2008年广东省高考英语作文评分标准

2008年广东省高考 英语作文 关于环境保护的英语作文关于旅游的英语作文关于旅行的英语作文关于春天的英语作文关于全球化的利与弊英语作文 评分标准 ? 写作 第一节 基础写作 范文 Version 1 th Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19 century. The sport first appeared in 1896, but none were contested during the 1904 and 1928 Games. The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932. Women were first allowed to compted in the Olympic shooting in 1968. The sport has grown steadily from three events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today. Version 2 thIt was not until at the end of 19 century that shooting, originated as a means of survival, earned its status as a sport. Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896. Yet, twice in history(1904, 1928) shooting was suspended at the Olympics. It returned to the Games in 1932, and women were first allowed to participated in the competition in 1968. The sport has been growing steadily from 1896’s three events to today’s seventeen. 二、基础写作评分说明 基础写作主要是考查考生的语言结构的应用能力:能够应用正确、规范的语言 表 关于同志近三年现实表现材料材料类招标技术评分表图表与交易pdf视力表打印pdf用图表说话 pdf 达特 定的 内容 财务内部控制制度的内容财务内部控制制度的内容人员招聘与配置的内容项目成本控制的内容消防安全演练内容 。 本 试题 中考模拟试题doc幼小衔接 数学试题 下载云南高中历年会考数学试题下载N4真题下载党史题库下载 要求考生根据所提供的信息，使用5个句子表达[写作内容]所提供的全部内容。 命题思想是要求考生在表达这些内容时能够: ?正确使用被动语态，比如: The contest was cancelled/None were contested during the 1904 and 1928 Games/Women were first allowed to compete in Olympic shooting in 1968等。 ?表达并列、转折等关系，比如:and, but等. 在评分时， 应注意以下几个方面: 1( 按照评分标准，实行分析法评分:按语言、内容和连贯三项标准给分; 2( 在语言方面，重点评判句子的语法结构是否正确、用词是否规范;考生是否使用了 合适的句型结构; 3( 在内容方面，重点评判考生是否表达全部规定的内容;如果考生在表达完整的内容 时，适当添加一些内容，不扣分; 4( 在连贯方面，重点评判5个句子是否构成一篇连贯的短文。 第二节 读写任务 一、读写任务评分说明 读写任务是有材料作文:要求考生在阅读的基础上写一篇相关主题的作文;主要考查 考生的篇章概括和语言表达能力。 本试题要求考生阅读一则英文发言稿之后，写一篇英语发言稿，谈自己理想的大学生 活，内容包括 概括发言稿;根据自己的经历发表对中学生活的感想;发挥想象力，描绘 未来的大学生活(允许虚构);概括现实的中学生活与想象的大学生活之间的差异，并思考 如何适应这些差异。 在评分时，应注意以下几方面: 1( 按照评分标准，实行分析综合法评分; 2( Mike发言的要点包括: Some basic life skills are necessary for a freshman to adjust himself to the college life. Mike loved college, which offers students good facilities and rich activities. To Mike, the important thing is to get himself active in things. 3.写作的内容应该包括: ? 对大学生活的感受，考生可以泛泛而谈，也可以谈具体的某一方面; ? 想象中的大学生活，内容可以包括理想的大学、进大学前的心情(如:兴奋、担心 等)、理想的大学生活(包括校园环境、学习环境、师生关系、社团活动等); ? 概括中学生活与大学生活之间的差异，比如:大学生活更丰富、更自由，或 大学生活更富有挑战性、更需要独立性等。 Prepare Myself for College Life (1) At first Mike didn’t adjust himself well to the college life because of the lack of basis skills and homesick. However, he got himself active in things and gradually enjoyed his new life.(得分4 分) It is absolutely obvious that high school life is quite different from college life. We gradually study the basic knowledge and seldom work at a project by ourselves. Additonally, parts of us live with our parents and we aren’t independent enough to live alone. High school life is more simple than college life. However, college life is more challelnging and colouful. An ideal college life is a meanful and full of challenges. Students not only study their own majors but also learn how to realize their dreams. They meet more new friends and gradually go into the real society. I enjoy my high school life a lot, which provides me with lots of useful skills and valuable experiences. But I discover that I still lack some important life skills which requires me to improve myself. In order to adjust myself to the coming college life, I decide to gain more knowledge about the society and life skills and try my best to become an independent and mature college student. All in all, I’m looking forward to the new collge life. I will prepare myself well and make improvement bit by bit.(得分20分;这一篇作文是评卷老师的培训和考核作文) Prepare Myself for College Life (2) Mike considered the general adjustment as the most difficult part for him. He felt tough and homesick at first . However, when he finally got used to th college life, he really enjoyed it. He thought it important to get ourselves active in things.(得分4分) As for me, a senior high school student who is about to graduate, I am looking forward to enjoying the college life right now. I would like to talk about my feelings on the high school life. It’s quite happy, you know, but it sometimes may be stressful, because we have to prepare ourselves for the coming College Entrance Examination. In my high school life there are lots of homework , sports activities and of course there are many good friends around me. In brief, it’s stressful but full of happiness. When it comes to the college life, I have thought a lot about it. Inside my mind it should be free , no annoyance and exciteding. However I can get a lot from it. For example, the college life is full of activities, which broadens my horizons and bring me fun. Surely the college life is different from the high school life. The high school life helps you develop the learning skills while the college life mainly helps you adjust to the competitive society. For me , I will take part in lots of activities when I am in a college. I’ll get myself active in things, which helps me adjust to the college life.(得分20分)