写作-大作文课堂练习【演示大连】

Exercise 1 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1)​ describe the drawing briefly, 2)​ interpret the phenomenon it reflects, and then 3)​ give your comments. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) 【第一段】 1.​ 图片基调描述相关细节描述合理引向主题 2.​ 反问引向主题相关细节描述进一步点破主题 【第二段】 1.​  大众观点质疑论据结论（分析与见解） 论据：事例，数据，正反，…… 2.​  哲理开头论据结论分析 3.​  大量使用修辞 【第三段】 1.​  观点（社会风尚） 2.​  建议（社会弊病，环境问题） 3.​  建议（青年修养） 学生的对联 Emerging from this cartoon is an ironic scene that couplet pasted by studentds mirrors their undesirable attitude toward college examinations. The first line reads “there would be no upgrade without cheating in exams”, while the second line bears “they prefer a sound score to dignity”. The horizental hanging scroll summarizes their idea: regarless of the virtue honesty, they are determined to pass examinations by any means. 大众观点质疑论据结论 Traditionally, the vast majority of us cling to the idea that no other group of population can be more honest than college students. But is that the case in the reality? Actually some acute problems keep prevailing. This cartoon provides an opportunity for us to have a better insight into the trend of losing honesty. From the perspective of examinations alone, dishonest behaviors are pervasive: delivering note, making gestures, peering at answers from others, and even taking advantage of mobile phone to transmit keys. Evidently, students in mounting numbers, either for over-burden from competition or because of the desire for sound score by an easy and lazy way, no longer cherish the virtue of honesty. Transformation Notion View point Assert Declear … Proclaim claim http://netem100.ys168.com http://cet-composition.ys168.com 147258 Exercise 2 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1)​ describe the drawing briefly, 2)​ explain its intended meaning, and then 3)​ give your comments. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) The dream of a Bird An alarming scenario A bird is holding a gun, Is hiding in the bush Is looking at the sky Dreaming to be a hunter Humans are flying in the sky Depicted by this cartoon is an alarming scenario that, holding a gun and hiding in the bush, a bird is staring at the sky where humanbeings are flying. Obviously, he is longing for a day when becomes a hunter, shooting people for fun. It is implicit that what he imagines is what he was exposed to. 【一】 It is generally acknowledged that no other age lay more emphasis on environment protection than the decade we live. But is the result satisfying? Actually some acute problems keep prevailing. From the perspective of wild-life protection alone, some mis-conducts are pervasive: shooting wild animals for fun, cooking them for food, selling them for profit, and treating friends to a wild-dish banquet for “honor”. Evidently, folks in mounting numbers no longer value the balance of ecology. 【二】 The implication of this cartoon can be summarized as a philosophic topic in our daily life: what we do with the nature is to be answered for. Or, put another way, to take care of natural resources is to take care of our descendents and ourselves. There is no denying that we will definitely consume some resources for survival, for development, or for fun. Unfortunately, some of us have gone to an extreme, regardless of the sustainability of the natural circumstance. They are so greedy that can sacrifice long-term benefits for merely temporary satisfaction. 【三】 The implication of this cartoon can be summarized as a philosophic topic in our daily life: what we do with the nature is to be answered for. Are there any other cases more convincing to prove this point than the following ones? Haven’t you ever seen someone, regarless of the extintion of species , over-hunting for profits? Haven’t you ever noticed others, considering nothing about the recurring geographic disasters, over-mining for huge wealth? Where has they the sense of social responsibility gone? Where have their insight and wisdom gone? Where have their awareness of scientific development gone? These senses have been swallowed by their greediness. Where have all the flowers gone? 40 / 60 Brother 4 思路拓展基本方向： 1.​ 他人、自身 2.​ 物质、精神 3.​ 外在（客观）、内在（主观） 外在被动 Penalties or fines Governmental intervention Legislation / legal means / laws Corresponding laws and regulations should be laid out to …… Fines and other penalties should be put into practice….. Governmental intervention should be activated to direct this trend into a positive situation…. Media supervision should be cast on this matter …… 内在主动 The awareness of …should be cultivated among ….. The value of …should be brought home to …. The ability of self-discipline over …should be nurtured among…. 【启蒙版】 How to put the problem of eco-destruction under control? Most average citizens hold to the notion that the most effective measure is to ban this misdeed by legal means, governmental intervention or financial punishment. That mechanism may work, but only works on extreme cases, with huge time, finance, and personnel cost. Actually, a feasible approach, which may solve this problem fundamentally, is to cultivate the general public the awareness, by mass media, school education, or family instruction, that the planet earth is our home, and we may be homeless if we don’t take care of it. This awareness will spark the fire of anti-eco-destruction campaign among people. 【成人版】 Package deal Comprehensive programs Coordinate programs The Combination of A, B, and C. Only with the combination of intervention from department concerned, legal restriction, and, more than anything, self-discipline, can we put this problem under control. Currently, proper penalties and corresponding laws have been put into practice, with fruitful rewards. However, if there were the general awareness that ……, this delinquency can be completely put to an end. 【限制版】 As to countermeasures to this problem, it occurs to many that governmental restriction and legal restraint can be counted as a package deal. But are they comprehensive enough to put an end to this delinquency? Actually, besides them, what we really need is some innermost changes, self-discipline for one? Were there general awareness that resources on earth are so limited that we should restrict our desire to over-exploit them, this problem would definitely be solved. Exercise 3 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1)​ describe the drawing briefly, 2)​ explain its intended meaning, and then 3)​ give your comments. 第三段：（他人建议，自身建议） 建议他人自身（总结） How to step out of the shadow? It occrus to many of us that the best policy is to consult to an expert or a senior when one is confused or bewildered. That is a way, but advices from others are not necessarily suitable to the confused guy. / are these advisers always available? Actually, an applicable approach is as follows: to weigh the negatives and positives, to make sure of the sole purpose, to have a decision, and to be prepared for the side-effects. People Individuals Men Guys Folks An astonishing scene Directions/ options/ choices Hesitate / wander / walk back and forth Bewildered / perplexed / puzzled / confused Wondering where to go Have you ever been trapped in a dilemma? If so, you may feel the same sorrow as the man in the cartoon: perplexedly and confusedly, he is walking back and forth wondering where to go. Meanwhile, the caption is reminding him, as well as all of us, that what one suffers most is not so much adversities themselves as delicate choices. 哲理开头论据结论分析 Idioms600.doc The author of this cartoon uses this unique metaphor to endow us the doctrine: …… Conceived in this cartoon is a motto: …… The implication of this cartoon can be summarized as a philosophic topic in our daily life: better trying than crying. Simply state it, exposed to some delicate choices, we should better march forward decisively rather than hesitate wondering what to do. Admittedly, as a daily occurrence, dilemma confronts almost every of us. However, part of youngsters has gone to an extreme, endlessly pondering the possibility of failure. They are so indecisive that can interpret those choices, actually opportunities, in their mind as predicaments. Difficulty Suffers Barriers Obstacles Roadblocks Setbacks Predicaments adversities Exercise 4 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1)​ describe the drawing briefly, 2)​ explain its intended meaning, and then 3)​ give your comments. 35 = 2 + 3 + 25 + 5 指代是否一致 主谓是否一致 时态是否合理 成分是否完满 标点是否正确 逻辑是否成立 Exercise 5 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1)​ describe the drawing briefly, 2)​ explain its intended meaning, and then 3)​ give your comments. This is good to our society Elevating / esclating As to attitude to this phenomenon, the larger propotion of us assert that mutual help is definitely elevating to our society. Actually, this escalatin effect will not last for merely several years. As this virtue is an asset of our nation, we are willing to hand it over from one individual to another, from one decade to another, and from one generation to another. 阅读五步疗法： 1.​  模拟考场（30分钟2篇） 2.​  肃清盲点 3.​  深入分析 4.​  摘抄精要 5.​  仿写练习 Inspiring / encouraging / thought-provoking scene Mr. “Help-Provider” Offer what he could. Mr. “Help-Accepter” Extend his gratitude A harmonious situation Under the amusing appearance of the cartoon lies an inspiring scenario that a Mr. “Help-Provider” is generously offering what he could, while a Mr. “Help-Accepter” is extending his gratitude heart and soul. The interaction between them reminds us, as well as the general public, of the motto: mutual assistance is the right access to a life of harmony. The implication of this cartoon can be summarized as a philosophic topic in our daily life: labor makes human, while mutual assitance makes human life. Are there any other cases more convincing to prove this point than the following ones? Haven’t you ever seen someone, regarless of his own discomfort, leaving a seat to a disabled young lady in a crowded bus? Haven’t you ever noticed some by-passers, considering nothing about their own time loss, taking the wounded in a car-accident to a hospital? Why are they so unselfish? Why are they generous? Why are they warm-hearted? Aren’t they motivated by the notion that to help others it to support themselves. Path Route Chennel access Remind sb. that …. Remind sb. of sth. that …. 补充练习： 如此启蒙