应用文
讲义
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一、考试说明：
（一）评价目标：
考生应能写不同类型的应用文，包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、摘要、
报告
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等，还应能写一般描述性、叙述性和说明或议论性的文章。短文写作时，考生应能：
1） 做到语法、拼写、标点正确，用词恰当；
2） 遵循文章的特定文体格式；
3） 合理组织文章结构，使其
内容
财务内部控制制度的内容财务内部控制制度的内容人员招聘与配置的内容项目成本控制的内容消防安全演练内容
统一、连贯；
4） 根据写作目的和特定读者，恰当使用语域。
（二）考试内容：
A节：考生根据所给情景写出一篇约100词（标点符号不计算在内）的应用性短文，包括信件、便笺、备忘录等。满分10分。
B节：要求考生根据提示信息写出一篇160－200词的短文（标点符号不计算在内）。提示信息的形式有主
题
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句、写作提纲、规定情景、图、表等。满分20分。
二、评分标准：
1） 评分原则和方法：
（1） 虽然A、B两节的考查要点有所不同，但对考生写作能力的基本要求是相同的，所以一般评分标准对两节都适用。但根据两节的不同考查要点，评分是会有不同的侧重点。
A节：
应用文的评分侧重点在于信息点的覆盖和内容的组织、语言的准确性、格式和语域（指在
书
关于书的成语关于读书的排比句社区图书漂流公约怎么写关于读书的小报汉书pdf
面和口语表达中根据部同德交际对象，所采用的话语方式，即正式、一般、非正式的话语）的恰当。对语法结构和词汇多样性的要求将根据具体试题作调整。允许在作文中使用提示语中出现过的关键词，但使用提示语中出现过的词组或句子将被扣分。
B节：
B节作文的评分重点在于内容的完整性、文章的连贯组织性、语法结构和词汇的多样性及语言的准确性。
（2） 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来给分。评分人员在档内有1－3分的调节分。
（3） A节作文的字数要求是100词左右。B节作文的字数要求是160－200词。文章长度不符合要求的，酌情扣分。
（4） 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
（5） 如书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
2） 一般评分标准：
（1） 第五档：A节（9－10）分，B节（17－20分）。
很好地完成了试题规定的任务。
·包含所有内容要点；
·使用丰富的语法结构和词汇；
·语言自然流畅，语法错误极少；
·有效地采用了多种衔接手段，文字连贯，层次清晰；
·格式与语域恰当确切。
对目标读者（即语言接受对象）完全产生了预期的效果。
（2） 第四档：A节（7－8）分， B节（13－16分）。
较好地完成了试题规定的任务。
·包含所有内容要点，允许漏掉1、2个次重点；
·使用较丰富的语法结构和词汇；
·语言基本准确，只有在试图使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇时才有个别错误；
·采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰，组织较严密；
·格式与语域较恰当。
对目标读者产生了预期的效果。
（3） 第三档：A节（5－6）分， B节（9－12分）。
基本完成了试题规定的任务。
·虽漏掉一些内容，但包含多数内容要点；
·应用的的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求；
·有一些语法及词汇错误，但不影响理解；
·采用了简单的衔接手段，内容较连贯，层次较清晰；
·格式与语域基本合理。
对目标读者基本产生了预期的效果。
（4） 第二档：A节（3－4）分， B节（5－8分）。
未能按要求完成试题规定的任务。
·漏掉或未能有效阐述一些内容要点，写了一些无关内容；
·语法结构单调、词汇项目有限；
·有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解；
·未采用恰当的衔接手法，内容缺少连贯性；
·格式与语域不恰当。
未能清楚地传达信息给读者。
（5） 第一档：A节（1－2）分， B节（1－4分）。
未完成试题规定的任务。
·明显漏掉主要内容，且有许多不相关的内容；
·语法项目和词汇的使用单调、重复；
·语言错误多，有碍读者对内容的理解，语言运用能力差；
·未使用任何衔接手法，内容不连贯，缺少组织、分段；
·无格式与语域概念。
未能传达信息给读者。
（6） 零档（0分）：所传达的信息或所用语言太少，无法评价；内容与要求无关或无法辨认。
一、四六级应用文大全：
1、Suppose you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the weeklong holiday. 1）表示欢迎， 2）提出对度假安排的建议， 3）提醒应注意的事项。
Dear Xiao Wang,
Words fail to express my excitement when I learned that you would like to spend your holiday together with me. I miss you so much that I even can’t wait to see you. I am sure that your journey will be exciting, rewarding and full of a lot of fun.
I’ve made a rough plan for this holiday as follows. On the first day you arrive here, I will show you around our new campus. During the second five days, we can visit some scenic spots and historical sites around Beijing, such as Summer Palace, the Forbidden City, the Great Wall, the Beijing Zoo, etc. On the last day, we can do some shopping.
By the way, please take care of your luggage on the train. And don’t forget to tell me when you will arrive.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
One of your foreign friends plans to go sightseeing in China. You have just come back from a place which you think she might enjoy. Write a letter recommending this place. In your letter, you should: 1. describe the attractions of the place; 2. recommend places of interest; and 3. give her some tips on what she should take with her.
2、
A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus. 假设你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，也可以是批评建议，也可以兼而有之。
Dear Mr. President,
I am sophomore from Department 3 and I am writing to you about the food and service in the canteen on campus.
To be frank, I am rather disappointed at the food quality, price and service in the canteen. First, the dishes are scarcely well cooked and most of them taste the same. Secondly, most of the dishes there are priced so high that some students cannot even afford them. Thirdly, the service in the canteen is far from satisfying and the inside of the canteen always seem untidy.
To solve the problem, I suggest that another canteen be built and a mechanism of competition be introduced between the old and the new. Besides, both the canteens should be subject to the students’ supervision.
Dining is an everyday issue for students. It may affect their academic performance. Therefore, I sincerely hope this letter can draw your attention to the matter and I hope the problems mentioned above be solved as soon as possible.
Yours respectfully
Li Ming
You and your family had an especially nice meal in a local restaurant. Write a letter to your local newspaper about it. You should include the following: 1) the reason for writing the letter; 2) a description of the meal; and 3) a recommendation of the restaurant to other people.
3、
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter in reply to a friend’s inquiry about applying for admission to your college or university. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below.
1） 建议报考的专业和理由
2） 报考该专业的基本条件
3） 应当如何备考
A Letter in Reply to a friend
Dear Steward:
I’m glad to know that you are going to apply for admission to our university. With regard to major, I advise you to apply for the English major, because of its modern teaching equipments and prestigious professors.
Some requirements are essential for applying for the major. Firstly, you should be good at English grammar and have considerable vocabulary. Secondly, you should be adept in spoken English for oral test is followed after normal examination.
Therefore, when making the preparation you should pay attention to enlarging your vocabulary and practicing grammar. At the same time, of course, to reach the goal, lots of exercises are necessary.
Yours,
Li Ming
4、
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic“A brief introduction to a tourist attraction”. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
要求：1、欢迎词；2、一天的旅程安排；3、找一个景点向旅游者介绍
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, welcome to Beijing! Beijing is the capital of China and one of the most wonderful tourist destinations in the world. I’m sure you will enjoy your sightseeing trip here.
Below is the time schedule. The Great Wall is the major attraction in this morning. Having lunch nearby, we will go to visit the Summer Palace in the afternoon. This is a must! After dining at Night in Beijing, it’s time to watch traditional Chinese performances. At 10 p.m., we will go back to Beijing hotel.
Next, I would like to introduce the Great Wall to you. It is called the Eighth Wonder in the world. Built 2000 years ago, the present relics are constructed in the Ming Dynasty. Hope you enjoy yourselves.
5、
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to the editor of a newspaper complaining about the poor service of a bookstore. You should write at least 150 words according to the guidelines given below in Chinese.
设想你买了一本英文词典，发现有这样那样的质量问题，书店的服务态度又不好，因此给报社编辑写信。信中必须包括以下内容：
1）事情的起因
2）与书店交涉的经过
3）呼吁服务行业必须提高服务质量
A Letter to the Editor of a Newspaper
Dear Sir or Madam:
Although I am not in the hait of writing letters to the newspaper, I feel I should inform your readers of the deplorable attitude of the Xinhua Bookstore. I am writing to bring your attention to it.
The fact is that when I bought an English dictionary in that store, I detected many unbearable errors in it. However, when I called their Complaint Department, the young lady who answered the phone was very rude. Not only did she interrrupt me continually, she even had the temerity to say that the fault was my own. Needless to say, such a way of dealing with customers is unaceeptable.
I wish to appeal to improve the service of such trades. I suggest that the trades in question be disciplined for their unprofessional behavior, and instructed on the proper way to deal with members of the general public.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
You received a telephone bill from the post office, but you thought it a mistake had been made with the bill. You made a telephone call to inquire about this, but the person who answered the call was very rude. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the post office, explaining the situation and giving your suggestions for improvement.
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书信作文范文：
一、咨询信：
（一）订购信：
Directions: You are preparing for an English test and are in need of some reference books. Write a letter to the sales department of a bookstore to ask for:
1) detailed information about the books you want,
2) methods of payment,
3) time and way of delivery.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. You do not need to write the address.
Dear Sir or Madam:
As I am planning to take the National Entrance Test of English for MA/MS Candidates (NETEM), I have decided to place an order of some NETEM books with due consideration of the good reputation of your bookstore and the high quality of your books.
Firstly, please give me particular accounts as regards names, authors, publishing houses and prices of these books. Secondly, I also need to know the terms of payment and after-sell service. Thirdly, I wonder if it is convenient for you to deliver these books by EMS to the headquarters of Chongqing NOS by September 1, 2004. I have arranged to pay for the service.
I would like to express our gratitude for your kind consideration of my requests. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
（二）求学信：
1、经典范文：
You want to study at a certain foreign university. Write a letter:
1) inquire about the situations there,
2) ask about qualifications,
3) fees and accommodation.
Dear Sir or Madam:
I am a Chinese student who wish to study at your prestigious university. My plan is to start my course next term, and I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to provide me with certain essential information.
First, what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study at your university? I already have a bachelor’s degree from Southwest University of Political Science & Law, but I wonder if there are any further academic requirements. Second, how much are the tuition fees? Although I intend to be self-supporting, I would be interested to hear if there are any scholarships available for international students. Third, what is the situation as regards accommodation?
I look forward to your reply, and to attend your esteemed institution. （127）
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
2、万能句型：
1) I am writing this letter to inquire about the entrance to your university.
2) I hope to pursue my Master’s degree in your university.
3) I wish to apply for admission to your esteemed department as a graduate student.
4) I am deeply interested in your graduate program in the Department of … and plan to apply for admission for the fall of …
5) I would greatly appreciate it if you would forward the necessary materials and relevant information at your earliest convenience.
6) Your university is a well-staffed and well-equipped institute with a long history and a fine tradition of scholarship, enjoying a worldwide fame.
7) I will certainly feel greatly honored if I am fortunate enough to be admitted into it.
8) Would you please let me know the procedures for admission at your earliest convenience?
9) I should be grateful to know the conditions under which applicants are admitted.
10) Would you be so kind as to furnish me with some related information?
（三）询问信：
1、经典范文：
As part of a student social survey project, you are leading a group to visit an exhibition in a small town. Write a letter:
1) ask for information regarding such things as the contents of the exhibition,
2) the dates of its opening and closing,
3) any discounts.
Dear Sir or Madam:
I am organizing a group of students to pay a visit to the historical exhibition in your town. Therefore, I would be grateful if you could supply me with the following information.
First of all, what is the size of the exhibition, what is its theme and what objects are on display? Secondly, what are the dates between which the exhibition will be held, and what are the daily opening hours?
I must point out that I hope to bring over students to the exhibition. So I would like to inquire if there is any discount available on entrance tickets for students. I look forward to your reply. （108）
Yours Cordially,
Li Ming
2、万能句型：
(1) I would like to obtain/request/seek/inquire about some information about…
(2) I would be grateful if you would be so kind as to provide me with certain essential information regarding/concerning the following aspects.
(3) I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information concerning…
(4) I would like some detailed information on/about…
(5) I am writing to you in the hope that I may obtain…
(6) I would be much obliged to you if you could let me know the procedures I have to go through.
(7) Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects?
(8) Your prompt and favorable attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.
(9) I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
(10) Please render me some valuable reply which is conducive to my final decision.
（四）寻找失物信：
1、经典范文：
You have just spent a weekend staying at the St. Rogers Hotel in Beijing. When you get home you find that you have left a bag at the hotel. Write to the manager of the hotel:
1） enquire whether the bag has been found,
2） give any relevant information about the bag and its contents,
3） ask the manager to contact you immediately if the bag is found and tell him/her how the bag can be sent to you.
Dear Sir or Madam:
I stayed in Room 603 年your hotel on the 10th of August, 2004. Could you please check your Lost and Found Department and see if my bag is there?
The bag is a small black, leather document case. Inside it, you will find several business cards and a photo of Mr. Li Guofeng. These things are not very valuable in money terms, but they have a lot of personal value.
I would appreciate it if you could contact me as soon as possible. If you could send the bag to me by EMS, I would be most grateful. Thank you for your help. （112）
Yours cordially,
Li Ming
2、万能句型：
1) I am writing this letter to request your assistance in finding my… which I have lost during the stay with your hotel.
2) I hope it will not be too much trouble for you to help me finding my suitcase which I have lost due to carelessness.
3) I am writing this letter to report the loss of my… when I …
4) I would really appreciate if you could …
5) I also suggest that the lost bag be sent to … if possible.
二、投诉信：
1、经典范文：
You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because your roommate always has friends visiting. Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and:
1) ask for a new room next term,
2) explain your reasons,
3) want a single room.
Dear Sir or Madam:
I am writing to inform you that I wish to move into a new room next semester. I would prefer a single room, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.
I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior. For one thing, his friends are constantly visiting him; for another, he regularly holds noisy parties.
I am sure you will agree that the only solution is for me to move into a room of my own. Therefore, I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible. （111）
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
2、万能句型：
(1) We would like to draw your attention to something you have obviously failed to notice.
(2) There are some problems with … that I wish to bring to attention.
(3) I would like to draw the attention of the authorities concerned to the …
(4) I am writing to express my concern/dissatisfaction/disappointment about …
(5) I wish to refer you to an incident which occurred …, calling for some remedial action.
(6) To remedy/rectify the matter/situation, I suggest making the following changes.
(7) To improve the situation/solve the problem, it is advisable for you to take the following measures.
(8) I sincerely hope that it will review its management system, with the view to providing better service to the public.
(9) I hope that the authorities concerned will consider my suggestions and improve the situation as best as they can.
（10） We trust that you will now consider this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind.
三、介绍信：
（一）求职信：
1、经典范文：
You want to apply for the following job: Waite/waitress required for evening work. Some experience necessary. Write a letter to Mr. Byron:
1） Show your interest,
2） describe yourself,
3） explain why you would be suitable for the job.
Dear Sir or Madam：
I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for a waitress. Enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my previous work experience and qualifications.
Not only do my qualifications and work experience make me a perfect candidate for the job, my personality is well suited to working as a waitress. I am a very friendly person who can quickly establish rapport with people of all ages.
I would like to meet with you at your earliest convenience, to discuss the possibility of working at your restaurant. Thank you for your consideration of my application. I look forward to meeting you in the near future.
Sincerely,
Li Ming
2、万能句型：
1) I have read your advertisement in… for a …, and should be grateful if you could consider me favorably as an applicant for the position/post.
2) I wish to apply for the position of… which you advertised in…
3) I am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for the job of… you have advertised in…
4) I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for a …
5) Born in…in…, I graduated from…University majoring in…. I have been working in… since my graduation, and have therefore attained a fair knowledge and experience in this field.
6) I believe I have the appropriate qualifications and experience for this post, and therefore here I am inclosing my curriculum vitae.
7) I would appreciate it if you could grant me an interview so that I could explain in more detail in person the relevance of my background and training.
8) I hope that after reviewing my enclosed resume you will kindly give me an interview so that I can elaborate on my studies and working experience.
9) With the kind of experience I have accumulated, I would expect a salary of not less than…
10) If you need to know more about me, please contact me at…
（二）推荐信：
1、经典范文：
One of your friends wants to apply for a job involving working with foreign teenagers. Write a letter:
1） recommend him/her,
2） describe his/her past experience,
3） explain the reasons.
Dear Sir or Madam:
I am writing to you to recommend one of my best friends, Huang Laoxie, for this post. With his outstanding leadership and cheerful personality, he was elected chairperson of the student Union of Chongqing University several times.
Busy as he was, he completed his major, teenage psychology, with an outstanding school record. Upon graduation he was assigned to be a teacher in Yangjiaping Middle School. What’s more, he loves his job and enjoys working with children. This has won him great popularity among his students.
Therefore, I do not hesitate to recommend him as an ideal candidate for the post you advertised. I am sure you will make a wise decision in hiring him. （114）
Yours truly,
Li Ming
2、万能句型：
1) With reference to your requirements, I shall, without reservation, recommend… as an ideal candidate.
2) I would like to present … for your consideration in your search for a qualified …
3) In my opinion, … with good educational background and excellent character, is doubtlessly qualified to apply for an appropr
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