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初中名师作文教学实录 张赛琴快乐作文教学实录 小学学生作文能力调查问卷 作文教学教学实录 2009-11-15 23:14:14| 分类: 教学案例 | 标签: |字号大中小 订阅 目 录 1、《感受母爱?体验真情》教学实录 育才中学 管爱平 、特别的祝福给特别的你——如何写祝福语 龙泉四中 叶淑珍 2 3、让细节亮起来——《关注细节，抒写真情》教学实录 龙泉三中 包立芬 4、“片段成篇”作文教学实录 民族中学 叶建芬 5、感动 道太中学 陈伟霞 6、《让生活充满感动》作文教学案例分析 兰巨中学 吴海燕 7、爱的细节在屋檐下———《感悟亲情》作文指导课案例 龙泉四中 吴海花 8、捕捉细节，体验亲情 龙泉三中 周善花 9、春节的美丽画卷 查田中学 汤如鸾 《感受母爱?体验真情》教学实录 育才中学 管爱平 教学过程: 一、课前序曲: 课前打开课件，播放《烛光里的妈妈》，让学生欣赏、跟唱。 二、新课导入: 师:刚才我们欣赏了《烛光里的妈妈》，不少同学脸上露出了甜蜜的笑容。那么听着这首歌，你有想到了什么呢, 生:母亲。 生:妈妈对我的关心。 师:是呀，母亲给了我们无微不至的关怀，给了我们全部的爱。可以说母爱，是一个既古老又常新的话题。今天，老师愿和你们一道“感受母爱，体验真情”。(展示课题) 师:说起母爱，我想到了满文军一首歌颂母亲的歌——《懂你》。谁会唱吗, (有许多学生摇头) 师:今天我把这首歌的MTV带来了，我们一起来欣赏吧～不过，我有个要求:你要谈谈MTV中哪个细节最能体现母爱。(播放《懂你》MTV，学生欣赏。) 三、说真话，诉真情 师:你觉得MTV中的哪个细节最能体现妈妈对子女的深深爱意, 生1:妈妈在夜里为孩子盖被子的情景最另我感动。 生2:妈妈把吃的东西都给子女了，自己在舔碗底。 生3:雪地里妈妈背着孩子行走，体现了她对孩子的爱。 生4:妈妈深夜为孩子补衣服。 生5:妈妈在火车站等待孩子归来时的 表 关于同志近三年现实表现材料材料类招标技术评分表图表与交易pdf视力表打印pdf用图表说话 pdf 情最能体现母爱。 师:同学们说的很好～观察的很仔细。母亲为我们所做的也许都是平凡小事，但也正是这些小事中包含着浓浓的母爱。正如《母亲》这首小诗所写的一样。(多媒体展示《母亲》) 师:我们一起来读一读，好吗, 生(齐答):好～(齐读《母亲》) 师:你能说说诗中所写的哪些事情体现了母爱吗, 生6:拿新书包，打雨伞，沏热茶。 生7:包三鲜馅，在那他乡中，母亲会牵挂你。生病了母亲会掉眼泪。 师:那我想知道:诗中所写的这些，你和你的母亲之间是否也发生过呢,你能向我们谈谈你与母亲之间发生的难忘的小事吗,(多媒体展示:说真话，诉真情——说说在现实生活中，你被母亲感动的情节。) 生8:每次周末我回到家里，妈妈都会为我做很多我爱吃的东西，而且总喜欢看着我吃。 生9:有次半夜，我感到很饿，当时天气很冷，妈妈还是起来为我烧吃的。 生10:妈妈上班的地方离家很远，她每次上班前都为我准备好中饭。有次她为我准备了两个荷包蛋。我趁她没注意把蛋放进了她的饭盒。可中午时妈妈跑回来，把两个荷包蛋又给我送了回来。 师:就为了把两个荷包蛋给你送回来，跑了很远的路。 生10:是的，从这件事我更感受到了妈妈对我关心。 师:看的出来，你也是一个懂事的孩子。谢谢。 生11:我每次来学校上学，妈妈总是有很多话跟我讲，而且要将我的用品全部准备好。 师:相信天底下所有母亲的心都是一样的，我们的母亲和MTV中母亲一样无私地深爱着我们，他们也同样的伟大。如果要求把刚才大家所说的感动情节写下来，该如何落笔呢,(停顿一下)别急，先让我们一起来看看别人是怎样写的，好不好, 四、范文引导 ,、多媒体展示范文一《妈妈的唠叨之歌》。 师:这是我们同龄人的一篇习作。请大家自由朗读，然后回答这个问题:文中的妈妈有怎样的特点,(多媒体展示问题;学生自由朗读范文《妈妈的唠叨之歌》片段) 生12:文中的妈妈爱唠叨。 师:你觉得作者讨厌妈妈的唠叨吗, 生12:不会，作者感受到妈妈的唠叨是对自己的爱，他把妈妈的唠叨称为“歌”。 师:说的好～你的母亲徇脒堵穑?/p> 生12(微笑):会。 师:你读的懂妈妈的唠叨吗, 生12:能，那是对我的关心。 师:其他同学呢，你的妈妈会唠叨吗,会的请举手。(全体学生举手)看来我们的母亲也是爱唠叨的。母亲为我们所做的小事体现了爱，原来唠叨也是爱呀～那么母亲的严格要求呢, 生:也是爱的体现。 师:对，只是爱的方式不同。小作者写作时选取了妈妈的唠叨来体现母爱，这说明他平时对母亲的言行观察的很仔细。这是否也给我们启示呢, 生13:平时应多观察母亲。 生14:要多留心妈妈的语言和动作。你看作者就很好的把妈妈的唠叨语言写出来了。 师:说的很好。在生活中多观察母亲，多理解母亲，那么你会发现:原来生活中的许多事情都可以成为我们写作母爱的材料。(板书:善于观察生活，体会母爱。) 2、发下范文二《母亲，你是我一生的感动》。 师:这样我们有许多小事可以写，那该如何取舍呢,我们来看范文二《母亲，你是我一生的感动》。请推荐我们班朗读最好的一位同学给我们朗读。(一名学生朗读) 师:谢谢～读的很好。看了本文后，谁能说说哪个情节最令你感动吗, 生15:不知怎的，我不愿让同学们看见我那农村模样的母亲，于是，我就叮嘱她别来学校，东西可以让别人带来。无意中，从姑姑口里得知，母亲每星期都来看我，都是躲在角落里，然后，默默地走回家去，为的是省下车钱。这个情节最令我感动。 师:为什么呢, 生15:因为作者不让母亲来，可他母亲还是来躲在角落里看他。而且是默默地走回家，为 的是省下车钱。 师:那我就奇怪了，不让来就不来好了，干嘛还要来呢, 生16:因为母亲对孩子非常关心，放心不下。 师:那为啥要偷偷的来呢, 生17:因为作者不愿让同学们看见那农村模样的母亲，于是就叮嘱她别来学校。 师:说的好～这件小事足以体现母爱。如果我把原文改成这样呢。(多媒体展示改文:有一次，我从姑姑口里得知，母亲每星期都躲在角落里来看我，然后，默默地走回家去，为的是省下车钱。听着，听着，我的眼泪禁不住流了出来。我在心里暗暗地说:妈妈，你真是太好了～) 师:你觉得原文好，还是改文好,为什么, 生18:原文好。因为原文讲了不让母亲来，可她还来。而改掉的没有讲“我”不让母亲来，这样不能更好的体现妈妈的爱。 师:分析的好极了。 生19:原文好，因为原文“听着，听着，我的眼泪禁不住流了出来。我在心里暗暗地谴责自己:你太自私了～”很好的表达了自己的感受，而改文没有。 师:对。大家注意到了吗,作者选取的是一件小事还是大事, 生(齐答):小事。 师:那哪位同学能说说本文给我们的写作启示呢, 生20:我们写作时可选取日常小事来表现母爱。 师:任何小事都能很好的表现吗, 生21:应该选取感人的情节来写。 生22:写作时把事情的缘由和当时的感受写出来。 师:对，特别应把当时的情境交代清楚，以此来突出人物形象。来，我们 总结 初级经济法重点总结下载党员个人总结TXt高中句型全总结.doc高中句型全总结.doc理论力学知识点总结pdf 一下:选取细节材料，凸现情境。(板书:选取细节材料，凸现情境。) 五、课堂练笔。 师:这样，不仅有事可写，而且能很好的表达情感。(板书:事;情。)好，现在请同学们打开你尘封的记忆，翻开你成长的历程，选取你认为最能表达深深母爱的一件小事，写一个片段，注意刚才我们总结的写作启示。能写吗, 生(自信):能～ 1、学生当堂练笔(10分钟)。 2、学生点评。 3、教师总结:希望我们今后无论干什么工作，无论走到哪里，都不能忘记我们的身后有母亲注视的目光;也无论我们的母亲是多么的衰老，多么的体弱，她永远是我们心中最美丽的人。 六、布置作业。 师:(多媒体展示作业),、在生活中理解母亲，关心母亲，热爱母亲。,、课外给母亲打个电话，问候一声或回家时为母亲做一件小事，体会母亲的反映。,、用心观察、感受母亲爱你的细节，通过语言、动作等多样化的描写，以“母爱”为话题写一篇作文。 教师结束语:这次和同学们一起重温了母亲伟大无私的爱。我有一种感觉，就是发现你们突然长大了，懂事了，你们懂得了母亲。就让我们从感受母爱，体会母爱开始，去感受来自生活的方方面面的爱，从而爱我们身边的人，爱我们的生活，感受生活，写出真情实感的好文章吧～希望同学们都能在作文中流露真情，在生活中学做真人。(多媒体展示:在作文中流露真情，在生活中学做真人。)下课～ 七、板书设计 感受母爱，体验真情 情 事 善于观察生活，体会母爱 选取细节材料，凸现情境 教学反思: 脱离生活的语文教学是没有生命力的，作文教学也是如此。作文，本来就是对认识到的生活的真实的反映，只有写出真实的、独特的感受，才是真正的作文。我想通过本课的教学，引导学生关注生活、关注身边的人和事，激起学生写作的情感和欲望。教学中，引导学生通过第一篇例文的分析明确生活中有许多事可以入文，可以从不同的角度看待问题(母亲的唠叨等)，从而解决学生作文总感到没有东西可写的状况;通过第二篇例文的分析，引导学生如何选取典型事件(细节)来表现人物，重点是使学生明确写作中情境交代的重要性，从而能使文章感人，富有真情。通过本课的教学，我认为作文教学应从以下几点入手: 1、观察是前提，活动是载体，体验是归宿。 学生的情感一般来自于直接的体验，观察是最根本的。没有观察就没有积累，就没有作文的素材。重要的是让学生用心去观察，既抓住事物现象，又能充分感受和体会。 2、放胆想象，联系生活，关注生命。 不要限制学生的想象，生活是学生想象的源泉，他们创造的语言都与生活有千丝万屡的联系，教师要抓住这个特点激励他们敢于探索。 3、互动合作，不拘一格，口语表达。 教学中应主张信息的立体交叉，鼓励学生积极的参与教学过程，老师是学生的朋友，学生是学生的老师，平等互动的关系促成了民主氛围，更有利于学生的主体精神和创新意识的体现。 4、教师调控，创设情境，渗透写法。 学生作文自由不等于没有教师的主导，自由是相对的，不是绝对的。教师应给予充分的指导、调控，要抓住学生的心理特点，利用现有的教学手段、场景、资源创设情境，使学生在愉快中得到真实的体验。 总之，作文教学的关键是激起学生情感体验，引导学生在生活积累的基础上更好的表现生活，写出富有真情实感的文章。 附例文: 妈妈的唠叨之歌 妈妈确实有一支永远也唱不完的“唠叨之歌”。清晨，她总捏着我的鼻子，一遍又一遍地喊着:“小懒虫，快起来，太阳都晒在屁股上了。”你看，一大清早，就把我的好梦给搅了。吃早饭时，她又开始唠叨了:“多吃点，饿坏了怎么办,慢点吃，别噎着了。……”真受不了，刚想去上学，妈妈又跑过来，递上一件衣服说:“快穿上，着凉了怎么办,”走出家门，满以为听 不见她的唠叨了，谁知她又在喊:“路上小心，注意安全，上课……”这些，我都背出来了。晚饭时，妈妈又唱了:“快点吃，吃完了快点写作业，早点……” 母亲，你是我一生的感动 “慈母手中线，游子身上衣;临行密密缝，意恐迟迟归。……”读着这首脍炙人口的小诗，我的思绪不禁飘散开来，飘向那远在大山脚下守着几亩地辛勤耕作的母亲。 我从小生活在农村，整天玩耍在田野间，从未走出过大山。,岁那年，父亲随山里的打工队伍走了，去了深圳就再也没有音讯了。后来父亲托人带来书信，逼着母亲与他离了婚。那一日，我孤独地守在破旧的小屋中，看见母亲跌跌碰碰地从村委回来。她抱着我，失声痛哭。那件事深深地震撼着我幼小而纯真的心，我发誓，一定要为母亲争口气。,,岁时，我来到城里的姑姑家，开始了另一种生活。饱尝了寄人篱下的寂寞，是母亲一直给我生活的动力。 不知怎的，我不愿让同学们看见我那农村模样的母亲，于是，我就叮嘱她别来学校，东西可以让别人带来。无意中，从姑姑口里得知，母亲每星期都来看我，都是躲在角落里，然后，默默地走回家去，为的是省下车钱。听着，听着，我的眼泪禁不住流了出来。我在心里暗暗地谴责自己:你太自私了～ 那以后，当我主动请母亲来学校时，她却怎么也不肯来。她一个人守着几亩田，为了我——她心中唯一的希望。母亲，我曾给了你太深的伤害，你却仍然一如既往，给予我你所能给的一切。好似我在你那儿存了一笔感情的巨款，可以随我尽情挥霍似的。 在茫茫的人海里，我的母亲是普普通通的农家妇女。当我在繁华的都市学习，受到嘲笑或极少的表扬时，我都在心里默念:你是母亲唯一的希望，你不可以后退。 “慈母手中线，游子身上衣;临行密密缝，意恐迟迟归。谁言寸草心，报得三春晖,”读着孟郊的《游子吟》，我似乎又飞回了那弥漫着泥土气息的大山脚下，依稀望见母亲伫立的身影。我在内心深处默念着:母亲，你是我一生的感动～我永远爱你、敬你～ 特别的祝福给特别的你 ——如何写祝福语 龙泉四中 叶淑珍 一、引言 作文是生活的一部分，作文教学应贴近时代，贴近学生的生活。 二、寻找突破口 这一次是作文教学评比。作文教学总是令人犯难，教些什么呢,我冥思苦想。时值圣诞节来临，学生都在忙着给亲朋好友老师送祝福。对了，我何不教学生给自己的祝福语穿上一件美丽的外衣呢,教会学生运用简明、连贯、富有文采和创意的语言给亲朋、好友、老师送上自己最真挚的祝福。这也是“给学生创设学语文、用语文的环境。”，想到此心里一阵激动。 三、教学设计说明 教学祝福语没有现成的教案可供参考，但各种类型的祝福语倒是挺多。 繁忙的搜集工作开始了，网上的祝福语可谓多矣，可要找到好一点的还真的有些困难。网上多的是搞笑的祝福，弄不好还会误导了学生。好在本人一直来对祝福语比较感兴趣，摘录了一些，这次派上了用场。经过几番筛选，去粗取精，我将搜集的祝福语归为八大类:修辞添文采、押韵显诗意、诗文妙化用、逆转增谐趣、谐音语双关、数字巧串联、叠字增情意、形式出新意。在学生学习的基础上让其进行仿写，从仿词到仿句，再到仿片断，使其有一个循序渐进的过程。最后是学以致用，让学生用优美的语言给自己的亲朋好友或老师送上美丽真挚的祝福。 四、教学过程: (一)、谈话导入 大家好～圣诞节已经款款地向我们走来，你给你的亲朋好友或老师送去祝福了吗,是怎样的祝福,(生说) 今天老师想和大家一起来探讨怎样用优美的语言送上我们最诚挚的祝福，给我们的祝福穿上一件美丽的外衣。 (二)、祝福归类 1、修辞添文采 ?“您是火种，点燃了学生的心灵之火;您是石阶，承受着我踏实向上攀登的脚步;您是蜡烛，燃烧了自己照亮了别人。” (学生齐读)师:这则祝福语写给谁，为什么,有什么特点, 明确:用三个比喻，突出老师的奉献精神，表达对老师的感激之情，有创意，有文采。 ?“流星划过天际，我错过了许愿;浪花拍上岩石，我错过了祝福;故事讲了一遍，我错过了聆听;人生只有一回，我庆幸没有错过你这个好友～今晚邀你共同赏月～ ” 师:这是一位同学送给好友的祝福。好在哪,对，三个“错过了”构成排比，增强了句子的气势，同时又与后面的“没有错过”形成对比，显示出友情的深厚。 ?“悠悠的云里有淡淡的诗，淡淡的诗里有绵绵的喜悦，绵绵的喜悦里有我春节时轻轻的问候～” (师读)师:你发现了什么,(顶真)这让你想起了我们学过的哪首诗,(生背:理想是石，敲出星星之火……) 2、押韵显诗意 “清晨曙光初现，幸福到你身边;中午艳阳高照，微笑漾你心间;傍晚落日西斜，快乐伴你每天。” (一生读)师:读了后有什么感受, 句子押韵，读来琅琅上口，有如一首优美的小诗。 3、诗文妙化用 “嘀嘀地我走了，正如我嘀嘀地来，我轻轻地按键，发送思念的光彩。” 师:有什么发现,你能背出原诗句吗,(生背)这给了我们启示:写祝福语可以引用诗句，古诗词中就有许多表示祝愿的句子，如“但愿人长久，千里共婵娟。”;也可以化用诗句，甚至仿词创造。如“秋已至 天转凉 鸿雁下斜阳;红花谢 绿林黄 莫忘添衣裳;欲惆怅 享阳光 天籁语铿锵;桂树茂 菊散香 徐风携清凉。祝快乐～”本词抓住秋天季节的特点来写，非常得美。 另外，像童谣，谚语，歌词等都可以进行仿写，如“粽子香，香厨房，艾叶香，香满堂，菖藜挂在大门上，出门赶望龙舟欢，这儿端阳，那儿端阳，处处端阳处处祥。祝你端午节快乐～”这是我的一个朋友端午节时送给我的，根据我们龙泉的地方特色改写的。 4、逆转增谐趣 新年到了，送你三个朋友:一个说陪你终身，一个说伴你左右，一个说永留你心中，它们的名字分别是“健康”、“平安”、“快乐”～ 师:同学们猜猜它们是谁,这有点像相声节目里的抖包袱，在听众转不过弯的时候，陡然把结果展出，使听众获得一种感官愉悦，妙趣横生。 5、谐音语双关 “新的一年，心的希望;新的开始，心的收获;新的起点，心的快乐。愿幸福永伴你左右。” 师:心与新，巧用谐音，一语双关，举一反三，反复强调，将春节的祝福表达得淋漓尽致。 6、数字巧串联 “祝你一帆风顺，二龙腾飞，三羊开泰，四季平安，五福临门，六六大顺，七星高照，八方来财，九九同心，十全十美。” (男生读)师:在数字上大作文章，也产生了意想不到的效果。 7、叠字增情意 “亲人邻里和和睦睦，新老朋友开开心心，生活简单快快乐乐，处世稳重平平安安，天天心 情愉悦，岁岁喜气洋洋。” (女生读)师:叠字的使用，将祝福的情意表达得更深刻。 8、形式出新意 “送你一个粽子，含量成分:100%纯关心;配料:甜蜜+开心+宽容+忠诚=幸福;保质期:一 辈子;保存方法:珍惜” 师:在形式上来一些创新，会使我们的祝福更生动奇妙，多姿多彩。 小结:以上老师归纳出了八种类型的祝福语(学生齐读巩固)，其实祝福语的类型还有很多， 还可以进行不断的创新。 (三)、词句仿写 刚才学了这么多，现在老师就来考考大家。(看谁填得好又快～) ?填词: “送你一件外套:吉祥是领子， 是袖子， 是扣子，口袋里满是 ， 穿上吧，让他相伴你的每一天～新春快乐～” ?填句子: 祝愿你，一年四季季季平平安安， ?仿写句子: 示例: 思念，像一条流不尽的江河; 思念，像一片温柔轻拂的流云; 思念，像一朵幽香阵阵的花朵; 思念，像一曲余音袅袅的洞箫 ——愿江水、流云、花香、箫声 都乘着这淡淡的月色来到你的身边。 仿写: 友情是 友情是 友情是 友情是 (四)、学以致用 1、师:圣诞节已经向我们款款走来，新年已在不远处等候。在给你的亲人、老师、朋友送 上祝福时应注意些什么,(生说) 教师总结: 主题突出 ;简明扼要;语言得体 ;构思别致 ;富有文采 2、学生写作 值此圣诞节、新年来临之际，你将给你的亲人、老师、朋友送上怎样的祝福呢, 要求:?适合特定情境;?感情真挚;?语言简明、连贯、有文采、有创意; 3、学生习作展示 学生交流自己写的祝福语，其他学生加以点评。教师将卡片发给写得好的同学，让学生在上 面写下美丽的祝福送给亲朋好友和老师。 送上我最真挚的祝福: a、老师，您犹如一个辛勤的园丁，不断培育祖国的花朵; 老师，您犹如一枝红蜡烛，燃烧自己，照亮别人; 老师，您犹如茫茫大海上的一盏明灯，为我们指引前进的方向。 祝愿老师新年快乐～青春永驻～ b、今天虽然没有洁白无暇的雪景，没有香气扑鼻的晚餐，没有五光十色的烟花，没有丰富多彩的礼物，但今天有我们一片诚挚的祝福。老师，祝您新年快乐～ c、如果你问我，朋友是什么,我会用一台电脑来告诉你: 朋友是鼠标，帮助我导引方向; 朋友是音响，为我驱走寂寞; 朋友是显示器，指点我了解世界;…… d、朋友，我想为我们的友谊唱一首歌，来祝福我们的友谊地久天长; 朋友，我想为我们的友谊画一幅画，来祝福我们的友谊多姿多彩; 朋友，我想为我们的友谊跳一支舞，来祝福我们的友谊蓬勃欢乐。 …… …… (五)、教师祝福 师:老师也胡诌了几句，大家想不想听,(生:想～) 心愿是风，快乐是帆，祝福是船;愿同学们:乘着心愿的风，扬起快乐的帆，起航着祝福的船，驶向成功的彼岸。预祝大家:圣诞快乐～ 五、教学反思 人在比赛中成长，每参加一次比赛，总能带给我诸多感受，这一次也如此。 这一次比赛是作文教学评比，而且只有短短几天的准备时间，确实令人犯难。可事后发现人是需要多参与竞赛的，比赛促人成长。 写祝福语，教学内容切近学生的生活，学生非常感兴趣，课堂发言也特别活跃。这启示我们课堂应是鲜活的，应多注入一些时代的源头活水让课堂生动起来，让学生活跃起来。 课堂上，学生思维广阔，想像丰富，有些问题的回答让老师始料不及。如何点评学生精彩的发言，如何将学生的思维引向深入，这都值得我认真去思考学习。 经过这次比赛，我感到自己的教学不是驾轻就熟，更多的是心虚胆怯。面对课改新形势，面对个性纷呈的中学生，教师作为导航者的担子更重了，教师个人素质的提高更为迫切了。 让细节亮起来 《关注细节，抒写真情》教学实录 龙泉三中 包立芬 一、导入 课前播放MTV《常回家看看》(学生边看边跟唱) 师:同学们，老师刚才想认识一下你们的，结果却被你们听音乐看画面时的复杂表情吸引了。怎么,一定是被什么感动了吧,说说你们从音乐和画面中感受到了什么, 生:(七嘴八舌)想家、父母的爱、亲情…… 二、学会感动，口头表述 师:对呀，我们都在亲情的沐浴下成长，人间最真实最纯洁的莫过于亲情了，让我们一起来欣赏几张家庭照，边欣赏边用眼睛捕捉最使你感动的画面，向大家描述一下画面，并调动你的生活体验，说说你感动的理由，好吗,(提示说话的句型:最令我感动的是……因为…… ) 展示照片，学生专注地看。 生:最令我感动的是第二张照片，因为，在大雪纷飞的冬天，父亲衣裳单薄，却不断地为孩子拉被子，深怕孩子冻着。 师:恩，是父爱感动了你。 生:最令我感动的是第一张照片，因为，这让我想起了我的奶奶。 师:联想到自己那慈祥的奶奶。 生:最令我感动的是第三张照片，因为，那是已到中年的女儿对母亲的孝敬，母亲瘫痪了，而女儿不但不嫌弃她，反而给她更多的爱。 师:这一张照片是反映晚辈对长辈的孝敬，更加感人，我看到很多同学都还举着手，看来大家都找到了自己的动情点了，然而如果要把这些感动用文字展现给大家，要真正打动读者，这就要学会表达。那么，如何细致生动地表达这动情点呢,今天，我们一起来学习几种让文章细节亮起来的方法。(出示课题:让文章细节亮起来) 师:下面我们先来看看一个同龄人的习作片段。 三、运用具体的描写表达真情。 1、出示作文片段 师:请一位朗读好的同学给我们读一读。 生:响亮有感情地读。 师:同学们，小作者显然是被妈妈的爱感动了，他捕捉到的是怎样一个动情点呢, 生:母亲在自己睡觉时爱抚地端详自己的镜头。 师:那你认为这当中最能体现母爱的是什么, 生:母亲的眼神。 师:不错，眼睛是心灵的窗户，那小作者是怎么写妈妈的眼神的,用了一个什么词, 生:楞楞 师:“愣愣”是什么意思, 生:愣愣是失神的，呆呆的。 师:那么说说看“楞楞”一词的表达效果怎样, 生:愣愣一词用得好，它充分表达了母亲对孩子的关爱。 (学生基本都认为愣愣一词用得好。) 师总结:老师的看法跟你们有点不一样，老师认为用“楞楞”一词来摹画妈妈的眼神，总给人意犹未足的感觉，小作者没在最能体现母爱的“眼神”上停留，没有形成叙事的高潮，文章的感染力就不是很强。真遗憾～回忆一下你们刚才的描述，是否也有类似的遗憾, 生:有。 (师:或多或少都有点吧,该怎样避免这样的遗憾呢,想不想学几招, 生:(响亮地)想。 师:好，那就请大家一起看看老师对这个片段的修改吧。 (出示修改的片段1) 师:大家一起来读一读，如果能读得整齐响亮、有感情，那就是对老师最大的鼓励。 生整齐响亮、有感情地朗读。 师:老师将妈妈看我的眼神作了怎样的修改, 生:写得更具体了。 …… 师小结:将妈妈看我那一动作进行了细细地分解，用一个慢镜头将妈妈看我的那一瞬间延长，把每一个细微的变化细致地展示在读者面前，让妈妈的目光从我的头发上移向我的眉毛，我的眼，并用细腻的心去揣摩妈妈的心理，这样更把母爱表达地淋漓尽致，这种方法就是(出示:细化动作，延长过程)同学们不想试试吗,妈妈的目光正往下滑呢，接着，她可能会把目光移向哪里呢,心里又在想些什么,试用这种方法接着写一两句。 学生练习 交流评价:生:妈妈的目光滑向了我的嘴唇，她的眼角微微湿润了，我知道她一定是想起了在我童年时对我犯的错了。 师:好，注意到了妈妈目光移动的顺序了，妈妈看着在我嘴唇上留下的疤痕，后悔，愧疚， 湿润了眼角呢。 生:妈妈的目光滑到了我的鼻子上，她的嘴角微微翘起，我知道她是为我从她那儿复制的高鼻梁得意。 师:妈妈看着女儿越来越漂亮，欣慰地笑了。 …… 真不错，一下子就掌握了。老师也写了几句，看看有没有你们写得好。(出示幻灯)简单吧～还想不想学第二招, 2、师:一伙人出去旅游。风景实在是迷人，而我们通常只能听到游人说“真漂亮，真是太美”之类的，却不能具体地把眼前的美景表达出来，真所谓“眼前有景道不得”。你们在写作时，是否也有同样的经历, 生:(齐声说)有。 师:对，在我们的作文中常出现“妈妈真好”、“这真的太感人了”等等，却也不能具体地表达，没关系，学了老师这一招，保证你能摆脱这样的困境，你看，老师又用另一种方法将这“愣愣”的眼神写得更生动了。 (出示修改片段2) 师读，问:片段中运用了什么方法,(比喻、拟人、排比) 对，我们还可以运用修辞，将细节写生动，这就是第二招，(出示:第二招:运用修辞，画其神韵)想不想试试,请大家仿照前面几句的写法，也写几句。 学生练习。 交流评价:生:那是秋天的落叶对大地的抚慰，那是冬日的雪花对腊梅的赞叹。 师:顺着老师写的这两句，春、夏、秋、冬，构成排比，太棒了～ …… 出示后几句，学生齐读。 师:又学了一招，看你们的眼神就知道，还不满足，是吧,那老师也不吝啬，就教你第三招吧。 3、(出示:第三招:变换角度，增加层次) 任何一件事情总要涉及多个层面的关系，小作者主要写母亲的眼神，能不能从“我”的角度，再开拓一个新的层次,我们一起来学学。(出示修改片段3)看一看，文章是怎么改的, 生:变换角度，从“我”的感觉写。 师:呵，都跃跃欲试了，你们一定能比老师写得好，试试吧。 学生练习 交流评价:生:一会儿，我好象又变成了一朵坚强的腊梅，自豪得母亲眼里含着泪花。 师:真不错，母亲为有这样一个坚强的儿子而自豪，老师也为有这样聪明的学生而骄傲～ 生:一会儿，我好象又变成了一杯香醇的美酒，陶醉得母亲两颊泛起了红晕。 …… 师:善于变换角度，从与事件相关的多个层面上着笔，会使关键处的叙述层次更丰富，更生动。表现那么好，老师再教你们一招。 4、(出示:第四招:类比联想，添其内涵) 师:罗`.勃郎宁有句话说:“故事永远是旧的，也永远是新的。”我们所遇到的故事可能早已存在，因为类似的情节一定在这个世界上演着。如果我们把这些能够印证我们故事的故事放在一起，那么我们的故事也便具有了更多的内涵。老师又将楞楞的眼神作了这样的修改，(出示修改片段4) 生自由读。 师:老师运用联想，进行类比粘连，使故事的内涵丰富了吧,不过，使用这种方法有个前提， 那就是要拓宽自己的阅读面，丰富积累。希望同学们爱上读书，多积累一些写作素材。老师相信大家如能从今天起就树立起“细节”意识，培养自己敏锐的感受力，将来写作就不会再急如走马，忽略了美丽的风景。 四、写作实践 师:接下来才真是你们大展身手的时候，我们先回顾一下今天学的这四种方法，(出示幻灯)然后再来看一看那几张照片，(出示照片)选择一张照片，抓住最令你感动的一个点，可以是一个眼神，一个微笑，结合你的生活体验，运用刚才所学的四种方法中的任意一种或几种，细致地描写最令你感动的一幕。 (学生写作，教师巡视) 交流、评点(选取学生作品) 教师引导:你认为他写得成功的地方在哪,请同学们从他抓住的动情点和具体的描写这两方面去考虑。 学生习作和点评略。 五、课堂小结 今天我们学习了运用具体细致的描写即细化动作延长过程，运用修辞画其神韵，变换角度增加层次，类比联想添其内涵等四种方法再现动情点，从而去学会表达真情，达到以“我手写我心”的目的。其实人的一生中，许多往事随着时间的流逝已忘却，但有一些不起眼的瞬间却依然那样清晰、那样动人。那么就让我们用心去感受、品味那些动人的瞬间吧～让真情在我们笔尖涌动～ 六、作业布置 同学们最熟悉的莫过于家人了。请选择几件最能体现“亲情”的事件，写一篇文章，注意在叙事上让亲情自然流露。 要求:1、通过日常生活中的动情点来表达亲情。2、让细节描写照亮你的文章，也可运用恰当的抒情。3、题目自拟，字数600字左右。 七、板书设计 让细节亮起来妙招 细化动作，延长过程 运用修辞，画其神韵 变换角度，增加层次 类比联想，添其内涵 教后反思:叙事是写作的基本能力，而叙事的动人处在于细节。巴尔扎克说过:“唯有细节将组成作品的价值。”可是学生往往没有细节意识，不具备敏锐的感受力，写起文章来急如走马，忽略了美丽的风景。介于此，我想通过本堂课引导学生关注细节，学会运用多种方法描写细节，为文章添加亮彩。 作文即生活。观察，就是要关注生活细节;思考，就是从生活细节中得到启发。如果教师要激起学生们的写作兴趣，首先是要激发学生们对自己的生活细节感兴趣。通过一定的训练，使学生感悟到“平凡之中见真情”。因此，从设计作文练习开始，尽量采用贴近生活的话题，引导学生去关注生活中的细节。在写作要求上，督促学生多表现生活的细节。因此，我设计的说写练习的材料是几张家庭照，其中的情节或者在同学们身上发生过，或者看到过。 本课教学以细节写作指导为主，通过口头仿述(即兴表述)和片断的写作练习，以达到提高写作能力的目的。我们知道:提高写作并不一定只有从“写”入手。学生们通过长期的口述练习，将会丰富语言，提高即时表达的能力。而且，在口头练习中，有利于激发学生的兴趣，增强课堂的互动性。 总之，我的出发点就是使学生的作文摆脱内容空洞，矫情造作的缺陷，增加可读性，用细节 照亮自己的文章。 附: (片段:……可我能够感受到妈妈并没有出去，反而好象到了我的床前，我似乎能听到妈妈平和温柔的呼吸声。我微微睁开眼，妈妈果然站在我床前，她就那么站着，手里抱着毛毯，眼睛楞楞地看着我，那是什么样的眼神啊～世界上任何形容母亲的好词都加到上面也不为过。我曾经在一本书上读过一篇文章，说所有的母亲都喜欢在孩子睡觉时端详他们，当时我还不信……) (修改片段1:……眼睛楞楞地看着我，我分明地感觉她的目光在我的头发上抚摸，妈妈好长时间没有爱抚我的头发了，她在回忆那逝去的岁月吗,妈妈的目光抚上了我的眉，漫上了我的眼，我的眼珠不自觉地转动了几下，她的目光便一如我儿时她那双温柔的手，轻轻地按摩着我的眼睑，我知道她在让我好好睡眠。妈妈的目光滑到了我的脸颊上，似乎在寻找着什么，我知道那是找她自己的影子，又似乎在欣赏着什么，我知道，那是在欣赏凝聚她一生心血的艺术品。) (修改片段2:眼睛楞楞地看着我，那是什么样的眼神啊!那是第一缕晨曦对娇花的抚弄，那是三月里的春风对碧水的温柔，那是夏日晚霞对嫩柳的辉映，那是秋夜月光对修竹的依恋，那是冬日里的朝霞与小草的交谈～) (修改片段3:我微微睁睁眼，妈妈果然站在我床前，她就那么站着，手里抱着毛毯，眼睛楞楞地看着我，那是什么样的眼神啊～我在这眼神的普照下，顿时有种异样的感觉:我好象变成了一个襁褓中的婴儿，在酣然入眠，感动得母亲满脸都是幸福;一会儿，我好象又变成了一朵俏丽的月季花，激动得母亲绽开了笑颜;一会儿，我好象又变成了一副五彩的画，陶醉得母亲在那儿欣赏啊欣赏～) (修改片段4:我微微睁睁眼，妈妈果然站在我床前，她就那么站着，手里抱着毛毯，眼睛楞楞地看着我，那是什么样的眼神啊～我曾在史铁生的《我与地坛》里见过，那母亲的眼神是一种无言的祝福;我曾在屠格涅夫的《呱……呱……》里见过，那母亲的眼神是一种幸福的安详;我曾在毕淑敏的《我的五样》中见过，那母亲的眼神里是一种不能割舍的珍爱～) 说明:斜体部分在学生练习后出示。 “片段成篇”作文教学实录 民族中学 叶建芬 【教学目标】 1、认识写作前理清思路、布局谋篇的重要性。 2、掌握“叙写片断，构筑成篇”的一些方法。 【教学设想】 1、“以读促写”的教学方法，用大量的写作实例支撑课堂内容。 2、让学生感知并运用“片断成篇”的写作模式。 【教学实录】 一、导入 师:有人说，剪不断，理还乱，是作文，别有一番滋味在心头。好的文章构思能使由“赤橙黄绿青蓝紫”组成的彩绸在空中亮出美不胜收的舞姿。别具一格的表现形式，能使精心包装的中考作文充满灵气和魅力。这节课我想与大家探究片段成篇的构思方式，希望它能为大家的构思献出点点情谊。(揭示课题) 二、与名家对话 师:杨雄以“能读千赋，则善为之矣”最早论述读写的关系。后也有古人云:“劳于读书，可逸于作文”“凡作文，须胸中有万卷书为之根底。 【幻灯出示:“能读千赋，则善为之矣” “劳于读书，可逸于作文” 凡作文，须胸中有万卷书 为之根底。】 师:大文学家鲁迅曾经感悟写作:“文章怎么做，我说不出，因为自己的作文是由于多看和练习，此外并无心得和方法”从几位名家的话中，同学们悟出年什么了吗, 生1:读写关系密切。 生2:写应该从读开始。 师:那我们就从阅读鲁迅作品开始。 (生阅读《闰土》) 师:请同学们体会名篇中塑造可爱健康的闰土由哪些小片段组成，分别以小标题的形式概括片段中所叙述的事情。 生1:捕鸟、拣贝壳、刺查 生2:还有看跳鱼儿 生3:“雪地捕鸟”“夏日拣贝壳”“月夜刺查”“潮汛时看跳鱼” 师:语言大师吕叔湘说:“阅读的本领学会了，自己写文章就不难了”是啊，“雪地捕鸟”“夏日拣贝壳”“月夜刺查”“潮汛时看跳鱼”这些事情虽不是发生在同一个时间，同一个地点，但它们却同时为我门展现了作者美丽有趣的故乡以及纯真自然活泼健康的润土。 (幻灯出示加了小标题的润土片段) 师:看，这样文章的结构有什么变化, 生1:文章有了小标题。 生2:文章有了小标题给人一目了然，条理清晰的感觉。 三、与名家对话 师:查阅资料，有人给文章的写作编了三字经大家可看看 【写作文 莫犯难 下苦功 能过关 勤观察 多体验 广阅读 赏名篇 常写练集文源 寻规律 觅经验】 师:那我们就来赏名篇，觅经验，看你是否发现了文章的写作思路或巧妙构思。 生1:每篇文章都是以小标题的形式构思文章。 生2:小标题的形式也大不相同，有的就是文字，有的就是数字，有的是数字加文字。 生3:《不变的记忆》的小标题更是有意思，作者引用了一些名篇的题目为小标题，很吸引我。 师:是啊，这让我们想到，我们如果需要小标题，还可以引用哪些呢, 生1:歌名、成语 生2:歇后语 生3:诗句 师:这些恰到好处的引用会让我们的文章增加不少色彩。 生1:每篇文章虽然由很多片段组成，但是它们都由一个中心组成。如《差生日记》就是向我们倾诉他的委屈和向往。 师:文章以不同特色的小标题把不同的片段连成了一篇篇如珍珠般美丽可爱的文章。为此，我感慨写作过程中，若能接天莲叶无穷碧，就能映日荷花别样红。怎样做呢, 归纳【1、犹如糖葫芦，竹签中间穿，多片段，一中心。2、片段组织方式可有不同，可标题，可数字、可标题加数字等】 四、牛刀小试 师:(文章惟多做始能精熟)老师这有个作文题目，请同学们用以前学过的知识快速审题，并用今天的所得如何构思 (出示:《老师请听我说》)、 生1:我分别用“你”、“我”、“他”为小标题来歌颂老师的辛勤。 生2:我分别用“我想……”、“我渴求……”、“我需要……”为小标题来吐露自己需要自由、需要轻松的心声。 生3:我分别用“信客”、“老王”、“背影”为小标题，歌颂老师的无私和对老师的崇敬之情。 师:真是青出于蓝而胜于蓝，我的构思都羞于出手了，教师出示(《老师，请听我说》一文中，分别用“黑板的话”、“粉笔的话”、“墙的话”、“日光灯的话”为小标题来歌颂老师，用拟人手法进行侧面描述，翻出了新意。) 四、实战训练 师:你们已经获得一个支点，我相信你们就能撬动一个地球，我们来一次实战训练 师:请大家在自己构思好的小标题中选择其中的一个小标题动笔写出一个片段，过后交流。 生:分别展示自己的片段作品。 师:生活中的一些契机，触发物使你们顿悟，产生了主题，这些主题就像火种抛进一桶汽油中，把平时的记忆都燃烧起来，十分精彩。但这只是一个片段，课外我们再把其他的片段补上，就像老师一样，写好了“黑板的话”就再写“粉笔的话”、“墙的话”、“日光灯的话”，如果需要还可以给它加上开头和结尾，这就是一篇以“片段成篇”模式写成的文章。 师:“片断成篇”是一种很好掌握、易于操作的作文写作模式，它突出的优点是思路明晰，结构明快，能给人整体划一的美感。它适合于写一大类的作文题目，为了更好的理解这种构思方法，这有一些佳作欣赏，请大家带回去探究其中的奥秘。 五、归纳小节 师:我的写作里程说起来不长，但对这我也有一些感悟…… (音乐字幕出示:今天我们的主要任务是学习片段成篇的构思方式这犹如糖葫芦，切记竹签必不可少。其实，作文构思的方式是多样的，而我们每天面对的生活则是瞬息万变的，这就要求我们有敏锐的洞察力，善于捕捉生活中每一个瞬间的美。还要善读，“口不绝吟于六艺之文，手不停披百家之编”，持之以恒必能采集到很多珍珠美玉，使自己的作文蔚成大观，果能善读，自必深受所读书籍文篇之影响,不必有意摹仿,而思绪与技巧自能渐有提高。我谓阅读为写作之基础,其意在此。) 【教学反思】 写作，从本质上说就是用语言文字表现作者的思维活动和思维结果。不进行构思，就无法写作;不善于构思，也就不善于写作。叶圣陶先生曾说:“思想是有一条路的，一句一句，一段一段，都是有路的，好文章的作者是决不乱走的。”我们平常所说的“凝神细想”、“意在笔先”也就是这个意思。清代著名戏曲理论家李渔也说:“袖手于前始能疾书于后。”由此可见构思的重要作用。 今天的教学内容，是整体构思，布局谋篇中“片断成篇”的一些基本知识和基本方法。 一节课45分钟，总得告诉学生一些东西。作文教学时间有限，更要教给学生们可用的东西。我自认为这堂课目标明确，就是要学生学会用“片段成篇”的方式构思文章。为了让学生学得轻松而有效，我运用许多写作实例支持课堂内容，在此同学们悟到“片段成篇”的构思技法。通过比较、分析、实战训练，使学生能够过手。 这堂课中如果说学生的精彩是他们自然的流露，相比较而言，我这位老师有点窘迫了，对于学生的精彩展示我却未用美妙的点评加以映衬，这是遗憾。我的评价语言太单调了，又太罗嗦了，与整个课堂气氛不和谐。 感 动 道太中学 陈伟霞 一、故事导入 在湖南一个风景如画的校园里，有一位23岁的男生，每天早上都骑着自行车，把一个10多岁的小女孩送到城东小学上学，晚上再接回到自己的住处。而他们就住在男生宿舍下的楼 梯间里。那位小女孩跟这位男生并没有血缘关系，只是这位男生的父亲捡来的一个弃婴。由于父亲犯有间歇性精神病，病情时好时坏，母亲又离家出走，这位捡来的妹妹，就由他一手带大。从他读高中时，他就一直把妹妹带在身边，一边读书一边照顾年幼的妹妹，靠做点小生意和打零工来维持生活，如今已经整整12年了。 师:你们猜他是谁, 师:对，他就是被评为2005年度十大感动中国人物之一洪战辉。 师;听了他的事迹你有什么感觉呢,引出课题:感动(幻灯片) 二、激发体验，浅谈感受 师:在社会生活中，人是感性的动物，七情六欲，喜怒哀乐。让我们打开记涞恼?牛 檬蟊晁阉饕幌拢 钊媚愀卸 氖鞘裁矗?/p> 师提示:可以是人或事，情或景;可以是伟人壮举，也可以是平凡小事;可以是你看到的、听到的，也可以是你亲身经历的。先同桌互说 抽生说，师提示归纳。 三、图片展示，引起共鸣 师:老师也看到一些很让人感动的事，想跟同学们一起分享。 冷暖相依 :一个腊月的早晨，天空飘洒着纷纷扬扬的雪花。一个中年男子的菜摊车上坐着一个小男孩，孩子用给菜保温的被子围着，父亲不时用手给儿子掖掖被子。在阴暗的背景和漫天飞舞的雪花的衬托下，儿子稚嫩红润的小脸与父亲饱经沧桑的脸形成对比，父子俩面对生活的艰辛相依为命，特别是父亲使劲发出叫卖声时，脸部表情感人力度之大，使人看后心灵为之震颤。 晚情如饺:一生你我一起走过了多少路,又经历了多少的磨难,已经很难记起了。其实这么多年，我们已经成为了饺子——你是馅，我是皮。 我的轮椅: 看了这张图片，我们打心底敬佩这位坚强的汉子～连个轮椅都用不起。那些感叹自己命苦的人，和这位身残志坚的汉子的境遇相比，你们那些所谓的遭遇又算得了什么。 遏制艾滋，履行承诺:人人谈滋色变，可爱滋病人更需要社会的关爱.这是某高校志愿者的宣誓场面。让我们感受到了浓浓的温情。 这一天属于中国:北京时间2004年8月28日凌晨，举世瞩目的男子110米栏的决赛。中国选手刘翔获得金牌，他的成绩为12秒91，打破奥运纪录，同时也追平了世界纪录。为了这一天，刘翔付出了常人难以想象的艰辛。这一天属于刘翔，更属于我们中国。 凯旋归来:2003年10月15日，9时整，大漠震颠，烈焰升腾，“长征一号”F型火箭腾空而起，载着“神州五号”飞船和中国航天员杨利伟飞向太空。浩瀚的太空从此写下中国人的名字，中国民族千年的飞天梦想终于成真～杨利伟以他的勇敢和奉献感动了所有的中国人， 枯木发芽:一株濒临死亡的老枯树，凋零的树叶，虬结的树干，沧桑 的脸盘，却长出了鲜嫩的新芽，让我们不得不感叹生命的力量和新生的喜悦。 四、范文欣赏 师:看来让人感动的事确实很多，怎样把它表达出来让更多的人来分享你的感动，你的快乐呢,那只有把它写出来。(幻灯出示话题作文《感动》的要求) 师:我们首先看一下同龄人怎样写。(生看范文) 师:好吗,如果你是一位老师你怎样点评这位学生的作文 师:可以从标题、开头、结尾、内容、语言等方面点评。 抽生点评 1、 以破折号引出副标题，紧扣“感动”话题。但主标题不够贴近内容。 2、 内容上联系实际，真实可信，确属走近生活，有感而发。 3、 三个片段看似毫无关联，实质上都紧扣中心话题。(朋友之间看似平淡实则浓烈的情怀， 小学老师用心良苦却又博大精深的爱心，母亲美好无私的生活态度。) 4、 开头用诗人和我富有哲理性的语言引入话题，结尾画龙点睛式的总结。使全文浑然天成。 五、列提纲 师:到这里，我想同学们心中都已有想写的材料了，请大家列提纲。(师巡回指导) 六、提纲展示 抽生讲作文思路。 七、作文 师:通过刚才的列提纲，我发现同学们已有作文的思路，回家就请以《感动》为话题写一篇作文。 八、总结 我们生活在高速发展的社会里，只要大家用心生活，用心作文，就不怕没有好文章，没有好生活。最后，送大家一句话。 学会感动，是生活所需要的。一个容易被感动又能使别人感动的人是幸福的。我们没有理由不做这样的人 。——陈谨 教后感: 在初中语文优质课(作文教学)评比中，我在育才中学初二(6)班执教了一节作文指导课。我的课题是话题作文《感动》。这个话题其实并不难，只要挖掘出学生心中让他感动的事即可，但难也就难在是否能触动学生心中的那根弦，以及如何拓展学生的思维，不要局限于自身的亲情中，更关注于社会，放眼世界。因此在启发学生时，我设定了很大的框架，可以是人或事，情或景;可以是伟人壮举，也可以是平凡小事;可以是你看到的、听到的，也可以是你亲身经历的。为此课上，学生的思维非常活跃，不仅关注到人，而且还看到了动植物中的细微表现。其实也是告诉学生，平时就应该多观察、多积累、多体验、多感受。在图片展示这个环节中，我以自己看到的一些感动的事，以形象的图片展示，在配上以自己表情地介绍，以期引起学生的共鸣，课堂效果不错。而在出示范文时，我的预设是以满分作文作为学生的范例，让他们有行文的表率。可出乎我的意料，学生更有自己独特的见解，对文章的理解更深刻，因此发言很出彩，而本人自觉对学生的回答预设不够，引导不够。学生列提纲时，我知道学生对列提纲比较陌生，但我的本意就是让学生理出作文的思路，能够知道自己想写什么，用什么表达，那么写文章就水到渠成了。通过观察反馈，我发现学生大部分已达到了要求，只是在反馈时，学生的提纲展示时间稍短，因此总结也比较仓促了。 《让生活充满感动》作文教学案例分析 兰巨中学 吴海燕 一、引言 今年，我担任了初三的班主任，一天课后，班里的同学纷纷围住我，对我说学校附近住着一位八十几岁的老奶奶，无儿无女，生活过的很艰难，许多同学听了她的遭遇后都感动的哭了，现在正商量着如何给她一些帮助，听到这番话的时候，我感到很欣慰。教育不仅是教给孩子文化知识，更应教会他们如何做人，做一个有爱心、对他人、对社会有所贡献的人。 二、问题的提出 平常写作课的时候，许多学生总是坐在座位上发呆，无从下笔，于是我就借同学们此次帮助孤寡老人的活动这件事，让他们搜集以感动为主题的写作素材，进行一次以感动为话题的作文教学活动。恰逢此次参加中学语文作文优质课比赛，于是，就确定了《让生活充满感动》这个作文教学内容。目的是让学生充分挖掘生活中令人感动的事例，搜集更多的创作素材。 三、过程陈述 (一)情境导入 课前播放歌曲《爱的奉献》，渲染一种特定的气氛。上课伊始，我以充满激情的话语导入:“有 这样一个歌手，当他自己还没有当父亲的时候，他就用父亲那样的眼神看着这么多的孩子，孩子的眼神让他心动更让他行动，当他即将诀别人世的最后一个瞬间，这个曾经感动十四亿中国人的英雄还毅然决定捐献眼角膜，他要把光明、把温暖、把爱的信仰留给人间。他就是2005年度感动中国的获奖代表之一，他是谁呢,(学生异口同声地说:“丛飞～”)没错，他就是感动了我们无数人的英雄丛飞，让我们走近他，去了解他那令人感动的事迹。” (二)谈一谈 师:通过浏览丛飞图片及阅读丛飞简介，说说丛飞带给你的感动, 教室里顿时热闹起来，同学们纷纷举手发言，诉说丛飞带给他们的感动瞬间。(学生发言略) 师:同学们谈了许多丛飞的感动事例，接下来让我们带着感动来齐读感动中国给丛飞的颁奖词，向丛飞表达我们最深切的敬意。 (三)说一说 师:我们再来看看我们生活中，还有哪些让我们感动的瞬间，老师给大家准备了四幅图片，选出最让你感动的一幅，说说为什么这幅图片最让你感动,原因是什么,(投影展示图片) 同学们仔细看了图片之后，纷纷发表了他们的观点。(学生发言略) (四)想一想 师:老师给同学们找了一些感动的瞬间，让我们先来齐读一下，我们再来联系自己，想一想我们身边还有什么感动的瞬间, 此时，学生搜索记忆中的库存，讲了许多令人感动的瞬间。(学生发言略) (五)写一写 师:同学们说了许多让我们感动的事例，接下来让我们用文字把最感动的瞬间给它记录下来，写一个片段作文。(范文展示，《一缕白发让我感动》) 学生有了之前的思考、讨论，情绪已被充分调动，所以写作起来，得心应手，不一会儿工夫，已有好几个学生写好了他们的作文片段，并用深情的语言朗读了他们的作品，其他同学还纷纷对这些作品进行了适当的点评。 (六)小结 师:世上有许多东西，与他人分享时，往往是越分越少，而有一样东西却是越分越多，那是什么呢,那就是爱～爱不是索取，也不是等价交换，而是付出、是给予、是奉献。 让我们在以后的日子里多播撒一些爱的种子，让我们的生活到处充满感动。 最后赠送大家几句人生感言(投影展示，齐读)。让我们在《让世界充满爱》这首歌中结束我们今天的课。 四、教学反思 虽然本次作文教学活动以挖掘生活中令人感动的作文素材为教学目的的目标已初步达成，并激发了学生的创作欲望，但还存在着许多不足之处: (一)课堂教学效果与预期设想的目标有一定的差距，学生寻找生活中感动事例的深度和广度还不够，只停留在身边的人、事、物上，没有将视野打开。 (二)学生的情绪没有充分调动起来，许多非常感人的事例没有真正打动他们的内心，所以课堂气氛不是很活跃，学生发言不是很积极。 (三)让学生创作并展示自己的作品的时间略显不足，以致于课堂时间没有达到最有效地利用。 (四)对学生作文的点评还不够到位，没有点评到最关键的一些东西。 (五)课堂教学的语言艺术还有待加强，驾驭课堂教学的能力还必须不断提高。 爱的细节在屋檐下 ———《感悟亲情》作文指导课案例 龙四中 吴海花 教学目标: 1、借助多种方法通过情感渲染，让学生充分感受和体悟至爱亲情。 2、激发学生尽情倾吐内心情感的表达欲望。 3、领会到“我手写我心”的习作真谛，学会运用生活化的典型细节来表现细腻的至爱亲情。 教学重点: 指导学生从细节中感受亲情、通过细节描写表现亲情 课前准备: 读几篇感人的文章，初步感受亲情。 教学工具:多媒体 教学过程: (一)导入 师:人是情感动物，亲情是人类中至真至美至上的情感，今天就让我们走进至爱亲人，感受屋檐下爱的点点滴滴。 (二)说话练习，理解亲情 师:平日，老师习惯把自己对亲情的感悟记下来，借此机会我把它献给大家(幻灯片)我们一起读读:(师生读) 亲情是在我饥肠辘辘时母亲端上的一碗蛋炒饭 亲情是在我犯错时父亲愤怒举起又轻轻落下的手掌 亲情是在父母疲惫时我双手奉上的一盏清心的茶 师:对呀，亲情往往凝聚在一些细小的事物中，在生活里你一定也有爱的点滴积累，你能否也说几句让我们听听, 学生说。 (三)捕捉细节体味亲情， 1、师:从大家的回答中可看出大家对亲情的理解已非常深刻，其实在广告、电影电视，现实生活中经常有感人的场面，现在，让我们一起分享一下，请大家在欣赏的时候想想其中哪些话，哪些动作让你感动，或者哪些情节触动你的心弦，让你想起了什么。 (放录象1表现亲情的一则广告。2电影《我的兄弟姐妹》片段3歌曲《天亮了》师旁白: 大家即将听到的这首歌是韩红的《天亮了》，这首歌曾打动了亿万电视观众，可是谁知道这动人的歌声背后，还隐藏着一个真实的、催人泪下的故事.那是1999年10月，在贵州的一个风景区，正在运行的缆车突然坠毁，36名乘客中有14位不幸遇难。而就在缆车下滑即将坠地的那一瞬间，一对年轻的夫妇，用双手托起了自己两岁半的儿子。结果，儿子得救了，这一对年轻的父母却失去了生命。儿子的生还，是他父母的双手托起的一个奇迹。在生和死的瞬间，父母想到的并不是自己，他们用双手把生的希望留给了儿子。) 欣赏结束，好，谁来说说, 学生说感受 师:录象中的特写镜头:妈妈的微笑，小女孩的痛哭等情景就是我们说爱的细节。大家真的非常善于捕捉。我为大家感到自豪。 2 、其实我们的生活虽没有影片中的故事那样轰轰烈烈，但我们知道亲情是生活中的细节，只要我们细细品味，爱就时时溢满我们的心房，现在让我们来说说自己的感人故事吧。 学生说 师:听大家说了那么多令人感动的故事，我也不禁想起我的妈妈，想起她病体垂危，痛苦坚忍的模样，想起她在生命的最后还在操心懵懂无知的我。那时母亲已住院一个多星期，这期间我竟不曾想到要去看看她，直至开学。推开病房门，一眼就见妈妈紧闭着双眼静静地躺在那里，身子越发消瘦，鼻孔里塞着两根塑料管，微张着嘴，喘着气，胸脯一动一动的。平日 那虽然体弱，但是终日忙里忙外，似乎不知累的妈妈却变成了这个模样～我泪如泉涌。妈妈听到我的声音睁开眼，伸出枯瘦如枝的手示意我坐下，妈妈又指指桌上，吃力地说:“别哭，孩子，那有个苹果，你最喜欢吃的，很甜，吃吧。”一听这话我失声痛哭。妈妈拍拍我的手说:“别怕，没事，你又不是不知道妈妈，妈妈躺几天就会好起来的。家里我的枕头下有一百元钱，是我特意留给你作学费的，这地方不好呆，早点回去吧。”我真的走出了病房，离开了母亲，却万万没想到这竟然是与母亲的最后诀别。当我再看到我的母亲，她已不能和我说话。妈妈，再也没有你于寒冷的冬天为我熨暖冰冷的被窝;再也没有你为我重新盖好被我踢掉的被子;再也没有你于每天清晨来到我的床前俯下身拍拍我的脸颊温柔的叫唤:“孩子，该起床了，妈已烧好早饭了。”……妈妈，我再也听不到你的唠叨，你的鼓励，你的嘘寒问暖，你为何不等我完成学业，达成你的心愿就离我而去呢,～枕头下，那张似乎还留有你体温的一百元还静静地躺在那里，可它竟变成了您留给我的最后遗物。我一头扑向妈妈，抱着她冰冷的身子大哭起来…… (四)感受亲情，欣赏细节 我想现在大家应该非常想把自己的情感表达出来，那怎样才能把这细腻的亲情表达的淋漓尽致呢,让我们阅读几篇精彩的片段看看能否从中获得一些启示。发到大家手上的材料有三个片段，请同学们仔细阅读，看看哪些地方最让你感动，作者是通过什么方法让我们也为之动容的,同桌之间可相互讨论。(《爱的细节》片段，《秋天的怀念》片段，《母爱如粥》片段) 学生说师整理板书: 寻找细腻的亲情:真情实感 细致地描绘亲情:人物描写:语言 行动 神态 心理…… 叙述:抒情语言 大家说的都很在理，确确实实，任何好的文章都是从灵魂深处流淌出来，而这些情感又往往凝聚在一些细小的东西中，只要情真，情实，情细，相信我们的故事也一定能感动别人。(幻灯片) (五)表现亲情，描写细节 现在赶快拿起笔记下最感人的一幕吧～ 学生写作 佳作展示师生点评 (六)归纳总结，布置作文(幻灯片) 大家写得真是棒极了，请大家课后对你刚才写的或补充或扩展，整理成文。 最后我想告诉大家的是:对于亲情我们要经常用心去体味，用行动去回报，用笔去表达～ 教学反思: 1、“文以情感人”，要想让学生写出的文章能感动人，首先得让学生自己感动。有倾吐内心情感的表达欲望，以情促写，真正做到“我手写我心”。因此，在教学时我自始至终都注重对学生情感的激发。借助观看录象，听感人故事，欣赏精彩片段等多种方法的情感渲染，让学生充分感受和体悟到至爱亲情。 2、表现亲情，学生最容易忽视的是生活中的细节，认为家庭活动太平常，以至不能从日常的生活中感受到家庭成员之间的亲情，写出来的文章自然就枯燥乏味。因此，我确定以“指导学生从细节中感受亲情、通过细节描写表现亲情”作为此课的教学重点，运用多媒体教学手段的优势唤醒和调动学生的生活积累，使其达到情不自禁、跃跃欲试的状态，让他们对亲情的表达有了更多的情感投入后，更加地注重对细节的描写。 3、由于第一次上如此规模的课不免紧张，一些教学环节的处理并不十分理想，也由于自己，课堂的点评不是很到位，真的要花大量的时间去读书去学习了。 附阅读材料: 爱的细节 假期作业多，我每天都要忙到很晚，很晚了也不愿意上床睡觉，又磨磨蹭蹭翻翻杂志，听听cd，直到困得睁不开眼了才睡觉。因为睡得晚，早晨理所当然地就起来晚了。几乎每天都是如此，直到开学临近。那天我爸无意间对我妈说:这下好了，孩子开学我又可以按正常的点上班了，不用每天早走半个钟头了。我没听懂爸爸的话，便问他:你上班早晚跟我开不开学有什么关系呀,爸爸说，你还不知道呢，自从你放假之后，你妈妈看你每天写作业写到那么晚，想让你早晨多睡一会儿。本来我比你妈上班的时间晚半个钟头，可是为了让咱家的门少响一次，你妈让我每天提前半个钟头走，这不就把两声门响压缩成一声门响了吗, 秋天的怀念 史铁生 双腿瘫痪以后，我的脾气变得暴躁无常，望着望着天上北归的雁阵，我会突然把面前的玻璃砸碎;听着听着李谷一甜美的歌声，我会猛地把手边的东西摔向四周的墙壁。母亲这时就悄悄地躲出去，在我看不见的地方偷偷地听着我的动静。当一切恢复沉寂，她又悄悄地进来，眼圈红红的，看着我。“听说北海〔北海指北京的北海公园。〕的花儿都开了，我推着你去走走。”她总是这么说。母亲喜欢花，可自从我瘫痪以后，她侍弄的那些花都死了。“不，我不去～”我狠命地捶打这两条可恨的腿，喊着:“我活着有什么劲～”母亲扑过来抓住我的手，忍住哭声说:“咱娘儿俩在一块儿，好好儿活……” 可我一直都不知道，她的病已经到了那步田地。后来妹妹告诉我，母亲常常肝疼得整宿整宿翻来覆去地睡不了觉。 …… 母爱如粥 有这样一位母亲，她每天都和她的儿子聊天，她给他讲一些他小时侯的故事:光着屁股在小河里游泳被虾刺伤了屁股赤着脚丫蹿到树上吃桑葚被毛毛虫咬得浑身疙瘩，林林总总，他都已经忘了的事情，她总是记忆犹心，如数家珍。 她每天总是会利用一大部分时间来给他熬粥。用那种最长最大、颗粒饱满、质地晶莹、略带些翠青色的米粒。一颗一颗精心挑选。如果偶尔一不小心手指沾起了两颗，她会将它们重新放进米堆，重新挑选。她把那些米们洗得纯粹而有洁净，然后放进一只棕色瓦罐，倒上沉淀过的泉水，用柴火慢慢熬，火不能太猛，否则粥会受热不均匀。她把火儿侍侯得温顺而精致，宛若一位恬静娴雅的江南女子。 熬一罐粥，通常要花费两个半小时。她小心翼翼地把粥倒进一只花瓷碗，一边晃着脑袋，一边对着粥吹气，吹到自己呼吸困难，粥也变凉了。她微笑着用汤匙喂给儿子吃，可是儿子闭着眼睛，漠然地拒绝了她。她并不生气，微笑如昔。 第二天，继续拣米，熬粥，吹冷，并且接受拒绝。日复一日，年复一年。她的手指已经变得粗糙而又迟钝，她摇晃的脑袋已经白法丛生，她的力气也大不如从前往往是粥冷到一半时便已经上气不接下气，必须借助扇子来完成下一半的降温。可是儿子依然冷漠着拒绝她。她一直微笑着，始终没有流下一滴眼泪。 这种热情与冷漠的对峙持续了八年零七十三天，第八年零七十四天，她正和他儿子讲着他小时侯的故事，儿子突然睁开眼睛，不大清晰的说了声:“妈妈，我要和粥。”她顿时泪如雨下——那是他自从医生宣布脑死亡后开口说的第一句话。医生说，像他这样的情况，只有十万分之一的机会。 …… 捕捉细节，体验亲情 龙泉三中 周善花 教学目标: 1. 指导学生学习捕捉生活中的细节。力求做到于细微处见亲情。 2. 通过例文比较阅读，让学生领会和学会人物细节描写的方法。 一. 导入 (播放VCD间维文《母亲》歌曲，让学生听歌曲，看画面,谈感受) 师:倾听优美而深情的歌曲，欣赏熟悉而感人的画面，我们从中感受浓浓的亲情，而亲情往往蕴藏浓浓在生活的细节中，我们应该留心生活，观察生活，善于捕捉生活中的细节，对此加以生动细致描写，做到于细微处见亲情，这节课让我们一起“捕捉细节，体验亲情” 板书课题:捕捉细节，体验亲情。 二. 比较阅读，领会写法 师:首先让我们进行比较阅读，看一看读者是怎样捕捉生活的细节，学一学笔者哪些写作方法表现生活中的亲情呢, (一) 出示语段一 回望(1) 父亲是不易被察觉的。 一天下棋时，父亲借口悔棋，我不快，便与父亲闹翻了。从那以后，我尽量避免与父亲说话，直到那天晚上。那几天，母亲出差，去辅导班的路途遥远，父亲就决定送我。 公共汽车上，父亲站在离我不远不近的地方。 虽然我两眼望着窗外，但总觉得有人在那个方向盯着我。于是，我略微侧头，竟发现父亲在注视着我。 到站后，我一声不响地下了车，快步走着。虽然身后并没有随行的脚步声，但在拐弯处，我还是与刚过了马路的父亲的目光碰撞到了一起。我眼睛一热，心也跟着热了起来。父亲仍然注视着我，目光是那样温暖。我顿了顿，假装提鞋。站起来时，心中的暖意更深了。于是，我心潮澎湃的走上了通向教室的路。 从此，我发现父亲的爱无处不在，却不易察觉。 (二) 出示语段二 回望(2) 父亲是不易被察觉的，但又是实实在在的。 一天下棋时，父亲借口悔棋，我不快，便与父亲闹翻了。从那以后，我尽量避免与父亲说话，直到那天晚上。那几天，母亲出差，去辅导班的路途遥远，“护送”我的重担便落在了父亲的肩上。上了公共汽车，我故意与父亲背对着，沉默不语。我漫无目的地望着窗外，偶一侧头，竟发现父亲正在不远处静静地注视着我，眼里充满了关切，似乎并不在意我俩目前正处在“僵持阶段”。 到站后，我一声不响地下了车，快步走着。身后似乎并没有父亲跟随的脚步声，但在拐弯处，我回头一望，正好与刚过马路的父亲的目光相碰。我不禁眼睛一热，心也跟着热了起来。虽然看不清父亲回望我的眼神，但我分明感觉到那目光是温暖的。我顿了顿，假装蹲下来提鞋，又朝父亲回望我的方向看去，发觉父亲仍在看着我。我站起身来，心中的暖意又加深了，心潮澎湃地走上了通往教室的路。 从此，我发觉父亲的爱就像回望一样无处不在，只不过需要用感受爱的眼睛去观察，用体谅父亲的心去感受。 师:首先让我们进行比较阅读，看一看笔者是怎样捕捉生活的细节，学一学笔者哪些写作方法表现生活中的亲情呢, (一) 请同学们进行比较阅读，阅读后思考讨论。 1. 同样材料，同样的内容，两篇不同的习作，你更欣赏哪一篇,为什么, (让学生们七嘴八舌地表达自己的观点，讨论的中心集中在第二篇的人物描写更具体，更有 表现力等方面) 2. 请你找出第二篇习作中划线部分具体人物描写的语句，与第一篇进行比较，说说具体在哪里, (第一处:“偶一侧头，竟发现父亲正在不远处静静地注视着我，眼里充满了关切”——神态描写。写出了“我”是偶然间发现父亲注视“我”的眼神，这份“爱”无时无刻不在身边。还写出这份爱的特点，“静静的”，没有轰轰烈烈的表达，却是那样的尽在不言中，深远绵长。 第二处:“在拐弯处，我回头一望，正好和刚过马路的父亲的目光相碰。我不禁眼睛一热，心也跟着热了起来。”——心理活动描写。写了第二次与父亲眼神的交流，用“我”的心理感受从侧面衬托父亲的感人，“我”心中的坚冰在父爱的传递下开始融化。 第三处:“我顿了顿，假装蹲下来提鞋，又朝父亲仍在看着我。”——动作描写。“我”主动地寻找着父亲对“我”的关怀，其实也是透过“我”视了“写出了一个慈祥的父亲的形象，这份爱也终于渗透了”“我”的心田，之前的隔阂全部消除了。) 三. 师生互动，探讨细节描写的方法，教师适当引导。 (1) 通过前面的比较阅读，让学生自己归纳总结什么,是人物细节描写, 课件上展示温馨提示: 人物的细节描写是指抓住生活中人物的细微而又具体的情节(细微的举动 ，表情，语言，动作和细微心理变化)，加以生动细微的描绘，具体渗透在对人物，景物或场面描写只中，它是最生动，最有表现力的手法。(板书括号里的词语) 师:通过刚才比较阅读，我们初步学习捕捉细节，寻找，发现细节描写的方法，感受到于细微处见亲情效果，那么同学想不想学以致用，进行细节描写技巧训练呢, (三).学以致用，技巧训练 出示作业，进行课堂片段练习。 那脚印，那亲情`````` 我在离家十里路的镇上上初中，有一个夜晚,天下着雪，我望着那条茫茫的雪路上一行行的脚印，心里感到不安。今天是星期天，是父亲送饭来的日子。(三年前母亲之后，做饭的事就由父亲包了下来，父亲总是做了面饼，在每个星期天的晚上送来，因为他白天下地。)每个星期天，我都盼望着父亲来，哪怕他什么话也不说，只要我们能默默地相对坐一会儿，看一眼日渐衰老的父亲，我也会感到心里暖暖的。可是今天，一想到父亲将要在雪地上蹒跚，我又希望他今天不要来。 忐忑不安地上完自习，夹在同学们中间走向宿舍。刚准被踏进寝室，我惊呆了，(,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,)(父亲外貌和动作描写)“爸爸～”一种怦然心动的感觉油然而生，我惊叫着扑过去`````` 雪还在纷纷扬扬的飘着，屋檐下，父亲的外衣上也都披上白雪。我努力抑制住眼泪，搀扶着把父亲让进我的宿舍。 “下自习了,”(,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,) (父亲神情描写)“恩。”我应了一句，简单得不能再简单的一句话再一次让我(,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,)(我的心里描写) 我接过了父亲的面饼，让他在我床是休息一会儿，他却不动，站着，(,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,)(父亲拿零用钱的动作描写)父亲才四十多岁，(,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,)(父亲的外貌描写) 父亲刚走了几步，又回来了，告诉我，(,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,)(语言描写)然后，才头也不回地走了。背过父亲，我还是没能止住我那激动的泪水``````我哭了，哭得很幸福。 昏暗的路灯下，雪还在飞舞。我呆呆地注视着雪地上那渐渐向远外延伸的脚印。这脚印，与 其说印在雪地上，倒不如说烙在我的心坎上。这一行脚印，越来越远，脚印的尽头，父亲的背影也愈来愈小`````` 3. 交流片段习作，教师根据细节描写的方法进行具体指导与点拨，帮助学生加深印象，形成细节描写的意识。 (四).捕捉细节，体验亲情 师:同学们你与父母及其他亲人朝夕相处将近十四五个春秋，在你们生活中肯定存在着精彩感人的细节，一句叮嘱，一则短信，一个手势，一个电话，瞬间心理活动，闪光后泪珠，这些无不蕴含深刻爱意和浓浓的亲情，请你打开记忆闸门，搜索捕捉生活细节，把那份至善至爱的亲情以书面式展现出来吧，从而更深层体验亲情吧～ 课件展示:试一试 请你 捕捉生活中人物的细节，对此加以生动细致描写。 (五).结束语 我们生活是一个一个的片段的组合，更是点滴情节的凝聚，作文来源于生活，更来源于生活中的细节，让我们擦亮眼睛，用心捕捉生活细节，去描摹去刻画，再先原汁原味的生活，体验亲情，感悟亲情吧。 最后让亲情树伴随你茁壮成长，让亲情树在你心中永远四季常青。 教后反思: 通过参加这次作文优质课评比，以及评课活动，我受益匪浅，认识到这次作文课诸多不足之中也有可取之处，为今后的如何上好作文指导课，指明方向。 我认为成功之处在于:“导入课题——比较阅读，领会写法——学以至用，技巧训练——捕捉细节，体验亲情——结束语”几个环节比较分明，思路较清晰，基本上符合写作指导课程序，导入环节，借助想关歌曲《母亲》，附着感人画面，从而感染，打动学生，激起他们写作欲望，接着比较阅读，领会写法，然后模仿操作，实践训练，盾序渐进，这样有利于指导学生写作，培养写作能力。 2.板书设计新颖，以“捕捉”两字注入树脉，细节“两字”填入花心，动作，表情，语言，心理，填在花瓣中，“体验亲情”以学穿插在花瓣间隙，从而组成一棵亲情树，将亲情树与祝送语相联系，富有意蕴。 4. 通过搜索， 下载 课程表模板下载资产负债表下载英语单词下载学习机资料下载励志文章下载 ，筛选歌曲，图片，资料过程，初学制作课件的我眼界大开，为今后多媒体课件制作打下良好的基础。 不足之处: 1. 上课以后，我对自己的课留下许多不满和遗憾，以致于折腾我几个夜晚似乎有点儿无法原谅自己。由于制作课件生疏及其他因素，我认为自己对课准备太仓促，不够成熟，导致几个环节衔接较生硬，不流畅。 学生这也涉及自身素质问题吧，尤其痛恨自己富有激情的教学风格完全没展示，从而也未激起学生的激情，使课堂气氛显得较为沉闷一些，未达到自己预期效果，这或许归结于我错误的选用阅读材料，我在自己学校试讲时，选得是“驮驮”所写一篇感人的文章“半边钱”其中人物语言，动作，神情细节描写相当典型十分精彩。通过老师声情并茂地朗读，师生当作者产生情感共鸣，师生激情同时呼唤，为后一个“学以致用，技巧训练”“环节”作了如实的铺垫，打下良好的基础，可惜生怕时间不够用，后改选用两篇《回望》比较阅读，几个问题设计不是很精当，显然效果不如原先好，直接影响后面几个环节有效性。 2. 有在“学以致用，技巧训练”这个环节中，采用四人小组合进行由小组代表记合作结果，由其他小组成员析，这样会使这个环节出新点儿。 3. 在“捕捉细节，体验亲情环节中，可以把几个学生片段习作投影到屏媒，让学生评改，之后老师做适当点评，效这无不使学生在写作上扬长避短，掌握写作技巧，由于种种原因，老 师评价不够到位。 总之，“吃一，长一智”，不断学习不断考试，不断反思，我坚信自己也会不断地进步。我也深信这次作文优质课评比活动定会推动我市语文作文教学进入新阶梯，借此机会，我非常感谢语文指导员吴丹青老师精心开设作文优质课评比活动，为我们提供了展示和学习的平台。我也非常感激各位专家评委，同行点评并加以指导 春节的美丽画卷 查田中学 汤如鸾 一、引言 每次批改作文，感受最深的就是体现真情实感的文章不多，而抄袭的、胡编乱造的却不少，什么原因呢,学生生活经验不足，缺乏人生感悟，这固然重要，但在人们教学中却忽略了让学生亲身体验生活、感悟生活的机会，拼命地给学生建造“空中阁楼”，因此写作教学收效甚少。能否在写作教学中以学生为主，创造机会，让学生在自主、自信、自律、自悟中学有所得,作为语文老师，如何激发学生创作兴趣，启迪他们捕捉灵感，改变“无东西写”、“无话可说”的状况是责无旁贷的。 二、背景 节日，在民俗文化中，被称为“时空以外的时空”，主要指的是民间传统的周期性的集体参与的事件和活动，例如中国的的春节、端午节和中秋节。所谓的“传统”，指的是民间节日一定要具有很长的历史传承性，属于民间自发的遵循和继承的一种仪式和活动。节日必须是周期性地举行的，一般为一年一次，偶尔举行的一次聚会活动则不是节日。节日往往与民间传统信仰密切相关，所以节日期间人们要举行各种祭祀活动。总之，节日是人们给自己紧张忙碌而又严肃的生活设置的一个“加油站”，是为了让人们有一个机会来享受自己通过艰苦努力而创造出来的生活。于此，我设计了《中国的美丽画卷》这一课题，目的是把学生引向社会，引导他们关注社会生活，分析评价生活中的一些突出现象，以及在生活中和实践中正确、熟练地运用祖国语言文字的能力;突出人文性，即要充分体现时代要求和现代意识，又要重视继承和弘扬中国民族的优秀文化。能够引起学生对自然、人生、社会有益地关注和思考;有利于在学习中逐步掌握学习语文的方法，并逐步养成良好的读书和写作习惯;给学生留下一定的选择和拓展的空间，以满足不同学生发展的需要。对于这样的话题学生应该是有话可说的，这就是我将其与写作训练联想到一起的原因。 三、导写过程: 同学们，人们常说，节日是传统文化的表演场，就是因为传统文化的很多方面都可以在节日当中找到自己的表现场所。因为节日反映了一个民族对自然及其变化规律的认识。尽管人们的计算 标准 excel标准偏差excel标准偏差函数exl标准差函数国标检验抽样标准表免费下载红头文件格式标准下载 不一样，但所有的民族都有自己的历法和对时间的计算。在过去，唯一能够反映一个民族对年轮、季节和时间的计算情况和标准的事件就是传统节日。因为几乎所有的民族都有会在季节、年轮或历法纪年的关键时期举行庆祝活动，而这种庆祝日子便逐渐凝定为节日。你们知道我们一年里有哪些节日, 生:……(自由说) 师:同学们，你们最喜欢的节日是什么, 生:……(自由说) 师:我最喜欢春节，因为在春节期间，可以合家团聚，增进友情，密切邻里关系，和和美美过日子，一心一意奔前程。春节的场景是多么美妙～现在我们一起来感受一下除夕夜的热闹场面。 生:听录音 师:多美的一幅画面啊～今天我们谈论的话题就是“春节的美丽画卷”。 其实，对于这些动人的故事，有许多作家也曾用他们如椽的巨笔和生花的妙笔，抒写了他们 在春节时的那种真实而复杂的内心感受。那么，现在我们再来共同欣赏“天才神童作家”刘绍棠先生的神来之笔《本命年的回想》，看他是怎样为我们勾勤出一幅京郊大地春节民俗的美丽画卷的, 看春节 学生自由表述 师:作家刘绍棠的散文《本命年的回想》，用中国民间传统的“二十四节气”开笔，寥寥数语，就把春节突出地置于中国民俗节日“第一节”的地位。接着，作家不断“加温”，环环相拓，用诗一般的语言，具体地叙写了家乡过大年的情景。在这篇《本命年的回想》中，作家一共写了十件事:“抄年货”、“吃腊八粥”、“买糖果”、“挑绒花”、“宰牲畜”、“备食物”、“送灶王爷”、“换门神”、“除夕守岁”、“拜新年”、。这十件事，件件都有交待，美丽的场景和形象的事例，使读者强烈地感受到京效大地乡土上浓浓的“年味儿”。 师:同学们，课前你们已经搜集了有关春节方面的故事。那么，下面就请你们每组推荐一位同学来展示一下。 说春节 生说……(六、七位同学展示) 成长离不开春节，因为每过一个春节，我们都长大一岁。每个人都会与春节有一段难以忘怀的故事。成长拉近了我们与岁月的距离，穿越时空隧道，还依稀可辨成长路上的串串足迹，或深或浅，总在记忆中留下些许美好的回忆。这些回忆，韵味十足，回味无穷，会成为我们一生中的感动与幸福。下面就请每一位同学在纸上写一段有关春节的故事。 写春节 生写(大约10分钟)教师巡视。 写作要求: 1、内容围绕“春节” 2、题目自拟 3、文体自选 4、要有自己的体验和感悟 品春节 展示、评价 同学们，这节课我们从很多方面感受了春节的独特魅力。 今天，我们就以“春节”为话题写一篇作文。写这篇与春节有关的话题作文，大家可以借鉴同学们课上提供的新颖材料，结合自己的感受“化大为小”，化抽象为具体，使自己的文章情感丰富，内容翔实。综合运用记叙、描写、抒情、议论几种表达方式，选择自己擅长的文体来写，一定要写出自己的真情实感，写出自己对春节的独特感受。 四、教学回顾与反思 写作是运用运用语言文字进行表达和交流的重要方式，是认识世界，认识自我，进行创造性表述的过程。写作教学应贴近学生实际，让学生易于动笔，乐于表达，应引导学生关注现实，热爱生活，表达真情实感。在写作教学中，教师有侧重在培养学生观察、思考的能力和收集资料的能力。同时关注学生调整好写作状态，胸有成竹，轻松作文。这节课的设计，教师给学生创造了一个宽松的环境，留下大块的思维空间，让学生体验到获取写作之“源”的快乐。 但也有很多缺撼之处，比如:在教学第一个环节时，我问同学们，你们最喜欢的节日是什么,(生:春节。)应让学生畅所欲言，而我却剥夺了他们的自由。虽然后面设计了说春节这一环节，同学们说得也不错，我却觉得有点遗憾。《本命年的回想》这篇范文分析的也不够到位。最后发给学生《中国节日》是想提升他们的写作，因为在这篇文章里，作者首先对“节日”的内涵作了精妙的诠释:“每一个节日都包含一个惊天泣地的故事，每一个节日都彰显着 中华的文明与精神～”然后运用对比的手法，揭示了当今社会的一些反常现象:“有些人竟忘了本该铭记的传统节日，却追捧那些丝毫不挂钩的„洋节?。”通过对比，深化了中心，增强了文章的感染力，精辟入微，令人深受启发。文章字里行间流露出作者一定的文化底蕴，描述朴实无华，娓娓道来。不加修饰，读来亲切感人，看似没有重量的文字，却在读者心中荡起了层层涟漪，无不给人以深刻的印象。可我反而弄巧成拙，也许是我心里素质太差，导致我上课失败。我在以后的语文课堂上，要克制这种情绪，把课上得精彩。 (英文版 ) Two regulations promulgated for implementation is in the party in power for a long time and the rule of law conditions, the implementation of comprehensive strictly strategic plan, implementation in accordance with the rules and discipline to manage the party, strengthen inner-party supervision of major initiatives. The two regulations supporting each other, the < code > adhere to a positive advocate, focusing on morality is of Party members and Party leading cadres can see, enough to get a high standard; < rule > around the party discipline, disciplinary ruler requirements, listed as "negative list, focusing on vertical gauge, draw the party organizations and Party members do not touch the" bottom line ". Here, the main from four square face two party rules of interpretation: the first part introduces two party Revised regulations the necessity and the revision process; the second part is the interpretation of the two fundamental principles of the revision of laws and regulations in the party; the third part introduces two party regulations modified the main changes and needs to grasp several key problems; the fourth part on how to grasp the implementation of the two regulations of the party. < code > and < Regulations > revised the necessity and revised history of the CPC Central Committee the amendment to the Chinese Communist Party members and leading cadres honest politics several guidelines > and < Chinese Communist Party discipline and Punishment Regulations > column 1 by 2015 to strengthen party laws and regulations focus. Two party regulations revision work lasted a Years, pooling the wisdom of the whole party, ideological consensus, draw historical experience, respect for the wisdom of our predecessors, which reflects the unity of inheritance and innovation; follow the correct direction, grasp the limited goals, adhere to the party's leadership, to solve the masses of the people reflect a focus on the problem. The new revision of the < code > and < rule >, reflects the party's 18 and the eighth session of the third, the spirit of the fourth plenary session, reflecting the experience of studying and implementing the General Secretary Xi Jinping series of important speech, reflects the party's eighteen years comprehensive strictly practice. (a) revised two regulations of the party need of < the ICAC guidelines > in < in 1997 Leaders as members of the Communist Party of China clean politics certain criteria (Trial) > based on revised, the promulgation and implementation of January 2010, to strengthen the construction of the contingent of leading cadres play an important role. But with the party to manage the party strictly administering the deepening, has not been able to fully meet the actual needs. Content is too complicated, "eight prohibition, 52 are not allowed to" hard to remember, and also difficult to put into practice; the second is concisely positive advocated by the lack of prohibited provisions excessive, no autonomy requirements; the third is banned terms and discipline law, both with the party discipline, disciplinary regulations repeat and Criminal law and other laws and regulations repeat; the fourth is to "clean" the theme is not prominent, not for the existing problems, and is narrow, only needle of county-level leading cadres above. < rule > is in 1997 < Chinese Communist Party disciplinary cases (Trial) > based on revision, in December 2003 the promulgation and implementation, to strengthen the construction of the party play very important role. Along with the development of the situation, which many provisions have been unable to fully meet the comprehensive strictly administering the practice needs. One is Ji law, more than half of the provisions and criminal law and other countries laws and regulations Repetition; two is the political discipline regulations is not prominent, not specific, for violation of the party constitution, damage the authority of Party Constitution of misconduct lack necessary and serious responsibility to pursue; third is the main discipline for the leading cadres, does not cover all Party members. Based on the above situation, need to < the criterion of a clean and honest administration > and < rule > the two is likely to be more relevant regulations first amendment. By revising, really put the authority of Party discipline, the seriousness in the party tree and call up the majority of Party members and cadres of the party constitution of party compasses party consciousness. (II) two party regulations revision process the Central Committee of the Communist Party of China attaches great importance to two regulations revision . Xi Jinping, general books recorded in the Fifth Plenary Session of the eighth session of the Central Commission for Discipline Inspection, on the revised regulations < > made clear instructions. According to the central deployment, the Central Commission for Discipline Inspection from 2014 under six months begin study two regulations revision. The Standing Committee of the Central Commission for Discipline Inspection 4 review revised. Comrade Wang Qishan 14 times held a special meeting to study two regulations revision, amendment clarifies the direction, major issues of principle, path and target, respectively held a forum will listen to part of the province (area) secretary of the Party committee, Secretary of the Discipline Inspection Commission, part of the central ministries and state organs Department The first party committee is mainly responsible for people, views of experts and scholars and grassroots party organizations and Party members. Approved by the Central Committee of the Communist Party of China, on 7 September 2015, the general office of the Central Committee of the Party issued a notice to solicit the provinces (autonomous regions, municipalities) Party, the central ministries and commissions, state ministries and commissions of the Party (party), the General Political Department of the military, every 3 people organization of Party of two regulations revision opinion. Central Commission for Discipline Inspection of extensive solicitation of opinions, careful study, attracting, formed a revised sent reviewers. In October 8 and October 12, Central Committee Political Bureau Standing Committee and the Political Bureau of the Central Committee After consideration of the two regulations revised draft. On October 18, the Central Committee of the Communist Party of China formally issued two regulations. Can say, two laws amendment concentrated the wisdom of the whole party, embodies the party. Second, < code > and < Regulations > revision of the basic principles of two party regulations revision work and implement the party's eighteen, ten eight plenary, the spirit of the Fourth Plenary Session of the Eleventh Central Committee and General Secretary Xi Jinping important instructions on the revised < low political criterion > and < Regulations >, highlighting the ruling party characteristics, serious discipline, the discipline quite in front of the law, based on the current, a long-term, advance as a whole, with Bu Xiuding independent < rule > and < rule >. Main principle is: first, adhere to the party constitution to follow. The constitution about discipline and self-discipline required specific, awaken the party constitution of party compasses party consciousness, maintaining the authority of the constitution. General Secretary Xi Jinping pointed out that "no rules, no side round. Party constitution is the fundamental law, the party must follow the general rules. In early 2015 held the eighth session of the Central Commission for Discipline Inspection Fifth Plenary Session of the 16th Central Committee, Xi Jinping again pointed out that constitution is the party must follow the general rules, but also the general rules." the revision of the < code > and < rule > is Method in adhere to the regulations established for the purpose of combining rule of virtue is to adhere to the party constitution as a fundamental to follow, the constitution authority set up, wake up the party constitution and party rules the sense of discipline, the party constitution about discipline and self-discipline specific requirements. 4 second is to adhere to in accordance with the regulations governing the party and the party. The Party of rule of virtue "de", mainly refers to the party's ideals and beliefs, excellent traditional style. The revised the < code > closely linked to the "self-discipline", insisting on the positive initiative, for all members, highlight the "vital few", emphasized self-discipline, focusing on the morality, and the majority of Party members and the ideological and moral standards. The revised < > Ji method separately, Ji, Ji Yan to Method, as a "negative list", emphasizing the heteronomy, focusing on vertical gauge. Is this one high and one low, a positive reaction, the strict party discipline and practice results transformation for the integration of the whole party to observe moral and discipline requirements, for the majority of Party members and cadres provides benchmarking and ruler. Third, insist on to. In view of the problems existing in the party at the present stage, the main problems of Party members and cadres in the aspect of self-discipline and abide by the discipline to make clearly defined, especially the party's eighteen years strict political discipline and political rules, organization and discipline and to implement the central eight provisions of the spirit against the four winds and other requirements into Disciplinary provisions. Not one pace reachs the designated position, focusing on in line with reality, pragmatic and effective. After the revision of major changes, major changes in the < code > and < rule > modified and needs to grasp several key problems (a) < code > < code > adhere to according to regulations governing the party and party with morals in combination, for at the present stage, the leadership of the party members and cadres and Party members in existing main problems of self-discipline, put forward principles, requirements and specifications, showing Communists noble moral pursuit, reflected at all times and in all over the world ethics from high from low 5 common requirements. One is closely linked to the "self-discipline", removal and no direct relation to the provisions of . the second is adhere to a positive advocate, "eight prohibition" 52 are not allowed to "about the content of the" negative list moved into synchronization amendment < cases >. Three is for all the party members, will apply object from the leadership of the party members and cadres to expand to all Party members, fully embodies the comprehensive strictly required. The fourth is prominent key minority, seize the leadership of the party members and cadres is the key, and put forward higher requirements than the ordinary Party members. Five is to simplify, and strive to achieve concise, easy to understand, easy to remember. The revised < code > is the ruling Party since the first insists on a positive advocate forAll Party members and the self-discipline norms, moral declaration issued to all members of the party and the National People's solemn commitment. > < criterion of a clean and honest administration consists of 4 parts, 18, more than 3600 words. After the revision of the < code >, a total of eight, 281 words, including lead, specification and Party member cadre clean fingered self-discipline norms, etc. Part 3 members low-cost clean and self-discipline, the main contents can be summarized as "four must" "eight code". Lead part, reiterated on ideal and faith, fundamental purpose, the fine traditions and work style, noble sentiments, such as "four must" the principle of requirements, strong tone of self-discipline, The higher request for 6 and supervised tenet, the foothold in permanent Bao the party's advanced nature and purity, to reflect the revised standards requirements. Members of self-discipline norms around the party members how to correctly treat and deal with the "public and private", "cheap and rot" thrifty and extravagance "bitter music", put forward the "four norms". Party leader cadre clean fingered self-discipline norms for the leadership of the party members and cadres of the "vital few", around the "clean politics", from civil servant of the color, the exercise of power, moral integrity, a good family tradition and other aspects of the leadership of the party members and cadres of the "four norms" < > < norm norm. "The Party member's self-discipline norms" and "party members and leading cadre clean fingered self-discipline norms," a total of eight, collectively referred to as the "eight". "Four must" and "eight" of the content from the party constitution and Party's several generation of leaders, especially Xi Jinping, general secretary of the important discussion, refer to the "three discipline and eight points for attention" statements, and reference some embody the Chinese nation excellent traditional culture essence of epigrams. (2) the revised regulations, the main changes in the revised Regulations > to fully adapt to the strictly requirements, reflects the according to the regulations governing the law of recognition of deepening, the realization of the discipline construction and Jin Ju. < rule > is party a ruler, members of the basic line and follow. And the majority of Party members and cadres of Party organizations at all levels should adhere to the bottom line of thinking, fear discipline, hold the bottom line, as a preventive measure, to keep the party's advanced nature and purity. 1, respect for the constitution, refinement and discipline. Revised < rule > from comprehensive comb physical constitution began, the party constitution and other regulations of the Party of Party organizations and Party discipline requirements refinement, clearly defined in violation of the party constitution will be in accordance with regulations to give the corresponding disciplinary action. The original 10 categories of misconduct, integration specification for political discipline, discipline, honesty and discipline masses Ji Law and discipline and discipline and other six categories, the content of < rule > real return to Party discipline, for the majority of Party members and listed a "negative list. 7 2, highlighting the political discipline and political rules. > < Regulations according to the stage of the discipline of outstanding performance, emphasizing political discipline and political rules, organization and discipline, in opposition to the party's leadership and the party's basic theory, basic line, basic program and basic experience, the basic requirement of behavior made prescribed punishment, increase the cliques, against the organization such as violation of the provisions, to ensure that the central government decrees and the Party of centralized and unified. 3, adhere to strict discipline in the law and discipline In front, Ji separated. Revised < Regulations > adhere to the problem oriented, do Ji separated. Any national law existing content, will not repeat the provisions, the total removal of 79 and criminal law, repeat the content of the public security management punishment law, and other laws and regulations. In the general reiterated that party organizations and Party members must conscientiously accept the party's discipline, die van comply with national laws and regulations; at the same time, to investigate violations of Party members and even criminal behavior of Party discipline and responsibility, > < Regulations distinguish five different conditions, with special provisions were made provisions, so as to realize the connection of Party discipline and state law. 4, reflect Wind building and anti-corruption struggle of the latest achievements. < rule > the party's eighteen years implement the spirit of the central provisions of the eight, against the requirements of the "four winds" and transformation for disciplinary provisions, reflecting the style construction is always on the road, not a gust of wind. In the fight against corruption out of new problems, increase the trading rights, the use of authority relatives profit and other disciplinary terms. Prominent discipline of the masses, the new against the interests of the masses and ignore the demands of the masses and other disciplinary terms and make provisions of the disposition and the destruction of the party's close ties with the masses. Discipline to protect the party's purpose. 8 of these regulations, a total of three series, Chapter 15, 178, more than 24000 words, after the revision of the regulations a total of 3 series, Chapter 11, 133, 17000 words, divided into "general" and "special provisions" and "Supplementary Provisions" Part 3. Among them, add, delete, modify the provisions of the proportion of up to nearly 90%. 1, the general general is divided into five chapters. The first chapter to the regulations of the guiding ideology, principles and scope of application of the provisions, highlight the strengthening of the party constitution consciousness, maintenance the authority of Party Constitution, increase the party organizations and Party members must abide by the party constitution, Yan Centralized centralized, would examine at all levels of the amended provisions implementing and maintaining Party discipline, and consciously accept the party discipline, exemplary compliance with national laws and regulations. The second chapter of discipline concept, disciplinary action types and effects of the regulations, will be a serious warning from the original a year for a year and a half; increase the Party Congress representative, by leaving the party above (including leave probation) punishment, the party organization should be terminated its representative qualification provisions. The third chapter of the disciplinary rules of use prescribed in the discipline rectifying process, non convergence, not close hand classified as severely or heavier punishment. "Discipline straighten "At least eighteen years of five years, these five years is to pay close attention to the provisions of the central eight implementation and anti -" four winds ". The fourth chapter on suspicion of illegal party disciplinary distinguish five different conditions, with special provisions were made provisions, to achieve effective convergence of Party and country 9 method. < rule > the provisions of Article 27, Party organizations in the disciplinary review found that party members have committed embezzlement, bribery, dereliction of duty dereliction of duty and other criminal law act is suspected of committing a crime shall give cancel party posts, probation or expelled from the party. The second is < Regulations > Article 28 the provisions of Party organizations in the disciplinary review But found that party members are stipulated in the criminal law, although not involved in a crime shall be investigated for Party discipline and responsibility should be depending on the specific circumstances shall be given a warning until expelled punishment. This situation and a difference is that the former regulation behavior has been suspected of a crime, the feeling is quite strict, and the latter for the behavior not involving crime, only the objective performance of the provisions of the criminal code of behavior, but the plot is a crime to slightly. < Regulations > the 29 provisions, Party organizations in the discipline review found that party members and other illegal behavior, affect the party's image, the damage to the party, the state and the people's interests, we should depend on the situation Seriousness given disciplinary action. The loss of Party members, seriously damaging the party's image of behavior, should be given expelled from the party. At this article is party member is in violation of the criminal law outside the other illegal acts, such as violates the public security administration punishment law, customs law, financial laws and regulations behavior. The fourth is < cases > Article 32 stipulates, minor party members and the circumstances of the crime, the people's Procuratorate shall make a decision not to initiate a prosecution, or the people's court shall make a conviction and exempted from criminal punishment shall be given within the party is removed from his post, probation or expelled from the party. Party members and crime, sheets were fined in accordance with For acts; the principal Ordinance amended the provisions of the preceding paragraph. This is the new content, in order to achieve Ji method effective convergence. Five is < > the thirty third article 10 of the provisions, the Party member due to an intentional crime is sentenced to criminal law (including probation) sheets or additional deprivation of political rights; due to negligence crime and was sentenced to three years or more (excluding three years) a penalty, shall give expelled punishment. Due to negligence crime is convicted and sentenced to three years (including three years) in prison or be sentenced to public surveillance, detention, shall in general be expelled from the party. For the individual may not be expelled from the party, should control Approval. This is followed and retained the original > < Regulations the provisions of punishment party authorization rules and report to a level party organizations. For is "party members with criminal acts, and by the criminal punishment, generally should be expelled from the party". The fifth chapter of probationary Party member of the discipline and discipline after missing members of the treatment and punishment decisions, such as the implementation of the provisions, clear the related party discipline and punishment decision made after, for duties, wages and other relevant alteration formalities for the longest time. 2, sub sub section will the original regulations of 10 categories of acts of violation of discipline integration revised into 6 categories, respectively, in violation of the punishments for acts of political discipline "in violation of discipline behavior of punishment" in violation of integrity of disciplinary action points "of violation punishments for acts of mass discipline" "the violation of work discipline, punishment" in violation of discipline of life behavior punishment "6 chapters. 3, annex" Supplementary Provisions "clear authority making supplementary provisions of, cases of interpretative organ, as well as regulations implementation time and retroactivity etc.. 11 (3) learning understanding > < regulations needs to grasp several key problems The first problem -- about the violation of political discipline behavior > < new ordinance chapter 6 the political discipline column for the six disciplines, that is the main opposition to Party leadership and the opposition of the basic theory, basic line, basic program and basic experience, basic requirements of misconduct made provisions of the disposition, especially the eighteen since the CPC Central Committee put forward the Yan Mingzheng treatment of discipline and political rules requirements and practical achievements transformation for Discipline article, increase the false debate central policies, cliques, against the organization review, make no discipline of the principle of harmony terms. These are the party's eighteen years in comprehensive strictly Process combined with the practice of rich content. (1) false debate the central policies and undermine the Party of centralized and unified the problem is made in accordance with the provisions of the party constitution. Constitution in general programme requirements adhere to democratic centralism is one of the requirements of the construction of the party must adhere to the four cardinal. Application of this principle is not only the party the basic organization principle and is also the mass line in party life, it requires that we must fully develop inner-party democracy, respect for the dominant position of Party members, safeguarding the Party member democratic rights, give full play to the enthusiasm and creativity of the party organizations at all levels and Party members, at the same time, also must implement the right concentration, ensure the party's mission < the chaos in unity and concerted action to ensure that the party's decision to get quickly and effectively implementing. The Party Central Committee formulated the major principles and policies, through different channels and ways, fully listen to the party organizations and Party members of the opinions and suggestions, but 12 is some people face to face not to say back blather "" will not say, after the meeting said, "" Taiwan does not say, and nonsense ", in fact, not only disrupt the people thought, some causing serious consequences, the damage to the Party of the centralized and unified, hinder the central policy implementation, but also a serious violation of the democratic system of principles. There is no doubt that shall, in accordance with the Regulations > 4 Specified in Article 6 to give the appropriate punishment. For did not cause serious consequences, to give criticism and education or the corresponding tissue processing. (2) about the destruction of the party's unity < New Regulations > the forty eighth to fifty second article, to damage Party's unity unified and violation of political discipline, punishment situation made explicit provisions. Article 52 of the new "in the party get round group, gangs seek private gain, cliques, cultivate private forces or through the exchange of interests, for their own to create momentum and other activities to gain political capital, given a serious warning or withdraw from their party posts disposition; if the circumstances are serious, to give Leave a party to observation or expelled from the party. (3) on against the organization review of the provisions of the constitution, party loyalty honesty is party members must comply with the obligations. Members must obey the organization decision, shall not violate the organization decided encounters by asking questions to find organization, rely on the organization, shall not deceive the organization, against the organization. For example, after the investigation does not take the initiative to explain the situation, but to engage in offensive and defensive alliance, hiding the stolen money is against survey organization, is a violation of the behavior of political discipline. Article 24 of the original > < Regulations, although the provisions of the interference, hinder group review the behavior of the fabric can be severely or 13 Aggravated punishment, but did not put this kind of behavior alone as a discipline for qualitative amount of discipline. > < new regulations increase the Article 57, "anti organization review, one of the following acts, given a warning or serious warning; if the circumstances are relatively serious, giving removed from or placed on probation within the party post; if the circumstances are serious, give expelled from the party: (a) on supply or forged, destroyed, transfer, conceal evidence; (II) to prevent others expose, providing evidence Material; (III) harboring co personnel; (4) to the organization to provide false information, to hide the fact; (5) the him against the acts of the organization review. "< rule > add this clause to the Constitution requires more specific, the previous no punishment in accordance with the definite list and put forward clear punishment in accordance with. (4) about organizing or participating in superstitious activities as < Regulations > about engage in activities of feudal superstition obstruction of social management order" violations of Article 164 the provisions, but according to the original < rule > only in disrupting production, work, social life order The case to be disciplinary treatment, in other words, alone make the feudal superstition, organize or participate in the activities of feudal superstition of, does not constitute a violation. Which is not consistent with the requirements of our party's political party. > < new regulations in this change is, superstitious activities on the political discipline, increase the Article 58, is the organization of Party members, in superstitious activities included in violation of the negative list of political discipline deserves punishment, which and Party members should adhere to the correct political principle, political standpoint and viewpoint is consistent. 14 the second question about organization and discipline violation behavior of democratic centralism is our The party's fundamental organizational system. < New Regulations > Chapter 7 "in violation of the behavior of organizational discipline punishment" mainly for violation of democratic centralism, contrary to the "four obey the discipline behavior for source classification rules. Increased not in accordance with the relevant provisions or requirements to the organization for instructions to report on major issues; do not report truthfully report about personal matters; falsify personal archives; hide before joining the party serious mistakes; leading cadres in violation of the relevant provisions of the organization, will participate in the spontaneous formation of the old Xiang, Alumni Association, comrades in arms; to obtain illegal country residence abroad or foreign nationality, illegal for private frontier Documents such as discipline terms. (1) on the report truthfully report personal matters in 2010 the Central Committee of the Communist Party of China office, office of the State Council introduced < provisions on issues related to the leading cadres to report personal >, is clear about the request, deputy division level and above leading cadres should truthfully report changes in my marriage and spouse, children, moved to the country (territory), practitioners, income, real estate, investment and other matters, for failing to report, do not report, concealed and unreported, according to the seriousness of the case, giving criticism and education, and to make a correction within a time limit, shall be ordered to make a check, the commandment Jiemian conversation, informed criticism or jobs, free Post processing, constitute violations, in accordance with the relevant provisions shall be given a disciplinary sanction. But since the original < Regulations > and there is no corresponding specific terms, the violation of the regulations, do not report, as a false report about personal matters, there is no corresponding disciplinary action terms, in practice it is difficult to operate. In this regard, in order to solve is not reported, as a false report about personal matters 15 asked censure, the new < Regulations > add the Article 67 of violation of personal matters related to reporting requirements, report truthfully report the clear punishment basis, making this kind of violation behavior is no longer free drilling for Exhibition on matters of personal checks to verify and supervision of cadres, discipline review provides a powerful discipline guarantee. (2) about the illegal organization, to fellow, alumni, friends of the war will < regulations stipulated in Article 68 of >, leading cadres of the party in violation of relevant provisions of the organization, will participate in the spontaneous formation of fellow, Alumni Association, comrade in arms to give the punishment according to the seriousness of the case. Here special needs note is three points: this provision for only the leading cadres ", reflecting the high requirements of leading cadres; second violation in 2002, the Central Commission for Discipline Inspection, the central Organization Department and the The relevant provisions of the General Political Department jointly issued the < off in leading cadres not to participate in the initiative to set up "the villagers would be" alumni "" comrades in arms organization notice >. That is to say, to the spontaneous formation of fellow, Alumni Association, comrades in arms will constitute the premise of discipline is a violation of the provisions of this. The notification specified, leading cadres are not allowed to participate in the spontaneous incorporation of fellow, alumni, between comrades association would like the organization and shall not bear the sorority Human and the organizer shall not hold the corresponding position in the sorority; shall not borrow machine woven "network" and engage in kiss sparsely, round and round the gangs, but not "align" "Jieyi Gold Orchid" behavior. The third is to emphasize here that shall be organized to participate in the initiative to set up the villager, Alumni Association, comrades in arms. The so-called 16 spontaneous was established mainly means without registration. Therefore, Party members include leading cadres in the normal range of fellow, alumni, comrades in the party is not a violation of the rules of Party discipline. The three problem about integrity violations discipline Lian Jie discipline has been eighteen years clean government and anti The focus of the work of corruption. This Ordinance to amend, honesty and discipline this biggest adjustment, the new content, most of which prescribed by the original < criterion of a clean and honest administration > 8 ban and 52 are not allowed into the basic this part. (1) the central eight provisions of the spirit and requirements into < New > in the regulations of the party's eighteen years, central resolutely implement the provisions of the eight and pay close attention to the node and intensive briefing, on public funds, private bus, public funds tourism, gifts of public funds, the big parade and lavish weddings and festive, illegal payment allowances and subsidies, illegal construction of buildings such as the original masses reflects the relatively strong, "four winds" problem of the Resolute rectification. But original < Regulations > to eat and drink, super standard reception and no clear and specific expression, new < rule > will implement eight Central provisions of the spirit of the problem increased to "clean cheap self-discipline" chapter, clear to exceed the standard, beyond the scope of the reception or borrow machine eating and drinking etc. some in violation of the provisions of the spirit of the eight central relevant persons responsible for punishment, once the violation will be according to the < rule > severely punished, binding, enhanced significantly. One is to add Article 87, about to obtain illegal, hold, and the actual use of the sports card, golf ball cards and other consumer card. Illegal access to private clubs made the punishment provisions. The second is increase the Article 97, has made provisions of the disposition of illegal self pay or 17 spamming allowances, subsidies and bonuses. The third is added to the Article 99, on violation of super standard, beyond the scope of the reception or borrow machine eat and drink to make the provisions of punishment. The fourth is to increase the Article 101, on the management of conference activities in violation of the provisions made sanctions regulations. The fifth is the increased Article 102, for violation of office space management provisions made the punishment provisions. Six is to split the original < rule > Article 78, formed article 98, Article 100 of public Models of tourism, violate the provisions on the administration of the use of discipline of the bus through the list of made a more detailed provisions, apply more operational. Seven is increased the article 96, in violation of the relevant provisions of the, to participate in public funds to pay for dinner, high consumption of entertainment, fitness activities and public funds to buy gift, send gifts to make the provisions of the disposition. On the violation of the central provisions of the spirit of the eight, in addition to > < new regulations into "violation of honesty and self-discipline" misconduct outside, is different with the original < Regulations >, revised < rule > clearly defined not only to disposition of the directly responsible persons, but also dispose of collar Guide responsibilities. (2) increased trading rights, use of authority or position influence as relatives and close to profit violation of the terms of the < New Regulations > absorption < clean politics several guidelines > the relevant provisions spirit, increase the "negative list, including trading rights, the functions and powers or duties of influence as relatives and staff around profit. Increase Article 81" mutual use of office or authority ring for each other and their spouses, children and their spouses and other relatives, around 18 personnel and other specific relationship between the people to seek benefits engage in trading rights, given a warning or serious warning Sanctions; if the circumstances are relatively serious, giving removed from or placed on probation within the party post; if the circumstances are serious, shall be expelled from the party. Increase Article 82 "connivance, acquiescence to the spouse, children and spouse etc. relatives and staff around the effect of Party members and cadres personal authority or position for personal gain, if the circumstances are relatively minor, given a warning or a serious warning; if the circumstances are relatively serious, giving removed from or placed on probation within the party post; if the circumstances are serious, the given Expelled from the party. Party members and cadres of the spouses, children and their spouses does the actual work and get salary or although the actual work but to receive significantly beyond the same rank salary standard, Party members and cadres informed fails to correct, in accordance with the provisions of the preceding paragraph. "(3) about the gifts, gifts misconduct from handling practices in recent years, engaged in official cadres received gifts, gifts problems more prominent. This has seriously affected the image of Party members and cadres, damaged the relations between the party and the masses, and is a hotbed of corruption, is really necessary for this kind of behavior to be disciplined. < rule > no on accepting gifts, gifts, Card consumption behavior to engage in simple "one size fits all", but the difference between the different separately. One is in accordance with the provisions of Article 83, accepting may affect the impartial enforcement of the official gifts, gifts, consumer cards to depending on the seriousness of the case shall be given disciplinary sanctions. That is to say, for may affect the fair execution of business gifts, gifts, consumer cards are not allowed to accept. 19 is in accordance with the provisions of Article 83, accepting was significantly higher than normal ceremony is still exchanges of gifts, gifts, consumer card to disciplinary action. This is new regulations that daily life is purely reciprocity, accepting the same thing, boys , fellow friends gifts, gifts, shopping cards, although and fair execution of business has nothing to do, also want to as the case shall be dealt with, the situation is obviously beyond normal reciprocity ". The so-called" reciprocity ", one is emphasizes the reciprocal in protocol. In other words is you to me how, I to you how, not only does not go. The second is to significantly exceeded the normal local economy level, customs and habits, economic capacity of individual gifts, gift value. Specific sanctions to according to the processing of a variety of factors to consider, as appropriate. The third is the root according to the provisions of Article 84," to Engaged in public service personnel and their spouses and children, children's spouses and other relatives and other specific relationship presented Ming Xianchao normal reciprocity of gifts, gifts, consumer card, if the circumstances are relatively serious, given a warning until probation. "In accordance with the above provisions, gift giving significantly beyond the normal reciprocity, giver constitute the discipline. (4) on illegal trading of stocks or of other regulations of securities investment < > Article 88 is engaged in punishment regulation of camp and activity in violation of the relevant provisions on. Among them, 3 will" buying and selling stocks or in other securities investment "column as one of disciplinary cases Out. First need to be clear, > < regulations did not change the provisions of the Ordinance. The ordinance of the provisions of the second paragraph of Article 77 provisions "who, in violation of the provisions of the sale of stocks" is one of the violation, and at the beginning of the first paragraph of this article "violation of 20 against the relevant provisions of the" textual representation of the repeat revision. In, just from the legislative technique removed the "personal" in violation of the provisions, content and not to change the original provisions. Need to clear is, "buy or sell a stock or of other securities investment" refers to violation of the relevant provisions refers to in April 2001, the Party Central Committee, the State Council promulgated the On the work of the party and government organs staff's personal investment in securities if dry provisions >. According to the provisions of Article 3, use of work time, office facilities, the sale of stocks and securities investment fund belongs to illegal behavior. The fourth question, about the violation of the masses of the disciplinary actions < new regulations > would violate public discipline behavior of a single set of a class of restored "three rules of discipline and eight note" in the discipline of the masses of excellent traditional. < New Regulations > Chapter 9 "to violate the masses of disciplinary action", mainly the destruction of the party's close ties with the masses of misconduct made provisions on disciplinary; enrich and perfect the super standard, beyond the scope of Xiang Qun < All to raise fund and labor, in for involving the public affairs deliberately, chinakayao, in social security, policy support, disaster relief funds and materials and other matters assigned any kind and affectionate friends, obviously unfair acts against the interests of the masses of the disciplinary terms; increase the terms not in accordance with the provisions of the public party provided, government, factory and village (neighborhood) provided etc. violation of the people's right to know the behavior of the discipline. The fifth issue, on the violation of work discipline violation of work discipline added "negative list, including Party organizations carry out strictly Main responsibility for poor discipline terms. (1) the new party organization comprehensive strictly the main responsibility of the party does not fulfill the 21 or perform poor disciplinary terms < New Regulations > has a lead people to pay attention to the new terms, that is, in chapter ten "on the violation of work discipline behavior punishment" increase in the one hundred and fourteenth "party fail to perform comprehensive strictly the main responsibility of the party or to perform comprehensive strictly the main responsibility for administering the ineffective, resulting in serious damage or serious adverse effects, to the person directly responsible and the responsibility of leadership and give a warning or serious warning. The situation is serious, giving removed from their party posts or on probation Punishment. "Here the changes. For the first time, the main responsibility write < rule >. (2) new shall report does not report or false reporting discipline shall increase the 117 bar" in the higher level units to check to inspect the work or report to the parent unit, work report of shall report the matters do not report or do not report, cause serious damage or serious adverse effects of, to the person directly responsible and the responsibility of leadership, to give warning or a serious warning; if the circumstances are serious, giving removed from their party posts or placed on probation. "For example, during the tour visits to the region, the unit Members the obligation to the inspection teams to reflect the true situation, to conceal not reported or intentionally to the inspection teams to provide false information, causing serious damage or serious adverse effects of, the person directly responsible and the responsibility of leadership should be in accordance with the provisions of < rule > Article 117 to give the appropriate punishment. (3) the new not granted in accordance with the provisions of punishment, not according to the provisions of the implementation of disciplinary measures 22 violation of the provisions of Article 115 "Party organizations have one of the following circumstances, the direct leadership responsibility. Probation: members were sentenced punished, in accordance with the provisions give disciplinary action or in violation of state law Rules of behavior should be given disciplinary punishment and dispose of; disciplinary punishment by decision or complaint review the decision made, not in accordance with the provisions of the implementation decisions on punishment of the party, position, rank, and the treatment of the matters; Party members subject to disciplinary action, not in accordance with the cadre management authority and organizational relationships of by dispose of Party members to carry out education and supervision of daily management. "What needs to be pointed out is," cliff "demoted with cars, housing, secretary problem, implementation is not a discipline and party posts and ranks treatment by the organization department is responsible for the implementation, with cars, housing by the logistics department is responsible for the implementation of, Ji Commission responsible oversight responsibilities. The six questions, about the acts violating the discipline of life "in violation of discipline of life behavior punishment", mainly to "four winds" problems and a serious violation of social morality, family virtue acts of misconduct made provisions on disciplinary, an increase of extravagant life, contrary to the social public order and good customs disciplinary terms. Worth mentioning is, > < Regulations in Article 150 about "adultery" "mistress (Cardiff) formulation in the new < rule > is removed, to expand the scope of Article 127 provisions" and others hair improper sexual relations, let face disciplinary action Wider more strict. Four, and earnestly do a good job in the < code > and < rule > implement system of life lies in execution. < code > and < Regulations > is 23 Party organizations at all levels of a strong constraint and all Party members follow. Learning and implementing the < code > and < rule > is party committees (party), commission for discipline, discipline inspection group), the majority of Party members and cadres of the common responsibility, must party caught together, the party one execution. () Party committees (party) and play and implement comprehensive strictly the main responsibility, pays special attention to the two party regulations learning cross penetration. One is to Adhere to the party constitution is fundamental to follow, and resolutely safeguard the authority of the Party Chapter. The second is to adhere to the problem oriented, to strictly political discipline and political rule moments in the first place. The third is to adhere to the discipline and rules quite in front must not allow the bottom line to break the discipline. The fourth is to seriously organize the study of propaganda and education, in the city party members to create a disciplined, about the rules of the strong atmosphere. (II) Commission for Discipline Inspection at all levels (Discipline Inspection Group) to an important basis for the revised two party regulations as, adhere to easily blame, strengthen supervision and enforcement And early method in combining Ji, increase accountability efforts. One is to two regulations within the party important basis, adhere to the party constitution duties, with strict discipline to maintain the constitution authority. The second is to adhere to high standards and keep the bottom line, adhere to Ji Yan in law and discipline, the discipline and rules quite in front, grasping grasping small, easily blame, comprehensive use of supervision and discipline of "four kinds of form" in the discipline embodies the strict requirements and care for the discipline, tighten up, Yan. According to discipline in accordance with regulations to carry out disciplinary review. Increase the violations punishment, clues can initiate an investigation on the trial of cases According to the discipline on the provisions of the proportion of processing and control manager maintains discipline. To focus on investigating non convergence, don't accept hand serious disciplinary violations at the same time, pay more attention to the general review of discipline 24 behavior, and gradually increase the lighter punishment. Four is to illuminate two party regulations, combined with the local district of the Department of party conduct Lianzheng to relevant laws and regulations system clean, timely research proposes to establish, change, waste release opinion, avoid conflict, and the fasten system of cage, and gradually formed not rot, not rot, not want to rot system and working mechanism. (3) the leadership of the party members and cadres should play an exemplary role. The rate of higher consciousness of the front of the Ordinance to lead practice self-discipline norms, leading to maintain discipline of seriousness and authority. One is the above rate, demonstration and guidance, take the lead in learning and mastering the < code > and < > the requirements and regulations, do the deep understanding, learning to use. The second is to play an exemplary role in abiding by discipline rate, take the lead in practicing self-discipline norms, firmly establish before the discipline are equal, the system has no privilege, discipline is no exception, and consciously do standards, require more strict measures more practical. Third is to consciously accept supervision, conscientiously participate in the democratic life and debriefing honesty responsibility, such as Real to the party organization to report personal matters, and to accept the supervision of the work and life of the normal, habits under the supervision of the exercise of power, to carry out the work. The fourth is to set an example for the strict enforcement of discipline. Leading cadres should take the lead in the maintenance of discipline of seriousness and authority, to dare to seriously, dare to struggle, dare to offend people, for misconduct not laissez faire, but do not indulge, not tolerate to ensure the party constitution of party compasses party put in place. (4) the majority of Party members and cadres to set high standards and hold the bottom line, consciously abide by the < code > and < rule >. One is to control the < standard > and < 25 cases >, tight Close connection with their own thoughts, practical work and life, efforts to solve the problems, to enhance the study and implement of the effectiveness and pertinence. The second is to establish a high standard and hold the bottom line, consciously in the self-discipline pursuit of high standards, strictly in the party away from the red line discipline, discipline, about the rules and know fear, distrust, the formation of the honor system, comply with the system, safeguard system of good habits. Regulations and discipline regulations of < < New Revision of the Communist Party of China clean fingered self-discipline criterion > and < Chinese Communist Party Disciplinary Regulations > is the Party Central Committee in the new situation to promote the comprehensive strictly root of the lift, the regulations of the party construction of keeping pace with the times. We should study and implement the Standards > and < > as the primary political task, adhere to the party constitution duties, adhere to the discipline of, Ji Yan in law, the full implementation of supervision and discipline accountability responsibilities for coordination and promotion "four overall" strategic layout in XX District vivid practice to provide a strong guarantee. - Si Jian Wu, and effectively enhance the implementation of the implementation of the < code > < > The consciousness of General Secretary Xi pointed out that the party is in charge of the party, to manage the party; strictly, it can cure good party. Criterion > and < rule > keep pace with the times is our party to form a new potential strictly rules, to deepen understanding of the ruling law, is a comprehensive strictly, and strengthen the supervision within the party important grasper. Criterion > closely linked to the theme of self-discipline, self-discipline intensity-modulated, focusing on morality, for the majority of Party members and cadres set to see, feel the high standard, show the Communists noble moral sentiment; District Ordinance < < rule > the constitution of discipline integration into a political discipline, organization and discipline, honesty and discipline, discipline of the masses, work discipline, discipline, emphasize discipline, focusing on established rules, to draw the party organizations and Party members do not touch the bottom line. Party committees (party) to effectively strengthen the study and publicize the implementation of the < code > and < rule > the organization and leadership of criterion > and < > a full range, multi angle, deep publicity, the formation of study and publicize and implement the boom, in order to consolidate the development of good political environment to create a positive environment and atmosphere. The majority of Party members and cadres to strict requirements, the < rule > and < Ordinance cases > as a guide to action and behavior criterion, adhere to the moral standards and discipline of the bottom line, to maintain the discipline of worship and awe, learning, compliance, and maintain party discipline and rules of the model. The discipline inspection and supervision organs and cadres to the < code > and < > as the deepening of the "three", and strengthen supervision and discipline of accountability is important to follow correctly grasp the use of supervision and discipline of "four types", promote the comprehensive strictly in new roots. Strict discipline, adhere to the discipline and rules quite in front of the enterprise in the implementation of expensive to implement to execute. The discipline inspection and supervision organs to implement the < code > and < Efforts to investigate cases > as an opportunity, adhere to the party should manage the party strictly, serious performance of their duties to promote two regulations implementation. Change discipline concept. From the simple "investigation of illegal" to a comprehensive "stare at violate discipline"; from the business case to prosecute the big cases and timely solve the signs of tilt to. From the orientation to the normal supervision; from the tube "minority" to resist the "most". Guide Party members and cadres to seriously implement the < code > and < rule >, consciously abide by the political, organizational, honest people, work, life six discipline. Urge the leadership cadres sent to play an exemplary role, take the lead in strictly enforced. Relaxation and rest Strong wind is Su Ji, closely linked to the "four winds" prone to multiple, the masses reflect the strong important nodes and, glued to the four winds "new form, new trends, seriously investigate and deal with violations of the central eight provisions of the spirit, to increase the bulletin exposure intensity, the formation of Chajiu" four winds "loudly, continue to release and discipline must be strict signal. At the same time, extended supervision tentacles, through the development of the rural and fishery party conduct Lianzheng construction inspection, issued in a timely manner, Chajiu occurred in grassroots side of corruption and unhealthy, and earnestly safeguard the interests of the masses and social stability. The creativity and discipline. Grasp and make good use of the supervision and discipline of" four types ", to ensure the Promoting clues to lots of discipline and the law of the vacuum tube, strict together. Not only to the "less" and "very few" thorough investigation severely punished, but also the "most" to maintain zero tolerance trend through layers of conductive pressure, let the discipline about the rules for each party members and cadres consciously follow. At present, it is necessary to implement the "list" management, strictly follow the clues to the disposal of five standards, make the classification of disposal, dynamic cleanup. Zadok Party committees at all levels to implement the main responsibility, comprehensive use of disciplinary action and tissue processing and other means to effectively curb the commonplace, used to see do not blame the "small problem", not because of "practice" and "exception". Prominent Discipline characteristics, the problems of violation of discipline and rules into the focus of supervision and discipline and disciplinary review. At the same time, increase case double check the intensity, the serious problems of discipline violations or "four winds" ban but not absolutely, not only to be held directly responsible, but also held leadership responsibility; not only to pursue studies the main responsibility of the Party committee, and to pursue Commission for Discipline Inspection and supervision responsibilities and promote accountability to become the new norm. The implementation of supervisory responsibility. Maintain < code > and < rule > the seriousness and authority of the discipline and rules and truly become the party's ruler. Discipline as supervision within the party the specialized agency, we must strengthen the responsibility to act, adhere to the Impartial discipline accountability, earnestly will be strict discipline, discipline must be punished, and severely punish the acts in violation of rules and regulations.