因校友不只一个，另外根据其后的 all 也可推知) (全国卷) (11) I used to love science class — all of them— biology， chemistry， geography， physics. (class 改为 classes，指其后提到的所有课程) (北京春季卷) (12) They did not want me to do any work at family. (family 改为 home，因 at home 为固定短语) (全国卷) (13) …so that I„ll get good marks in all my subject. (subject 改为 subjects，请注意前面的 all) (全国卷) (14) On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. (picture 改为 pictures，picture 作为可数名词，其前应有限定词，或为复数形式) (全国卷) (15) No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to. (program 改为 programs，从句意上看，此处应用复数) (北京春季卷) (16) Their word were a great encouragement to me. (word 改为 words，注意其后的复数动词) (全国卷) (17) You know， that was a dinner we had waited for several month.“(month 改为 months，因 several 后要用可数名词的复数形式) (江苏卷) (18) …but after class we become stranger at once.(stranger改为strangers，由本行前面的we可知应该用名词复数) (全国卷) (19) You can find all kinds of information in just a few minute on the Internet. (minute改为minutes，因为a few后面的名词一定是复数) (广西卷) (20) Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a hobby…(age改为ages，因谈到不止一个人的年龄，age用复数;of all ages指各个年龄阶段的人 (浙江卷) (21) She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when… (homeworks改为homework，因它是不可数名词，没有复数形式) (福建卷) (22) Without enough knowledges， you can never teach well. (knowledges改为knowledge，因 knowledge是不可数名词，没有复数形式) (湖北卷) 形容词与副词 (1) After an hour or so we began to feel very frightening. (frightening 改为 frightened，因它表示某人感到害怕，而不是令人害怕) (全国卷) (2) Charles said， “As soon as I see a realy tall building， I want to climb it. (realy 改为 really 或 real，若改为 really，则修饰 tall;若改为 real，则修饰 building) (全国卷) (3) Last Sunday， police cars hurry to the taller building in New York. (taller 改为 tallest，因从含义上看此处应是最高级) (全国卷) (4) As a result， people in the modern world generally live much more longer than people in the past. (去掉 more，因为 longer 本身已是比较级，不能再受 more 修饰) (全国卷) (5) Therefore， there are still some countries where people have shorter lives. (Therefore 改为 However，因此处语意转折) (全国卷) (6) People in industrial countries can expect to live for twice so long as people who lived a few hundred years ago. (so long as 改为 as long as，其意为“与……一样长”) (全国卷) (7) In some places you may borrow many books as you want. (many 之前加 as，因as …… as 结构不完整) (全国卷) (8) I told Mother， Father， Sister and all my friends here that a great time I had. (that 改为 what) (全国卷) (9) I never knew a ride down a river could be so much exciting. (去掉 much，因 much 不能用来修饰形容词的原级，尽管它可用来修饰比较级和最高级) (全国卷) (10) I„m sure we?ll have a wonderfully time together. (wonderfully 改为 wonderful，因它是放在名词前作定语) (全国卷) (11) First， let me tell you something more about myself. (去掉 more，因从上下文看， 这是第一次给对方写信，不存在谈谈“更多情况”的问题) (全国卷) (12) I used to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time， but now I am interesting in football. (interesting 改为 interested，be interested in 意为“对……感兴趣”) (全国卷) (13) Also， the sport teaches us the important of obedience. (important 改为 importance，teach 后可接名词或代词作宾语，但不接形容词作宾语) (全国卷) (14) Unfortunate， there are too many people in my family. (Unfortunate 改为 Unfortunately，因此处要求用副词作状语) (全国卷) (15) I think I liked those classes because I felt that they helped me understand what the world works. (what 改为 how，how 在此表示方式) (北京春季卷) (16) After learning the basics of the subject， nothing else seemed very practically to me. (practically 改为 practical，此处用形容词作表语) (北京春季卷) (17) Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher. (去掉 often，因句 中的whenever 与 often 意义重复) (全国卷) (18) What things are in other homes， I wonder. (What 改为 How，句意为“不知其 他家庭的情况是怎样的”) (全国卷) (19) For instance， one night he played strong and loudly music till four o„clock in the morning. (loudly 改为 loud，与 strong 并列作定语，修饰 music) (北京春季卷) (20) But he is difference now. (difference改为different，即用形容词作表语) (北 京春季卷) (21) The time passes quickly. Evening came down. (去掉 down，要表示“夜幕来临”， 直接说 Evening came 即可) (全国卷) (22) …although radios can be very noise. (noise 改为 noisy，即用形容词作表语) (北 京春季卷) (23) …all planned and written by grown-ups to make children want things that they don„t real need. (real 改为 really，修饰动词要用副词) (北京春季卷) (24) But one of the best players in our team told me just then that he wouldn„t play basketball any more. (then 改为 now，just now 为习语，意为“刚才”) (安徽春季卷) (25) But one of the best players in our team told me just now that he wouldn„t play basketball once more. (once 改为 any，not … any more为习语，意为“不再”) (安徽卷) (26) I would describe myself as shy and quietly. (quietly 改为quiet，and连接并列成分quite和shy) (全国卷) (27) Finding information on the Net is easily. (easily改为easy，作表语要用形容词) (年广西卷) (28) Yes， a concert can be very excited. (excited改为exciting，表示某事物是“令人兴奋的”用exciting;表示某人“感到兴奋”才用excited) (四川卷) (30) Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a hobby which is both interested and fun. (interested 改为 interesting，指某事物是“令人有趣的”，用interesting，表示某人“对…感兴趣”时，用interested) (浙江卷) (31) She called 119 immediate. (immediate改为immediately，用作状语，要用副词) (福建卷) (32) However， we seldom felt lonely or helplessly. (helplessly改为helpless，在系动词felt后作表语，要用形容词) (天津卷) 介词 (1) Bill insisted in staying near the car. (in 改为 on，insist on 为固定搭配) (全国卷) (2) Suddenly we caught sight at a car and some men. (at 改为 of，catch sight of是习语，意为“看见”) (全国卷) (3) When I have free time I go a long walk. (go 后加 for，go for a walk 是习语) (全国卷) (4) When they came down the police were angry to them. (to 改为 with，要表示对某人生气，英语习惯上用be angry with sb) (全国卷) (5) Most people can quickly get for help from a doctor or go to a hospital since they are ill. (去掉 for，因其前的 get 是及物动词) (全国卷) (6) …and some books， for example， books for history， science， cooking and gardening are also popular. (books for 改为 books on，此处的 on 意为“关于”) (全国卷) (7) I never knew about a ride down a river could be so exciting. (去掉 about 或将 about 改为 that，因动词 knew 后可直接跟宾语从句，无需用介词) (全国卷) (8) It was very kind for them to meet me at the railway station. (for 改为 of，注意句型 It„s kind of sb to do sth) (全国卷) (9) In fact， they are planning to visit China in next year. (去掉 in，在由 next， this， last 等构成的时间短语中，一般可直接用作时间状语，无需加 in， on， at 这样的介词) (全国卷) (10) We practise for three times every week. (去掉 for，在表示频率的名词前通常不加介词) (全国卷) (11) We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ourselves. (instead 后加 of，instead of 为复合介词，在此表示“而不是”) (全国卷) (12) Unfortunately， there are too many people among my family. (among 改为 in，in my family 意为“在我家里”) (全国卷) (13) I was happy with any programme but the others spent a lot time arguing…(a lot 后 加 of，因 a lot 不能直接修饰名词) (全国卷) (14) Thanks very much on inviting me to your birthday party on Sunday. (on 改为 for，thanks for doing sth 意为“因某事而感谢某人”) (北京春季卷) (15) So I„m really sorry that I won?t be able to come in this time. (去掉 in，因 this time 可直接用作状语) (北京春季卷) (16) …but we do not seem to get much time to talk about together. (去掉 about，因 about 后没有接宾语，about 属多余) (全国卷) (17) For instance， on one night he played strong and loud music till four o„clock in the morning. (去掉 on，因 one night 可直接用作状语) (北京春季卷) (18) I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow. (去掉 at，the moment 在此用作连词，相当于 as soon as) (全国卷) (19) His parents asked him to spend in more time preparing for the college entrance examination. (去掉 in，spend 是及物动词，其后可直接跟名词作宾语) (安徽春季卷) (20) I feel sorry to him. (to 改为 for，be / feel sorry for sb 意为“为某人感到难过”) (安徽春季卷) (21) Because so much viewing， children may not develop the habit of reading and the ability to enjoy themselves. (Because 后加 of，因 so much viewing 相当于名词) (北京春季卷) (22) On one year the average child will see 25，000 television commercials…(On 改为 In，意为“在一年中”) (北京春季卷) (23) The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese… (去掉 that 前的 in，was 后是一个以 that 引导的宾语从句，in 是多余的) (全国卷) (24) I„m sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool. So I feel unhappy every day. (to 改为 at，laugh at 意为“嘲笑”) (全国卷) (25) You can find all kinds information in just a few minutes on the Internet. (kinds 后 加 of，a kind of 意为“一种……”，all kinds of…意为“各种各样的……”) (广西卷) (26) But I have spent lots my money， … (lots后加of，lots / a lot后不能接名词; 后接名词时，要用lots of…，a lot of…) (四川卷) (27) …you will probably want to join in the Stamp Collectors„ Club…(去掉 in，表示“参 加，加入”某个组织，join 后不要再加介词 in;表示“参加”某项活动时，才加 in) (浙江 卷) (28) We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about. (on 改为 in，因为 have sth in common 是固定搭配，意为“有共同的……”) (福建卷) 从句及并列连词 高考英语短文改错考点解析:从句 (1) In the last five years that they„ve climbed churches， high buildings and television towers. (去掉 that，因此处的 in the last five years 为时间状语，其后无需用that) (全国 卷) (2) Charles said， “As soon I see a really tall building， I want to climb it.(I 前加 as， 因为 as soon as 为引导时间状语从句的引导词)(全国卷) (3) Most people can quickly get help from a doctor or go to a hospital since they are ill. (since 改为 when / if / whenever.从句意上看此处用 since 讲不通，改为 if / when / whenever 均可) (全国卷) (4) However， there are still some countries there people have shorter lives. (there 改 为 where，where 在此引导定语从句) (全国卷) (5) …in other places where you are limited to a certain number， of which some may be novels. (去掉 where，in other places 在此为地点状语) (全国卷) (6) …in other places you are limited to a certain number， of that some may be novels. (that 改为 which，因介词后要用 which 来引导定语从句) (全国卷) (7) …and whether you pay the cost of sending a postcard， the librarian will write to you. (whether 改为 if，表示“如果”时，不能用 whether) (全国卷) (8) I also enjoyed the evenings when we spent together. (去掉 when 或将 when 改为 that，因这里的定语从句中谓语动词(spent)缺宾语，故只能用关系代词 that或将其省略) (全国卷) (9) I live in Beijing， where is the capital of China. (where 改为 which，因此处要填关系代词作主语) (全国卷) (10) …but it didn„t matter that I would win or not. (that 改为 whether，whether 与 or not 搭配，表示“是否”) (全国卷) (11) I felt so nervous as I shook like a leaf. (as 改为 that，so…that…为固定句式，其中的 that 引导结果状语从句) (全国卷) (12) In one class， I learned it rained. (it 前加why，why 在此表原因) (北京春季卷) (13) For example， when he bought a chocolate cake， he put it in a secret place where I couldn„t find. (where 改为that / which，或去掉 where，I couldn?t find 为修饰 place 的定语从句，其前用关系代词，也可省略) (北京春季卷) (14) It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. (we 前加 when，时间状语从句缺少连词引导) (全国卷) (15) Besides， I have few friends， I don„t know that they don?t like to talk with me. (that 改为 why，why 引导宾语从句，表示原因) (年全国卷) (16) I have a good friend who„s name is Liu Mei. (who?s 改为 whose，因who„s=who is，不仅结构错误，而且意思也不通;whose 引导定语从句，表示“……的”) (福建卷) (17) It has been five years when we graduated， but those memories are as sweet as ever before. (when 改为 since，It is / has been +时间段+since(谓语动词是短暂性动词)是固定句型，意为“自……以来有多久了”) (年天津卷) 高考英语短文改错考点类析:并列连词 (1) We tried to fix it and there was nothing we could do. (and 改为 but，因此处语意转折) (全国卷) (2) I told Mother， Father， Sister， all my friends here what a great time I had. (all 前加 and，表示并列关系) (全国卷) (3) It is a very important exam but I can„t afford to fail it. (but 改为 and / so，此处表因果关系，并非转折关系) (北京春季卷) (4) She was smiling but nodding at me. (but 改为 and，因此处并无转折之意) (全国卷) (5) It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. (and 改为 or，a visitor 和 a guest 应是选择关系，意思是“好像我的父母亲把我当作一个来访者或一个客人”) (6) The food was expensive and the service was good. (and 改为 but，此处意义发生转折) (全国卷) (7) I„m the captain of our school team so with my fellow players we?ve won several games. (so 改为 and，表并列关系) (安徽春季卷) (8) My grandma was the best cook in the world but could make the most delicious dishes. (but 改为and，此处表示并列，而不是转折) (江苏卷) (9) So once you„ve started collecting seriously， you… (So 改为 But，因为前后是转折关系) (年浙江卷) (10) Clever as she is， but she works very hard. (去掉but，因前面已有引导让步状语从句的连词 as(=though 虽然)，千万不要受汉语句式“虽然……但是……”的影响，而重复用连词) (福建卷) (11) I teach them， play with them， but watch them growing up.(but 改为and，因为 teach / play 与 watch 是并列关系，而不是转折关系) (湖北卷) 冠词 (1) After a hour or so we began to feel very frightened. (a 改为 an，因 hour 读音以元音开头) (全国卷) (2) I decided to climb the tree to see where we were. (the 改为 a，因此处并非特指，而是泛指) (全国卷) (2) Some people read the books or watch television while others have sports. (去掉 the，因这里的 books 表泛指，不表特指) (全国卷) (3) Good health is person„s most valuable possession. (person?s 前加 a，这里的 a 表泛指) (全国卷) (4) Modern people know more about the health， have better food， and live in clearer surroundings. (去掉 the，因health 表泛指) (全国卷) (5) There is public library in every town in Britain. (public library 前加 a，因这里的 public library 是单数可数名词表泛指，故在其前用 a) (全国卷) (6) Maybe you could come during a winter holidays. (a 改为 the，因从含义上看，此处的 winter holidays 属特指或者是谈话双方都知道的) (全国卷) (7) Today I visited the Smiths — my first visit to a American family. (a 改为 an，因 American 的读音以元音开头) (全国卷) (8) Each player must obey captain， who is the leader of the team. (captain 前加冠词 the，captain 为特指) (全国卷) (9) Some wanted to see the programme while others preferred another. (the 改为 one，one 与下一行的 another 构成“一个……另一个”) (全国卷) (10) I„ll take this chance to wish you wonderful time on your birthday. (wonderful 前加 a，该表达与 have a good time 类似，其中的 a 不可省) (北京春季卷) (11) Suddenly， I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd. (去掉 a，catch sight of 是习语，意为“看见、瞥见”) (全国卷) (12) For example， when I was a child， the rain was a mystery(奥秘)。 (去掉 the，rain 在此泛指) (北京春季卷) (13) We may be one family and live under a same roof. (a 改为 the，因 same 前应用定冠词) (全国卷) (14) As everyone knows， it„s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.(在 famous 前加 a，注意 mountain 是单数可数名词) (全国卷) (15) My teacher advised me to keep my diary. (my diary 改为 a diary，keep a diary 意为“写日记”) (全国卷) (16) When I was boy， the most exciting thing was to celebrate the Spring Festival. (boy 前加 a，因 boy 为可数名词) (江苏卷) (16) On Thursday I will have to decide what I want to do over a weekend. (a 改为 the，因这不是泛指的周末，而是特指本周周末)(四川卷) (17) And every year more and more people start a stamp collection of their own and discover an interest which can even last lifetime. (lifetime 前加a，指人的一生是 a lifetime) (浙江卷) (18) Ten minutes later， the firemen came and put out fire. (fire 前加 the，因这是特指的一场火灾) (福建卷) (19) As we all left home at early age，… (early前加an，at an early age意为“在年幼时”) (天津卷) (20) My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes. (cooker 改为cook，比较:cook=炊事员，cooker=炊具) (江苏卷) 非谓语动词 (1) David and I wanted go off to find help but Bill insisted on staying near the car. (wanted 后加 to，因为want 后要接不定式) (全国卷) (2) …rather than go into the forest and getting lost. (getting 改 get，因为 get 与其前的go 并列) (全国卷) (3) David pointed to a path which he thought would probably leading to a village. (leading 改为 lead，因为其前有助动词 would) (全国卷) (4) I went back to get David and helped him to stood up. (stood 改为 stand，因为 to stand up 在此为不定式结构) (全国卷) (5) Charles and Linda Mason do all of these things as well as climbed building. (climbed 改为 climb / climbing，若将 as well as 视为连词，则将 climbed 改为 climb，因为它与其前的 do 并列;若将 as well as 视为介词，则 climbing，因为介词后动词用动名词) (全国卷) (6) Modern people know more about health， have better food， and to live in clearer surroundings. (去掉live 前的 to，因为 live 与其前的 know， have 并列) (全国卷) (7) The World Health Organization and other organizations are working improve health all over the world. (improve前加to，to improve…为表目的的不定式短语) (全国卷) (8) …you pay the cost of send a postcard， the librarian will write to you. (send改为 sending，因为介词后接动名词作宾语) (全国卷) (9) …and let you to know when the book you want has returned (去掉 know 前的 to， 因为其前有动词 let) (全国卷) (10) I want to thank you again for have me in your home for the summer holidays. (have 改为having，因为介词后接动名词作宾语) (全国卷) (11) I had always wanted return to the village after moving away. (return前加 to，因 为 want 后要接不定式) (全国卷) (12) It was very kind of them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home. (drove改为 drive，因为 drive 与其前的 to meet 并列，此处的 drive 为省略 to 的不定式) (全国卷) (13) I look forward to hear from you soon. (hear改为 hearing，因为其前的 to 是介 词) (全国卷) (14) Play football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also gives us a sense of fair play and team spirit. (第一个play改为 playing，因为动词原形不能用作主语) (全国 卷) (15) I was often a little tired after a day„s work and watch TV demands very little effort. (watch改为 watching，因为动词原形不能用作主语) (全国卷) (16) I„d like very much come but I have an examination on Monday morning. (come 前 加 to，因为 would like 后接不定式) (北京春季卷) (17) I„ll spend the whole weekend reading and prepare for it. (prepare 改为 preparing， 因为它与其前的 reading 并列，与其前所用的动词 spend 有关) (北京春季卷) (18) But then there is always more mysteries look into. (look 前加 to，此处为不定式 作后置定语) (北京春季卷) (19) After learn the basics of the subject， nothing else seemed very practical to me. (learn 改为learning，因为介词后接动名词作宾语) (北京春季卷) (20) My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that I get a good education. (make 前加 to，因为 to make… 在此用作目的状语，注意句型 do all one can to do sth) (全国卷) (21) He did not want share things with other people. (want 后加 to，因为want 后要 接不定式) (北京春季卷) (22) That is， a game of tennis making him very busy. (making 改为made，因为缺 谓语，不能用非谓语形式，根据上下文用一般过去时) (北京春季卷) (23) As we climbed the mountain， we fed monkeys， visiting temples and told stories. (visiting 改为 visited，因为它与其前的 fed 和其后的 told 并列) (全国卷) (24) But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports. (go 改为 going，因为动词原形不能用作主语) (安徽春季卷) (25) …children may not develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. (read 改为 reading，因为介词后要接动名词) (年北京春季卷) (26) …to make children to want things that they don„t really need.(去掉 want 前的 to， 因为 want…在此用作使役动词 make 的宾语补足语) (年北京春季卷) (27) Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express myself in simple English. (talk 改为 talking，因为动词 enjoy 后要接动名词作宾语) (全国卷) (28) Shake her head， she said， “It isn„t a good time to do that， dear.” (Shake 改 为 Shaking，现在分词表伴随) (江苏卷) (29) It„s like going to a huge library without have to walk around to find your books. (have 改为 having，介词后用动名词作宾语) (广西卷) (30) I am thinking of making a trip to London， and visit the British Museum and some parks. (visit 改为 visiting，因visit与making并列，作介词of的宾语) (四川卷) (31) I have some records giving to me as birthday gifts.(giving 改为 given，“把某物给 某人”是give sth to sb;句中records与give是被动关系，故用过去分词) (32) I dream of standing on the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls. (give改为giving，因它与standing并列，作dream of的宾语) 代词 (1) David pointed to a path which it he thought would probably lead to a village. (去掉 it，因它与其前的关系代词 which 语义重复) (全国卷) (2) When we walked to the car， Bill smiled and shook head. (head 前加 his，汉语 可“摇头”，而英语的习惯要说 shake one„s head) (全国卷) (3) We climb everywhere， not only in America. They have been to Europe many times. (They 改为 We，前后人称不一致) (全国卷) (4) And I can„t forget the good food you cooked for I. (I 改为 me，因介词之后的人称代词要用宾格) (全国卷) (5) I hope that both you two could come and visit us some time soon. (去掉 both.因 both 与后面的 two 意义重复，况且词序安排也不对) (全国卷) (6) The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home. (his 改为 their，因前面的 the Smiths 指的是“史密斯夫妇”或“史密斯一家”，是复数意义) (全国卷) (7) And they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game. (they 改为 we，根据句意，主从句的主语应该一致) (全国卷) (8) Now I can„t watch much television， but a few years ago… (去掉 much，因为从下文看作者现在根本就不看电视) (全国卷) (9) Now someone at home reads instead. (someone 改为 everyone 或 everybody.从全文语义来看，应为“每一个人”) (全国卷) (10) I„m spend all the whole weekend reading and preparing for it. (去掉 all，因 all 与 whole 语义重复) (北京春季卷) (11) The day before the speech contest(比赛) English teacher talked to me. (English 前加 my，teacher 为单数可数名词，前面要有限定词) (全国卷) (12) I think I liked those classes because I felt that it helped me understand what the world works. (it 改为 they，因它表示 those classes) (北京春季卷) (13) …in any other words， I am an only child. (去掉 any，因 in other words 为固定短语，意思是“换句话说”) (全国卷) (14) For example， when he bought a chocolate cake， he put them in a secret place I couldn„t find. (them 改为it，因它指代上文提到的a chocolate cake) (北京春季卷) (15) Then he ate it all， by himself. He never helped other. (other改为others，others 泛指“其他人”) (北京春季卷) (16) The three of them were very excited. (them 改为 us，因短文用的是第一人称) (全国卷) (17) But his parents think going to college is more important than playing sports and college is the only place for a smart boy like his son. (his 改为 their，因要与其前的 his parents 保持一致) (安徽春季卷) (18) According to studies， any children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. (any 改为 many / some，由句意决定) (北京春季卷) (19) …and tried to translate anything into English. (anything 改为 everything，根据上下文句意确定) (全国卷) (20) …as I was learning to express me in simple English. (me 改为 myself，express oneself 为固定结构，意为“表明意思、意见，表达思想”) (全国卷) (21) One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. (showed 后加 it，showed 在此作及物动词，后面缺少宾语) (全国卷) (21) At once I apologize and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. (me 改为 myself，根据主语和句意，此处应用反身代词) (江苏卷) (22) And every year more and more people start a stamp collection of your own (your 改为 their，主语是 more and more people，故用代词their) (浙江卷) (23) If any one of us had any difficulty in our life or study， the other would help him out. (other 改为 others，因为当某个人遇到困难时，“其余的所有人”都会帮他，而不是“另外的那一个人”会帮他) (天津卷) (24) What„s more， you have to be friendly with your pupils and take good care of him. (him 改为 them，因为此处要代替的是 your pupils) (湖北卷) 缺词 (1) When we walked to the car， Bill smiled and shook head. (head 前加 his，汉语可“摇头”，而按英语的习惯要说 shake one„s head) (全国卷) (2) When I have free time I go a long walk. (go 后加 for，go for a walk 是习语) (全国卷) (3) Charles said， “As soon I see a realy tall building， I want to climb it.(第一个I 前加 as，因为 as soon as 为引导时间状语从句的引导词)(全国卷) (4) Good health is person„s most valuable possession. (person?s 前加 a，这里的 a 表泛指) (全国卷) (5) The World Health Organization and other organizations are working improve health all over the world. (improve前加 to，to improve…为表目的的不定式短语) (全国卷) (6) There is public library in every town in Britain. (public library 前加 a，因这里的 public library 是单数可数名词表泛指，故在其前用 a) (全国卷) (7) In some places you may borrow many books as you want. (many 之前加 as，因此处为as …… as 结构) (全国卷) (8) …and let you know when the book you want has returned. (returned 之前加 been，因从句意上看，此处用被动语态) (全国卷) (9) I had always wanted return to the village after moving away. (return前加 to，因为 want 后要接不定式) (全国卷) (10) I told Mother， Father， Sister， all my friends here what a great time I had. (all 前加 and，表示并列关系) (全国卷) (11) They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of questions. (eager 前加were，因此处缺谓语动词) (全国卷) (12) I„d like to your pen-friend， and get to know more about your country. (to 后加 be / become，因 would like 后接不定式，根据句意此处应补 be / become) (全国卷) (13) What your favourite sport, (what 后加 is 或将 What 改为 What„s，此句缺谓语) (全国卷) (14) We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ourselves. (instead 后加 of，instead of 为复合介词，在此表示“而不是”) (全国卷) (15) Each player must obey captain， who is the leader of the team. (captain 前加冠词 the，captain 为特指) (全国卷) (16) I was happy with any programme but the others spent a lot time arguing…(a lot 后加 of，因 a lot 不能直接修饰名词) (全国卷) (17) I„ll take this chance to wish you wonderful time on your birthday. (wonderful 前加 a，该表达与 have a good time 类似，其中的 a 不可省) (北京春季卷) 18) I„d like very much come but I had an examination on Monday morning. (come 前( 加 to，因为 would like 后接不定式) (北京春季卷) (19) The day before the speech contest(比赛) English teacher talked to me. (English 前加 my，teacher 为单数可数名词，前面要限定词) (全国卷) (20) In one class， I learned it rained.(it 前加why，why 在此表原因) (北京春季卷) (21) But then there is always more mysteries look into. (look 前加 to，此处为不定式作后置定语) (北京春季卷) (22) My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that I get a good education. (make 前加 to，因为 to make… 在此用作目的状语，注意句型 do all one can to do sth) (全国卷) (23) As everyone knows， it„s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.(在 famous 前加 a，注意 mountain 是单数可数名词) (全国卷) (24) It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. (we 前加 when，时间状语从句缺少连词引导) (全国卷) (25) There will an important game next month. (will 后加be，此处缺谓语动词) (安徽春季卷) (26) Because so much viewing， children may not develop the habit of reading and the ability to enjoy themselves. (Because 后加 of，因 so much viewing 相当于名词) (北京春季卷) (27) One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. (showed 后加 it，showed 在此作及物动词，后面缺少宾语) (全国卷) (28) When I was boy， the most exciting thing was to celebrate the Spring Festival. (boy 前加 a，因 boy 为可数名词) (江苏卷) (29) You can find all kinds information in just a few minutes on the Internet. (kinds 后 加 of.all kinds of 意为“各种各样的”) (广西卷) (30) …discover an interest which can even last lifetime. (lifetime 前加 a，指人的一生 是 a lifetime) (浙江卷) (31) She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor„s house. (look 前加 to.因为“停下来去做某事”是 stop to do sth， 不定式作目的状 语) (福建卷) (32) Ten minutes later， the firemen came and put out fire. (fire 前加 the，因这是特 指的一场火灾) (福建卷) (33) As we all left homeat early age， we met lots of problems in our daily life… (early 前加 an，at an early age 意为“在年幼时”) (天津卷) (34) I often dream of a teacher. (a teacher 前加上 being 或 becoming，根据后文的 内容看来，作者不是梦见老师，而是自己梦想“成为”一名教师) (湖北卷) 多词 (1) David pointed to a path which it he thought would probably lead to a village. (去掉 it，因它与其前的关系代词 which 语义重复) (全国卷) (2) Some people read the books or watch television while others have sports. (去掉 the， 因这里的 books 表泛指，不表特指) (全国卷) (3) In the last five years that they„ve climbed churches， high buildings and television towers. (去掉 that，因此处的 in the last five years 为时间状语，其后无需用that) (全国 卷) (4) Modern people know more about the health， have better food， and live in clearer surroundings. (去掉 the，因health 表泛指) (全国卷) (5) Most people can quickly get for help from a doctor or go to a hospital when they are ill. (去掉 for，因其前的 get 是及物动词) (全国卷) (6) Modern people know more about health， have better food， and to live in clearer surroundings. (去掉live 前的 to，因为 live 与其前的 know， have 并列) (全国卷) (7) As a result， people in the modern world generally live much more longer than people in the past. (去掉 more，因为 longer 本身已是比较级，不能再受 more 修饰) (全国卷) (8) …and let you to know when the book you want has returned (去掉 know 前的 to， 因为其前有动词 let) (全国卷) (9) …in other places where you are limited to a certain number， of that some may be novels. (去掉 where，in other places 在此为地点状语) (全国卷) (10) If the book you will want is out， you may ask for it to be called back for you. (去 掉 will) (全国卷) (11) I never knew about a ride down a river could be so exciting. (去掉 about 或将 about 改为 that，因动词 knew 后可直接跟宾语从句，无需用介词) (全国卷) (12) I never knew a ride down a river could be so much exciting. (去掉 much，因 much 不能用来修饰形容词的原级，尽管它可用来修饰形容词的比较级和最高级) (全国卷) (13) I also enjoyed the evenings when we spent together. (去掉 when 或将 when 改为 that，因这里的定语从句中的谓语动词(spent)缺宾语，故只能用关系代词 that或将其省略) (全国卷) (14) I hope that both you two could come and visit us some time soon. (去掉 both.因 both 与后面的 two 意义重复，况且词序安排也不对) (全国卷) (15) Today I visited the Smiths — my first time visit to an American family. (去掉time，因first 已含有“次”的意思) (全国卷) (16) In fact， they are planning to visit China in next year. (去掉 in，在由 next， this， last 等词构成的时间短语中，一般可直接用作时间状语，无需加 in， on， at 这样的介词) (全国卷) (17) First， let me tell you something more about myself.(去掉 more，因从上下文看，这是第一次给对方给信，不存在谈谈“更多情况”的问题) (全国卷) (18) We practise for three times every week. (去掉 for，在表示频率的名词前通常不加介词) (全国卷) (19) Now I can„t watch much television， but a few years ago… (去掉 much，因为从下文看作者现在根本就不看电视) (全国卷) (20) I was used to watch it every night. (去掉 was，因 used to do sth 是固定表达，意为“过去常常做……”) (全国卷) (21) I„ll spend all the whole weekend reading and preparing for it. (去掉 all，因 all 与 whole 语义重复) (北京春季卷) (22) So I„m really sorry that I won?t be able to come in this time. (去掉 in，因 this time 可直接用时间作状语) (北京春季卷) (23) Suddenly， I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd. (去掉 a，catch sight of是习语，意为“看见、瞥见”) (全国卷) (24) Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher. (去掉 often，因句中的whenever 与 often 意义重复) (全国卷) (25) For example， when I was a child， the rain was a mystery(奥秘)。 (去掉 the，rain 在此表泛指) (北京春季卷) (26) …in any other words， I am an only child. (去掉 any，因 in other words 为固定短语，意思是“换句话说”) (全国卷) (27) …but we do not seem to get much time to talk about together. (去掉 about，因 about 后没有宾语，about 属多余) (全国卷) (28) For example， when he bought a chocolate cake， he put it in a secret place where I couldn„t find. (where 改为that / which，或去掉 where，I couldn?t find 为修饰 place 的定 语从句，其前用关系代词，也可省略) (北京春季卷) (29) For instance， on one night he played strong and loud music till four o„clock in the morning. (去掉 on，因 one night 可直接用作时间状语) (北京春季卷) (30) The time passes quickly. Evening came down. (去掉 down，要表示“夜幕降临”， 直接说 Evening came 即可) (全国卷) (31) I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow. (去掉 at， the moment 在此用作连词，相当于 as soon as) (全国卷) (32) His parents asked him to spend in more time preparing for the college entrance examination. (去掉 in，spend 是及物动词，其后可直接跟名词作宾语) (安徽春季卷) (33) Because of so much viewing， children may not be develop the habit of reading and the ability to enjoy themselves. (去掉 be，因它与其后的动词 develop 相冲突) (北京春 季卷) (34) …to make children to want things that they don„t really need.(去掉 want 前的 to， 因为 want…在此用作使役动词 make 的宾语补足语) (年北京春季卷) (35) The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese… (去掉 in，was 后是 一个由 that 引导的宾语从句，in 是多余的) (全国卷) (36) I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day. (去掉 should， 因 put 和 followed 是平行结构，作并列谓语) (全国卷) (37) When I was a boy， the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival. (去掉 when，根据句意，此处无需加疑问词) (江苏卷) (39) Can you tell me about what I should do, (去掉 about，tell sb后面直接跟从句) (全国卷) (40) …you will probably want to join in the Stamp Collectors„ Club…(去掉in.表示“参 加，加入”某个组织， join 后不要再加介词in;表示“参加”某项活动时，才加 in) (浙江 卷)