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英语四级写作.ppt

英语四级写作.ppt

上传者: 把舅临风 2011-03-12 评分 0 0 0 0 0 0 暂无简介 简介 举报

简介:本文档为《英语四级写作ppt》,可适用于外语资料领域,主题内容包含PrepareTemAtthelastmomentPrepareTemAtthelastmoment英语四级写作integratedskillsin符等。

PrepareTemAtthelastmomentPrepareTemAtthelastmoment英语四级写作integratedskillsintegratedskills整体技巧考试要求考试要求四级考试中的写作项目为一篇命题作文一篇应用文命题作文要求命题作文要求观点清楚、例证充分、结构严谨、层次分明、合乎逻辑、语言得体、无重大语法错误。重中之重重中之重审题EducationasalifelongprocessEducationasalifelongprocessPeopleneedtobeeducatedinordertodeveloptheirpotentialsandpushthesocietyonwardsSomepeoplesimplyseeeducationasgoingtoschoolswhereasmostpeoplevieweducationasalifelongprocessInmypointofview,educationisofgreatsignificancetoasocietyIwouldliketoexplainitinthefollowingtwopointsTravelbroadensthemindTravelbroadensthemind跑题种种讲述井底之蛙的故事介绍外出旅游的准备工作发展旅游业由当地经济的关系出国留学的利弊开头:TravelingislikereadingabookItmakesawisemanbetter,butafoolworseTem的作文题目是一串话Tem的作文题目是一串话例:EverycollegestudentwouldagreethatlifeincollegeisnotthesameasitwasinthemiddleschoolNow,youhavebeenaskedbytheStudents’Uniontowriteapassageentitled:THEMAINDIFFERENCEBETWEENMYCOLLEGELIFEANDMYMIDDLESCHOOLLIFEaspartofanintroductionprogrammefornewstudentscominginSeptember题目后面还有对每一段的写作要求题目后面还有对每一段的写作要求YouaretowriteinthreeparagraphsInthefirstparagraph,stateclearlywhatyouthinkthemaindifferenceisbetweencollegeandmiddleschoollifeInthesecondparagraph,statewhichlifeyoupreferandwhyInthelastparagraph,bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionwithasummaryorasuggestion对每一段的写作要求因题目而异对每一段的写作要求因题目而异WeseeadvertisementsontelevisioneverydaySomepeoplethinkthatTVadvertisingbringsusbenefits,butothersdon’tthinksoWhatisyouropinionTopic:AMAJORADVANTAGEDISADVATAGEOFADVERTISINGONTELEVISIONYouaretowriteinthreeparagraphsInthefirstparagraph,statejustONEmajoradvantageordisadvantageofTVadvertisingInthesecondparagraph,giveoneortworeasonstosupportyourpointofviewInthelastparagraph,bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusion不照着段落要求来写就要扣分又例又例Topic:AParttimejobNowadaysithasbecomefashionableforcollegestudentstotakeaparttimejobintheirsparetimeDiscusstheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofthistrendYouaretowriteinthreeparagraphsInthefirstparagraph,stateclearlyyourviewpointsonboththeadvantagesanddisadvantagesInthesecondparagraph,supportyourviewpointwithdetailsorexamplesInthelastparagraph,bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionwithasummaryorasuggestionThefirstparagraphThefirstparagraphStateclearlywhatyouthinkthemaindifferenceisbetweencollegeandmiddleschoollifeWelldoneWelldoneWhereaslifeinmiddleschoolisfilledwithendlessexercises,homeworkandexams,lifeincollegeispregnantwithparties,sports,games,interestingcontestsandothercolorfulactivitiesThesecondparagraphThesecondparagraphStatewhichlifeyoupreferandwhyilldoneilldoneStudyisoneofthemostimportantpartsoflifeInmiddleschool,weweretaughtbyourteachermostofthetimeandwespentmuchtimetolearnbyourselvesButinuniversity,teachersonlyleadustolearntheimportantpointsAsforthedetails,wemuststudyintensivelybyourselvesBesidesstudying,standingtheteatofarigorouslifeisalsoimportantThebiggestproblemishowtogetonwellwithroommatesLivingtogetherwillgiverisetosomeunpleasantnessbecauseeverypersonhashisownway,andeachoneofuswilllackprivacyInaddition,wemustwashourclothswithhandsinsteadofthewashingmachineWelldoneWelldoneTheadvantageofthisselfarrangedlifeisobviousForonething,IfeelmuchrelaxedbothphysicallyandemotionallyPressurefromacademicstudyhasbeenreducedtosuchanacceptablelevelthatlearningbecomesakindofenjoymentandpleasureClassroomisratherastagetoshowouttalentthanabattlefieldtostruggleforscoresMoreover,morefreetime,inasense,meansmorechancesforustojoininthesociallifeTakingaparttimejob,forinstance,providesuswhoarestillunusedtotheworldanopportunitytonegotiatewithdifferentcustomersandtoadjustourselvestosucharapidlychangingsocietyThis,undeniably,agreatdealofwealthwecanbenefitfromthroughourlifeThethirdparagraphThethirdparagraphBringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionwithasummaryorasuggestionWelldoneWelldoneAllinall,collegelifeismuchdifferentfrommiddleschoollifeItisatransitionfromcampustosocietyWeshouldvalueandmakegooduseofitWelldoneWelldoneTosumup,IliveaquitedifferentlifeincollegefromwhichIbecomemuchmoreresponsibleformyownlifeandstudyTothosenewstudentsintheuniversity,Iwouldsay,“Welcometojoinusandenjoyanindependentcollegelife”善于开拓话题善于开拓话题考生的作文浅表化比较普遍缺乏新意和深度暴露出生活积累薄弱和感悟能力差等弱点。MorepressurefromacademicstudiesdoesnogoodtousMorepressurefromacademicstudiesdoesnogoodtousItisknownthatinterestisthemotherofsuccessButweneversaypressureisthemotherofsuccessInfact,excessivepressureisthemotherofresistanceWegrownupuniversitystudentsdonotneedmorepressurefromacademicstudiesbecauseitwilldoharmtousmentallyandphysicallyWherethereisoppression,thereisresistanceWhenstudentsgetmorepressurefromacademicstudies,theymaynaturallyrejectitintheirdeepmindbecausetheyfeelthattheyareforcedtostudybythepressurebutnottheirownwillingSotheymayadoptsomeimpropermeanstogetridofpressure,whichfinallywilldamagetheirinteresttoacademicstudiesOntheotherhand,morepressurefromstudieswillmakestudentsnervousandtiredeasily,whichwillvisiblydoharmtotheirhealthInconclusion,givingmorepressuretostudentsinacademicstudiesisanincorrectwaytoencouragethemtostudywellTeachersshouldgiveitupquicklyandfindanotherwaytoarousestudents’interestinstudyintrasentenceskillsintrasentenceskills句际技巧扩展与收拢扩展与收拢MozartisoftenquotedasafamiliarexampleofardentinterestandsustainedendeavorWalking,oratthetheater,orevenwhileengagedinsocialamusements,helivedinaselfcreatedatmosphereofmusicHisheadwasworkingallthetime扩展与收拢扩展与收拢Whateveronedoes,oneshoulddoitwithconfidenceIfonehasnoconfidence,thereislittlepossibilitythatonewouldeverachieveanything,especiallywhenoneisfacedwithdrawbacksorhardshipsThistruthseemstobeselfevident第二段中一定要举例第二段中一定要举例WhyistheworldgettingsmallerandsmallerForonething,fasterandsafermeansoftransporthavegreatlyreduceddistanceInthepastittookpeopleeightweekstocrossthePacificOcean,butnowanairjourneyfromShanghaitoNewYorkonlytakeseighthoursForanother,thequickeningpaceofmodernsocietycreatesmoreopportunitiesforpeopletovisiteachotherForexample,businessactivitiesandculturalexchangehavebroughtpeopleintoconstantcontactwiththeworld不一定非要用forexample不一定非要用forexampleThisdoesnotmeanthatthinkingmustalwaysbeconsciousTheevidencethattheunconsciousmindcanjoininpurposefulmentalactivityisoverwhelmingThemostdramaticexampleofthisisthefactthatinsightsoftencometouswhenwearenolongerworkingonaproblemTaxiesalsocausealotofproblemsSomedriversusuallyparktheircarsatanyplacetheylikeTheyblockthetrafficOtherdriverssometimesdriveveryfasttosavetimesothattheycanearnmoremoneyTheycausemanytrafficaccidentsStillotherdriverschargemuchmorethantheyshould,andmakethecustomersquiteunhappy出租车也造成大量的问题。有的司机通常随意停放车子,阻塞了交通其他一些司机有时把车开得飞快,好赚更多的钱,造成许多交通事故。还有些司机漫天要价,把顾客弄得相当不愉快。加入语篇标记词Adddiscoursemarkers加入语篇标记词AdddiscoursemarkersTaxiesalsocausealotofproblemsSomedriversusuallyparktheircarsatanyplacetheylikeAsaresult,theyblockthetrafficOtherdriverssometimesdriveveryfasttosavetimesothattheycanearnmoremoneyConsequently,theycausemanytrafficaccidentsStillotherdriverschargemuchmorethantheyshould,andthusmakethecustomersquiteunhappycoherencecoherence连贯ThedevelopmentofindustrydemandslargeareasoflandThealreadylimitedlandisdecreasingveryrapidlyWeshouldmakethebestuseofourlandIncities,acarefulandelaboratecityplanshouldbeworkedoutInthecountryside,farmersshouldbeeducatedtousethelandwiselyThegovernmentshouldreinforcethelawstopunishthosewhowastethelandThedevelopmentofindustrydemandslargeareasoflandAsaresult,thealreadylimitedlandisdecreasingveryrapidlyTherefore,weshouldmakethebestuseofourlandIncities,acarefulandelaboratecityplanshouldbeworkedoutInthecountryside,farmersshouldbeeducatedtousethelandwiselyMoreover,thegovernmentshouldreinforcethelawstopunishthosewhowastetheland句际技巧要点句际技巧要点主题句分主题句扩展与收拢举例连贯:用语篇标记词intersentenceskillsintersentenceskills句内技巧BrainstormingBrainstormingkeywords:synonymousexpressions近义表达:antonymousexpressions反义表达:Diamondwords闪光措辞学过的例子学过的例子Confidencefaithbuildupfaithfeelcapableofdoingsthlackofconfidenceloseheartfeelfrustrated 平时练作文时就要养成找同义表达和反义表达的习惯。DiamondWordsDiamondWordsTakeone’scourageinbothhands勇往直前敢作敢为Havelackthecourageofone’sconviction有没有勇气做自己认为对的事DiamondsentencesDiamondsentencesAnounceofdiscretionisworthapoundofwitHoldfasttodreams,forifdreamsdie,lifeisabrokenwingedbirdthatcannotfly摆脱汉语思维摆脱汉语思维加利福尼亚州南部阳光充足气候宜人是拍摄影片的理想场所。TheconstantsunshineandmildclimateofsouthernCaliforniamadeitanidealsiteforshootingmotionpictures摆脱汉语思维摆脱汉语思维独享欢乐是一种愉快独自忧伤也是一种愉快。Happinessenjoyedaloneisapleasure,soissorrowtastedprivately摆脱汉语思维摆脱汉语思维口试时问了十个问题她全都答对了。Shewasaskedtenquestionsintheoralexaminationandansweredeveryoneofthemcorrectly摆脱汉语思维摆脱汉语思维一群人立刻把他围住了向他提出一个又一个问题。Verysoonhewassurroundedbyacrowdandwassnowedunderwithquestions摆脱汉语思维摆脱汉语思维主语和谓语动词之间适宜安插评述性状语他们没有答复这完全是意料之中的事。They,notunexpectedly,didnotrespond我觉得那个人靠得住。Theman,Ibelieve,isreliable摆脱汉语思维摆脱汉语思维主语和谓语动词之间不适宜安插修饰性状语他在巴黎就读一年完成了学业。HeroundedouthiseducationbyspendingayearinParis有些照片技术高超内容有趣值得一提。Afewofthepicturesareworthmentioningbothfortheirtechnicalexcellenceandinterestingcontent标点标点分号后面可以接有连接意义的副词:Thenewsmaybesurprisingnevertheless,itistrueNobodyexpectedhimtosucceedintheexaminationhowever,hecameoutfirstIt’stoolatetogoforawalkbesides,it’sbeginningtorain学生笔下的佳句学生笔下的佳句LoveisimportantHewholoseswealthlosesmuch,hewholoseslovelosesmore,buthewholosescapacitytolovelosesall学生笔下的佳句学生笔下的佳句Firstofall,beinginagoodmoodmakeseverythingarounduspleasantandourselvespleasanttoothers学生笔下的佳句学生笔下的佳句SometimespressurecanencourageonetoworkharderHowever,pressuretostudentsiswhatfoodtopeopleItcan’tbelackeditcan’tbetoomuchaswellMethodsoftrainingMethodsoftrainingImitatethesamplestructuresRefinementimitationimitation描红范文范文MozartisoftenquotedasafamiliarexampleofardentinterestandsustainedendeavorWalking,oratthetheater,orevenwhileengagedinsocialamusements,helivedinaselfcreatedatmosphereofmusicHisheadwasworkingallthetime描红描红ChenQinghuaisoftenquotedasagoodexampleofhardworkinganddiligenceWalkingoratthecanteen,orevenwhileengagedinsocialentertainments,shelivedinaselfcreatedatmosphereofEnglishHerheadwasworkingallthetime描红描红LuXunisoftenquotedasafamiliarexampleloyalpatriotismandsustainedendeavorWalking,orathisownpavilion,orevenwhiletalkingwithotherpeople,heneverstoppedthinkingaboutthepublicandthefutureofChinaHisheadwasworkingallthetimerefinementrefinement炼句AwfulorganizationAwfulorganizationRefinementButthequestionis,howcanthetouristsenjoythemselvesunderthecontrolofthetravelagencyHowcanatourist,forexample,travelaroundcitiesineasternChinaduringdaysButthequestionis,howcanthetouristsenjoythemselvesunderthecontroloftravelagencyHowcanyoutravelaroundcitiesineasternChinaduringdaysAwfulorganizationAwfulorganizationPackagetourissurelyconvenientfortouristsandalsosafeIgiveuptheconveniencewillinglyforseveralreasonsRefinementApackagetourissurelyconvenientandsafefortouristsNevertheless,IgiveuptheconveniencewillinglyforseveralreasonsCommonerrorsCommonerrorsCorrectionInapackagetour,touristscangetmorechancestocommunicate,tosharewhattheyhaveseenandheardwithoneanotherInapackagetour,touristscangainmorechancestocommunicate,tosharewhattheysawandheardwithoneanotherCommonerrorsCommonerrorsCollegelifeisauniquetimeinourlifeItwillgiveyouanotherprimetimeSo,aswehavegrownuptobecollegestudents,weshouldvaluethefreedomthecollegelifegivesusandtakeitasaturningpointtodevelopyourabilitiesRedundancy冗余Redundancy冗余Whenyouareingoodmood,youmayfeelalltheworldissmilingtoyouyouseemtohavebeeninjectedvigoryouwanttotryeverythingThisisthepowerofgoodmoodIt’simportanttokeepingoodmood应用文应用文看清题目要求必须面面俱到。注意格式正确字数不能过分超标例例Yesterdayyoufailedtoturnupfortheappointmentwithyourteacher,ProfessorWangWritehimanoteofapologyandmakearequestforanothermeetingYoushouldalsosuggestthetimefortherequestedmeeting分析:题中包含四项内容ApologizeforfailuretoturnupfortheappointmentThereasonforfailuretoturnupMakearequestforanothermeetingSuggestthetimefortherequestedmeeting

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