nullnull书面表达六步法书面表达六步法书面表达六步法书面表达六步法一、审题3 审: 审文体
审要求
审人称null2007浙江高考 在英语课堂上,你喜欢老师授课时只用英语还是英语、汉语兼用。请你围绕
“ How do you prefer your English classes
to be taught? In English only , or in both English and Chinese? ” 这个问题,参考所给要点,选择一种授课形式,写一篇英语短文.书面表达六步法书面表达六步法二、抓要点确定主要行为What happened?null 时下,各类电视节目广泛使用短信参与方式,对此人们评价不一。请你对此现象向21st Century 投稿,谈谈个人看法:要求:1.词数:120词左右。
2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯. Practice: null提供机会
带来收益
迎合追求
保证品位
产生反感
浪费精力
你的观点 offer /provide chances
bring in profits / benefit from
meet/appeal to the needs of
ensure the taste
feel bad / bored / annoyed
waste time and energy
In my opinion we should take a critical attitude towards列出要点书面表达六步法书面表达六步法三、扩展成句形成基本语义单位Who did what?null 1 offer chances
Audiences are offered more chances to
participate in the live programs.
2 bring in profits / benefit from
They bring in profits to the mass media.
3 appeal to the needs of
They appeal to the needs of the young people.null4 ensure the taste
We cannot ensure the taste of the
programs if short messages are out of
control.
5 feel bad / bored / annoyed
They cost a lot and make the audiences
feel bored.
6 waste time and energy
It will be a waste of time and energy if
the young are addicted to them.
7 take a critical attitude
In my opinion we should take a critical
attitude towards short messages. 书面表达六步法书面表达六步法四、连句成文正确使用过渡词,使行文流畅。并注意段与段的衔接。 null表示列举和顺序用 firstly, secondly, last, then, finally, next, such as,after that
b. 表示意义增补和引申用also, besides, above all, what’s more / what’s worse
c. 表示结果用 so, therefore, as a result, so…that
d. 表示意义转折用 instead, however, but
e. 表示解释说明用 in other words, that is to say
f. 表示概括和总结用 then, in all, as we know
g. 表示时间顺序用 now, at first, when, after
h. 表示并列关系用 or, and, also, too,
i. 表示条件关系用 as (so) long as, if, unless
j. 表示举例用 for example, for instance, such as
k. 表示让步关系用 though, even if , however, as 1.过好行文逻辑关null2. 用活语言,准确生动 使用常用高级语法:非谓语动词,with复合结构,虚拟语气,强调句,倒装句,感叹句,定语从句,状语从句等.The meal was so nice that we all enjoyed it very much.a. The meal was very nice. We all enjoyed it very much. (so that/so…that…/such…that…)Not only is he a famous singer but also he has written some interesting books.b. He is a famous singer. He has also written some interesting books. (not only…but also)nullc. My brother was riding a bike. I sat on the seat behind him. (with sb. doing) My brother was riding a bike with me sitting on the seat behind him.Not having received his letter he decided to write to her again.d. He hadn’t received a letter . He decided to write to her again. (not having done)e. We are glad to see such great changes in our
school life. ( how )How glad we are to see such great changes in our
school life.书面表达六步法书面表达六步法五、查错改错注意时态、标点和拼写是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。书面表达六步法书面表达六步法六、誊写修改无误后,认真规范地誊写在规定的地方。 卷面不工整要扣分!null4 规范三写:大小写,拼写,书写nullMake what you have written clear enough!小结小结审题,抓点
造句,成文
改错,誉写null ①文不对题(文体格式不规范)
②离题太远(抓不到要点,该说的不说,不该说的说的太多)
③词不达意(有的甚至用汉语标注、留空或抄袭试卷上的
材料
关于××同志的政审材料调查表环保先进个人材料国家普通话测试材料农民专业合作社注销四查四问剖析材料
)
④病句太多(时态、语态、人称、数等语法错误)
⑤卷面不工整(字迹潦草、乱涂改、添插箭头满篇飞,这是经电脑扫描后网上阅卷的大忌!) 前车之鉴!!!null 一篇档次较高、得分较多的书面表达,
给阅卷老师的印象应该是:书写规范
语意要合情合理,过渡自然;
语句要有简有繁,随“意”而安;
语法要结构正确,无懈可击;
语言要地道流畅,书写规范。null 目前,许多学校对学生采取封闭式管理,学生对此看法不一。
请根据下表所提供的信息,写一篇英语短文,谈谈自己的看法。注意:1. 字数120左右; 不要逐字翻译。
2. 短文开头已给出,不计人总词数。
Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all
day long…… Practice null Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long. Students have different opinions about it. Some of the students think they enjoy less freedom and have little chance to get in touch with society. They are not able to fully develop their interests and hobbies. Therefore, they have lost interest in their studies.
Some others think school is the best place to get knowledge, so they should put their heart into their lessons. Some students lack the ability to control themselves. Once out of school, they may lose control of themselves and do something that will influence / affect their studies.
Personally I think, it is necessary to keep students at school. But at the same time schools should organize various activities so that students can enjoy their school life.
(I don’t agree to keep students at school all day. Schools should offer students more free time to develop their personal interests.) nullPractice makes perfect.nullThank you
for your attention!