强化写作范文笔记 强化写作范文笔记 词法篇(五类技术指标) 第一篇:单边支持第一宝—八股文 题目:强化讲义8页some people claim that the increasingly frequent business and cultural communications are positive whereas others hold a different opinion. Discuss. 范文内替换(作者实力) 自身替换(读者实力) 1.A benefit B=B become the beneficiary of A 1.benefit=is good for 2. on account of=due to 2.contrubute to=lead to 3.have influence on=exert influence on 3.diverse array of=all kinds of 4.in the international spectrum=all over the world 5.shape=form 6.rather than=instead of 7 mundane mortals=common people 8.retrieve=obtain 9.outweigh=be more than 连词:significant and favorable, religious and racial 副词:undoubtedly, virtually, entirely, admittedly 复合词:空 范文评语: 1。复合词处为空,降低范文的总评印象,指标未完成。 2.范文内替换只有三组,低于五组的范文比较多见,分数通常7分—7。5分。 3.自身替换组中,蓝色字体明显比等号后面的黑色字体用词高级,这是第一篇笔记的通常特点。 第二篇:单边支持第二宝—现象
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题目:(强化讲义第8页)Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, and the protection for them is a waste of resource. To what extent, do you agree or disagree with the above statement? 范文内替换(作者实力) 自身替换(读者实力) 1.Be poised on the brink of=face 1.contribute a lot to=lead to 2.growing population=more an d more people 2.the largest wave of=large 3.significant=critical 3.chief=main 4.utilize=get use of 4.millions of =many 5 destroy=lead to a disaster to 5.the excess of=too many/too much 6 originate from=come from 7.safeguard=protect/protection 连词:connected and interacted 副词: fortunately, actually 复合词:undiscovered 范文评语: 1. 没有技术指标空缺,范文作者对笔记意识很强,词法高分 2. 范文内替换共五组,符合高分规则。 3. 自身替换组中,蓝色字体明显比等号后面的黑色字体用词高级,初期笔记的通常特点。 第三篇:单边支持第三宝――现象解决 题目:同上 范文内替换(作者实力) 自身替换(读者实力) Hold an opinion=think Think exactly the opposite way=disagree Occupy an essential position in=play an important role in A number of=many Excessive= the excess of An increasing number of=more and more Profound=deep Is equivalent to=means/is 连词:dangerous and frightening 副词:dramatically, exactly, comprehensively, accordingly, seriously 复合词:空 范文评语: 1. 复合词处为空,降低范文的总评印象,指标未完成。 2. 范文内替换为空,作者行文过程没有自主替换意识,相同概念全部避开,虽然词汇绕开了重复的可能,但variety由于该组空缺,不尽完美。 3. 自身替换中的the excess of为二宝中的营养元素,因此发现,随着笔记的逐渐积累,出现了笔记后期的叠砖现象,让自身替换的等号后者形式逐渐高级。 杨琳话外音: 1. 范文选择直接决定笔记质量,进而影响考生准备阶段的实力晋级,建议使用经过鉴定的,已被英国考官承认的高质量文章。 2. 自身替换组的等号后者,需要考生具备充分的联想能力,将脑海中现有词进行活跃激发。 3. 建议3篇范文笔记,一篇文章,写作时,将范文笔记放于触手可及处,可以一边参考笔记,一边写文章,这叫精写(继精读,精读之后的新时尚。) 4. 该组只是词法,关注句法篇,同时进行。