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2011年天津 书面 表 关于同志近三年现实表现材料材料类招标技术评分表图表与交易pdf视力表打印pdf用图表说话 pdf 达（本大题共15分） 假如你是某中学的一名学生。6月3日，是星期五，在放学回家的公交车上，你所经历的一件事让你印象深刻。请你根据以下要点用英语写一篇日记。 要点： 1. 一位老爷爷和十来岁的孙子上了车，老人拿着书包和小提琴； 2. 你给老人让座，老人的孙子却坐了下来，老人只得站在旁边； 3. 孩子大声喊着向老人要水喝，并将空水瓶扔到车上； 4. 你认为孩子应该尊敬、照顾老人，保持环境卫生。 参考词汇：孙子grandson  空水瓶empty bottle  保持……干净keep…clean 要求：1. 词数：80~100个。 2. 日记开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 June 3, Friday                                                        Fine On my way home on the bus, I saw                                                One possible version: June 3, Friday                                                              Fine On my way home on the bus, I saw an old man get on with his grandson of about ten. He was carrying the boy’s schoolbag and violin. I gave my seat to the old man at once. However, the boy sat down first. The old man had to stand nearby. After a while, the boy shouted to his grandpa for water and then dropped the empty bottle on the bus. When I saw this, I got very angry. I think the boy should not only respect and take care of the old man but also keep the environment clean. 2011年上海 Write at least 60 words about the topic “I’m a member of___________”.（以“我是......的一员”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格。） 提示：你可以作为任意兴趣小组或社团的一员，或者作为家庭、班级、社区的一员，写出你的经历、感受等。 Use the following points as reference: Are you glad to be a member of……? What do you do in it? How do you feel as such a member? 简析： 作文标题为“I'm a member of…”，这样的考题让每个考生都有话可说。题目包含5张图片提示，分别代表家庭、歌舞俱乐部、爱护动物者社团、自然科学竞赛社团 题目中蕴含“责任意识和公民意识”的两纲内容，与“往年的考题以强调自我感受居多”不同，今年考题引导学生思考我可以为他人、为集体付出些什么。 在写作过程中一定要注意提示“一定要表达具体是什么的成员”，根据几个guided questions,最好能在开头表达是否开心加入此团体，后面紧接着描述原因即在作为一员主要工作是什么，最后再来一个作为成员的感受作为 总结 初级经济法重点总结下载党员个人总结TXt高中句型全总结.doc高中句型全总结.doc理论力学知识点总结pdf ，这样整个作文的结构就清楚了。但想获得很高分，还要尽量避免语法拼写等错误，写出一些比较出彩的复合句，这就需要同学平时勤练基本功了。 二、写话评分标准：（仅供参考） 作文共18分，其中内容7分，语言8分，组织结构3分。 (1)  内容：  （本项扣分总和不得超过7分。） 7分      内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。 4－6分  内容基本切题，意思大致连贯，表达基本清楚，但不够完整。 2－3分  内容不够切题 ，意思不够连贯，表达不够清楚，离题目要求较远。 0－1分  文不对题，表达不清。 (2) 语言：（本项扣分总和不得超过8分。） ①拼写每错扣0.5分, 同一错误不重复扣分。 ②语法扣分标准同 1。 ③标点符号、大小写错误每2处扣0.5分，但整卷此项错误的扣分总和不得超过1分。 (3) 词数 ①词数不足30个者，给分以8分为限； ②词数不足40个者，给分以11分为限； ③词数不足50个者，给分以14分为限； (以上3点应结合内容和语言各项综合考虑。) ④词数在50－59个之间者，每少5个扣0.5分； ⑤只写出个别单词、词不成句者，则给0分。 （4）组织结构：（本项分四档给分： 3， 2， 1，  0 ） ①具体描述（供参考）： ②内容和语言两项总分达14－15分者，内容充实，不写废话，主题突出；上下文连贯，③用语规范，表达准确，无或少见语法错误；词汇、句型和句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，可给足3分。 ④上述各项总体表现略逊色者可给2分。 ⑤内容和语言两项总分在12－13分者，若文中确有好句型或表达用语，可给1分。 ⑥内容和语言两项总分在11分及以下者，或通篇句型、句式单一，词汇贫乏者，即使无语言错误，亦不给分。 2011年山东 书面表达（共1题，满分10分） Write a passage in about 100 words with the help of the following points abou t Zhanghua’s life      change. The first sentence has been given. Zhanghua as a child Zhuanghua now used to have much time used to spend a lot of time playing games with his friends used to watch TV or chat with his grandma in the evening used to go to concerts with his father. Is too busy gets up early and stays in school all day. hasn't any more time to play games with his does his homework and goes to bed late, hardly has time for concerts. misses the old days.     Zhuanghua's life has changed a lot in the last few years. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ One possible version: Zhuanghua's life has changed a lot in the last few years. In the past, he used to have much time to play after school. He spent a lot of time playing gam es with his friends. When he finished his homework, he often watched TV or chatted with his grandma. On Saturday, he often went to concerts with his father. But now his school life has changed a lot. He is very busy every day. He has to get up early and stays in school all day. Because he has to study hard . He hasn’t any more time to play games with his friends. He has to do his homework and goes to bed late every night. He hardly has any time for concerts. He misses the old days very much. 2011年聊城 许多孩子都热衷于上网，但上网对学生而言有利有弊。请你根据下表提供的信息用英语写一篇小短文，描述上网的优点和缺点，谈谈自己的看法以及自己上网会怎么做。 优点 缺点 1． 快速获得大量的信息。 2． 正确运用网络有助于学习。 3． 广交朋友。 1． 经常玩游戏、聊天浪费时间和金钱并且不利于学习。 2． 可能上当受骗。 你的看法和做法     注意： 1． 字数：80左右。 2． 短文的开头部分一给出，不计入总词数。 3． 生词提示：disadvantage n. 缺点 cheat vt. 欺骗 go online上网 Today many students are interested in going online. But it has advantages and disadvantages. The advantages are:                                                                  One possible version： Toda y many students are interested in going online. But it has advantages and disadvantages. The advantages are: getting a lo t of information quickly, a useful learning tool and making friends. The disadvantages are: playing games and chatting can waste time and money, it isn’t good for our study. You can be cheat when you go online. I think going online is good for me. I plan to go online for an hour everyday. If you make a plan, you can find it is very useful. We use it to open to expand the field of vision, the study knowledge, but must certainly grasp the discretion. 2011年德州 写作（共1题，计15分） 假如你是张文，八年级四班的班长。你们班排练了一部英文课本剧（an English textbook play），准备本周六下午4:00在学校礼堂（the school hall）演出。请你用英语给学校的外籍教师Terry写一封80字左右的E-mail，邀请他来观看演出，并在演出结束时发言。 注意：1. 可增加细节，使文章连贯完整；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Terry, Hi, I’m Zhang Wen, monitor of Class 4, Grade 8. ____________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We are all looking forward to your coming. Dear Terry, Hi, I’m Zhang Wen, monitor of Class 4, Grade 8. I’m writing to ask if you will be free on Saturday. Our class have made an English textbook play. We are going to put it on at the school hall on Saturday. Time is 4:00 p.m. The play is about a famous English story. I’m sure you will enjoy it. We hope you can come, and we do hope you can give a speech at he end of the performance. We’d like you to give us some tips about English learning. If you can come, please let me know. We are all looking forward to your coming. Yours, Zhang Wen 2011年鸡西 世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是 我们一直在求索的问题。几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多成功的经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。 要求：1.词数：80—100词（开头已给出，不计入总词数） 2.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。 How to learn English well English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions. One possible version: How to learn English well English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions. First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and pro grams. Watching English movies is also helpful to us. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make. We'd better join the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries. In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well. 2011年铜仁 学校决定本周星期六（2011年5月14日）晚上以班为单位召开家长座谈会，会议将于七点半开始，地点是本班教室。届时将通报孩子在校学习情况，并就如何促使孩子学好功课征求家长意见。请你代替八年级（4）班班主任杨老师用英语向林涛的家长写一份邀请书。 要求： 格式正确，语言流畅，表达清楚； 书写规范，字迹清楚； 词数：70-80. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________