BEC中级写作Part One

nullBEC中级写作Part One BEC中级写作Part One Part One 便条、留言、备忘录或电子邮件 (Note, memo or e-mail)， 占写作成绩的1/3； 7C原则7C原则Completeness Conciseness Correctness Consideration Clarity Courtesy Concreteness样 题 (Sample)样 题 (Sample)You are the Managing Director of a company whose profits have recently increased and you would like to reward staff for this. Write a memo to all staff: Thanking them for their contribution Explaining why profits increased Telling them what their reward will be. Write 40~50 words题目解读 题目解读 BEC中级写作考试总时长为45分钟，根据词数要求和分值，通常小作文写作不超过15分钟。 应试创作可分成以下三步： 1．审题构思Read & Plan (3 mins) 2．写作Write (10 mins)； 3．检查Check (2 mins)。 nullPart One的题目背景通常是一事、两人、三要点。 本题中，最近公司利润增长，“你”作为公司的董事总经理(Managing Director)将对全体员工(all staff)进行奖励，备忘录的内容需包括三个要点：感谢员工的贡献，解释利润增长原因，并告之奖励内容。 正文词数要求为40～50个词，因为商务英语要求简洁，词数要求有上限，这和四、六级以及考研写作只规定词数下限有所区别，但实际考试时允许少量超标，比如接近60词。 内容 内容 首先可根据各要点的逻辑关系调整写作顺序，比如在本题中，先解释利润增长的原因，再感谢员工，最后宣布奖励。 其次应针对要点简要展开论述，比如利润增长的原因可能是销售量增加(the increase of sales)、成本降低(the reduction of cost)或推出新产品(the launch of the new product)；而奖励的内容经常是集体旅行(a company trip)、涨工资(an increase of salary)或发放奖金(bonus)。null要点扩展应注意两点：其一，商务交流要求具体，比如利润的增长比去年同时段增加10%；其二，扩展内容应符合商务实际，如全体员工工资上浮50%、增加带薪假期(paid leave)、开派对(a party)或唱卡拉OK (Karaoke)等奖励都是不符合商务实际的。如果确实对商务实务不熟悉，可用简单的理由以避免出错，比如公司业绩增长的原因可以宽泛地写成是员工的努力工作和加班(hard work and long working hours)。 语言 语言 解释原因： 连词：because, since, for, so； 短语：because of, due to, owing to 表 关于同志近三年现实表现材料材料类招标技术评分表图表与交易pdf视力表打印pdf用图表说话 pdf 示感谢： Thank you very much for...; I would like to thank you for...; I am very grateful for...; It was very kind of you to ... 奖励： A rise in salary of X%; A bonus of X% of your monthly salary; A trip to Hawaii / Maldivesnull需要注意的是，商务英语要求正式文体，较之非正式文体，其有以下常见特点： 正式: Headquarters, September (不简写) schedule, discuss (精确动词) A copy has been sent. (被动语态) 非正式: H.Q. Sept. (缩写) 　　 set, talk about (宽泛动词或词组) 　　 I sent you a copy. (主动语态) 形式 形式 最后需要考虑的就是备忘录的形式。 正式考试时，文字题目下方会模拟商务实际，附上备忘录开头片段，包括To, From, Date, Subject等细节，但是考生不必直接在片段后书写，应该在试题纸背面写作，写作时不要求必须有From, To等内容，但若能准确而符合商务习惯地写出备忘录细节，无疑会增加文章的印象分，这里简单介绍一下备忘录细节的注意事项。 nullTo: 备忘录对象 如果具体到人，最好写出全名，不要写自己的真实姓名，有作弊嫌疑，尤其不能“重名”，如Bill Tom，Bill和Tom都是名(Given name)，而不是姓(Family name)，一个简单的处理 方法 快递客服问题件处理详细方法山木方法pdf计算方法pdf华与华方法下载八字理论方法下载 就是use others’ name，比如男名Bill Gates, Michael Scofield, Jay Chou或女名 Britney Spears, Jennifer Aniston等； 若显示关系亲密，还可以把名字缩写，比如B. Gates, M. Scofield, J. Chou, B. Spears, J. Aniston等；如果写给上级，还应该加上尊称甚至职位，比如Mr. Bill Gates — Managing Director, Mr. Jay Chou — Art Director等； nullFrom: 备忘录作者 要点同上，一般不用尊称，只有对方不知道自己身份的时候才后缀职位名称。 Date: 日期 BEC属于英联邦国家的考试，日期的写法一般为日、月、年，比如7 December 2002，注意月份用英文而不是数字，以免和日期混淆，可以缩写，比如将一月写作Jan(也可以用开放标点)。 现代商务写作中流行开放标点(Open Punctuation)，即标点不影响理解的时候可以不用，所以Mr./Ms./Mrs.后面的省略点也可以省去，简单写成Mr/Ms/Mrs；最好不要省去名字。 范文示例 (Sample Answer)范文示例 (Sample Answer)To: All Staff From: Bill Gates Date: 7 December 2002 Subject: Staff Reward The profits of our company this month went up 10% compared with the same period last year, due to your hard work and long working hours. I would like to thank you for your long devoted service. A trip to Hawaii has been arranged next month as a prize. Enjoy! Sample 2 (P. 68)Sample 2 (P. 68)You are the manager of the marketing department in your company. A new assistant manager has recently been appointed and will start work soon. ◆ explaining the need for the appointment ◆ saying when the assistant manager will start to work ◆ describing the experience the assistant manager has.Sample answer 2Sample answer 2From: Candace Woodward To: All marketing staff Subject: New assistant manager To support our strategy of growing sales in our Asian and African markets, a new position of assistant manager has been created. Paul Fisher has been appointed, and will start on 1st November. Paul has worked for several years in marketing toys, concentrating on the Far East.