巧译英语意美，音美，形美（Yang Shizuo_P156）

null巧译英语意美、音美、形美巧译英语意美、音美、形美null 1. At last , a candid candidate ! null 1. At last , a candid candidate ! 终于找到了一个厚道的候选人！null2. It was a splendid population --- for all the slow, sleepy, sluggish-brained sloths stayed at home. null2. It was a splendid population --- for all the slow, sleepy, sluggish-brained sloths stayed at home. Version 1: 这是一批卓越能干的人民－－因为所有这些行动迟缓、瞌睡稀稀、呆如树獭的人都留在家乡了。（余立三译文） Version 2: 那是一批卓越的人－－因为那些慢慢吞吞、昏昏沉沉、反应迟钝、形如树獭的人留在了家乡。（杨莉藜译文）nullVersion 3: 这是一批卓越能干的人民－－因为那些行动迟缓、头脑迟钝、睡眼惺忪、呆如树獭的人留在了家乡。（杨莉藜译文） Version 4: 这帮人各个出类拔萃－－因为凡是呆板、呆滞、呆头呆脑的呆子都呆在了家里。（马红军译文）null3. Predictably, the winter will be snowy, sleety, and slushy. null3. Predictably, the winter will be snowy, sleety, and slushy. 译文1：可以预言，今年冬天将多雪，多冻雨，多泥泞。 译文2：可以预言，今年冬天将雪花飘飘，雪雨交加，雪路泥泞。 null4. I am never at a loss for a word word文档格式规范word作业纸小票打印word模板word简历模板免费word简历 ; Pitt is never at a loss for the word. null4. I am never at a loss for a word; Pitt is never at a loss for the word. Version 1: 我总是能凑合找个词儿说说，可是皮特什么时候都能找到恰如其分的词儿。 Version 2: 我总能找到一个词，而皮特总能找到那个绝妙的好词。 Version 3:我总能找到一个觉得妙的词，而皮特总能找到那个绝妙的词。 nullVersion 4:我总能找到一个意思相当的词，而皮特总能找到那个意思恰当的词。 Version 5: 我总是滔滔不绝，而皮特则是字字珠玑。（马红军译） Version 6: 我和皮特都能出口成章，但我用的词大都不可言妙，而他用的总是妙不可言。null 5. He tried to shake off his fear, and actually shook his head.null5. He tried to shake off his fear, and actually shook his head. Version 1: 他想驱除内心的恐惧，但实际上只摇了摇头，仿佛表示驱除不了。 Version 2: 他拼命想摆脱内心的恐惧，结果只无奈地摆了摆头。null 6. Better late than the late. null6. Better late than the late. Version 1: 迟到总比丧命好。 Version 2: 晚了总比完了好。 Version 3: 迟了总比死了好。 Version 4: 慢行回家，快行回老家。 Version 5: 宁迟一时，不迟(辞)一世。 version 6: 宁晚三分，不抢一秒；别到阎王爷那儿去报到！ null7. Change is part of life and the making of character, hon. When things happen that you do not like, you have two choices: You get bitter or better.null7. Change is part of life and the making of character, hon. When things happen that you do not like, you have two choices: You get bitter or better. 译文：变化是生活的一部分，而且也塑造了人的意志品德，亲爱的。当你不喜欢的事情发生了，你有两种选择：要么痛苦不堪；要么痛快达观。 null 8. The professor tapped on his desk and shouted: “Young men, Order !” -----The entire class yelled: “Beer !”null8. The professor tapped on his desk and shouted: “Young men, Order !” -----The entire class yelled: “Beer !” Version 1: 教授敲击桌子喊道：“年轻人，请安静！” －－学生：“啤酒 ！” （注：英语的 “order”含歧义，请安静；点菜；要饮料） Version 2: 教授敲击桌子喊道：“你们这些年轻人吆喝（要喝）什么？” －－学生： “啤酒！”null9. the output of the United Nations has not been commensurate with the input.null9. the output of the United Nations has not been commensurate with the input . Version 1: 联合国的贡献与其花费已经不相称了。 Version 2: 联合国的作用已难抵其费用。null 10. The ballot is stronger than the bullet.null10. The ballot is stronger than the bullet. Version 1: 选举权比子弹更具威力。 Version 2: 选票比大炮更具威力。 Version 3: 选票胜于枪炮。 Version 4: 选单胜过子弹。 null 11. You reckon your Dodge would help you up to all these dodges again ?null11. You reckon your Dodge would help you up to all these dodges again ? Version 1: 你以为坐上了你的道奇车就可以再次逃之夭夭？ Version 2:你以为坐上了你的道奇跑车就可以再次跑掉么？null12. “What does that lawyer do after he dies?” “Lie still.” null12. “What does that lawyer do after he dies?” “Lie still.” 译文1：“那个律师死后能干什么？”/ “静静地躺着”。 《英汉翻译概要》 译文2：“那个律师死后还能干什么？”/ “躺着说鬼话”。 （马红军 译） null 12. I love my love with an E, because she's enticing; I hate her with an E, because she's engaged; I took her to the sign of the exquisite, and treated her with an elopement; her name's Emily, and she lives in the east. (Dickens, David Copperfield) null译文1： 12. I love my love with an E, because she's enticing; I hate her with an E, because she's engaged; I took her to the sign of the exquisite, and treated her with an elopement; her name's Emily, and she lives in the east. 我爱我的爱人为了一个E，因为她是Enticing (迷人的)；我恨我的爱人为了一个E, 因为她是Engaged (订了婚的)。我用我的爱人象征Exquisite (美妙)， 我劝我的爱人从事Elopement (私奔)，她的名字是Emily (爱弥丽)，她的住处在East (东方)。（董秋斯译） null 12. I love my love with an E, because she's enticing; I hate her with an E, because she's engaged; I took her to the sign of the exquisite, and treated her with an elopement; her name's Emily, and she lives in the east. 译文2： 我爱我的爱，因为她长得实在招人爱。我恨我的爱，因为她不回报我的爱。我带着她到挂着浮荡子招牌的一家，和她谈情说爱。我请她跟我一起潜逃私奔，为的是我和她能长久你亲我爱。她的名字叫爱弥丽，她家住在爱仁里。（张谷若译）null12. I love my love with an E, because she's enticing; I hate her with an E, because she's engaged; I took her to the sign of the exquisite, and treated her with an elopement; her name's Emily, and she lives in the east. 译文3： 我爱我的爱人，因为她很迷人；我恨我的爱人，因已许配他人；他在我心中是美人，我带她私奔，以避开外人；她名叫虞美人，是东方丽人。（姜秋霞、张柏然） null 译文4： 12. I love my love with an E, because she's enticing; I hate her with an E, because she's engaged; I took her to the sign of the exquisite, and treated her with an elopement; her name's Emily, and she lives in the east. 我爱我的那个“丽”，可爱迷人有魅力；我恨我的那“丽”，要和他人结伉俪；她文雅大方又美丽，和我出逃去游历； 她芳名就叫爱米丽，家住东方人俏丽。（马红军译） null译文5： 12. I love my love with an E, because she's enticing; I hate her with an E, because she's engaged; I took her to the sign of the exquisite, and treated her with an elopement; her name's Emily, and she lives in the east. 吾爱吾爱，因伊可爱；吾恨吾爱，因伊另有所爱。吾视吾爱，神圣之爱，吾携吾爱，私逃为爱；吾爱名艾米丽，吾东方之爱。 “中国翻译，1996年第六期” null译文6： 12. I love my love with an E, because she's enticing; I hate her with an E, because she's engaged; I took her to the sign of the exquisite, and treated her with an elopement; her name's Emily, and she lives in the east. 我爱我的心上人，因为她那样地叫人入迷（Enticing）；我恨我的心上人，因为她已订婚将作他人妻（Engaged）；她花容月貌无可比拟（Exquisite），我劝她私奔跟我在一起（Elopement）；她的名字叫埃米莉（Emily），她的家就在东城里（East）。我为我的心上人呀，一切都因为这个E！（陆乃圣译）